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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

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Thanks Piya for the banner

Thank you friends for comments.

Anu – I fully agree with you. I was so much in dilemma before this part because I always wanted a legal route for Rahul but Geet's past stopped me from going down that route. I am not sure if I will revisit Rahul's punishment again or not…but maybe after her family issue is handled.

Remya – Well Geet did stand up to him but in a different way. Yes she did not confront him herself but then I never wanted a direct conflict between her and that man. I wanted Maan to step in take care of him in his own way which he did. But that does not mean Geet lacked the strength. She did speak about it albeit with help of Pinky, Adi and Maan. Also, this update will show her frame of mind better because I do not think trauma of such an incident leaves so easily. You also have to consider her past scenario. A girl who has been battered her whole life. For such a person, doing what she did itself is amazing. Well, that is my POV and I hope you will agree as you read more.

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Chapter 21 - Puch rahe hai puchne waale

Geet's PG

Meanwhile, Geet finally convinced Pinky to go office as she was well now. She assured her

"Tu fikar mat kar Pinky. Thanks a lot for being there with me. Par ab mein bilkul thik hoon. Adi sir told na how Maan sir removed…removed him.

I will also join office from next week…tab tak yeh saare nishan bhi chale jayenge. Office mein koi puche to keh dena I had an accident and slipped from stairs."

(Don't worry Pinky. Thanks a lot for being there with me. But I am fine now. Adi sir also told how Maan sir removed…removed him.

I will also join office from next week…till then all these marks will also fade away. If anyone asks in office then just tell them I had an accident and slipped from stairs.)

"Lekin Geet"

(But Geet)

"Seriously Pinky, I am fine. I will never forget Maan sir's words. I will not hide myself. Meri koi galti nahi hai na…Maan sir ne khud kaha mujhse."

(Seriously Pinky, I am fine. I will never forget Maan sir's words. I will not hide myself. It was now my mistake…Maan sir said it himself.)

Pinky smiled and caressed her face lovingly before leaving for office.

Once Pinky left, Geet roamed around the house, arranging and cleaning it. But soon there was no more work to do and she sat down on her bed.

Like a reel, events from that day started playing on her mind. But they were not alone. There were some more things in her past which intervened and meshed the memories together.

"Sir…what are you saying. Chodiye mujhe…please chodo."

….

"Saali…jitni achi tarah se baat kar raha hoon…utne hi nakhre. Dekh ab teri pehli baar kaisi karta hoon mein…waise bhi pyaar ke liye toh bahut din hain…abhi toh bas trailor hai."(Rahul)

(Bi***…I am talking nicely and you are throwing tantrums. Now see how I do your first time…moreover there is lot of time for love…this is just a trailor.)

…..

A thunder rolled outside and she heard rain drops falling outside reflecting her pain. As she looked at the darkened sky outside, her eyes fell on a string of ghungroo kept on her study table.

There was no music but her bleeding soul sang the song which only her ears could listen. Her hands and feet moved and she started dancing as her pain poured out just like the rain drops outside.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XXvIf4_V8Ds&feature=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XXvIf4_V8Ds

aarzoo thi hamein itna, zahe kismet mil jaaye

saaree duniya me kisi se toh muhobbat mil jaaye

jite jee paaya naa kuch hamne zamaanewaalo

abb janazje ko toh rukhsat kee ijaazat mil jaaye

She saw herself decked up as bride as she cried on the shoulder of mother. Titoo and Rajji hugged her tight and helped her sit in the car. She stifled her cries as car moved ahead leaving behind a cloud of dust and she bade her last bye.

….

Flashes of sword glared and blinded her in the night as she ran. Suddenly a knife hit her leg and she fell down.

"Veerji…mujhe mat mariye. Please don't kill me."

puch rahe hai puchhane waale

lekin hum batalaaye kya

daag yeh dil ne paaye hai kaise

unko hum samjhaaye kya

puch rahe hai puchhane waale

"Aap yeh kya kar rahe hain Bhai Saheb….Nahi Bhai Saheb…aap mere Veerji ki tarah hain..."

(What are you doing Bhai Saheb…no Bhai Saheb…You are like a brother to me.)

Rain drops outside muted her voice

"Chod do mujhe…maine kuch nahi kiya…chod do…Bhabhi…mujhe bachao bhabhi…Maaji"

(Leave me…I have not done anything…leave me…Bhabhi…save me Bhabhi…Maaji.)

……..

"Kyon itne nakhre kar rahi hai…haan. Raat ko akela pan to mehsoos hota hoga tere ko. Kya karegi is husn ka."(Rajinder)

(Why are you resisting so much…hmmm. You must also feel lonely at nights. What will you do of so much beauty?)

kitne daag hai iss daaman mein, kitne daag hai maathe par

jo humko apana sakte the, sach hai humein apanaaye kya

daag yeh dil ne paaye hai kaise,

unko hum samajhaaye kya

puch rahe hai puchhanewaale

She saw herself putting tika his Veerji followed by Titoo….she tied Rakhi and fed them ladoo….

Then she went and fed a ladoo to her daarji and smiled at him cheekily

………

"Teri himmat kaise hui zaban ladane ki…tu kal hi apne ghar waapis jayegi…samjhi."(Daarji)

(How dare you speak back…you will go back to your house tomorrow…got it.)

"How dare you run away? You have only two paths in front of you – Ya toh ghar laut ja ya phir yahi gad jaa…." (Brij)

(How dare you run away? You have only two options in front of you – Either go back or get buried here.)

jo apno kee basatee thee, ab nagaree hai begaano kee

kaun yaha hai sunne waala, dil kee baat sunaaye kya

daag yeh dil ne paaye hai kaise,

unko hum samajhaaye kya

puch rahe hai puchhanewaale

Her father made her sit on his cycle. Dressed in an orange suit and with two pony tails she maneuvered her cycle inside the house with her father tailing her by side.

He took her around the fields and then to tube well where she splashed water on her father

….

"Bhag ja…Geet…Bhag ja…phir mud ke kabhi mat dekhna…Bhag"

(Run away…Geet…Run away…don't ever look back…run.)

"Tujhe meri Kasam….aaj se to Geet Handa nahi sirf Geet Hai…bhag ja" (Mohinder Handa)

(Take a vow…from today you are not Geet Handa just Geet…run away.)

patthar ab kya fek rahe ho, hum pehale se zakhmee hai

dil par kitane zakhm lage hai, chhodo tumhe ginawaaye kya

daag yeh dil ne paaye hai kaise,

unko hum samajhaaye kya

puch rahe hai puchhanewaale

"Sir…what are you doing?"

"Geet…sweet heart, bahut tadpa liya hai tumen mujhe. Ab aaj toh mein apni pyaas bujha ke rahunga."

"Sir…please…no…please let me go….

She saw Rahul laughing out loudly as she whimpered in front of him.

"Saali…jitni achi tarah se baat kar raha hoon…utne hi nakhre. Dekh ab teri pehli baar kaisi karta hoon mein…waise bhi pyaar ke liye toh bahut din hain…abhi toh bas trailor hai."

(Bi***…I am talking nicely and you are throwing tantrums. Now see how I do your first time…moreover there is lot of time for love…this is just a trailor.)

….

She sat down with a thud and sobs rocked her body. She huddled together as if she was in the cupboard….without realizing that her teeth were chattering just like that and with the same fear.

Another thunder rolled and a flash of lightening blinded her eyes for a moment making her startled. She was almost drowning back in the dark abyss when she heard him…her Maan sir

"Geet…"

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aG7Re6EcUfI&feature=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aG7Re6EcUfI

Na Kuch Poocha, Na Kuch Manga
Tune Dil Se Diya, Jo Diya

She looked up to see him there, looking at her with his dark chocolate eyes.

"Your safety is my first priority and I failed today in it"

Na Kuch Bola, Na Kuch Tola
Muskura Ke Diya, Jo Diya

"Maan sir, please sir, you trust me na. Meri ismein koi galti nahi thi…sir, I did not do anything wrong."

She saw his moist eyes

Tu Hi Dhoop, Tu Hi Chau
Tu Hi Apna Paraya
Aur Kuch Na Janu, Bas Itna Hi Janu

"I have full faith in you. Never think that you did anything wrong.

You can not stop living your life or moving ahead because of what happened.

Don't pity yourself and don't hide either. Tumhari is sab mein koi galti nahi hai and you have to believe it from your heart."

Do you trust me to allow to take that action on your behalf?"

…..

"You are a brave girl Geet. It is me who is fortunate to know you."

She saw him stretching his hand to her and she held it and got up. She smiled as tears flew down her eyes

Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun
Sajde Sar Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun
Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun

"Meri koi galti nahi hai Maan sir and aap mujhe pe vishwas karte hain. Mujhe aur kuch nahi chaiye Maan sir. I will not break and I will not cry. You trust me Maan sir…you trust me."

(It is not my fault Maan Sir and you trust me. I don't want anything else Maan sir. I will not break and I will not cry. You trust me Maan sir…you trust me.)

She laid down on bed and slept off dreaming of her Maa, Bauji, Rajji, Titoo and her Maan sir.

Precap – Tuta Tuta Ek Parinda

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Posted: 12 years ago


got ist place tooo...yyy yyy



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee


pleasure is all mine sweet heart ...

🤗 ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, beautiful, brilliant, nice, lovely part
loved it
loved the way geet try to brave
loved geet- pinky conversation
pinky is sweet and caring friend who try to help geet and cares for her really
but maan's word inject a confidence on geet ,
she needs time to heal but she will definitely face everyone
the glimpse of her past make me wonder about few things
don't know m true ot not but she was married and her brother in law try to do something with her
no one support from her in law and may be her husband dead
and her past sply on brij it's sorrowful
the part when she remember about her vidayi and how her father helped her with bicycle makes us teary
how a innocent girl's life change drastically still fully not aware of her past and now again she is facing hardship
really kudos to geet many people lost hope and lost confidence if they gone through this but she is fighting and hope and know she will now she got a mentor and friend her maan sir
how she got the confidence from her maan sir, it's big ray of hope for her life

unknowingly maan has huge place in her heart he makes himself a big place in her heart in her mind where she dream about her family, her parents, siblings and her maan sir
beautiful song with perfect scene
So perfectly match with scenario
loved it
continue soon
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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baato hi baato mai update aa gaya...😃

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