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Posted: 13 years ago
good job Hari👍🏼 waiting for the next one
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update 👏
thank you..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cddeww

lovely last episode1358515141622

for ur kind info...
Its not the last episdoe.
so u has to ebar me for some more time.
If u don't like my FF kindly stay away from this thread.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well done waiting for the next chapter.
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Thank u all for ur beautiful comments...
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Part 45

Dev came out of car and see a happy Radhika going in. He was feeling much more happy than her. Finally his waiting was getting completed. He was about to follow her in, when he got a call from Susheel again... Though he felt frustrated, concerned for susheel he lifted the call... It was some business matter, Dev in order to go in, completed the call as soon as he can but still it took 20 minutes for him to complete the call. He completed the call and was about to go in when he saw a crying Radhika coming out running .Dev doesn't know what happened, he called her but she didn't respond, she just ran off crying and left in her car/ Dev felt him self in a shock, he went in but inside he found nothing serious, he saw RP and shankar talking to each other happily smiling. Dev went there tensed..

Shankar "Hi Dev! come sit here... by the way wheres Radhika?

Dev got another shock, 'means Shankar and RP doesn't know that Radhika came in, then what did Radhika do in this 20 minutes? why was she shattered to such an extent'

Shankar:Dev! Radhika kaha hain/

Dev:I don't know uncle... saying this he left out...

Shankar looked at RP worriedly, but RP assured him nothing will happen./

Dev drove to Gayathri mansion.For his relief Radhika's car was there, giving a deep sigh of relief he entered in when he found Radhika in the living room hugging Rohan saying "I am sorry for what ever I did Rohan. I am sorry for hurting u. I like u"

Dev felt the world around him shattering... He can't believe his ears... He felt him self,sinking into the earth in an earthquake. Unable to control his anger and stay there Dev left from there...

As he reached home he was again questioned by RP "Dev! Radhika kaha hain"

Dev:I don't know dad. May be in her home.

saying this Dev left into his room.

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After 5 months...

California..

Every one in the global infrastructure are tensed a lot. They were frightened of their CEO, who will be arriving any minute to kick their asses. They just wished that she cancel her meeting some how today, so that they can get some additional time to get rid of her scoldings, but Radhika sharma cancelling her date was a rare incident in the office which they never faced in this 5 months. Unable to bear this tension Manager dialed to their CEO's house expecting some answer of her arrival.

A sweet voice echoed through the phone "Hello"

Manager: Hello, is it sharma's house.

The voice replied : yes, may I know whose speaking?

Manager:This is Manager John from Global infrastructure. Radhika Maa'm???

The voice replied " Radhika maa'm is a bit busy, my self Kushi , Radhika's friend, cum personnel secretary/ Maa'm is on her way, she will be there in office in another half an hour"

John continued a bit nervous "Do we have any chances of meeting getting cancelled."

Kushi replied:Why? isn't ur work complete yet?

John:No maa'm our work is completed.

Kushi:acha ek free advice de do

John doesn't know hindi... so he asked "What?"

Kushi:Sorry, shall I give u a free advice.

John:Yeah...

Kushi:See that ur work will be perfect, other wise, u will get a gud amount of scoldings from Maa'm, she's in a bad mood today.

John:Wow... How lucky I am? any way thanks for the info/

Kushi kept the phone, feeling her self happy for making John frightened and went to the Mandir place.She saw her pagli doing as usual the pooja she does daily and said "Madam... chalo, aapki office ka time ho gaya, aaoge yaa nahi."

Radhika turned back and looked at her friend who has became her partner here for the last 5 months in this unknown place. In what ever sad ness she is, Kushi will never fail to make her smile. Being a school friend, Kushi did a lot more to her in this five months. Kushi was the only reason , why Radhika still remember her smile. Radhika smiled to Kushi and asked "kya hua dear, itni jaldi mein ho, aaj"

Kushi:Thats because, I made jilebis today.

Radhika:why are u tensed , are u okay?

Kushi waving her hand off... "Chill, workaholic..I made jilebis so that u can have some gud food...from last one week, we ate some foreign food in Italy na. thats why"

Radhika smiled hugging kushi and said "U are my best dear"

Kushi smiled and said " Acha... now take this and arey when are u going for India"

Radhikas smile faded she silently kept jilebi in her mouth.

Kushi: Isn't the jilebi gud...

Radhika frowned...

Kushi:Other wise why u kept that sad face.

Radhika:Nothing

Kushi:Then tell me, when are u going to India again

Radhika:Not now Kushi.

Kushi:Whats that, won't u go for Janmashtami to India.

Radhika:May be no. I had a lot of work here.

Kushi:let ur work go to hell, how come u stay away from vrindavan that too on the day of Janmashtami.

Radhika smiled and said "I will go for Radhashtami, okay"

Kushi:Ye kya baat hain, janmashtami par jaane ka kya problem hain tumhe

Radhika:Nothing dear, I doesn't have mood to go, thought of celebrating janmashtami here.

Kushi:Is it because of Dev?

Radhika sopped doing the work she was doing, she looked at Kuhi, tears brimmed in her eyes..Kushi hugged Radhik and Radhika wiping her tears said "I can't face him kushi, I don't have the courage"

Kushi:Acha, Rohan bhai called today mng...

Radhika:Bhai ne call kiya, Kyun? any way its time for our meeting we should leave/

Kushi laughed out loud and tried tight to stop her laugh. Radhika looked ta her questioning. Kushi: Ur manager called... he was feeling really tensed, I can't stop to hold my laugh when I see u fearing for u.

Radhika:Its ur first day as my personnel secretary na... u will understand why they fear for me to that extent. any way lets go.

Kushi smiled and nodded excitedly.

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In India,

It was night... Dev returned late from office but found Mrinalini waiting for him "Bhabhi, didn't u sleep till now"

Mrinalini: Just had a thought of speaking to u.

Dev:Kehiye na

Mrinalini:Dev, Radhika ke baarein me kuch jaantein ho kya?

Dev stopped eating "Kya hua bhabhi"

Mrinalini: Radhika california mein, ye baat tum jaantein ho, phir bhi tum kyun vusko contact karne ki kosish nahi kar rahe ho.

Dev continued to eat silently...

Mrinalini: U know that Radhika won't talk to any of us... still she comes to India. U can talk to her change her decision na.

Dev:Its her life, and its her decision. who am I to change it. ''

Mrinalini:Dev! U loved Radhika

Dev:Haan di, thats why I still respect her decision.

Mrinalini: don't u miss her Dev?

Dev gave a smile as answer and left into his room...

Mrinalini looked at a photo frame of Radhika on the wall and said " kyun aisa kar rahe ho Radhu...what wrong did we do to u? why are u paining us all like this."

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Dev looked at Abhi who was sleeping on his bed peace fully... Dev smiled seeing abhi and said to him self "Hope, I am lucky as u are. U have chance to talk to her, but she her self doesn't wanna talk with me... why is she doing this. what wrong did I do to her. "

Dev looked out through the window looking at sky and thought to him self "when ever I feel that my wait is getting completed, u make me wait. why Radhika? whats wrong in me? why?"
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Radhika at same time was looking at her and dev's photo in her lappy and said to her self "Dev, I always wanted to be urs. But destiny always drag me away from u. When u belong to some one else , how can I embrace u Dev? I am sure by Janmashtami time, u will get a clear view of what ur destiny is? and why I left u. Please forgive me Dev, Kanha bonded u with some one else. I am sorry Dev"






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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update. Waiting to know the reason behind Radhika going away from Dev.
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Posted: 13 years ago
i felt like crying reading ur update...hope yeah intezaar jaldi khatam ho jaega
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Posted: 13 years ago
iam crying while reading the update hari waiting for the reason behind their separation
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Posted: 13 years ago
whats this now
didnt expect this
i feel like crying hari

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