Ariya ff : HUM-TUM(PART 49 PG 153 OCT 5) PM LATER

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Mdmadona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

nice
omg arjun got hurt again
hope he ll get well soon
& precap
feel so bad yaar

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50ShadesOfMe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#462

Hey!
Superb update!!
Aww.. Riya was jealous wen that new nurse was giving Arjun a sponge bath 😆
And the tit for tat 😉
Arjun ko jalana shuru kardiya usne! 😆
But suddenly everything turned so serious!
Arjun ke stiches khul gaye

And Precap!
Riya declaring that she'll not meet Arjun till he is okay! :(

Waiting for the next part! 😊

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vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#463

Awesome parts...

nice scene when Riya gets jealous over meena...spongebath, huh?

hmmm phir rohit..poor guy!

Shree toh sabse bechaara hai...dono ke beech mein phas gaya!

Cont soon!

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#464

Ab jaldy uodate ker do manuuu or wait nahi hota

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Queen.Bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#465

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

I m just thinking abt Rohit.

Bechara 😆

so rohit is going to come again right?😉

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: Queen.Bee

so rohit is going to come again right?😉

Yes..

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#467

PART 24

After half hour Riya sees OT'S red light has swtich off. Riya sees some man take him in room , he is unconusis, she remebered his pain , his face , their first meeting , their declaration of love , their sweet talkings she miss it once , she also give herself one failed try to live without him , his love . After all drama she got him back in her life , and now day because of her she again gonna lost him , now she understand the depth of love , she knows if he is not there for her , then what to purpose to live. she wips her tears & goes to see him.

Riya look at him , he look like a child , who sleep peacefully , Rathod goes outside to meet DR. While Shree & Chotu standing there tensenly. She look at all & thinks she is responsible for everything. She silently goes to him & seat besied him holding his hand.Shree & Chotu goes outside decided to give them privacy. After 20 mins he gain to consciousness. he hold her fingers tightly , she feel him & look at him . he slowly open his eyes & sees one figure close to him. He force little pressure on his eyes & sees she is there holding his hand . He smile at himself , She look at him sadly with teary eyes. He knows she must must be crying from long time. He open his mouth to speak somthing, but she says softly , "Sorry , its totally my fault. " He nodded his head in negative. She look at him & smiles little. "Arjun i have decide somthing , i don't know its bad for us or good , but i have to do this , already there is lot problems is there , and im also adding problems for you." So , its better for us , we don't meet , i don't want to hurt you , but i hurt myself , this is punishement for me.I am coming here till you not free from all those bandges & that stupid spongebath." He smile little at her , remebering her uneasiness . " When i get the news that you are fit & ready to go home , that day i come here , to see you. Don't think that i am fed up with all your things , but if i am here then we always fights & do silly things , so is better that i am not coming here. , but we talk on phone , because you know that i am not gng to sleep without listening your voice ok. " She ask him with a plasterd a smile on her face. He hold her hand tightly "You are not going anywhere , if are again leave me , then i " am corspe. " She immeadlty cover his mouth with her palms & kiss him on that. "Arjun you have to understand , i have to do it , see so many ppl are in hurry because of me , i gave pain & ... she can't continue & burst out in tears , He felt helpless , he hate her tears , he hate himself , because of this stupid stiches he can't hug her , console her. He onlyb speak , " Riya , plz... i hate tears you crying to feel relax , but i am dying each minute when i see you in tears , jaan plz... don't think that you are resnponsible for all and ... but she noddes in negative . "Maine aaj jana hai ki aapki kimat kya hai meri life mai , ek baar kho chuki tumhe meri bevkoofi ke karan , ab nahi , agar is baar kuch hua na to mai to mar jaaungi. aur vaise bhi agar mai yaha rahi na to tumhe baar baar OT jana padega" She sepak with little smile on her face. He smile also & ordre her "Sirf ek baat per main maaunga " She look at him confusedly. "Din mai chaar baar tumhara chera dikhna padega , aur tumhari aawaz bhi mujhe sunani hai vo bhi har roj aur ha jab tak tum ye nahi maanogi tab tak mai nahi davai lunga ya koi treatment. " he finsh his part & look at her for qns. She smile at his stubborness & nodded her head.

Rathod look at them through glass , and smile at them. While Shree look at them with propud on his face & Chotu crying to see when he understands their love.

Sorry for any typing mistake & bear me for this emotional part😭😭

hpe you like it

Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#468

Thank god...mujhe to laga ab ariya dur ho gaye kuch dino ke liye...lekin tumne aisa hone nahi diya

nahi to tum beh jaati river mein...are wahi river jo mere rone se banti...just kidding dear

but this is really emotional and heart touching update...im really imaging ariya in this scene...and im totally lost in it

Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#469

PART 25

Weeks passed , Riya & Arjun not meet , but they see there face eyerday , Thanks to Shree He give Arjun laptop . Now Ariya talk through Video chat . Each time Arjun noticed her dull face , she look like a fragile , he notices dark circles around her eyes & also ask her about it , but she cleverly ans him "Ohh that one because of study , my stupid teachers give me assingnments ." Finally they awaietd for that is coming , tod after 1 & half month Arjun discharge from hospital. He is too happy , not for that reason he hate that smell , and atmosphere , but now he will see her after long break , though he sees her daily , but now he meets her , touch her , feel her. Here Riya got the news & ask her brother " Bhai mai jaau use lene , plz na." Rathod knows she eagrely want to meet him , he agrees & says "Mai bhi aaunga , dischare papaer singn karne hai , aur tum dono ko ghar drop karta hue . "

"No , plz aap sirf paper sign kijiye aur bhag jaayie , mai aapke officer ko safely ghar le aaungi , mai bhi ek officer ki behen hue ." ( she said this while holding her shirt collar ) Rathod can't help but smile at her. He softly hit on her head & goes from there. Riya hurridly goes to room to get ready for this special occasion.

Riya's dress

She come out from her room & Suhani look at her , "Riyu aaj koi function hai ?" She ask him while seeing her dress. "Ha bhabhi " and smile at her. Rathod who waiting in parking area look at her & says smilingly "Baby aaj shaadi nahi hai." Riya lowers her gaze & hurridly seat in car , she turn crimson red. Rathod adjust himself on driving seat & look at her , "Maine sahi notice kiya na , OMG Riya you are blushing. " She hit him on shoulder and look outside of window.

Here in hospital Arjun irritated Shree. He give long list to Shree

Arjun : Shree vo nurse aayi kya , tumne kaha tha na theek se ki mujhe hair wash chayie.

Shree : Ha , vo maine.

Arjun : Aur mere Kapde?

Shree : Laaya hua aapke ghar se.

Arjun : Meri shoes ko polish kiya?

Shree : Ha Chotu karvane gaya hai.

Arjun : Shree tumhe nahi lagta "I need shave" he touch his bear & look at Shree.

Shree call Chotu and says "Ab ek nahi ( barber) leke aa"

Arjun : Aur meri davayien , mere discharge papers , aur payment.

Shree : Sir , plz realx Rathod Sir paper singn karnge , payments bhi kar denge , aur davaiyien ko kya hai , vo to hame ghar jaakar leni hai , aap sifr ready ho jaao jaldi se.

Arjun : (Smile at him) Thanks Shree.

Shree : Sir don't worry , aap to mere bade bhai jaise hai.( he gets little emotional)

Arjun : (Senses this) Oye idhar aa.

Shree goes to near him with lowered his eyes, "Agar aapko acha na laga ho , to mai..."

But Shree looks happliy when Arjun ans , " Chote ki baat ka bhi kya bura maana."

"Matlab aap" Shree happly ask him

Arjun nodded. "Shree mujhe sirf ek badi behen hai , aur vo bhi hamesha mujh pe rokh jamati thi , kash mujhe koi chota bhai hota to mai bhi kuch aisa karta."

Shree gulped down "Matlab bhai banke bhi ye meri chatni banayenege?" 😭

"Nahi bharta bana dunga." Arjun says and look at him .

Shree look at him , "Inhe man ki baat bhi samaz aane lagi." he thinks to himself

Arjun smile at him " Ab dar mat naatak kar raha tha." Shree also smile. 😆

During this hospital stay Shree always there with him , to talk with him , share case deatils , sharing food . There bond gets stronger day by day. Arjun knows Shree don't have any siblings , he feels bad about it. Shree always want , need somone as a big brother . And today Arjun complete his wish.

Arjun wears