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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jm020

WOW its amzing wait no way better than amazing

I came across this ff a couple days back and once I started I just couldn't put down my iPad until I finished it's my new favourite
I love the concept and the characters espesially get and khushis
I'm eagerly waiting to read the next update.
I do hope your Study's and exams went well xx


Thanks for the review!😃
Thanks for all the compliments! I cant believe that you were so addicted to the story that you could put the ipad down till you read it fully! Very happy to read that! (Smiling goofily😃😉 ) Ny studies are going fine! But due to net and time problems I am unable to update sooner!😭 Will Pm you when I update next!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Drishuluv

A Big sorry for being late again, i had read this chapter on last Friday itself but was not able to comment because of my illness, was in fever for almost five days😭

OK now about update, it was superb. maan & geet's fight about their future children was lol😆luvd their cute fight.And Arnav u have to b more carefull "tumhara bhanda kabhibhi fut sakta hai"but ur plan of choosing Afreen's dress was really good👍🏼 keep it up asr...
Lavanya with NK...??? will look good ,would like to read their romantic moments or should i say comedy 😆 wo kya hai n nk babua hai hi aise...


Thanks for the review! About being late, chalega1 As long as you review, I am happy!
And sorry to hear about your illness! 5 days!!!! Must be tough for you! Hope you are fine now!
La - Nk if made a couple will only have 4 or 5 scenes together! But even if not made couple they will be in the story becoz they are integral to the plot! So, La - Nk 10 votes!
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Thank you!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

beautiful ff

add me too ur pm list
pm me when u update dear
cont soon


Thanks for the review!😃
Will add you and Pm you!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Zindagirocks_21

Sorry for the late reply Hun!! Have so many exams and I'm just frustrated with it! Can't wait to get them over with! Anyways the update was fabulous as usual! Oh so lavanya was sad because she Broke up with her boyfriend ( ah that's okie) haha arnav got caught khushi finally asked him about his family and all and w was just dumbstruck but thank god he didn't lie that he doesn't have any family lol!! Because if he had told khushi the truth later on then bam bam! I feel sorry for arnav! Bechare ko kya kya karna parta hai! Yehh to ranjhe se bhi zayada kam kar raha hai! Just so that his truth doesn't come out! Maan and geet argument was just hilarious and cute! Haha they are not even married and they are arguing about kids! I loved one of maan's lines " agar hamare bache tumhari kaise hon tu mujaheddin toh 2 aspirin lene pare gai mai" haha made my day!! Ahh shopping! Ahah arnav never thought that khushi would be there as well and just agreed to go! But it was cute how khushi thought that she is hallucinating whereas arnav was actually there! One task complete of arnav and others to go! Yes I would love to see nk and lavanya together! We couldn't see them on the show but it'll be fun. Hopefully nothing happens to maan and geet happiness ( may get love happily) I can't wait for the next update' continue soon and once again sorry about the late reply! I can't beloved I have math exam tomorrow! Thanks for the pm <3


Thanks for the review!😃
About your exams, I can understadn your frustration. I am facing them too! feel like screaming right now!
I am so happy that you enjoyed the chapter so much! Enjoyed reading your review!
Even I feel sorry for Arnav, pyaar mein kya kya jhelna padta hai!😉
When I wrote Maaneet's arguement I was watching Geet reruns! So you can understand why I wrote it in such a fun manner!😉
That aspirin makes me laugh each time I even think about it! I can actually imagine Maan saying it while Geet looks at him with wide eyes!
Isnt Khushi naive? Thinking she was imagining but Arnav was actually there! Hope that scene was not over the top!
NK - La 11 votes!👏
Thanks once again for such an awesome review!😃
Edited by Analeez11 - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chavvi16

really do ya plan to give us shocks like this
sorry will give detailed comments in a while
and me is back finally sorry for the delay
ahh before i get started i would like to say something about not the story but you comment on my comment
hmmm that sounds funny okay focus please
and this is what i wanna say why are ya worried that you gave small comment on my comment
you dont have to worry about that you know
and of course wont mind you giving me a short repsonse after all we are commenting on your work you dont have to worry at least about giving detailed analysis of my comment on your work as long as you dont find it offensive and stuff
and if you do find there is something worng in my comment do let me know asap i shall try to amend my mistakes
arrey how can i not give detalied analysis of each scene
ab aapne itne pyaar se aur mehenat se yeh likha hai toh humein bhi usse dhang se appreciate karna chahiye ki nahin
okay now back to the update (finally you must be thinking) 😆
well yes arnie she can give competetion your girl to maan's girl (who happens to be baby anyway) but i bet they will be equal in that respect
and yes you are right that does make it a part and parcel of khushi mate so thankfully that shall never change not that you want it to so we will have to put up with her non stop talks right
wait did khushi find out whats bothering her la di i wonder
she may be puny but kafi dum hain inn mein
beta she sure hell bent on making sure that your secret is out in open hai naa
well you forget she is KKG man and no way will she spare you that easily after all inhe haq hai yeh sawal karne ka after all she is your GF naa (at the moment she will be that only till the dude decides to porpose)
so he did tell her something of his family just not their names good save and move my dear
but obviously not for too long then you are so doomed for sure
yup she was even younger than you when she lost her parents but that hasnt let her change her attittude to the world and she is very much happy with her family
and she can also understand you better too having gone through the same situation as you of losing her parents
so he accidentally told her how his mother died
well he will have to tell her right what happened after all he is gonna be married to her (eventually and if he doesnt screw it up of course)
well yes she has to know how you became ASR from arnav
oh my his past is really horrible
he and his di saw their mother burning right infront of her okay that just brought tears to my eye thinking how truamatic it must have been and i certainly cant imagine what they must have gone through there
wow no wonder he is like this his past made him like this and the fact no one helped them made things even worse than they could have been
well had maan not helped god knows where they would have gone right
wow she really got him right and she is right she wont let sadnes touch you now as she is with you
and she shall heal you with her love care and her nature after all she is khushi so she will be the one to bring khushi back in your life (pun intended)
achaa so this is why la was so sad and subdued because someone named rohan broke up with her
waise la ke liye kaun hoga nk ya phir koi aur
there must be someone for her too right i doubt you shall let her be alone for too long
so finally she is dreaming of her past cool man things are being bit clearer
okay that can be kninda crepy watching her sleep but i guess its okay as its maan right
what the was she dreaming of the raizadas right
who is her veere akash or someone else so confused but that shall be over soon too
i know right geet yeh aapke maan bhi naa kitna gussabhaara hai inn mein
and also in khushi's arnavji wow again these two can give solid competition to one another
yeh bhi kuch kam drama queen nahin hain ji
he did not just take panga with his wife to be oh boy this aint gonna bode well for you mate
i would quit if i were you maan
i know right but dono badi door ki sochte hain naa aww bless
whats this storm that shall destroy their dreams now you are scaring me
okay clam down am sure all shall be fine in the end right
lets see how he escapes her during the shopping now
this should be fun
phatti naa aapki jab aapko pata chala ki afreen bhi yahin hain
well yeh toh hona hi tha
he is isnt he gonna help her choose the outfit well good dude
so he did choose the outfit for her well he had to after all she threatened him even if she thought he wasnt there sochiye agar inhe pata chlata aap sach mein hai toh kya karit aapka
congrats didnt realise it has been 9months to this baby of yours
cheers for pm
hope it wont give ya a headache this long comment if yes do let me know will trim it down from next time
and yes i so do want nk and la jodi hope that does happen if others too want it


Thanks for the review!
And you are right! There is no need that I reply the same length of your review! But I just dont want to offend anyone! I dont want anyone to think 'I reviewed so long and you replied so less!' I dont want to loose such a good reviewer due to some small mistake, thats all! But I take your words in my mind!
About finding wrong, well as long as you dont insult me or my work I am fine with whatever you write in review! Even if you point out my faults I will be fine coz I believe that we can improve only if we know our faults! So, go ahead and write anything you feel like writing in the review!
About your review, I am taking your words to my heart and not writing too much coz most of the time either I agree with you or just repeat the same things you wrote (That is how I reply everybody😉) ! So, about your review, read it totally and you have said everything! If I comment, it will be just a repeat of what you wrote! But i will write few things which are not repeat (the parde ke peeche things) !
I really love the way you summarize my works! Really sweet of you!
Now some parde ke peeche facts, When I wrote the past revealing in chapter 13 it was from the point of view of Maan who was not there so he did not know everything! The past written in this chapter was from Arnav's perspective who saw everything and who was affected the most!
Khushi needed to understand the story behind Arnav and his caustic personality!
For La, I had planned for Rohan to get back with her, but now everybody wants Nk to be with her! But raaz ki baat - who she gets together with is not relevant to this story! What is relevant is her presence which is integral for the twist in ARHI love story! And Nk is relevant for what I have planned after the twist! So, whom they get together with is of no consequence in the story! But if those two got together, tehre will 4 or 5 scenes added to the whole story, that all! It wont affect the plot!
About the veere - Akash confusion, yes, Aakash is her veere!
About the storm, it is the twist during the engagement, nothing more!
And thanks for the voting.
Nk - La 12 votes!
Take care
Kalpana

Edited by Analeez11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 49
fantastic part dear...
loved it...

Arnav Khushi
very nice...
shes such a chatter box...
Arnav is gonna get a free AIR for life time...
hope his eardrums dont pain later...
or if Khushi chooses silent treatment Arnav will go mad with the silence...
OMG poor Arnav...
how could his dad do that...
and Arnav no wonder he changed so much...
poor them...
Maan was with them...
Khushi will bring him the happiness and bring back that old naughty Arnav...

Khushi
so La is dull coz of the love story...
hope she doesnt cross ASR and fall for him...

oh shopping...
its gonna be fun...
again Arnav will think of some excuse to hide from Khushi...
this idiot why is he doing this...
why is Arnav so allergic to Sherwani?
Khushi will i mean should make him wear one...
bohut nakhre karta hai yeh Arnav...
Khushi will make him do all the things he has been kicking out...
lovely siblings...
Shyam seeked help from Arnav and Aakash and Maan...
like this love between them...
and Anjali doesnt know about this...
shes so understanding that she has arranged this shopping...
and Arnav is dreaming or say desiring to have such moments too with Khushi...
hes confusing Khushi like anything...
poor girl...
she still hasnt come to know that her Arnavji is so naughty...
that scene was so so so lovely dear...
his tamanna poori hui abhi hi...
if hes this naughty now itself, what all would he do during his and Khushi's marriage?

Maan Geet
wow haye Maan could sleep and he came to Geet's room...
lovely gesture...
hes so caring and concerned for Geet...

Geet
so Geet is having some memory snippets...
what are the ages of Geet as baby, Dev and NT and Maan and Arnav and Anjali and Annie and Arjun?
Anjali is that 12 year old Di?
Geet - ?
that was Dev? - 9 years?
Arnav - ?
Maan - ?
NT - ?
Annie and Arjun - ?
the memory was so cute and beautiful...
loved that so much...

oh ho poor Maan...
he loses his temper quickly...
but Geet hai na his Soni to cheer him up...
lovely convo...
their fights are so cute...
u are scaring me with that line dear...

loved all the scenes so much dear...
cont soon...

PS -
about NK and La...
well my opinion is they will not be of much importance here...
this FF is all about Maan Geet and Arnav Khushi...
already the main leads are too good and their doings and antics are so funny...
adding more fun will not balance this...
my view it is...
already Dev and NT and Anjali and the Raizada men all are so good and hilarious NK and La wont be that entertaining...
we have Akash and Payal here, who by the way me not finding too perfect...
Dev and NT are awesome...
and not to forget Daadima...
and we have Arjun and Annie but very less role...
if NK and La are like Arjun and Annie, me fine with it...
the hierarchy is like this, from less to more importance;
Arjun Annie - meagre presence
the Raizada men - all together and for Anjali
Dev NT - lovely pair with NT and her popcorn and Dev his paratha
Daadima - for all drama
Anjali - all rounder and friends with Maan
Maan Geet and Arnav Khushi...
soon when Baby's thing is out Mamiji will have her space here...
add NK and La when the main leads are in trouble or in pain...
NK with his tuta foota hindi will make it light...
basically its like the IPKKND clan are occupying so much space...
perfect balance is needed here...
this is personal view dear...
am sorry if i have hurt u Kalpu or the others who wanted NK and La...
too much of silly jokes wont make it memorable...
and this FF is so close to me and i want it to be the best...


Hi, sorry for not replying! I will reply tomorrow! But about what you spoke about Nk - La angle you are right! But I will post the reason behind their jodi tomorrow! till then you can read my explanation given in the reply to chhavi16. I have explained the reason behind my idea of getting them together! Will reply later! Thanks for understanding!😃
And thanks for the review! Check this space tomorrow for the proper reply!

Hi Deepa,

Finally got some time to reply your review! Thanks once again for your review!
"Free AIR for life time", I so loved that comment! Still laughing!😃
Dont worry about La, she will never fall for ASR here, either she will be with Rohan or Nk, not yet decided!😕
Arnav was allergic to sherwani in the show too So here also he is allergic to it. BUt dont worry, Khushi's love will make him wear it one day, be assured!!!😉
I am happy that you liked Anjali Aakash scene, she is one of my favorite character and I love her bond with her siblings!
About their ages -
Maan, Anjali, Shyam - 27 yrs
Dev, Arjun, Arnav - 25 yrs
NT, Annie, Akash - 24 yrs
Payal - 23 yrs
Lavanya - 21 yrs
Geet - 20 yrs
Khushi - 19 yrs

The ages of Geet and others when Geet was Baby?? (during the flashback) -
Geet - 5 yrs
Anjali - 12 yrs (she is the Di from the flashback)
Dev - 10 yrs
Arnav - 10 yrs
Maan - 12 yrs
NT - 9 yrs
Annie - 9 yrs
Arjun - 10 yrs
Akash - 10 yrs ( he is the Veere from the flashback)

About NK and La, what you said is totally right! I understand you totally and I am not offended by your views but before you give me your decision, I wanted to clear somethings.

1. Whatever I decide that is to put La and NK together or La with someone else, the fact remains that La and NK will be there in the story. I planned La from the start before I even thought La NK jodi!! And NK was planned when someone mentioned about jealous Maan and Arnav. You will understand what I meant after the twist comes. So, in short, La-Nk happens or not they will remain in the story. They are as important as Dev, NT, Dadima, Aakash, Payal, Anjali etc.

2. You said that there would too much fun added which ruin the balance. But the thing is if La-Nk happened there will be barely 4 or 5 extra scenes added in the whole story, thats all. They are important to the story but who they hook up to is not relevant to the plot but it is just that someone suggested La Nk pairing and I wanted to know whether everyone will like it.

3. About your hierarchy of importance for the characters, I totally loved the way you stated it. And you are right! If NK La Pairing happened their scenes will be as much as Annie Arjun scenes. Thats all. But as individual character they are important to the story.

4. I know you think that by adding NK LA jodi I will be giving too much importance to the IPKKND clan but that will not be the situation, I assure you. Once Geet joins the office, Adi, Pinky and Sasha-Tasha will also come along. Then there is still some scenes coming up of Geet's original family. And While NK is from IPKKND clan, he will be integral to get Maan and Geet together after the big storm. Plus, once the twist comes the focus will be on GHSP clan for a while after the spotlight will shift to both the families. Also, you should note that the story is plotted around the Payash engagement and after the twist, around Payash Marriage. So, the focus will be the drama going on around the four leads which will end with a sweet and dramatic climax around the Payash Marriage.

5. About silly jokes, dont worry, Nk is not for silly jokes, he is in the story for some important reason. And if they became a jodi, Nk and La will only have 4 or 5 scenes.

Now I stated my points, please go through them and state your decision. Your reply is really important to me as you are one of my favorite and one of my best reviewer!!

Thanks for reading
Kalpana
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CHAPTER 50. SWEET AND MUSICAL FRIDAY!

Place - Maan's Cabin at Khurana Constructions

It was nearing lunchtime on Friday when a certain Khushi Kumari Gupta, also known as Afreen to a certain Rakshas, entered Maan's cabin. Maan was working on some files when she knocked and entered but he did not look up. "Veerji?", Khushi called him and Maan looked up in surprise. Khushi always had called him MK Sir in office and never Veerji so it was a surprised Maan who looked at her. Khushi gave him a polite smile and spoke, "Veerji! Aaj aapki Office ki staff nahi aapki Choti Behen aapse kuch kehna chaahti hai!" Maan's eyebrows rose and he gestured her to sit. As Khushi sat in the chair in front of him, Maan wondered, Kahin Arnav ne kuch gadbad toh nahi kiya? He noticed that Khushi seemed a bit nervous. After all, Khushi ke liye Arnav is my friend. Toh agar Arnav ne kuch kiya toh yeh mujhe hi bataayegi na, mujhse hi complain karegi na! Aur waise bhi uska koi aur bhai bhi toh nahin jisse Khushi madat maange! But then, Arnav loves her too much to hurt her. Then why she is so nervous? Pata lagaana padega. But before he could speak, Khushi spoke up nervously, "Veere! Hum aapki behen haina! Toh'.humaari jiji bhi aapki behen jaisi hui na!" As Maan looked at her in surprise, she started babbling in nervousness, "Humaara matlab yeh nahi ki Paayal Jiji aapki behen hai. After all aapki toh pehle se ek behen hai phir hum bhi ek behen hai, toh do do behen hote hue aapko beheno ki kya kami hai? Hum bas yeh keh rahe the ki'", Maan cut her off with "Baat ko ghumaana bandh karogi aur topic pe aaogi!" Khushi gulped. Hey Devi Maiyya! Raksha karna! "Maan Veerji hum chaahte hain ki aap humaare Jiji ke Sagaai mein aayein. Yeh rahi uski invitation!", she handed him the invitation. "Aapko aur aapki poori family ko aana hai!" Maan took the invitation with a frown on his face, "Par mujhe toh card pehle hi mil", and Maan stopped speaking. Arre yaar! Woh card toh ladke waalon ki taraf se hai! And as far as Khushi is concerned, she does not know that her sister is getting married to Arnav's brother. Agar maine bola ki I got the invitation from Arnav's side toh Arnav ka poora plan khul jaayega. "Kya hua, Sir?", Khushi looked at him in confusion. MK Sir kya bolna waale the?

Maan looked at Khushi as he remembered his and Arnav's talk. Jitna mujhe samajh mein aaya Arnav ka plan, I have to act as if I do not know Arnav's brother is getting married to Khushi's sister. So, that means agar maine Khushi ko bata diya ki main ladke waalon ke taraf se aa raha hoon, toh poore plan ka chaknachoor ho jaayega. Arnav toh mujhe peetega hi peetega, Anjali ko pata chala ki maine uski Bhai ke pyaar ke raaste mein problem khade kiye toh woh toh mujhe maar hi daalegi. Upar Geet bhi aag babula hojaayegi agar maine uske dost ka dil dukhaaya! Maan Bete tu toh phasa! Soch Maan soch! Khushi should not know that you are coming from boy's side. Suddenly, he had an idea, "Sagaai kab hai tumhaari Jiji ki?" Khushi smiled at him brightly, "Che din baad, Wednesday ko!" Maan beta get ready to act, Maan told himself and put on a shocked face. "What? On Wednesday? I am sorry, Khushi but usi din mere dost ki sagaai hai. They are family friends, you see. Mujhe jaana hi hoga, you know, as a support." Maan put on a helpless face as Khushi's face fell. Then Maan acted as if he had an idea, "Khushi, I just thought something. Dev, Dadima aur mujhe toh uss sagaai mein jaana hi hoga but NT and Geet don't need to come with us. So, I will do one thing, I will send those two to the engagement. Infact, I will send them in the morning. They can help Paayal in dressing up and getting ready. Aur agar mere dost ka function jaldi khatam hogaya toh I will come to your sister's engagement too. Ok!" Khushi's face bloomed back into happiness as she smiled widely and nodded. She wished Maan could come but atleast Geet Parjaayi and NT parjaayi are coming. Aur waise bhi Maan Veerji toh bol hi rahe hain ki woh aane ki koshish karenge! Koi baat nahi Khushi! Shaadi ke time pe chaar mahine pehle hi invite kar denge. Phir hum dekhte ki kaise Maan Veerji Shaadi mein nahi aate! Khushi did not know that a storm was coming; a storm so powerful that it might nearly destroy the Guptas unless Maan stepped forward to support them. This storm will make sure Maan became an integral part to Payash Wedding.

Few minutes after Khushi left the cabin, Maan called Arnav and told him everything. Arnav assured him that what he said to Khushi was according to the plan and Arnav's plan was safe. As Maan kept his phone down, he mused; Ek aur jhoot! Pata nahi iss Arnav ke chakkar mein mujhe kitne aur kis kis se jhoot bolne padenge. He shook his head but suddenly sat straight. Actually maine Khushi se toh jhoot bola hi nahi. After all Aakash toh mera dost hai aur main uski sagaai mein jaa raha hoon. Maine jhoot kahaan bola? Maine toh sirf yeh baat chhupaai hai ki jis sagaai mein main jaa raha hoon woh Khushi ki behen ki sagaai hai. I did not lie. Maan heaved a sigh of relief.

Place - Khurana Mansion

Maan took a deep breath as his car neared the house. He had a night flight to Kolkata to attend a National Conference regarding building Pro-Environment Buildings. Hence, Maan had come home early. As he entered the house, he stopped in his tracks in shock. There stood Geet in the middle looking confused and lost while NT, Dadima and a lady discussing about cloth and materials, pearls and diamonds, saaris and chudidaars. Maan nearly laughed out loud at Geet's forlorn expression. He remembered NT mentioning during breakfast that she was calling Boutique people to the house as Geet needed a new dress for the Aakash's engagement and it was not safe for Geet to go out. As he stood there watching, the lady from the Boutique, his Dadima and NT placed one after other Saaris on Geet's shoulders and checking whether it looks good on her while Geet looked like scarecrow with her hands up by her side, trying to stand still. Her expression was more like a kicked puppy. Finally, Maan could not resist and burst out laughing. All four ladies looked at him in surprise. As Geet noticed him, she folded her arms and glared at him. Maan controlled his laughing and motioned to them to continue and walked towards the stairs all the while trying to stop himself from laughing. As he reached the stairs, he turned around and spoke to the busy ladies, "Pink! Geet pink pehnegi!" NT rolled her eyes and quipped, "Bas Veerji! Aapne kya Geet ko pink Saari mein dekh liya, aapko toh har waqt Geet pink mein hi chahiye!" As Dadima and NT started laughing, Maan turned and walked up the stairs in embarrassment. As he climbed, he heard Geet say, "Main Pink nahi, Red aur White pehnoongi!" Maan's breath hitched at her words and he turned back only to notice that Geet was staring at him; her eyes telling him all, her lips never said. Red and White! Her and Him! As he stared at her with intense eyes, she blushed and looked away. The Boutique lady suddenly spoke, "Aap bahut lucky hain Madam. Humaare paas just recently ek beautiful exquisite saari aayi hai. And it is in red and white." She pulled out the saari and placed it on Geet. It was white saari with red border filled with embroidery. Geet looked at Maan and Maan nodded. As Geet said yes to the Saari, Maan gave her a tender smile and turned back. As he climbed the stairs, he heard Geet instructing the lady to have puffed sleeves for her blouse. It took Maan nearly an hour to stop smiling.

Place - Outside Khurana Constructions

Two hours after Maan reached home, Arnav came to pick Khushi up right at the time she generally got off her work. But Arnav was bewildered when he came to pick up Khushi and Khushi handed him an envelope; the same envelope which he saw daily at his house and which he had handed over many times in these few days to his clients. The envelope contained the invitation to his cousin's engagement. Arnav did not fail to notice the irony of being handed over the invitation; the same invitation he himself had designed for the event and the same invitation from the bundle of invitations which his Di must have given to the Guptas so that they could invite their side of family and friends. As he took the envelope and was about to take a look at it, he stopped. Nahi Arnav! If you took a look at the invitation your plan would go into the drain. Khushi would not be convinced. No, I cannot look at the invitation. So, he held the envelope containing the invitation in his hand and without looking at it and maintaining a neutral expression on his face he asked Khushi, "Yeh kya hai?" Khushi grinned at him happily, "Humaari Jiji ke sagaai ka Invitation! Aap aayenge na?" Arnav was baffled; how to answer this question without destroying his plan? Suddenly, he remembered his talk with Maan in the morning. Why not use Maan's idea? He smirked, "Of course, I will come! Kab hai engagement?" Khushi replied excitedly, "Aane waale Budhwaar ko!" Arnav suddenly morphed his expression into that of shocked, "You mean to say this Wednesday, coming Wednesday?" As Khushi noted Arnav's shocked look, she became worried, "Haan Arnavji! Kyun? Kya hua?" Arnav acted as if he was very upset, "Khushi, I am so sorry sweetheart but that is the day my cousin's getting engaged too. I have to be there! I am sorry! But I won't be able to come. Infact, I was planning to invite you to my cousin's engagement, so that my family could meet you and your family." Khushi blushed at the thought of her family meeting his. After all that is the next part of falling in love right; meeting the families and finalizing the relationship. Khushi smiled shyly at the thought of her and Arnavji's engagement when her smile turned into frown as she realized that Arnavji would not come to her Jiji's engagement. She looked at Arnav sadly, "Aap pakka nahi aa paayenge?" Arnav felt really guilty at seeing her upset face, kaash main tumhein bata paata ki main aa raha hoon, but then my plan will go down the drain. And this plan is the only thing which can save me from Khushi's wrath when she will know my truth. "I am sorry, sweetheart. Par main ghar ka bada beta hoon so I have to be there." Khushi sighed and nodded sadly. Arnav took the card and kept it on the dashboard of his car making sure that he kept it in such a way that he cannot see the names of the bride and groom printed on the envelope.

Place - Maan's room at Khurana Mansion

While Khushi was giving Arnav the invitation envelope, around the same time Geet entered Maan's room with coffee for him only to see him packing. She frowned, "Maan aap kahin jaa rahe hain hain?" Maan turned to look at her, "Haan! Woh tum tabhi saariyon ke saath busy thi toh maine tumhein bataaya nahi. I have a conference in Kolkata early morning tomorrow to main raat ki flight pakad raha hoon." Geet sadly entered the room and pouted, "Aap abhi bata rahe hain yeh baat?" Maan sighed and stopped his packing to reply, "Dopahar ko hi pata chala tha conference ke baare mein aur upar se Dev Chandigarh nikal chukka tha site supervision ke liye toh mere paas aur koi option nahi tha than to go myself." He went back to packing and Geet placed the coffee cup on his night stand. She walked closer to him while fiddling with the end of her dupatta, "Toh kal ki conference hai toh subah jaayiye na, aaj kyun jaa rahe hain.", she said in a sad voice. Maan shook his head at her words, "It is better that I go today and get some background information. I don't like going to conference or meetings without getting all my facts right." Geet huffed at his reply and then brightened up, "Conference kab khatam hoga?" "In the evening", Maan replied. "Phir toh aap shaam ki flight pakad ke aajaaoge na? Yaani ki kal raat tak aap ghar mein honge na!" Geet smiled softly, agar Maan kal raat ghar aagaye toh mujhe unse sirf 24 ghante door rehne honge! But Maan shook his head making her frown, "Kal shaam ko ek party hai. Generally I don't attend parties par wahaan construction ke duniya ke kai jaani maani hastiyaan hongi and I will get a good chance to network with them. So I will be at the party and I will catch a night flight." Geet glared at him angrily, "Matlab jab tak aap aayenge main so chuki rahoongi! Aur main aapko direct Sunday subah ko hi dekh paaungi?" She huffed, "Aap bahut nirdayi hai Maan! Kabhi socha hai aapki chehra dekhe baghair main yeh waqt kaise guzaar paaungi?" She turned and marched towards the door when she felt something hold her Dupatta end from behind. She stood still and Maan hugged her from behind. He slowly whispered, "Jaana toh main bhi nahi chaahta, Soni. Tumse door rehna mere liye bhi aasaan nahi hai. But you have to understand, work is also important." He kissed her neck and Geet turned to look at him. She looped her hands around his neck, "Theek hain. Main aapko jaane deti hoon." Maan kissed her forehead and whispered, "Thank you!" Geet hugged him and placed her head on chest and Maan hugged her back. They stood like that for a moment savoring the feel of each other in their arms. "Pata nahi tumhaare baghair yeh waqt kaise katega Geet!" Maan blurted out. Suddenly Geet had an idea. She pulled away from Maan, shouted "Main abhi aayi Maan!" and ran out of the room. Maan stood for a second there, stunned. Yeh kya tha? He wondered as he stood there. After a moment he shook his head and went back towards packing.

Place - Outside Khurana Constructions

While Geet went to execute her idea, here Arnav was stuck in a quandary. When he got into his car, Khushi refused to get in. "Hum gaadi mein nahi aa rahe hain, Arnavji!", she had told him. When asked for a reason behind her refusal, she had replied, "Hum abhi aaye Arnavji!" and had gone off somewhere. Arnav shook his head at his Afreen. As he looked up in the direction she had vanished, he raised an eyebrow. There came Khushi dragging an old '.what was it'.Arnav narrowed his eyes'Oh Yeah'.An old scooty! Arnav was totally bewildered. That scooty seemed older than Khushi herself! What the hell was Khushi doing with it? As Khushi came closer Arnav schooled his expression to seem normal. As Khushi neared him she started babbling, "Dekhiye Arnavji, yeh Scooty hai." Arnav rolled his eyes mentally; as if he did not know! Khushi continued babbling, "Woh kya haina Arnavji, humaare padosi kuch dino ke liye baahar jaa rahe hain. Toh unhonein humein yeh scooty de di thode din ke liye, sagaai ke kaamo mein madat hogi na isliye! Humne socha ek din hum office ismein aayenge. Haina badhiya yeh?", as Khushi ended her monologue Arnav looked at her in shock. Badhiya hai? Hasa she gone mad? The thing seemed as if it will have breakdown at the next moment! But Khushi looked at him happily. Then she frowned, "Isliye hum aapke saath aaj nahi aa sakte! Scooty se aaye hain toh scooty ko ghar leke jaana hai!" Arnav narrowed his eyes, "What the! But'! How will I spend time with you today?" Khushi pouted and looked at him sadly. Suddenly, she brightened as she had an idea, "Aapko humaare saath waqt bitaana haina! Toh aayiye hum aapko scooty pe ghumaate hain." Arnav was so shocked that his eyes neared popped out. What the! No way! No way! Khushi interpreted his look perfectly, "Arre! Aise kya dekh rahe hain? Dekhiye Arnavji aapko humaare saath waqt bitaana hai toh aapko scooty pe baithna hi padega aur woh bhi peeche! Aur manaa mat kijiye! Itni baar hum aapke saath aaye the na, aapki baat maane na! Ab aapki baari humaari baat maanne ki!" She huffed and looked away. Arnav sighed, Sach kehte hain duniya waale! Pyaar mein bahut kuch jhelna padta hai! Ek puraani scooty par ride bhi! Arnav turned Khushi to face him and smiled at her, "Fine!" "Yeee!", Khushi screamed happily and jumped up and down while clapping her hands. "But I have a condition!", Arnav spoke sternly and Khushi stilled and stared at him worriedly. Hey Devi Maiyya! Yeh shart rakh rahe hain! Raksha karna! "We are not travelling by the main road. We will travel by the outskirts!", Arnav stated. Khushi smiled and nodded happily. This condition she did not mind. Arnav continued speaking, "I don't want people to see Arnav Singh Rai'" Arnav stopped himself from speaking. She should not know my name. "I mean Arnav, Arnav Singh should not be seen on a scooty, Get that!" Khushi nodded again. She understood Arnav's point. He was businessman! If seen like this, his image might get affected and his company will get negative publicity. She was not a fool! She had studied in her college about Branding and Image! Arnav heaved a sigh of relief. But his condition was not based on the reason thought by Khushi. The reason he placed this condition was because news regarding him travels fast. And if he was seen by his anyone who knows his family, his plan would have bombed before execution.

Khushi grinned as she sat on her scooty and Arnav sat right behind her. Khushi started the scooty and drove towards the lesser road known, towards the outskirts of Delhi. If only his family saw him like this! The elder members of his family would have heart attack and the younger ones would have fainted. As they travelled, Arnav held the back of the seat feeling distinctly uncomfortable. After few minutes of travelling, Khushi looked at him through the rear view mirror and noticed his uncomfortable face. She looked behind, "Arre! Arnavji! Aap aise kyun baithe hain? Aap apna haath hum par rakh sakte hain. Humein koi problem nahi hai." Arnav raised an eyebrow. Oh really! As she looked at him through the rear view mirror he smirked at her mischievously making her a bit nervous. Hey Devi Maiyya! Arnav slowly placed his hands on her waist and she nearly stopped breathing. Slowly he slid it forward and hugged her from behind all the while smirking. Khushi gulped but when she looked at him through the mirror he winked at her. Her eyes widened in shock but then narrowed at his cheek. She was not going to react, Khushi thought. Few minutes after travelling, Khushi saw something and a mischievous smile came on her face. Humein sataa rahe ho na Arnavji! Ab dekhiye hum kya karte hain! Ab aayega mazaa! She stopped the vehicle on a deserted road. "What's wrong? Why did you stop?", Arnav queried. Khushi pointed at a roadside tea stall. "Dekhiye Arnavji, Chai waala! Chaliye na Arnavji chaai peete hain!" Khushi turned to look at Arnav only to see him look at her in horror. Khushi felt like laughing at his expression. Yahi humaara badla hai Arnavji! She resisted the temptation to cackle madly and spoke, "Arre! Arnavji! Darriye mat! Kuch nahi hoga! Aayiye na please!" Before Arnav could say anything, Khushi got down from the scooty and dragged Arnav towards the stall and ordered two teas. Arnav huffed; it was useless fighting against his Afreen! Now if his family saw him, even the younger members of his family would have had heart attack! As they drank the tea, they noticed the radio in the stall. Khushi asked the chai waala to play the radio. Soon the radio jockey's voice wafted out of the radio as mild rain started dripping. Luckily the seating area in front of the tea stall was covered by a tin roof where both of them stood. As the jockey announced the next song, Khushi put her hand out to feel the rain in her hand. As Khushi splashed the rain water on her face, Arnav stared at her mesmerized.

Shining In The Sand N Sun Like a Pearl Upon The Ocean

Come N Feel Me

Oh Feel Me

Khushi turned to look at him and smiled.

Shining In The Sand N Sun Like a Pearl Upon The Ocean

Come N Heal Me

Oh Heal Me

She turned back to enjoy the rain.

Thinking About The Love We Making

N The Life We Sharing

Come N Feel Me

Oh Feel Me

Arnav stared at Khushi with a goofy smile on his face.

Shining In The Sand N Sun Like a Pearl Upon The Ocean

Come N Feel Me

Come On Heal Me

Hua Jo Tu Bhi Mera Mera

Tera Jo Ikraar Hua

Khushi smiled shyly at the words of the song.

Toh Kyun Na Mein Bhi Keh Doon Keh Doon

Hua Mujhe Bhi Pyaar Hua

She looked at Arnav shyly.

Tera

Hone Laga Hoon

Khone Laga Hoon

Jabse Mila Hoon

Arnav felt like pulling her close and hugging her.

Tera

Hone Laga Hoon

Khone Laga Hoon

Jabse Mila Hoon

Arnav shook his head at thoughts going through his head.

Shining In The Sand N Sun Like a Pearl Upon The Ocean

Come N Feel Me

Oh Feel Me

Shining In The Sand N Sun Like a Pearl Upon The Ocean

Come N Heal Me

Oh Heal Me

Arnav walked towards Khushi and pulled her close.

Waise Toh Mann Mera

Pehle Bhi Raaton Mein

Aksar Hi Chaahat Ke Haan

Sapne Sanjota Tha

She slammed into his chest and looked at him in wonder.

Pehle Bhi Dhadkan Yeh

Dhun Koi Gaati Thi

Par Ab Jo Hota Hai Woh

Pehle Na Hota Tha

Suddenly, a glass crashed to the floor nearby and Arnav looked around in shock. He was daydreaming!

Hua Hai Tujhe Jo Bhi Jo Bhi

Mujhe Bhi Iss Paar Hua

Khushi mouthed the words wishing she could say it to her Arnavji.

Toh Kyun Na Mein Bhi Keh Doon Keh Doon

Hua Mujhe Bhi Pyaar Hua

Khushi took some rain water in her hands and splashed it on an unsuspecting Arnav's face.

Tera

Hone Laga Hoon

Khone Laga Hoon

Jabse Mila Hoon

Arnav narrowed his eyes at her and walked towards her.

Tera

Hone Laga Hoon

Khone Laga Hoon

Jabse Mila Hoon

He came close to her when a car drove by and Khushi looked around in shock. She was daydreaming. Khushi blushed and smiled to herself. As the music started with chorus, the rain stopped. Arnav indicated Khushi to get going. Khushi shyly shook her head and came close to him. Arnav raised his left hand towards her face as if to touch her cheek but stopped himself.

Aankhon Se Choo Loon

Ke Baahein Tarasti Hai

Dil Ne Pukaara Hai Haan

Ab Toh Chale Aao

Khushi took a step close allowing him to touch her. He slowly wiped her cheek pushing away the rain drops on her cheek.

Aao Ke Shabnam Ki

Boondein Barasti Hai

Mausam Ishaara Hai Haan

Ab Toh Chale Aao

Khushi smiled bashfully and hugged him tight. Arnav hugged her back.

Baahon Mein Daale Baahein Baahein

Baahon Ka Jaise Haar Hua

Haan Maana Maine Maana Maana

Hua Mujhe Bhi Pyaar Hua

Arnav pulled away from her and kissed her forehead.

Tera

Hone Laga Hoon

Khone Laga Hoon

Jabse Mila Hoon

Khushi smiled and hugged him again.

Tera

Hone Laga Hoon

Khone Laga Hoon

Jabse Mila Hoon

Both of them started swaying to the music enjoying each other's company.

Shining In The Sand N Sun Like a Pearl Upon The Ocean

Come N Feel Me

Oh Feel Me

Shining In The Sand N Sun Like a Pearl Upon The Ocean

Come N Heal Me

Oh Heal Me

Thinking About The Love We Making

N The Life We Sharing

Come N Feel Me

Oh Feel Me

Shining In The Sand N Sun Like a Pearl Upon The Ocean

Come N Feel Me

Come On Heal Me

Place - Khurana Mansion

It was already an hour and Geet was not yet back, Maan fumed. Where was she? Few minutes after running out of his room, Geet had come back and ordered him to stay in the room till she said otherwise. And so Maan was stuck in the room till Geet called him out. What was this girl planning? Maan wondered. Maan was not a man of patience. So, after waiting for ten minutes, Maan's irritation started mounting. After 15 more minutes, the irritation turned into frustration and right now it was turning into anger. Kahaan hai yeh Soni? Baarish bhi aakar chali gayi par iska koi ata pata nahi. Yeh Soni abhi aayi nahi na toh main' Before Maan could complete the thought, a servant came into the room and told him that Geet Madam had asked him to come out. Maan walked out of the room and down the stairs. He marched through the living room wondering about Geet's plan. As he stepped in the garden, he was shocked. There in the middle of the garden was tent placed under which a table for two was placed. There were two chairs around the table and sitting in one of the chairs was Geet dressed in white chudidaar smiling at him. As he neared her, all his anger went away replaced by contentment. As he stood in front of Geet, she spoke in a soft and sweet voice, "Aap kal mujhse door ja rahe haina! Hum dono ek doosre se door ho rahe haina, bhale hi ek din ke liye, par door honge na! Isliye maine socha ki kyun na aaj ki raat kuch special kiya jaaye! Aur gharwaalon ke baare mein don't worry! Dev kal subah hi aayenge aur Dadima aur NT Di Charity event pe gayi hain! Is waqt sirf aap hain aur main hoon, aapki Soni!" Maan smiled at her tenderly. He wondered how became so lucky to have Geet in his life!

Maan stared at Geet and Geet smiled at him. They had just finished their dinner and Geet had proposed that they dance. Maan shook his head and asked, "Where is the music?" She smirked and leaned across her seat. She put her hand into his breast pocket and pulled out his mobile. Maan smiled and shook his head. Never underestimate Geet Handa! Geet scrolled through his songs saved in his mobile and chose one to play. As the music started Geet stood and placed her right hand in front of Maan asking him to dance. Maan took her hand and stood up. As Maan placed his other hand on Geet's waist, Geet placed her other hand on Maan's shoulder. She stood on her tiptoes and whispered in Maan's ear, "This song is dedicated to Maan Singh Khurana from Future Mrs. Geet Khurana. Yeh geet iss Geet ki dil ki dhadkano ko bayaan karti hai." She smiled at him as Alka Yagnik's voice floated out of the mobile.

Ek Din Aap Yun Humko Mil Jaayenge

Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jaayenge

Maine Socha Na Tha

Maan pulled Geet close and whispered back, "This is one of my favorite songs!" She smiled at him and they started swaying to the song.

Ek Din Aap Yun Humko Mil Jaayenge

Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jaayenge

Maine Socha Na Tha

Maan looked at Geet and mouthed the next lines.

Ek Din Zindagi Itni Hogi Haseen

Jhoomega Aasmaan Gaayegi Yeh Zameen

Ek Din Zindagi Itni Hogi Haseen

Jhoomega Aasmaan Gaayegi Yeh Zameen

Maine Socha Na Tha

As the music started Geet blushed and tried to run away. Maan caught her dupatta in his hand and pulled her back. She was jerked back and almost fell on him. They again took the dancing position and Maan dipped Geet towards the floor and pulled her upright. They again started swaying.

Dil Ki Daali Pe Kaliyaan Si Khilne Lagi

Jab Nigaahein Nigaahon Se Milne Lagi

Geet turned around and Maan hugged her from behind. They continued swaying.

Dil Ki Daali Pe Kaliyaan Si Khilne Lagi

Jab Nigaahein Nigaahon Se Milne Lagi

Maan mouthed the next lines trying to convey his feelings to her.

Ek Din Iss Tarah Hosh Kho Jaayenge

Paas Aaye Toh Madmosh Jaayenge

Maine Socha Na Tha

Geet smiled at him and mouthed the next lines trying to convey that she felt the same.

Ek Din Aap Yun Humko Mil Jaayenge

Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jaayenge

Maine Socha Na Tha

As the music started, Maan suddenly took a stiff dance position surprising Geet. Soon, he started doing waltz around the garden taking Geet with him. Geet enjoyed dancing with him. After few minutes, Maan twirled Geet around again and again making Geet laugh happily.

As the lyrics started Maan looked up and mouthed the next lines.

Jagmagaati Hui Jaagti Raat Hai

Raat Hai Ya Sitaaron Ki Baaraat Hai

Maan picked Geet in his arms and spun around making Geet giggle.

Jagmagaati Hui Jaagti Raat Hai

Raat Hai Ya Sitaaron Ki Baaraat Hai

As Maan set Geet down, Geet cupped his face mouthing the next lines.

Ek Din Dil Ki Raahon Mein Apne Liye

Jal Uthenge Mohabbat Ke Itne Diye

Maine Socha Na Tha

Maan kissed her forehead and mouthed the next lines.

Ek Din Zindagi Itni Hogi Haseen

Jhoomega Aasmaan Gaayegi Yeh Zameen

Maine Socha Na Tha

Geet smiled at him and mouthed the next lines too.

Ek Din Aap Yun Humko Mil Jaayenge

Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jaayenge

Maine Socha Na Tha

Geet hugged Maan and placed her head on his chest.

Maine Socha Na Tha

Maan tightened his arms around her.

Maine Socha Na Tha

AUTHOR NOTES

The saari Geet chose for Payash's engagement is the same one which she wore for the song "Aankhen Teri" in the show.

SONG DETAILS

The first song is from the movie "Ajab Prem Ki Gazab Kahaani" (Year 2009) picturised on Katrina Kaif and Ranbir Kapoor sung by Sunidhi Chauhan and Aatif Aslam.

The second song is from the movie "Yess Boss" (Year 1997) picturised on Juhi Chawla and SRK sung by Alka Yagnik and Kumar Sanu.

PRECAP

Geet is attacked but again is saved! But who saves her? Is it Arnav again or is it Maan?

Or is it somebody totally different? What do you think guys?

On the side note, Anjali sees Geet, now what will happen?

Get ready to face another dhamakedaar chapter of DFL!

Edited by Analeez11 - 12 years ago

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