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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

Hey Kiran


It's a surprise to see Prem breaking down to pieces wow. It's nice G3 was being supportive.
Office scene with PH were a surprise too. I didn't know how you'll make them meet.
So Prem promised to make Heer realise how much he cares. Lets see how it goes.

I think you wrote v. well. Dialogues are pretty good.
Previous ch. I forgot to say - Heer's out burst sound v. harsh but realistic based on her experience, as G3 explains to Prem. Good job writing those dialogues šŸ‘šŸ¼

All for you 😳

Waiting for next one šŸ˜Ž

i always love your long comments athi šŸ¤—

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tarannum6

Awosome story... Update soon...


Originally posted by: tarannum6

Awosome story... Plz update soon...



Originally posted by: tarannum6

Add me in ur pm list plz ...

i'll surely add u in my pm list 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Princeess07

Read all at once...
It was indeed great...
Prem in love wid Heer...love at first sight...
But Heer no more believes in love...
Now the challenge.. what's prem gonna do?
Update soon...nd also pm me..

i'll surely add u in my pm list 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sadi-

WOW... this is getting more interesting... loved this determination of heer... awesome part

sadi i m really missing ur long, colorful wale comments 😭

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BarbieDool19

awesome update...the dialogoues are so gud..felt as if i was watching Kis Desh..😃update soon

awww 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bhagyashri12

WOW !!šŸ˜› nice update ..

waiting for the next part updat soon...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
So guys i hope you all are enjoying this story...right 😳
As you all now that i am writing this story in the form of SS, so i will complete this story in next 4 to 5 parts and then after that I'll continue my FF Pyar Ka Asar. That is why i am updateing this SS regularly. So here is the next Part.

Previews Part:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/74840919

Part-9

Prem was sitting at the bar. For the first time he went to bar and drinking alcohol like anything because he was hurt. His heart was harshly broken by Heer second time But this time he would definitely not going to take 'NO' as an answer from her.

He was getting the flashback scenes- When he saw Heer for the first time, when he used to follow her, when he used to admire her secretly, when he got hurt to know that Heer and Rajveer were seeing each other, when he saw Heer in his office, his little car rides with her when he use to drop her at home safely at late nights, he remembered those beautiful moments that he spend with her in the office while working together, he remembered how Heer confronted him when he confessed his love and the last but not the least he remember the CHALLENGE that he gave her that he will make her agree for the marriage in 20 days.

Prem (angrily thought):- Heer tum sirf meri ho. Bohot pyar karta hun tumse, kyun nahi samjhti tum. Heer agar tum meri is zindagi mae nahi hogi, yeh zindagi bhi nahi hogi'ab chahiye kuch bhi ho jaye mae tumhe ab kahin nahi jane dunga!!! Kahin nahi!!!

Prem gulped his drink and smash the glass on the table and leaving some money for the drink Prem left from there.

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Heer's apartment

Heer was quietly sitting on the bed thinking about today's event that was held at the office

Heer (thought):- kya maine sach mae Prem ko galat samjh liya. Kya wo sach mein mujhse pyar karte hai? mae ne aj unki ankhon mae gusse ke sath sath dard bhi dekha tha. Ho sakta hai shayad Prem rajveer ki tarha na ho, unki ankhon mae sachai dekh sakti hun lekin pata nahi kyun mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai, kyun agar is bar mera dil toota na to mae jee nahi paoungi.

Her thought was interrupted by Meher's voice

Meher:- Di!!!! I missed you so much

Meher tightly hugged Heer

Heer (smilingly hugged her back):- I missed you too baby!!! Or bata how was your college?

Meher:- bohot acha di, aj to mae apna schedule lene gai thi. Baki classes to Monday se shuru hogi. Or apko pata hai meri to aj do nai friends' bhi ban gai wo bhi meri class mae hi hai. or humne numbers bhi exchange kar liye apne.

Heer:- Arre wah!! That's very nice

Meher:- Di!!! Meri to chordiye, ap bataiye. Apka office kaise chal raha

Heer:- office mein sab thik

Meher:- or apke boss'wo kya naam tha unka'umm han Prem'Prem Juneja haina? Wo kaise hain?

Hearing Prem's name Heer got nervous

Heer (nervously):- umm wo bhi thik hai

Meher (excitedly):- acha or dikhne mae kaise hai?

Heer:- umm thik hain

Meher:- sirf thik hain'c'mon di Pehle phone pe hamesha unke bare mae bohot baatien karti thi. Bus unka naam leni ki deri hoti thi or ap poori ram katha suna deti thi unke bare mein. Or aj wo sirf thik hai. whats wrong di?

Just then Teji entered Heer room

Heer:- kuch nahi Meher. Aj office mein bohot kaam tha na to mae bus thorda thak gai hun

Meher:- Acha thik hai lekin please ap ek baar mujhe un se milwaogi na. mera bohot mann hai unse milne ka. Please di!!!

Heer:- umm mae koshish karoungi

Meher (strubbornly):- Koshish nahi promise kijiye

Teji:- Meher, to bhi kya baat leke baat leke baith gai hai, dekh nahi rahi teri di kitni thaki hui hai, use aram karne de, tu ja apne kamre mae

Meher:- Lekin ma mae to bus'

Teji (warning tone):- Meher!!!!

Meher:- ok fine, good night di, good night mom

She hugged both Heer and teji

Heer:- Good night

Teji:- good night ab ja.

Meher left from there

Teji sit beside Heer and start stroking her head

Teji:- kya baat hai Heer, kuch pareshan si lag rahi hai aj tu?

Heer (thinks):- kya mae ma ko bata dun Prem ke bare mae'nahi nahi ma khamkha pareshan ho jayengi'.mae unhe kuch nahi bataoungi

Teji:- Heer kya hua puttar

Heer (to Teji):- uumm kuch nahi ma'bus office mae bohot kam tha na to bus thorda thak gai hun.

Teji:- Acha thik hai, tu aram kar hmm Good night!!!

Teji kissed her forehead and Heer smiled

Heer:- Good night ma!!!

Teji left from there and Heer again started thinking about Prem. Suddenly she startled by the thunderstorm outside

Heer:- itni tez hawayien chalne lag gai. Lagta hai aj bohot tez barish ayegi. Khirdki band kar deti hun

Heer got from the bed start closing the windows but suddenly she got shocked at the sight she saw.

There Prem was standing outside in the rain continuously looking at her with his intense gaze. Heer got scared.

Prem!!! She whispered

Just then

Heer!!! Teji said while entering her room

Heer startled and seeing Heer's reaction'teji asked

Teji:- kya hua beta tu inti gharbai hui kyun hai.

Heer:- umm..wo ku..kuch nahi ma'wo apne achanak se piche se awaz di na to mae dar gai

Teji:- Heer tub hi na, pagal hi hai'acha mae yeh poochne aai thi ki tu kuch dood ya coffee legi. Mae tere papaji ke liye bana rahi to to socha tujhse bhi poch lun.

Heer:- Nahi ma mujhe kuch nahi chahiye. Thank you!!!

Teji:- thik hai

Saying this teji left

Heer again looked outside the window but this time Prem was not there

Heer (to herself):- Kya mae ne abhi abhi Prem ko dekha wo mera bhram tha.

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Prem entered the Juneja mansion

He was drunk and unable to walk properly. He was about to fall but just then preet came and held him

Preet:- PB!!! Sambhal ke

Prem tried to hide his face from him because he was drunk. But before that Preet had already realized that his PB was drunk

Preet:- PB apne sharab pi hai

Prem:- umm Preet mae bohot thak gaya hun. Muje sona hai. bohot raat ho gai hai tu bhi so ja hmm

Prem tried to talk himself but again he loses his balance and about to fall but Preet again held him

Preet:- PB mae apko apke kamre tak chordke ata hun

Prem:- nahi preet mae khu'.

Preet:- please PB!!!

Prem nodded

And they start walking towards Prem's room. But they didn't notice that Gayatri was seeing them with the sad face.

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In Prem's room

Preet and Prem entered the room

Preet help Prem to get into the bed. He removed Prem's shoes and socks and made hin lay on the bed comfortably. Preet covered Prem with blanket properly and sit beside him and start stroking his head. Soon Prem drifted into sleep.

Seeing Prem's condition

Preet (thinks):- PB, yeh kya halat banali hai apne apni. Mae janta hun ki ap Heer bhabi se bhohot pyar karte ho or unki na ne apka dil, apko tord diya hai.or aj isiliye ap is halat mae ho. Mae apko is halat mae nahi dekh sakta PB. Mae apse wada karta hun PB, is ghar ki bardi bahi, meri bhabi or apki patni sirf or sirf Heer Bhabi hi banegi. Agar apki khushi Heer mae hai to wohi apki zindagi mae ayegi no matter what. Yeh mera wada hai apse PB.

Preet promised his PB in his mind

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Next Day In Juneja Mansion

Lalit, Gayatri and Preet were sitting on the dining table doing breakfast

Lalit:- Preet, Gayatri bata rahi thi ki kal prem sharab pee kar aya rha.

Preet:- Ji Dad, kal PB ne bohot sharab pee rakhi thi, yahan tak ki unse thik se chala bhi nahi ja raha tha. Bohot udas the kal PB.

Lalit:- Hmm jabse Heer ne mana kiya hai tabse Prem bilkul toot gaya hai. Jab Heer Prem ki zindagi mae dobara laut kar aai thi to kitna khush tha humara Prem. Mano jaise nai zindagi mil gai thi use. Lekin ab Prem phir se jeena bhul gaya, khush rehna bhul gaya. Pata nahi kya likha hai bhagwan ne uski kismat mein.

HEER!!!

Lalit, Gayatri and Preet turned hearing Prem's voice

Prem:- Heer!!! Bhagwan ne meri kismet mae Heer likhi hai bauji. Or ab agar bhagwan bhi chahe na meri kismet badalna, to mae unhe badalne nahi dunga.

Gayatri came forward and caress Prem's cheeks

Gayatri:- Beta ab teri tabiyat kaisi hai.

Prem smiled and took her hand in his

Prem:- Mae thik hun ma. Ap meri fikar mat kijiye, apka beta itna bhi kamzoor nahi hai ma. Bharosa rakhiye mujh par, mae kuch galat nahi karounga.

Lalit:- That's the spirit son!!!

Preet:- Ya PB mae bohot khush hun, ki Heer bhabi ki na ne apko aur himmat di hain

Prem:- Han Preet, sahi kaha tune. Heer ki na ne hi mere andar ke junoon ko bhardka diya hai. or Ab Heer ki na, uski han mein kaise badalni hai, yeh bhi mae achi tarha se jan chukka hun, bus uske liye muje ap sabki madad chahiye.

Lalit:- Han beta bolna kaisi madad chahiye

Prem smirked

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In Heer's Apartment

Here also everyone was having breakfast.

Meher (while eating):- hmmm yummy!!! Ma kya paranthe banaye hai'maza agaya, haina di

But Heer was lost in her thoughts

Meher:- Di!!! Di!!! Di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Heer:- umm han'kya hua meher!!

Meher:- yeh to muje apse pochna chahiye ki kya hua di apko. Itni der se mae apse baat kar rahi hun or ap ho ki apne khayalo mae hi khoye hue ho'whats wrong!!!

Heer:- umm kuch nahi, wo mae wo bus apne naye project ke presentation ke bare mein soch rahi thi.

Balraj:- wo sab to office jake sochiyo, pehle nashta karle. Dekh abhi tak tune ek parantha bhi khatam nahi kiya hai.

Heer:- Jee papaji!!!

Heer starting eating paranthas and drinking juice

Just then door bell ring

Heer (confused):- itni subha subha kon aya hoga

Heer got up but Teji stopped her

Teji:- Arre puttar tu baith ke nashta kar, mae dekhti hun darwaze pe kon hai

Heer:- ok ma

Teji opened the door and saw a handsome man standing in his business suit holding flowers

Teji:- umm ap kon???

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Ok now jaldi jaldi comment karo. eagerly waiting for your feedback 😃

Thank you 😃

Next Part:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76143262�


Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

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