virman NEW ff LINMFA * teaser pg 142 * 15 jan 2014 - Page 30

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Posted: 12 years ago
it was amazing
pls pm me the next part am nas
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Naina
It was amazing
Aww my mannu, she is such a darling and swamini aggrrr ho mean she is, she use her...
Virman court sequence was too good
Thanx 4 d pm naina
Waiting 4 ur next part... Update Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
thx 4 the pm
it was awsome and loved it to the core
I hate that evil bua!!!!!!!!!
continue soon...and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update and loved it
continue soon... and pm me
by the way, thx 4 the pm
sorry for posting two times 😆
Edited by hninhayman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is one of my favourite scenes!!
and i love the basketball court scene!
lovely update naina...
thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for late comment...
loved it dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 7
days passed by... virat was back to normal and manvi also showed virat that she had dropped the plan of uniting virat and maya... but the reality was something else... manvi had one thing clear that now she couldnt let virat know that she is helping maya... else he wouldnt accept maya... manvi planned things and showed virat signs that maya is now a changed personality... eg - maya helped an old man to cross the road, gave balloons to children n stuff... virat saw these things but never thought of giving maya another chance. and then there came the festival of holi...
it was jeevika's first holi, so swamini called the chadharies to chandigarh so that jeevika could enjot her first holi without missing her family in rishikesh.
manvi made a plan of inviting maya to the holi party as a chief guest of swamini bua... that way no one would oppose her being there in the party. manvi told maya to wear a sarree for thr holi party bcos manvi wanted virat to see maya in an desi avatar.
the same things happened that happened during the holi party...


virat threw maya in the tub of coloured water and was going somewhere when manvi pulled him to a corner...
manvi : what is this virat...?? this is no way to behave with a girl...

virat : are you angry on me bcos of that girl...???
manvi : yes...
virat : i didnt do anything wrong partner... i just cannot stand her being here... why dont you understand...??
manvi : why dont u understand virat that u are still affected by maya n her presence... u still love her partner...
virat : i am not affected by her and i dont love her... do u get that...??? i can never love her after what she did to me...
manvi : why cant u give her a second chance...?? cant u see the regret in her eyes...?? or u dont want to see it...???
virat : i know what type of girl she is... i dont want her back manvi... i am happy with the way my life is... i dont want a fake girl like her in my life...
manvi : i dont believe you... if she doesnt affects you anymore, you wouldnt have behaved that way...
virat : if u dont wanna understand i cant do anything regarding it... i would just advice you to open your eyes and see the truth...
swamini : what are you two doing here...?? virat will u please drop maya to her place...??
manvi : i dont think so bua ji...
virat : ofcourse i will do it...i will drop her to her place...
swamini : i will just send her...
virat dropped maya to her place just to show manvi that he is not affected by maya.
maya called manvi later that day and told her that virat insulted her and said rude things to her when he dropped her... basically she told her sob stry to manvi...
manvi was damn angry on virat...
virat : partner... its dinner time...
manvi : so...???
virat : so what lets go for dinner...
manvi : i am not hungry...
virat: the sherni isnt hungry... why...???
manvi : because i am on a fast...
virat : fast...???
manvi : you abused maya and until you apologise to her... i wouldnt eat or drink anything...
virat : who told u this...??? oh yeah maya must have herself told you...
manvi : i shouldnt matter who told me...
virat : manvi i am telling you again... dont fall in her trap... she is very clever... she wants my money... thats it...
manvi : virat are you apologising or not...???
virat : no...
saying this virat went away angrily...
after some time virat came back and saw manvi holding her stomach and talking to herself...
virat : eat this pizza...
manvi : no... i cant...
virat : manvi i will apologise to maya... i promise... pls have this...
manvi : promise...??
virat : pakka promise...
manvi : thank god u agreed...i thought i would die of hunger...
virat : i know...
virat fed manvi a slice of pizza and eat a bite from that slice... virat and manvi ate that pizza sharing it like they shared that apple...
viren was passing by when he saw this scene...

viren : i really wish they both realise their feelings before its too late... pls god pls give virat his share of happiness and dont let his heart break...he also has a right to be happy and i know his happiness lies in manvi... he really loves manvi and i can see this in his eyes.. pls give virat what he deserves and i know no girl can prove to be best for virat other than manvi... please bless them both...

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Posted: 12 years ago
owww
sweeet viren, everytime the first person , who sees the things...
wish the same😊(but only in this ff😉)

thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hangok

owww
sweeet viren, everytime the first person , who sees the things...
wish the same😊(but only in this ff😉)

thanks for pm

shhh...
anyways thanks... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update
i loved it
thanks for pm me

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