Originally posted by: indi52
ami,
was looking for this one. glad i found it. wonderful wonderful mwaah take. i marked in plain red whatever spoke to me.
in bold red, him returning her dupatta and you thinking of that first time he'd just ignored it, both delicious. also that thought of "mehsoos" being part of their equation from day one. 👏 it really was. that first time he opened his eyes, he did hear others speaking of a strange girl, but when he turned and looked at her, something in his expression changed, as though a search was ending, the gaze wanted to rest, it seemed to me at least. there was much more than incredulity or anger, in fact there was a sort of calm, a resting, a wondering, a wanting from another time and place, then of course all hell broke loose.
got the same sense of spanning time in his eyes closed, eyes open sequence here. great thinking and direction. and salaam to the boy for mining deep to find the perfect feeling in the chocolate orbs.
love "flinches." pain, desire, fear, uncanny feelings in a dream all in that little movement as though jolted by something bad.
purple bold, 😆he was so hugworthy there, it's a good thing he's on tv and i'm far away.😳 and you too. 🤣
does this boy even know how hot he is. think he practices everything in front of a mirror, just to get us? his little gestures are the most fasciating ever, including eye movements, and that extremely stylish body language, so well calibrated, not too much overt ishtylewa, just enough to drive us crazy.
in red bold underlined, khushi's state of mind and her words, that's what's really intriguing, isn't it? why did she lie? why do i feel that she was violently attracted, only did not have the sophistication to understand this. just knew she was bothered. and the whole thing became too much for her, she just hit out at random, wanting to hurt him. unerringly her instinct picked the right weapon. news of her disappearing from his life. she knew it would hurt him, this was certainly not about pleasing him. khushi, as much a partner in this sexual sensual undeniable tango. as mesmerising and animal their dance as the best moves of buonos aires.
the hamesha tango in delhi, beats any last tango in paris (or london ny rome timbuktoo) hollow, what? 🤣
loved your 45/46. and dc was khatarnak.
and yes, pink bold... i'll keep breaking things till you listen. deadly line. so very true of the episode. khushi is not listening to her insides, asr can hear things, he knows his response to thsi girl is not usual, he is beginning to sense a need within. shatir hai. but madamji, in no mood for all this. brilliant writing.
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