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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey di u onl9...????? Howz u and kids...???

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

I m just speechless after reading the update...

It was superb as always...
The way u showed maan's POV.. He would always stand by geet...
and then the talk between maan & geet...
I specially loved that convo...
and jab geet ne kaha " Plzz sir u trust me na.." I actually had tears...
As if maan ke us ek jawab pe uski zindagi bachi ho...
and then the way he controlled his tears and emotions... was just showed awesum...


Kyu itna mein bebas ho gaya hu
Chah ke bhi use sambhal nahi pa raha hu...

Chupaaye in ehsaaso ko dil me khada hu
Bas uski ek muskan ke liye taras gaya hu...

Paas uske jaa na pau par hausla jarur dunga
Chahe jo ho saath uska kabhi na chodunga...

Ibadat me uske ye dil humesha jhukega
Rishta jo chahe ho ye humesha paak rahega...

Thanks Ritu. Kabhi kabhi koi bahut important ho jaata hai...geet ke liye bhi maan aur uska trst bahut mayne rakhta hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

Hey di u onl9...????? Howz u and kids...???


Sab thik chal raha hai bas...office is busy. Need to get back to work. So going to give another update now and then hide back into my meeting...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Thanks Ritu. Kabhi kabhi koi bahut important ho jaata hai...geet ke liye bhi maan aur uska trst bahut mayne rakhta hai...


I can understand it...
Just like maan I m also wishing for their hug...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Sab thik chal raha hai bas...office is busy. Need to get back to work. So going to give another update now and then hide back into my meeting...


Aww... same here job me busy ho gayi ho to late FF padhti hu and cmnt also late and choti hoti ja rahi hai... U updating... wow.. but poor me going to watch race 2 update kal padhungi shayad... And U take care of urself plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally the status of updating haye
m waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Thanks Rakhi...Yes this part was alla bout Geet's Pain but also about Maan's pain. How he being so sucessful must have felt when he could not protect his own love...
In this FF he will always be his mentor and she will always rise from ashes...
Also, soothing Geet's pain ahd to take priority over his anger..hai na...

welcome Ritzy 😳
I really felt it's most realistic touch as the way u showed being too successful also the pain for ur near ones there if they r in pain
that's the grt thing he will be her mentor and she will rise from ashes
yes it's indeed his priority to take care of geet's pain and soothing her pain
another reality and matured thing
not so many will do it or have done it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Shruthe and Ash for the banner

Thanks a lot for your comments friends. I have responded to all of you starting at page 107 so please do read

I have written an OS on Anu's Character of the Week thread. Character is ElastiGirl so here is the link to OS –

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/75151858

Also, in general, I will request you to contribute as readers and writers to this thread. It is a very good initiative and all Oss there will bring a smile on your face. So please do give all the Oss a chance.

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Chapter 20 - Bebasi Dard ka Aalam

Two days later, KC MD's cabin

"to see thy smile...i shall break that ice...

to see thy love..i shall lay my life...

breaking free from that iced cage...

i shall make thy fly high away...

live and love...

smile and laugh...

cry not my love..

the winter shall end...

and the sun will shine...

i shall break you free till your song is heard...

winter fairies shall dance and to thy shall sing the bird...

shining shimmering till all you long...

Cry not my love...

the winter shall end...

'tis all my love that i can lend...

dance and sing...

and spread your wing...

for thou shalt play your sonata...

Your own winter sonata...!"

By Ash

Maan had been steeling his nerves before facing the man who was responsible for current collapse of his world. He wanted to not only beat him black and blue but tear every fiber out of his body. He had spent better part of the day trying to control his seething anger and anguish.

"Maan just think about Geet. She does not want her name dragged into this publically and your uncontrolled actions can damage her reputation. Uski izzat aur security ka sawaal hai Maan aur kya uske liye bhi you can't you control yourself."

Maan looked at a picture taken on the party night where Geet looked like an angel in the white saree. He just kept on gazing at her picture and finally picked up his phone.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PBf1RUPREPA&feature=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Link -https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PBf1RUPREPA

Bebasi dard ka aalam,

tum mujhe de do apne gham

khaamoshiyaan bhi do, tanhaaiyaan bhi do
bechaaniyaa bhi de do,

de do naa

Few minutes later, when ready, he asked Adi to call the devil himself.

Rahul though little surprised at sudden meeting was too full of himself to still realize the repercussions of his actions. There was absolutely no realization or remorse, so guilt was far away from his face when he stepped inside with a wide smile in Maan's cabin.

Maan gritted his teeth and loosened his fist by keeping his focus on Geet's image on his laptop instead of the face of the man he wanted to bash with his bare knuckles.

bhigi palkon se churaa lungaa nami
rehne dungaa naa, khahin koi kami

tumko daaman naa bhigone dungaa
ab kabhi tumko naa rone dungaa

uljhane ghum ki parchhai
de do mujhe apni tanhaai

gumnamiyaan bhi do, naakaamiyaan bhi do
viraaniyaan bhi de do,

de do naa


"Good Morning Sir…Adi"

Rahul took his seat and Adi kept a file in front of him at Maan's nod.

Rahul opened the file with excitement but soon color drained from his face and so did the smile as he saw images of Geet's bruises.

He looked up feigning ignorance

"yeh sab kya hai?"

(What is all this?)

Maan leaned forward now looking at him with an unwavering gaze

"What do you think it is?"

Rahul gulped his saliva but continued with his pretence

"I have no idea sir"

"These are the images from the doctor's report who have treated Geet's, my employee's, KC's employee's bruises after your attack on her."

Rahul looked at angry Maan as he roared in loud booming voice standing up towering over his

frame.

"Sir…sir…yeh sab jhooth hai"

"Oh really…so you are trying to say that these pics are a lie. Then even I am a liar who has seen these bruises in person…right."

Rahul was frightened, not so much with the exposure but seeing the anger on Maan's face. He knew what a powerful businessman like Maan could do to him and he decided to go for the best defense possible.

"Maan sir, I don't know what that girl has told you but I can assure you that she is lying. Please trust me and I am telling you that things are not the way they seem."

Maan was getting madder at every word Rahul was uttering and it was getting difficult for him to control his anger. Maan folded his hands on his chest and looked at Rahul with so much hatred and disdain that Rahul just cowered looking at the fire in his eyes.

"Sir…mein sach keh raha hoon…Actually truth is that Geet has been flirting with me since day one. She even dropped me hints that she is ready for a relationship in exchange for a favorable appraisal and recommendation for her new position. I even told her once that she should focus on her job and I will only recommend her if she deserved it. But she never stopped showing her attention towards me.

That day she arranged for a call and tried to seduce me. I was just trying to control her and tell her the morals but she refused to listen to me. I am also a man sir and her affection just lead to one thing after another but it was all consensual and when after all that I told her that I will still not recommend her as she is yet to learn a lot, she became angry and threatened me. I just never thought she will go ahead with her blackmail sir.

Sir…how can you trust this girl. She is a mere secretary and these lower middle class girls can do anything for money and promotion. Wos do kaudi ki lad…."

Rahul jaw was shaken as Maan hit him hard breaking his teeth. Maan marched to him and holding his fallen form from collar he pushed him onto a chair. He leaned onto the handles

"Insaan ki seerat uske paise ya class pe nahi balki uske zameer pe depend karti hai Mr. Singhnia. And your zameer is dead. Even if I had no proof I will trust that lower middle class girl any day and any moment over your rotten soul.

Mujhe in proofs ki zaroorat nahi hai but shayad tumehin yeh dekh kar samajh mein aa jaye ki what I can do and will do with you."

(A person's nature is not dependent on his money or class but on his soul Mr Singhnia. And your soul is dead. Even if I had no proof I will trust that lower middle class girl anyday and any moment over your rotten soul.

I don't need these proofs but maybe looking at them, you may realize that what I can do and will do with you.)

With that Maan straightened and nodded to Adi who started working with TV controls.

"Tumhari jaankar ke liye mein bata doon that KC has an automatic security system and control of which is available to only senior most people in KC. Though there are no CCTV cameras in personal cabins but they are present in hallways, lifts and off course conference rooms."

Rahul started sweating as tape started playing from where Geet entered the conference room and he closed the door. Maan had seen the entire tape before, how he had trapped her, assaulted her…how she had hidden herself in a 2x4 feet wardrobe, and how she had sneaked in the night all bruised and bleeding. His heart had stopped beating many a times as tears had flown down his eyes. He had re-lived every moment of her pain and though there was no audio, he never needed anything more than to see her eyes to share her pain.

Even now, as Adi fast forwarded the tape at x16 speed so that Rahul just gets the glimpse of what was on it, blood rushed to his ears and his heart bled.

Rahul knew his game was up and he went into apologizing mode. He stood up trying to hold Maan's arm and started saying -

"Sorry sir…I am sorry sir. Woh, she was so beautiful that I lost my sanity."

Maan hit him once again making him fall on the floor.

"Shut up…shut up you ba…."

Maan was breathing heavy as he fought for his control. He went around the table and sat back on his chair reminding himself of the promise he made to Geet. He was tied by Geet's plea to not let her name get outside but there was no way he was going to expose her only weakness.

tere hotho pe sajaa dungaa hansi
teri raahon mein bhichhaa dungaa khushi

tum mujhe apnaa maanti ho agar
yu khafaa hoke naa jhukaao nazar

mushkilein, apni majburi
ho de do mujhe sari benuri

pareshaaniyaan bhi do, hairaaniyaa bhi do
nhigebaaniyaa bhi de do,

de do naa


"Now listen…I do not want KC's reputation to be spoiled and with great difficulty I have somehow convinced Geet to not drag police into this. But let me make it clear to you, I don't need much persuasion to throw all this reputation excuse in the air and make sure you are locked up in jail for a very long time. Just for a very slight consideration to my grandmother, I am keeping this out of media and police's hand."

He gestured to Adi who gave him another file.

Maan took out a paper and threw it in front of Rahul.

"You are hereby, immediately terminated from KC with a red mark on your termination paper clearly stating that you are being thrown out because of several harassment complaints and bad behavior."

"Sir…please"

"I have spoken to Chandigarh HR and also to some of the girls with whom you have worked with there. You are lucky that you stayed in your limits and those girls don't want to press any charges but….you better not test my patience.

Also, don't even think you will be able to hide your work experience in KC…."

Rahul's eyes widened in shock as Maan continued.

"Oh yes, I have complete file on your last rendezvous with the company you forgot to mention in your CV. A KC spokesperson has already sent a warning letter to every big and middle size construction company about you and your character."

Now get the hell out of my cabin and my company and probably this city as well if you don't want me to change my decision and throw you out in jail. And always remember two things – There is no statutory limit on assault and hence, one step out of line anywhere, KC will contribute all the evidence against you in your case and meanwhile, if you drag my company's name in this anywhere, KC will ensure that you rot your entire life in jail.

Now Get Out!!!!!!"

Rahul knew that he was badly cornered and he will have to struggle financially a lot. His career was over forever and he rued his fate when he thought of laying his eyes on Geet. Only thing on his side was that he was not jailed. Thanking his stars, he just hid his broken face and ran out of the company building.

"Adi"

"Yes Sir…I have spoken to the abc security firm. They have been paid for a 5 year contract to keep an eye on him and to collect proofs. Even one more mistake and they will work behind the scenes to ensure that he pays for everything legally."

Maan stood up looking outside his window.

"Thank you Adi and make sure…"

"Yeh baat is room se bahir nahi jayegi sir."

(This will no go out of this room Sir.)

"Hmmm"

bebasi dard kaa aalam,

tum mujhe de do apne ghum
khaamoshiyaan bhi do, tanhaaiyaan bhi do,
bechaniyaa bhi de do,

de do naa

Adi had been first surprised with Maan's instructions to travel to Chandigarh and involve top security company in finding details and paying them premium for continued 5 year watch. He somewhere knew that Maan was going out of his way but he could only feel immense respect for the man in front of him for the way he handled everything. To avoid Geet's name coming into open, he had used KC's reputation as an excuse but Adi knew the truth.

He approached him and stood beside him

"Sir…I have not said this before but I am honored to work with you sir."

He fixed his spectacles and walked out of the cabin leaving behind his boss, still looking into space outside the window.

Maan closed his eyes as finally a tear made way out of his eye expressing the pain in his heart.

Kyu itna mein bebas ho gaya hu

Chah ke bhi use sambhal nahi pa raha hu...

Chupaaye in ehsaaso ko dil me khada hu

Bas uski ek muskan ke liye taras gaya hu...

Paas uske jaa na pau par hausla jarur dunga

Chahe jo ho saath uska kabhi na chodunga...

Ibadat me uske ye dil humesha jhukega

Rishta jo chahe ho ye humesha paak rahega...

By Mishtiritu

Precap - Puch rahe hai puchne waale

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update

Maan is in pain but he control his anger as he had made a promise to Geet tht her name will not come out

Liked the way how u hv shown - Maan control himself from brutally punching Rahul

Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, brilliant, emotional mind blowing, lovely part
loved it
loved the way maan, handled the situation so ,maturely deal with the situation
though he himself is in pain and want more severe punishment for rahul but still he fulfill geet's promised and give punishment to rahul in his way.
though he want to give more punishment but he controlled himself
it's really admirable thing as not so many boss did it, but wish boss do it then employee's will be more comfortable and secure
really loved maan here and his commendably job, well maturely handling situation
though he was in immense pain still he fulfill his duty and promise
he ensure the justice and security and keep intact the honor of geet
he take KC's name to save the honor of geet
he gave punishment and not stop there he make sure to keep an eye on rahul so what rahul is doing or will do in future all
Rahul is indeed B******
shameless giving blame to geet
though it's reality it happen and happening still in maximum places, where accused give and put all blame on victim
Maan has all trust on his geet and then he has prove also , though if he didn't have those prove still he has the trust on geet ,
Here geet has her problem so she can't take police or legal help and can't say to maan also for this maan has to stop himself for this
Geet fear if she went to take any help from police then it'll cause her harm as her family will know about her
for that maan has to hide it from police and take the action within limit by himself
such delicate situation
song was perfect with the situation
continue soon
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Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago

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