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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ragvir92

Kiran darling

What an update yaar
That was a so happy update
Eventhough there was no premeer scenes The update was really cute.
Prem-karan friendship was really cool.
Liked their convo.
And Heer's parents were also good I thought they will be talking abt her marriage.Chalo acha hua ki they are very supportive
apke samne to mene keh diya papaji ki mae purani baatien yaad nahi karoungi. Lekin sach to yeh hai ki mae chaha ke bhi wo saari baatien nahi bhool sakti. Kitna pyar or vishwas kiya tha mae ne Rajveer pe. Mae ne to kabhi sapne mae bhi nahi socha tha ki wo mujhe itna barda dhoka dega. Ap mae kabhi kisi or pyar nahi kar paoungi. Kisi pe vishwas nahi kar paoungi. Kyunki jo takleef muje hui hai, jo zakham muje zindagi ne diye hai wo kabhi nahi barenge. Kabhi nahi!!!Yaar yeh kya hai heer abhi bhi uski past ki baare mein soch rahi hai aur us rajveer ki waja se aise baaatein kar rahi hai like her life is over and she can't love anyone.I know our prem will make her forget everything so soon.But don't make her compare our prem with that stupid Rajveer.
Gayathri prem seen was so nice and hilarious

Gayatri (worriedly):- Dekha Prem mae tujhe aesa kabhi nahi karne dungi. Mere jeete ji aesa kabhi nahi hoga. Kabhi nahi!!!

Prem:- Lekin kyun ma??? Isme harz hi kya hai??? Aj kal to yeh sab bohot common ho gaya hai.

Gayatri (shocked):- Common ho gaya hai!!! Hey bhagwan yeh kiski nazar lag gai mere bete ko. Arre is duniya mae kitni sari khubsoorat lardkiyan hai, lekin mere bete ko ek larkhe se hi pyar hona tha.

Prem:- Han ma mae (then only Prem realized what Gayatri said and become shocked)

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Yeh kya hai haan even then I really enjoyed it That was so hilarious and prem's reaction.I can just imagine That was so cute.
Awesome update dear
Ab please jaldi update karna
Woh kya hai na itni acchi update ki baad mujhse intezaar nahi ho raha hai yaar
Love you
TAke care
Update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jerrenkarthi

nice scene between gy3 and prem.
Now im 😕 i have to wait for another update to see my premeer.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: premeermania

🤣🤣🤣 gayatri thought prem wants to marry a man! i'm laughing like a mad! i was imagining a kis desh scene like this 😆
it was a very nice update kiran. thank you 😊 will wait till u come from holiday 😊 ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
Important Note:-
Guys here is important announcement regrading this SS and My FF- Pyar Ka Asar
tomorrow i am going out of country with my family for holidays. so i'll INACTIVE from 9th jan to 24th jan. will update this SS and FF- Pyar Ka Asar only after 25th Jan.
Thank You 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Happy holidays kiran we misss ur writing!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jerrenkarthi

Happy holidays kiran we misss ur writing!

thnks yar. dont wry i'll be back soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Previous Part :- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/73026724

Hey guys i am back from my vocations...so here is next part

Part-7

It has been 3 months since Heer had joined the Juneja Company. And in these 3 months Prem and Heer becomes a very good friend. For Heer it was only friendship. But for our Prem babu it was more than Friendship. In this 3 month Prem got the chance to know more about Heer. Like: - Her favorite color, food, books, film, actors, her hobbies etc. so as Heer got to know about Prem. Prem has already told about his love for Heer to his parents and his lil bro Preet. And they are very happy and eagerly for Prem to confess his love to Heer.

One day in juneja office

Prem was talking to Preet about Heer on the phone

Prem (irritated):- Preet ab tu apni bakwas band kar or muje bata ki mae Heer ko kaise propose karun. Ek to muje waise hi tension ho rahi hai, upar se tu mujhe or irritate kar raha hai

Preet :- Oho mere bhole PB ab itni tension kyun le rahe ho. Just chill ok!!! Dekhna bhabi apko na keh hi nahi sakti after all ap mere bhai ho. Kiske bhai, mere bhai. The great Preet Juneja ke PB ho ap. Bhabi apko na kar hi nahi sakti.

Prem (sarcastically) :- Han han Heer to muje isiliye han karegi na ki kyun ki mae tera bhai hun. Mae to dhanye ho gaya tuje apne bhai ke roop paake!!!

Preet:- Tatha astu!!! (God bless you)

Prem:- Shutup!!! Ek kaam kar Preet tu to reh ne hi de. Mae dekhlunga ki muje Heer se kaise baat karni hai.

Preet :- Arre PB lekin'

Knock!! Knock!!

Prem:- Ok Preet I'll talk to you later. Lagta hai Heer agai hai. thik hai bye

Preet:- Ok PB bye, bhabi ke sath enjoy karna and Best of Luck!!

Prem:- han thanks, bye

Prem disconnect the call

Prem:- come in

Heer entered

Heer (smilingly):- Good Morning Sir!!!

Prem (smilingly):- Good Morning Heer. Waise yeh Green salwar kameez tumhe kafi suit kar raha hai.

Heer becomes bit uncomfortable. It's not only today, but whenever Prem compliment her about her dressing, about her beauty even for her work, she always gets uncomfortable. She doesn't know why.

Heer (uncomfortably smiled):- thank you sir!!! Umm sir wo mae ne Mr. Mehta ke office se baat karke apki appoint unke sath fix karwa di hai. apki unke sath kal subha 10 baje ki meeting hai.

But Prem was not listening her. In fact he was busy in admiring her. And this makes heer more uncomfortable.

Heer:- sir!!! Umm sir!!!

Prem (coming back to reality):- han umm, thik hai.

Heer :- ok sir, mae apke liye apki morning coffee le aati hun.

Prem:- hmm

And Heer left from there

Prem (to himself):- shit man!!! Jab bhi heer samne hoti hai to pata nahi muje kya ho jata hai!!!

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At Delhi (Heer's House)

Teji was busy in folding clothes and Balraj was lost in his thoughts

Teji:- Kya hua? Itni der se dekh rahi hun, ap kuch soch rahe hain. Kya baat hai.

Balraj:- Kuch nahi teji, bas Heer ki fikar ho rahi hai. jabse uski Rajveer se shaadi tooti hai tabse Heer bilkul badal gai hai. Phone pe to usne keh diya ki wo purani baton ko bilkul yaad nahi karegi lekin mae apni beti ko janta hun, wo sari baatien aj bhi, abhi bhi uske dimang mae chal rahi hogi. Uski zidd pe hamne use job karne ki ijazat di, yeh soch kar ki uska dyan in sab cheezo se hatte ga. But muje nahi lagta ki aesa hoga.

Teji:- Lekin ap yeh bhi to sochiye na jab se Heer Mumbai gai hai job karne tabse usme kafi change aya hai. jab dekho phone pe apne office ke kisse sunati hai ya phir apne boss ke bare mae baatien karti hai. ap chinta mat kijiye humari Heer ab khush. Or dekhna dhere dhere wo sari purani baatien bhi bhul jayengi.

Just then Meher entered the room with the bang

Meher (excitedly):- Ma!!! Papaji!!! Apko pata hai mae apne semesters mae pass ho gai or apni class mae maine top kiya hai

Teji:- arre wah!!! Chal aj isi khushi mein tuje meri taraf se teri favorite Rasmalai ki treat

Meher :- wow thanks ma!!!

Balraj:- Very good bache. Tu bhi apne behan ki tarha bohot hoshiyar hai. I am proud of you

Balraj kissed Meher

Meher:- Thank you papaji. Or apko pata hai muje meri university ki taraf se Mumbai jane ka moka mil raha hai External Management Course karne ke liye

Balraj:- Arre wah!!! Yeh to bohot hi achi baat hai

Meher:- Haina!!! Mae to kehti hun ap dono bhi chaliye mere sath Mumbai, Heer Di bhi wahan or ab mae bhi ja rahi hun, agar ap dono bhi humare saath rahoge to bohot maza ayega. Or ap logo ka Di se milna bhi ho jayega, what say!!!

Teji:- Han. Baat to yeh thik keh rahi hai. Hum bhi saath chalte hai. poore 3 mahine ho gaye Heer se mile hue. Please chaliye na Please

Meher:- Han Please papaji Please

Balraj:- Acha Acha thik hai chalte hai

Meher:- yippee!!!!

Teji:- Mae abhi Heer ko Phone karke bata ti hun ki hum log Mumbai arahe hai

Meher:- Arre nahi nahi Ma, ap di se kuch mat kehna

Teji (confused):- Lekin Kyun???

Meher:- ohho Meri mata shree surprise naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai ya nahi. Hum di ko wahan jake surprise denge or dekhna Di hum sab ko wahan dekh ke bohot khush hogi

Balraj:- acha chalo thik hai hum nahi batayenge use kuch, thik hai!!!

Meher (smilingly):- Han thik hai, mae packing kar leti hun

Meher quickly ran out of the room

Teji (smilingly):- Yeh lardki bhi na tufaan mail hai

Balraj:- hahaha cha lab hum bhi packing kar lete hain

Teji:- han

They started doing packing

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Juneja Office (In Prem's cabin)

It was lunch time. Prem was sitting on couch, continuously trying to cut the apple and also talking on phone to his Parents

Gayatri (angrily):- Kya tune abhi tak Heer se apni dil ki baat nahi ki.

Prem:- Ma mae wo'

But Lalit interrupt him in middle

Lalit:- Kya mae wo'.Prem tub hi na. Arre ab tak to tuje Heer ko apne dil ki baat bata deni chahiye thi. Mae kehna to nahi chahata lekin ab muje kehna pard raha hai ki is mamle mae tujhse acha wo nalayak Preet hi hai.

Gayatri (to Lalit):- offfo ap bhi bas chup raheye. Wo pehle hi itna nervous hai upar se a bap bhi shuru ho jayo

Lalit:- Arre lekin mae to'

Gayarti:- Bas a bap chup raheye. (To Prem) Prem beta dekh tu nervous mat hona. Sab thik hoga. Thik hai. bas tu apni dil ki baat Heer ko batane mae der mat kar. Kahin doobara der na ho jaye. Thik hai beta.

Prem:- Ji ma

Gayatri:- acha or tune khana kha liya?

Prem:- Han ma kha liya and as per your instructions ab mae apple khaounga.

Gayatri:- Very good. Chal mae phone rakh ti hu. Tu Heer se baat kar lena ok All the Best. Byeee

Prem:- Ok ma, thank you and byee!!!

Prem put his phone on the table

Prem (frustatedly):- Oh God, yeh kaisa apple hai, kat ta hi nahi hai

Prem again tried with full concerntration but he got startled by'.

Knock!!! Knock!!!

Prem:- ouch!!! Come in

Heer entered the cabin with some files in her hand

Heer (without looking at the direction of Prem):- Sir yeh rahi humari new projects ki files.

She kept the files on Prem's table and then she looked towards the direction of Prem. And the first thing she'd notice is "the Blood".

Heer:- Sir yeh khoon. Yeh kaise hua?

Heer asked Prem while quickly took his hand in hers

Prem:- kuch nahi Heer wo bus ma apple kat raha tha to thorda sa kat gaya hai. bus or kuch nahi.

Heer (hyperly):- thorda sa!!! Apko yeh thordi se chot lagti hai hai. dekhiye zara kitna khoon beh raha hai. Sir apko haina apna bilkul khayal nahi hai. Arre agar apko apple khana tha to muje keh dete, mae kat deti. Dost mante haina ap muje, to phir kyun nahi kaha muje. Ap bhi na. Kehne ko to ap is company ke MD hain, lekin apki harkate bilkul bachon jaise hain.

Heer quickly grab the First aid box from the side table and started cleaning the blood and she was continuously scolding him like a strict mother. But Prem was not in his senses now; he was in another world, the world of his love. He kept on admiring her the way she's scolding him. And this shows that how much she care for him. After cleaning his wound.

Heer:- Yeh lijiye ho gaya.

Heer looked at Prem who was busy in staring her. He wanted to touch her, to kiss her luscious lip which was driving him crazy since he saw her; he wanted to love her till his last breath. And right now all he wants is now to tell her how much love her. He wanted to shows her, his love for her. And He will show her right now!!! Now Prem got carried away, letting his heart took over his mind.

He gently held his face with his palm. While looking deeply into her eyes he confessed "I Love You Heer". "I really love you a lot. Mae tumhare bina nahi jee sakta Heer. Please be Mine'..Marry Me Please'please Heer Please be mine"'..Heer was become shocked but she could see the honesty in his eyes, she could see the true love for her in his eyes'..BUT'.how could she love him. He was her boss, her friend then how'.

But before Heer could think further.Prem starts leaning towards her continuously looking at her lips. He was caressing her cheeks with his thumbs. Her nervousness started to increase. Her heart started beating fast. She nervously closed her eyes as soon as she felt his face coming closer to hers. Before kissing her fully, Prem brushed his lips on hers. Tightly hold her by her waist, not in mood to let her go. This made Heer come to her senses. "No I can't let this happen again, I can't Love anyone neither I can't trust anyone'.no"Heer thought''And before Prem could kiss her. She pushed him away with all her energy. Give a teary and hurt look to him.

Seeing the tears in her eyes, he feels disgusted about his action

Prem:- Heer'mae..

Heer (angrily):- BAS!!!! Bas!! Ab bohot ho gaya. Ap samjhte kya hain apne ap ko. Ap jaise mardon ko mae achi tarha se janti hun. Ap logo ke liye lardki ek mazak haina, ki jab chaho uske feelings ke sath khel liya, or jab chaho use fake diya han? Apse thorde din has bol kya liya, apko laga ki apka kaam asan ho gaya. But let me remind you Mr. Prem Juneja, mae tumhe tumhare maksad mae kabhi kamiyab nahi hone dungi. Samjhe tum!!! Ache tarha se janti hun mae tum jaison ko. Ek baar pehle bhawnao mae beh kar mar thokar kha chuki hun, par ab nahi'.

Prem:- Heer, meri baat suno, tum mujhe galat samjh rahi ho, mae waisa bilkul nahi hun jaisa tum soch rahi ho. Mae tumhe bohot khush rakhunga Heer. Just give me one chance. I really Love you a lot Please Heer mae tumse bohot pya'.

Heer:- Stop it. For god sake Please stop it please. Mae apse pyar nahi karti. Apse to kya mae kabhi bhi kissi or se pyar nahi kar sakti. Kisse pe vishwas nahi kar sakti.

Prem (tearly):- Heer mae tums'.

Heer:- Please!!! Mae apke aage hath jordti hun, mae itni kam umar mae hi bohot dukh jhale hain. Please a bap un zakhmo ko phir se taza mat kariye please!!!

Prem:- Heer!!! Mae'

But Heer left the Room

Prem closed his eyes and ran his hand through his hairs, and then again looked at door with teary eyes

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[I'd already written this part before going on my vocation...i hope you all liked it...pls do comment]



Next Part:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/74840919


Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally prem confess his luv to heer i hope she understand

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