me will be dead ...
jaldi update... 😃
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me is surely dead...
i mean i have literally become a perv for this OS of urs...
i mean no matter how many times i have read it... even when i started finding it sad in middle but it always scrounged its way up... and i am so glad for it...
i thot ki comment kya dun... i mean inna detail discussion kiya and then i came backk to read and it made me swoon... not literally haan😛
okay so coming to the OS>...
its THE most gorgeous piece ever... i mean yeh dimag mein kaise aaya???
extra cheerful Rey... and a lil bit sardonic Kiri...
they say girls are complicated... clearly one can see from here... she is an ostrich...
i mean what do u call it??? u want to have it... u don't want to have it... and still u r having it...
gives an all new definition to friends with benefits but one doesn't want to have the other benefits ... *mereko sirf yeh term use karnna tha issliye daala... and thodi bhavnayeing samajh le na... aap toh mereko acche se samajhte ho... and mereko daalna tha.. toh daal diya😃*
one shud surely get employees like rey got and ppl shud get boss like kiri got... i mean boss toh inna cheerful hai and employee inni hard working hai... well obviously here the situation is different... par fir bhi...
so love how kiri isn't able to win the fight and always give it.. way to go rey... and love how she sees beneath rey's face and understand his expressions... the thot process of kiri so well described...
okay so u know what my fav part is?? haina?? 😎
i so love u for writing it... i mean i loved it...
okay i know i had said ki no confession wud make it easy... lekin... yahan i want one... i know u don't write sequel... lekin how abt u write an epilogue???? 😃
i loved the OS in terms of how many ways i have perceived it... it shows off multitudes of emotions.. i mean... one may perceive it irony, some may perceive it sad... some haapy.. i mean u say it...
awesome work di...
Now here i come to cheat... copying material... *that doesn't mean u don't reply to the comment... upar wali meri mehnat thi... and read the underwritten thing again.. to see if u wud have missed any point there.. :P*
glad i am not the one feeling ki it is a lil bit sad...
well as said ki it has so many emotions attached to it...
well sad wud be wrong types...
i mean one can say... its a bit on a remorse edge...
u know they say... ppl do the things which they aren't supposed to do.. which they aren't allowed to do...
kiri ka vaisa hi sad edge aa jata hai... hmmm...
its not as said as destiny...
there's hope...
i mean u know how kunwar was sighing thinking of the moments and how it was unavoidable as though like a drug...
yahan pe beech mein it felt like that...
well this thing kinda reminded me of u know... forbidden love types... ya fir doing a drug addiction... vaisa types...
but i did feel ki rey ka nonchalance make belief tha...
but the way he was... i mean how can not someone fall for him... he understood the unsaid..😃
i love this forbidden types...
when i was reading the OS... due to the pause u gave in b/w..
i expeccted 2-3 times ab khatam hoga..
jab expect nhi kiya... tab khatam ho gaya...
par kyun khatam huya?????? 😔 🥺
i like the feel of it...
coz u know.. boss-secretary it is normally either both are equally indulged... ya fir both are at loggerheads or still indulged...
anyway... they normally share the same feelings and both have vent it out...
yahan as said there's a tinge of guilt ya remorse... i cannot pinpoint exact...
bt the thing is one is verbal.. other is not... and its like u know it is a sinful act.. which in a way it is.. par u know...
and then... without the confession it still goes on...
its purely s*x in a way but still its more sacred then that... and the bond is way more strng than any happens to be.. coz rey is like radiating happiness for both.. and she does the work for both.. a perfect sync.. a lil distorted... but perfect in a sense...
"what wud i not give if he starts thinking abt money for once"
that line rocked... 😎
pata hai...
the last line in the OS felt as though i read an english chapter...
plus i loved the way how kiri asks everytime are you??
when she knows the answer herself... 😎
plus how she wants more time...😉
here's my comment... 😃
Edited by -Vaish- - 12 years ago
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