Swaron SS : Mistake Of Love (Epilogue+note|Pg 92) - Page 26

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Dawn rays were entering in room to see two loving souls cuddled into each other. Sun rays were very less but fair enough to give their glorious bodies some warmth from itself. Birds were chirping and their melodious voices made Swayam wake from his slumber. He rubbed his eyes trying to get clear view of his wife laying next to him peacefully. He snuggled closer to her and stroked her hairs with an enchanting smile which can steal any heart on his lips.

Sharon stirred in her sleep and slowly woke up. She made some cute baby sounds while waking up and saw Swayam laying next o her very close with his head on his palm and elbow resting on bed. She saw him and smiled on his smile. She always felt that his smile is a lifetime gold coin for her. She looked at him confusingly as why is he smiling so much.

Sh: What? Smiling so much huh? She asked with a little chuckled on his cute smile.

Swayam smiled more and more not giving any reply.

Sh: Back to earth Swayam. I am talking to you! She said while getting hell confused now.

Sw: I love you Siren! He said and kissed her forehead.

She smiled and blushed lightly while he resting his head in her neck inhaling her sweet scent.

Sh: So this was the reason for you smile? She asked stroking his hairs.

Sw: Uhhun. You was the reason behind that stupid smile and it will always be you. He said and kissed her palm.

Sh: Now get off me. Tia and Sia must be awake now. It is their weekend holiday and they deserve their parent attention too! She said while giggling.

Sw: Arrghh! What Sharon..you spoiled my mood! He said while making puppy faces.

She was about to answer back when their notorious babies jerked up the door and ran towards them and sat on bed. Sharon felt her voice stuck in her throat somewhere. She glare swayam as asking what to do now as they both where wearing nothing but a blanket.

T: Dadda! Good Morning now come Tia is hungry! She said while rubbing her palm on her tummy.

Sia tried to remove the blanket so that their parents can go out and fed them. Sharon hold her hands tried to stop her.

Sh: Baby you both go out mumma is coming in 2 minutes.OK! She said thinking they will be convinced.

Sw: Yes, Tia go out dadda is coming too! He said while smiling awkwardly.

T: No! she said while jumping on Swayam's tummy.

Tia sat on Swayam and Sia on Sharon's tummy and they both started jumping. Poor naked soul was hurting on some parts and their babies were not such good too with them. They both was still laying on bed with their angels on them yelling and shouting.

Sw: You both go out. NOW! He shouted at them.

Tia and Sia both scared and started to crying silently and ran out of room.

Sh; Swayam you shouted at them. They are kids na? She asked him shocked.

Sw: I am sorry. I think I have to convince them now! He said and sighed.

Sh: Ya. For sure as my angels are sad and I am on their side! She said while glaring at him and left for washroom.

Sharon came out from washroom after few minutes taking a fast shower as her princesses were hungry boo right now. She didn't look at Swayam and went out of the room.

Sw: God, now they three will eat me up for sure! Why it had to be off from office today? Save me God! He said while still laying on bed as he was waiting for Sharon to come out from washroom so than he can go.

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Sharon walk towards her princesses and saw Sia crying badly with hiccupping and hugging Tia while Tia was sad but was not crying now. Sharon knew that Sia was more attached to Swayam as she remind him of her always and Tia is now attached to Sharon now as she is small copy of Swayam. Sia was crying because Swayam for the first time shouted on her. Sharon sighed and took Sia in her arms and made Tia cuddled next to her.

Sh: My princesses are crying? Dadda was sad baby, that is why he shouted. He loves you both. Sia baby you know na dadda loves you the most! She tried calming her.

T: Yes, Sia you are dadda's favorite. He used to fed you first remember when mumma was not here. Stop crying sister! She said while making sad faces.

Sharon saw how bad she felt when she said that Sia is Swayam's favorite daughter.

Sh: No baby Sia is dadda's favorite but Tia is mine. She said trying to cheer her up but may be it was truth too but one more truth was that they love their angels at core.

T: Really mumma? You love me? Dadda used to made Sia lay next to him always..will you sleep with me now? She said as she started crying now.

Swayam was hearing this standing from there back. As he realized that may be he has done partiality between Sia and Tia. He felt very guilty when Tia said that dadda always slept with Sia and that now her mumma will sleep with her too. A small tear rolled down from Sharon's eyes. He has always loved both of them but never felt the reality that he was definitely doing wrong with Tia. Tia was younger and more delicate and she always wanted more care and love but may be he was showering his love more on Sia. Sia was always tough like Sharon and she never cried or was never delicate. He remembered when they both slipped from stairs and started crying rey was there with him at the moment and they both ran up to stairs. He instantly picked Sia in his arms whereas Rey looked at him and instantly picked Tia in his arms when she moved her arms in air crying badly thinking may be dadda will pick her up but that little girl only 3 years of old doesn't remember that afterwards but she always felt that though she was very small but single parent kid's are intelligent enough for understanding things properly. Also Swayam used to take Sia and Tia to park she was the one who always sat in back seat whereas Sia sat on passenger seat next to Swayam. Tia never even played in park and only sat on bench as Swayam played with Sia. Slowly slowly she stopped noticing these small small things as she got used to with it and there was no one with whom she can be with when her dadda was always busy with Sia. Swayam came out of his trance hearing Tia again.

T: Mumma Tia loves you. Promise me you will never leave Tia. You know I missed you always dadda was always with Sia. I missed you a lot! I saw once a twin sisters playing with their parents in that same park. One was playing with dad and other was playing with mom. When dadda used to play with Sia I missed you..I wanted to play too! She said and smiled.

Sharon saw her smiling but she herself was crying. She took Tia in her arm tightly and kissed her cheeks on which Tia smiled just like Swayam. The thought of Swayam again made her little angry.

Sw: Tia? He said walking to her.

Tia turned back and looked at his dadda there holding his ears and kneeling down on floor.

Tia ran to him and hugged him while giggling as seeing what his dadda was doing to say sorry to her. Swayam wrapped his arms tightly around her and tears start rolling down from his eyes.

Sw: Sorry Tia dadda is very bad I know! Please forgive me I promise I will take care of you.. Dadda will play with you from now. He said while kissing her forehead.

T: You will? She asked looking amused as she was shocked that dadda will play with me too now as she never thought of that day and started crying.

Sw: yes baby! Dadda is really sorry! I really love you.. I will pay with you..mumma will play with you! He said and hugged his crying princess.

He started mumbling to himself now.

Sw: I sorry Tia. When I should be taking care of you both I only took Sia's care. I always left you back behind us. Sorry really really sorry baby. He mumbled to himself.

Sharon was looking at him but her disappointment was not yet vanished. She took a deep sigh.

Sh: Tia and Sia you both are hungry na? Come sit on table mumma will fed you breakfast. What will you both eat? She asked smiling.

S: Maggie! She said while smiling.

T: Umm.. Maggie! They said too.

Sw: Tia I thought you never liked Maggie! He asked her.

T: dadda Maggie is Tia's favorite! She said and walked toward table.

Sharon looked at Swayam and sighed again thinking what has he done in 4 years. He looked back at Tia all hurt that he doesn't know even that Tia liked Maggie may be because he never asked her likes and fed her the same what Sia liked. He looked at Sharon and slightly lowered his gaze and sat on table too.

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Edited by Tanya_Swaronluv - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yipee! for the 1st time i am the 1st one to comment. feeling so proud of myself :P *jk*
anywayz jokes appart
i loved the update
the whole shekhwat family iss soo adorable... an yes, now they are a complete family with Sharon..
unfortunatrly Swayam always paid more attention to Sia. feel really bad for tia
but i am happy swayam got o know and hope he will try to rectify it...
i all it was a superrb update! plz update soon

Edited by swaron09 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update Tanya..i seriously dont have any idea how do u manage to write so damn beautiful updates ...of so many FF/SS/OS..goshh..salute to u baby😳
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update 😊
Sharon disappointed on learning that Swayam favors Sia more than Tia
Swayam felt guilty for Tia n apologizes for his behaviour but Sharon is not satisfied
Edited by sanstina - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWWHH, That's real sad that Swayam subconsciously paid more attention to Sia than Tia and it's unfair. Thank God, he's realised his mistake now and does something to rectify it !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Felt bad for Tia...
Swayam ko to uski likes- dislikes bhi nhi pta..
Now Sharon has come na..
She will make everything right...😊
Coz mom ki jagah koi nhi le sakta...

UPDATE SOON di...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
I had tears in my eyes when I read about Tia... I hope Swayam seriously does something to rectify it and then giv equal attention to both Sia and Tia... I don't want Sharon living Tia more due to her resemblance to Swayam and Swayam with Sia for her resemblance to Sharon... They as a parent should give equal love and attention to both their daughters.

Secondly, I don't want Sharon to argue or fight with Swayam on this topic as she has no right to do so... Swayam neglected only one daughter but its not thst he did not take care of her whereas Sharon was not even around this lil angels when they wanted her as she was busy massaging her own pains.
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Posted: 12 years ago
One of the heart touching update ever !!!!
After reading the last update , I was wondering, what will be in this update. More of swaron ?? or will it be them mending their faults or what ?? I loved that you focused on KIDS 🤗
It normally happens , if one kid is tantrum queen , then other one normally gets sidelined and finally get adjusted to it or start feeling jelous .. As a parent one should be very careful. Swayam for taking care of sia more was like she look like sharon and on top tantrum queen .. Poor Tia, the update really made my eyes moist !!! Kids notice every little thing.Like how Tia noticed parents playing with twins in park or swayam feeding Sia first or Sleeping with Sia .
Though cant blame swayam as it was not intensional..
Thank god Tia here is like swayam the Understanding, else it would have lead to jelousy ...
Love Tia🤗 and tantrum queen Sia too..🤗
Swaron should not only concentrate on Tia now as they feel she was sidelined, it would lead to sidelining Sia..
Loved the update ..Beuatifully written
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww...it was a totally emotional chapi!!
Beautifully written...
Cud feel da pain Tia had gone thru...!😔
Update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i felt sad for tia
ya shron hain she will make it correct
ya it was awesome to read
excited for next

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