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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bhagyashri12

HI 😛

i m new here😳...I read all d parts of that SS..
Its just awsome kiran...👏.
waiting for the next part...update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ragvir92

nice to see you Kiran

Hope you enjoyed well in vacation.
Nice update dear
Prem preet convo and both the family scenes were good
Meher was so sweet
Oh no bechara prem
But heer will understand soon abt him
Very nice
Take care

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

wow awesome update Kiran ⭐️

Really excited to see how you'll make PH come together again. What will Prem do now? How Heer will react and will she talk to her family about this ? Waiting to see next ch.
Thanks a lot.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anitasharma

Thanks for pm waiting for next

your welcome anita 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: premeermania

welcome back kiran 😊 hope your holiday was gr8! & thanks for the awesome update

poor prem 😭 we can't blame heer also, she has suffered a lot 😔
but i want to see them married yaar will wait for the next update 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: additi11

awasoem 👍🏼 waiting for the next part

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Shwetasri-

You are awesome! You are quite punctual in updating, your updates are amazing and you are a true deshian. So off-course you deserve the official seal of awesomeness!

Thank you for being so active here and always taking part in all the activities.

Your stories are really nice. Thank you!

And yeah, sorry for not commenting always, I know you always do comment for me but I am really really sorry. Though, I want you to know that I do read your updates and thank you so much for the PMs. You rock.

Loads of love! Carry on!

Have a beautiful day!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Previous Part:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/74518660

Part-8

In Juneja House

Gayatri entered Prem's room. He was sitting on the floor in the dark room near window. He was crying. His eyes are swelled and redden. Seeing Prem in this state Gayatri got worried.

Gayatri:- Premmm beta kya hua? Aise roo kyun raha hai? kya hua bache bata na.

Prem (cryingly):- Ma mae'mae bohot bura hun ma mae bohot bura hun.

Gayatri:- Nahi beta'kisne kaha ki tu bura hai han'.tu to mera raja beta haina.

Prem (crying):- Nahi ma agar mae acha hota to..to Heer muje is tarha chord ke nahi jati ma. Ma Heer mujhse pyar nahi karti ma. Wo aesa samjhti hai ki mae bhi use us Rajveer ki tarha dhoka dunga'Ma wo aesa kese soch sakti hai. Mae use dhoka kaise de sakta hun ma, mae kitna pyar karta hun. I Love her Ma

Prem hugged Gayatri tightly and cried like a small baby

Gayatri:- Prem beta sambhal apne apko. Tu is tarha himmat nahi haar sakta. Tu to janta haina ki pichle kuch saalon mae Heer ke upar kya beeti hai, kis daur se guzari hai wo tu to achi tarha se janta haina. Jo thokar wo pehle kha chuki hai, wohi thokar wo dobara khane se darti hai, isiliye usne wo sab kuch tujhse kaha.

Prem looked at Gayatri

Gayatri:- Dekh beta'uske ke sath jo kuch bhi hua uske baad uske liye kissi pe bhi vishwas karna asan nahi hai. agar tu uski jagha hota to tu bhi aisa hi karta na han.

Prem nodded

Gayatri:- Haina? To phir tu kyun udas ho raha hai. tuje to abhi yeh sochna chahiye ki tuje kaise Heer ko apne pyar ki upar vishwas dilana hai. tuje use bharosa dilana hoga ki tu Rajveer jaisa nahi hai. or dekhna muje poora yakeen hai Heer tere pyar ko aj nahi to kal zaror samjhegi.

Prem:- han ma ap sahi keh rahe ho. Muje is tarha himmat nahi harni chahiye. Mae is tarha himmat har ke Heer ko phir se apni zindagi se jane nahi de sakta. Mae dobara koshish karounga.

Gayatri:- That's like my good son.

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Heer entered her apartment, crying uncontrollably she sat on the couch thinking about the events held in the office just few hours ago

Heer (cryingly):- Kyun? Kyun? Kyun mere sath hi hamesha aisa hota. Samjh kya rakha hai in logo ne muje. Mae kya koi khilona hun, jiske sath jab chaha khel liya, jab chaha phek diya. Mujhe samajh nahi arha ki aisi kya galti ho gai hai mujhse, jiske liye bhagwan mujhe itni bardi saza de raha hai. aj tak kabhi kisi ka bura nahi chaha maine, to phir mere sath aisa kyun ho raha hai? kyun?

Crying her heart out she drifted into deep sleep on the couch

Next Morning

Heer was sleeping on the couch in uncomfortable position just then the door bell rings. Heer begin to stir. She slowing opened her eyes and trying to figure out where she was, then again she heard the door bell.

Heer (confusingly):- Subha ke 5.30 baj rahe hain, is waqt kon ho sakta hai? Kahin Prem Sir to nahi!!!!

Again door bell ringed. Heer slowly got up from the couch and start taking small small step towards the door. She slowly opened the door and she got shocked seeing the visitors.

Meher, Teji and Balraj:- SURPRISE!!!!

Heer blinked her eyes several times. Meher starting laughing

Meher:- Di ap koi sapna nahi dekh rahe ho. Hum sach mae yahin hai, apke samne.

Teji hugged her tightly

Teji:- Kaisi hai tu beta!!!

Heer:- Mae thik hun ma lekin ap log yahan?

Balraj:- hume andar nahi bulaogi beta.

Heer:- Arre han!!! Aye na'

They entered and got settle down. Heer went in to the kitchen to bring water for them.

Teji:- Heer puttar, tune ghar to barda acha sajaya hai.

Meher:- Ya di'.it's awesome!!!

Heer smiled and took the seat beside Balraj

Balraj:- or Heer beta kaisi hai tu, tera kaam kaisa chal raha hai.

Heer:- Mae thik hun papaji, or..umm kam bhi thik hi chal raha hai tha (said while thinking about Prem's confession)

Teji:- Thik hi chal raha tha matlab???

Then Heer realized what she said

Heer:- Ummm mera matlab tha ki kam thik chal raha hai ma. Umm ap log yahan, achanak kaise, ap logo bataya bhi nahi ki ap log ane wale ho, agar bata dete to mae ap logo ko lene ajati airport.

Heer asked trying to change the subject

Meher:- di!! Mom to apko phone kar hi rahi thi, wo to mae ne hi mana kar diya. Socha yahan ake apko surprise de den. Actually mae ne apne semesters mae top kiya hai or university ki taraf muje yahan Mumbai ana tha Management course karne ke liye, to mae ne soch ki ma- papaji ko bhi sath le ati hun.

Heer hugged Meher

Heer:- congrats sis!!! I am proud of you

Meher:- Thanks di,

Teji:- Heer puttar teri ankhen itni laal kyun hai

Heer:- umm wo kuch nahi ma..wo bus aisa hi. Umm ap log bohot thak gaye honge na. ek kaam kijiye ap log fresh ho jaiye. Tab tak mae breakfast bana deti hun. Uske baa dap log aram kar lijiye ga.

Teji:- Arre Heer Rehne. Mae nashta bana dungi, tu jake taiyar ho ja. Tujhe bhi to office jana hoga na.

Heer becomes uncomfortable

Heer:- Nahi ma aj mae office nahi ja rahi.

Meher:- wow phir to bohot maza ayega

Balraj:- Lekin kyun beta???

Heer:- wo aj ap log ayen haina, itne dino ke baa dap sab se mili hun to sacha thorda time spent kar lun ap logo ke sath.

Balraj (smiled):- Nahi beta!!! Work comes first!!! Hum to abhi rukenge ge kafi din. Abhi hume bohot time milega time bitane ka. Tu humari waje se apna kaam kharab mat kar.

Heer:- Lekin papaji mae'

Teji:- Heer tere papaji bilkul thik keh rahe hain. Tujhe office jana hoga.

Heer:- umm thik hai ma

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At Juneja Office

Prem was sitting in his cabin eagerly waiting for Heer

Mr.Sharma came with a file in his hands

Mr. Sharma:- sir, yeh lalit sir ne new circular issue karne ke liye kaha tha, to ispe apke sign chahiye the

Prem signed the circular

Prem:- umm Mr.Sharma Heer nhi aai abhi tak office

Mr. Sharma:- no sir, abhi tak to nahi aai.

Prem (sadly):- ok. Jab bhi Heer aaye to use sidhe mere cabin mae bhej dena

Mr. Sharma:- Ok sir

With that Mr. Sharma left from there

Prem (impatiently):- 10 baj rahe hain. Heer itni late kabhi nahi ati hai. Kal jo kuch bhi hua kahin uski waje se to Heer ne job chordne ka faisla to nahi kar liya??????? Nahi nahi Heer ne humari company ke sath 6 mahine ka contract sign kiya hai, or abhi to sirf 3 mahine hi hue hain, abhi or 3 mahine abhi baki hai, to Heer job to nahi chord sakti.

Just then he heard the knock

Prem:- Come in

Heer entered the cabin. Seeing Heer Prem becomes happy

Prem (happily got up from his chair):- Heer!!! Kahan reh gait hi tum itni der kaise ho gai

Prem came forward and closer to her but Heer stopped him.

Heer:- sir!!! Yeh lijiye, yeh mera resignation letter.

She handed him an envelope. Prem got shocked and hurt

Prem:- Heer yeh tum..

But Heer interrupted him in middle

Heer:- janti hun!!! Janti hun ki mae ne is company ke sath 6 mahine ka contract sign kiya hai or abhi sirf 3 mahine hue hain. Lekin contract poora hone ke baad bhi to muje ek mahine ka notice dena pardega na or mae 3 mahine se 1 din bhi zyada nahi rokna chahati yahan par. To is letter ko as a notice samaj ke rakh lijiye kyun ki 3 mahine poore hote hi mae yahan ek second bhi nahi rukungi. I am sorry but kal jo kuch bhi hua uske baad mae apke saath kaam nahi kar sakti or na hi karna chahati hun. Thank you so much Mr Prem Juneja for everything!!!

Saying this Heer turned to leave the cabin but Prem angrily and forcefully pulled her towards him and she directly landed on his chest. Prem tightly held her by her waist.

Prem (angrily):- Tum samjhti kya ho apne ap ko han? Mae kuch bol nahi raha hun iska matlab yeh nahi ki tum kuch bhi bologi to mae chup-chap suntan rahunga. Tumne samjh kya rakha hai muje han? Ki mae tumse pyar karne ka natak kar raha hun. Tum sirf mere liye ek time pass ho. HOW COULD YOU THINK ABOUT ME LIKE THAT!!!!! He literally shouted

Seeing Prem's anger Heer startled

Prem (shivering in anger):- Pyar se samjha samjha ke thak gaya hun ki I love you!!! I Love you!!! Lekin tum nahi samjhi!!! Lekin ab bohot ho gaya, bohot seh liye tumhare nakhare maine. Aj tak tumne sirf Prem Juneja ki dosti, uska pyar dekha hai'.uski zid nahi.Lekin Aj se tum meri zid dekho gi. You don't know Heer ki mae kitna ziddi hun. Agar mae apni zid pe ajaaoun, to chez muje chahiye hoti hai, wo mae hasil karke hi rehta hun'aise nahi to waise hi sahi. Samjhi tum. I openly challenge you Heer 20 din, 20 din ke andar tum khud mujhse shadi karne ke liye han karogi. Yeh mera wada hai tumse!!! Ek baat or janlo heer, meri zindagi mae agar koi lardki ayegi na, to wo sirf TUM hogi, sirf TUM!!! I swear I'll get you at any cost'.By Hook or By Crook!!!

Seeing the determination in his Heer got worried and scared. Saying thi Prem angrily left from there.

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[Hey guys here is the update'hope you all like it. Chalo ab jaldi jaldi comment kardo fata fat'..phr next update bhi jaldi mul jayega'..😉]


Next Part:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/75162449


Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago

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