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Posted: 12 years ago
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congozz on new work

nice one

will be waiting for next

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 1:
the boy, his mom and bubbly reached home. they went in. they were welcomed by a person who stopped them.
P: where did u two go?
Maa :we went to the mall. i wanted to do some shopping and so maan accompanied me.
P: ok savitri. make me some tea. then i must go to office.
S: to office? but u told today is off and u will spend time with me and maan.
P: yes. but i will go and come soon.
S:ok. maan go to ur room. i will bring bubbly to ur room.
M: ok maa bye papa.
P: bye bete. BTW who is bubbly?
M: papa she is my bubbly. ( showing to the shall baby who is seeing the home in astonishment and is trying to say something.)
P: savitri who is she?
S: actually raj in mall while going maan saw her. she was crying very much. so i and maan went to the security to announce about the child but after half an hour also there was no news. they told us to leave. but i didn't have the heart to leave her. so i took her and came and told the security to call once they find any information about her parents.
R: but how can u bring her simply? we don't know anything about her.
S: i know but seeing her dress i know that she will belong to some good family. i am feeling sad for her. wish she gets her parents soon.
R: hope the same. ok leave her with maan and make me tea. i am getting late.
S: ok.
saying so she will leave her in maan's bed and maan will be sitting with her and talking to her.
M: u know u are in my home. and from now u will also be in my home. i will call u bubbly...
B: gu--gullu...
M:gullu??
B: u gullu( cutely showing towards him.)
M:i am not gullu.( glaring..(his birth right))
B: (started crying seeing his glare...)
maan became scared. hearing the voice savitri ran to maan's room. raj also followed. the scene they saw made them smile. their son was trying to manofy the small doll who brought smile on his face. finally she stopped crying when maan agreed.
savitri and raj left them alone to play. maan was talking to her and she was doing something in her own. but hearing her babyish voice maan would be very happy. after sending raj she went to maan's room. he was playing with her.
savitri took her and went to give her milk. in that process she thought to ask her something.
S: hello.
she smiled.
S: what is ur name.?
B: (thinking for sometime..and trying to say something)g..geet..mele naam geet hal(my name is geet.)
S: geet. name is very cute.
G: papa ne ralka hal( dad kept this name)
S: where is ur dad?
G: papa.(she started crying.)
S: oh baby dont cry.
savitri starts to pamper her and slowly she forgot that and was playing with the food that savitri was feeding her. but somehow she completed feeding her. after feeding she left her in maan's room and asked him to take care of her as she will be in the kitchen. maan took geet to his toy self and showed all his toys. she liked them very much. she was clapping on whatever the toy maan was showing. maan was feeling very nice seeing her smiling and being happy that too because of him.
That day was the best day for baby maan. the day his geet, his bubbly entered his life. her gullu never knew what will happen the next minute but being with her gave him the happiness that he will always cherish as her gullu.
TO BE CONTINUED...
PRECAP: information from the mall security.


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Edited by kingofme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome when will thy grow up
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing and diffent story
pzzz pm me next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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bubbly is sooo cute...she can talk...she told her name is geet...maan is playing with her...maan n geet ko destiny ne mila diye...dekhte hai age kya hota hai...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice story dear..loved it

do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love gullu...trying to keep his bubbly happy...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful yar... Very interesting story...
Looking forward for more... :-)
Do add me to ur pm list yar

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