Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26) - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kuttu

An update aftert such a long time. It was great. the survival is costing them dearly looks like. Its kind of weird that they have to stay away from their loved ones too like Misha Kabir, Jai and in a way Madhu too. she is a mother after all and full of guilt that was so well potrayed. Just a query will she now approach Chand to find her daughter.

Master is going to be royally pissed for his people not finding abhay. Just wondering what he will do to get even. And I would love to see a meeting between Madhu and Chand.


Thank you. I was too occupied with everything, really didn get peace of mind to continue writing. To get something you have to loose something and right now it fits AbhIya really well. Abhay has to lost all his past, his money and Pia her friends and family for being together. Chand n Madhu will have a showdown next update.

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

that was beautiful tanzie. each and every point of view was explained so nicely. from abhay and pia's fears and concerns for each other, to misha's concern for her friend, everything was nicely done.

as for madhu - tho she is trying to find pia, i still dont like her, coz ... idk why 😕


Thanks a ton Dishu. I knew you still wont like Madhu but its okay 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ipi2011

Hi. I hv been a silent reader to all your works and hv immensely enjoyed each of them and appreciate the effort u put into each update.
My favourite would be Till The End Of Time(i do miss Aryan of this ff).
Your versatility as a writer can be seen in your works.Your 1st 2 ff's were supernatural based.and the consistency in all the supernatural stuff was amazing with everything fitting together to complete the puzzle.All the journal entries and rituals performed in The Beautiful Stranger was simply amazing and so much detail!It reflects the amount of thought and time u must hv given to them.
My Beautiful Disaster is another favourite.love the way both Abhay and Piya hv progressed to be on the right path and together facing the challenges.Love the fact that each character here(even Chand and Madhu)have a past story to explain their decisions in life,why they are what they are today.
Its sad that this story is gonna end within a few updates.Hope u write a new ff after this.
Hats off to your writing talent:-)


Hello yes I do know your name 😳 Infact whoever have liked my post I know all of their names they commented or not but thanks a lot. it makes me really glad you commented 😊
Thanks so much so you have read all of your works. Beautiful Stranger is very special to me because it has got nothing with the show or any book or inspired from anywhere but my own thoughts completely. Im really glad you liked them.
and Beautiful Disaster is based on humans so its more complicated. I always wanted to write a dark story without supernatural. humans can be darker than monster and well Im happy that I could make my readers happy. 😳 still 5/6 chapters left here I think.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

That was a really nice update Tanzie. I like the haircut part where Abhay asked her if she knew what she was doing... Anyways... Abhay is right to not trust anyone besides Piya.
Next chapter is marriage then right?


Thanks Shreya. of everything you liked the haircut part 😆 Yes in their world and even in normal world, its very difficult now a days to trust anyone.
yes Next update would be sweet and romantic. their wedding and also Chand Madhu showdown.
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
I am first after sooo long!!!

Anyways, onto the chapter :
It was really, really beautiful.
Dunno why but I wished Julia could meet Abhay and Piya again. I don't know her so well- you introduced her only this chapter- and I guess she's not important- but somehow, she really affected me. I felt so bad for her and thankful too that she didnt tell them about AbhIya.

The wedding was beautifully described- it's rare I've read such lovely descriptions, vows, et al.
Abhay feeling guilty and everything...

And precap's got me worried again, typical Tanzie!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏 👏 the update was brilliant. from Julia's POV which made me emotional, to Chand's POV which indicates he is finally concerned for his daughter. Pia's pain about leaving her life behind, yet embracing her future with Abhay was very well written.
the wedding vows were very good, romantic and emotional.
all in all a very good update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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what is it yar...in your ffs y the hell do I always land third😡😭😭
anyways the update was fabulous👏 and I loved it❤️ so don't u dare say a word against the update...
oh wow wow wow abhiya are married
Ah I am so glad that that train lady helped abhiya😃
are wah...chand is now gonna make arnab and madhu's life hell!!!! 😆😆 waiting to see what he will be doing...
oh god!😲again there is a question in the precap😲😭hope everything goes fine😳

Edited by -juhi-lily- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
THIS WAS AWSOME👏UFF ABHIYA MARRAIGE WAS SO GOOD😊CHAND AND MADHU WILL COME FACE TO FACE IN NEXT UPDATE😕I AM WORRIED FR NEXT PART😛UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago

Gosh Tanzie, this was such a fab update 👏 Infact would have made the perfect Valentine update Most romantic update of this FF ever 👏 You made it come alive with your words n your writing is always magical in itself 👏 I loved Pia's dress. It was apt given her condition 😳

Coming to the update, I loved the small peek u gave into Julia's life 👏 Julia is an insignificant character but still her POV really showed what a beautiful bond Abhiya share 😳 She found it endearing to see the care Abhay showered on a pregnant Pia, something she had never felt in her life. What was worse, her husband had abandoned her when she needed him the most U do come across such nasty people in life 🤢 Abhay was careful to make sure he did not disturb Pia's sleep 😳 Pia is indeed lucky to have him in her life 😊 It was sweet of her to ask him to take something for Pia as well. I am so glad she didn give them away. BTW who were they? Chand's men or the detectives Madhu had hired?

So now Chand realised he is a father? 😡 How better is he from Madhu? He thinks Madhu didn give her love to Pia bcoz she was his daughter but atleast she along with Arnab atleast gave her a decent upbringing. Its a different story that Pia never got a father's care but atleast Arnab gave her a name. What the hell is he doing? He knows Abhay in n out. He knows he can goto any length to keep Pia happy n safe. He also knows Abhay as a person. Abhay even transferred his money to him. What more does he want? He has gone through the pain of losing his love n somewhere he must know that deep down even Madhu wasn happy in her life. Does he want the same for his daughter as well? 🤢 He thinks Abhay is a curse in Pia's life? What is he then? 😡 I am kinda scared for Arnab n Madhu I dont deny I hate Arnab but I can understand his feelings as well 😕
Pia can never truly hate her mother. She maybe a bad mother but she's still a mother Atleast after having met Chand she must have realised y her mother took that decision. Cowardly it was, but still she did try to make sure that Pia got the share of a mother's love though Arnab bestowed her with his hatred The thought of never having to see her mother must have shattered Pia but now that she has moved on, there's no turning back Its not easy to give up your world which you haave known for many years n start afresh. Living like a nomad is nothing new for Abhay but it sure is for Pia But still she'd goto any lengths for Abhay 😳 Love could really make a person do strange things n turn their world upside down.
But Abhay's past will always loom over their beautiful paradise n Pia can never be rid of the insecurity that eats her insides It was so cute to see Pia fuss over her wedding dress 😆 Of course the super model in her will always be a part of her wherever she goes n ion whatever condition she is in 😉 n Abhay has to deal with it as it comes with the package 😆 I hope Pia n Abhay get to live a ripe old happy age like the couple they saw 😳
Pia was bound to feel a tad bit disappointed in the beginning bcoz being a model she must have envisioned her wedding to be a grand affair but here she was at the altar with nobody for an audience n she was all alone without her loved ones But when she had one look at the man waiting for her at the altar nothing else mattered to her 😳 I just loved the way Abhay tried to make it special for her 😳 I can imagine him wearing a tux n arriving in a Rolls Royce
I am so glad Abhay wants to let go of his past n start a new life with Pia 😳 He wants to leave everything, his dark world n the fears that come along with it for her 😳 Its sad Abhay cant give her the family heirloom n I hope one day he can though 😊
About the vows, I am speechless 😲 It was breathtakingly beautiful, serene n poignant 👏 I wish I could say anything but I am sure I will never be able to summarise it anyway. I dont want to taint it with my mediocre words FANTASTIC ⭐️
Edited by ..mandy.. - 12 years ago

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