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lovely updt
loved mayur meeting
thanks for the pm
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Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

very nice update.


mayur meeting ws so chatpata...lol...i cant find better word than this...lol

i want to see shriyas reacation after knowing her parents meeting...lol

tonigt my mind isnt working properly...n thats y i am wondering around...lol

continue soon.

thanks for the pm.


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Originally posted by: gopi06

lovely updt
loved mayur meeting
thanks for the pm



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Posted: 12 years ago
Here is my next part..


Yupiee


I had completed 100 pages...



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Love Never Looses

Part 18

Past


Mayank gained his consiousness at her sudden outburst ,he couldn't able to hear anything except "chodo mujhe" and he immediately leave her making her fall on her butt'this increase the temper of already furipis girl ...Mayank realises his mistake and offered his hand to her but she just jerked his hand stands on her feet and before he could apologize she burst over him,"How dare you'!! Pehle to tum mujhse jaanbhujh k takrate ho..taaki..tum mujhe choo sako and then'.tum mujhe gira dete ho'.Tumhari himmat kese hui mujhe giraane ki'who hell you are.."

"Listen Mam..I am really.."

"Oh..Just shut up..!!! akeli ladki dekhi to socha chance mar liya jaaye'mein achi tarah se jaanti hoon tum jese ladko ko'"

"Listen..!!!"

"Oh..You Listen'!! Dekh k nahi chal sakte the'.tumhari himmat kese hui mujhe choone ki.."

"Mam vo aap.."

"And instead of apologising you idiot arguing with me..!!!All Boys are same'they all are jerk..!!!"

Mayank was watching her like dumbfounded she was yelling at him not allowing him to speak and then saying him jerk..!!! For the first time in this life he saw a girl like her'Firstly he helped her from falling down and then insted of saying thank you to him..she is scolding him .. amazing'

He was lost in his thoughts when call him back on earth,"O..Mister kahan kho gaye'.tumhari vajah se mein late hui hoon'aur ab tum mujhe meri destination per pahochaoge..samjhe.."

Mayank was totally shocked,"Me'.mein kyu..tum khud bhi to jaa sakti ho.."

Girl,"Haan jaa sakti hoon.. but because of you..meri cab mujhe chod k chali gayi hain..and now you have to pay for this.."

Mayank:"Excuse me'!!! Why should I 'I think you are forgetton that there is something called "Public Transport"Go with that..!!!

Girl:"By the way the place where I have to go'public transport doesn't go there.."

Mayank:"Then hire a private Taxi'"

Girl:"Ohhh Ho'now I will hire a private affair.. aur agar usne mujh akeli ladki ka fayeda uthaya 'mere saath kuch galat kar diya to mein to kisi ko muh dikhane layaak bhi nahi rahoongi and you will be responsible for that'"

Mayank:"Why Me'!! Vo tumhara faayeda uthayaga ..iss baat ka darr hain tumhe.. mein to utha sakta hoon'mein bhi akela hoon'.mujhse darr nahi lag raha.."

Girl:"Nahi'kyunki mein tumhe jaanti hoon..tum aise koi harkat nahi karoge..aur agar karne ki koshish bhi ki'to mein tumhe kachha kha jaaongi'!!"

Mayank:"Oh..Hello'!!! Tum mujhe jaanti bhi nahi ho'.aisa kese keh sakti ho'"

Girl:"You are mistaken Mr.Mayank Sharma mein tumhe jaanti hoon.. jaayeda nahi but itna jaanti hoon tum mere saath kuch bura nahi kar sakte..aur haan koi doubt mat rakhna man mein..I swear'mein tumhe sach mein maar dalungi'.agar tumne kuch bhi gadbad karne ki koshish ki.."

Mayank:"Hold On'!! Hold On..!! Tumhe kese pata mera naam Mayank hain..aur mein tumhare saath kuch galat nahi karoonga'"

Girl:"Well..!!! well'!! Well'.vo mein nahi bataongi..By the way I am getting extremly late..chalo jaldi'!!!"

Mayank was standing their like a statue a girl who just collided with him know him ,she knows him name and moreover is now ordering over him'he is like an idiot..obeying her order'he went to her who was walking ahead of her and said,"Listen..!!! Ek to mein tumhe jaanta nahi hoon'.fir mein kyu tumhe lift doon..!!!"

Girl:"Arrey'mene tumhe bataya na..mein to tumhe jaanti hoon'.rahi baat meri baat to'.Forwarding her hand infront of him'..Hy..I am Nupur..Nupur Bhushan'!!! Tumhare Best Friend Samrat ki Girlfriend Gunjan ki Best Friend'."

Mayank was completely shock'he was out of words'

Mayank's P.O.V.

Holly..!!! C**p..she is Gunjan's best friend'oh my 'my' I haven't thought this in my wildest dreams'indeed Gunjan must have told about me and Sam to her..that's why she knew me..wait wait'does that mean Gunjan also knows that the gifts which Samrat used to present her are most of mu choice'.God..!!! Samrat to gaya'aur saath mein mujhe bhi marwayega'..s**t'I am so Sorry..Sam but ab tujhe Gunjan se koi nahi bacha sakta'.aur ye ladki'ye to meri jaan hi le legi'Lift doon ya nahi'.lekin Gunjan ki best friend hain mana kese kar sakta hoon'Kya karoon'

Third Person P.O.V.

Nupur:"Ab aese khade khade kya dekh rahe ho chalo'vese bhi I am quite late.."

Mayank:"Huh..haan'kuch nahi'aur late ho gayi to kya hua'isme meri galti nahi hain'"

Nupur:"Dekho galti to tumhari hi hain'mere pass explain karne ka time nahi hain isliye abhi chalo'"

Mayank thought instead of arguing better drop her at her place as quickly as possible.

Mayank:"Yeah..!! chalo..*under his breath*mujhe bhi tumse jald se jald peecha chudana hain'"

Nupur:"Huh..kuch kaha tumne.."

Mayank:"Mene'.ackting as if nothing happened'.nahi to'."

Nupur:"Thik hain'..chalo jaldi'."

Mayank*Irritating*:"Dekhiye miss Nupur aap iss tarah se mujhe order nahi de sakti'.meri gaadi hain..mein jese chahoon vese drive karoonga jitni speed mein chah hoon utni speed mein drive karonga..samjhi aap'aapki bhalayi isi mein hain ki aap chup chap bethe rahe samjhi'varna.."

Nupur*cutting him in between*:"Varna kya huh'varna kya kar loge tum'.chup chap'jaldi chalao'bade aaye'.varna'"

Mayank stopped his car abruptly in a very quite place'no one was around there'
Nupur:"Dekho Mr.Sharma..mere pass tumse ladne ka koi time nahi hain'.to please chalo.."

Mayank(folding his hand acroos his chest):"Nahi'"

Nupur open her wide mouth in a complete 'O' shape.
Nupur:Kyu nahi chaloge'

Mayank:Meri Marzi'.

Nupur(a slight fear appear on her face still composing her she said,"Kyu'tumahri Marzi kyu'.aur yumne gaadi itni sunsaan sadak per kyu roki hain..

Mayank(giving his flirteous smileas if he was waiting for it , he came a little close to her where backed herself but since she was in the car couldn't move back as she was stopped by the door behind her'fear was reflecting from her face'seeing her reaction he asked in a very husky voice):Kyu tumhe in pata'.

Nupur who was now completely freaking out couldn't able to say anything but she showed herself to be strong and retort back:Dekho'pointing his finger towards him'jesa tum soch rahe ho na'aisa kabhi nahi hoga'.tum'gulping saliva down her throat..mujhe pata hain..iss sunsad sadak per tum mera faayeda uthana chahte ho'.

Mayank(giving his slide smile as if she is right he neared himself more..where Nupur was still murmering to not come near her):You are right..lena chata hoon mera tumhara advantage..itna acha mauka mein haath se kese jaane de sakta hoon'..

Nupur..showing she is not effected by his words:Dekho agar mere kareeb aane ki koshish ki na..to mein chilaungi'

Mayank:Haan to chilao mene kab mana kiya hain..but ek baat batao..tumhari.. awaaz yahan sunne wala mere alawa aur koi nahi hain'saying he neared a little more to her..

Nupur..Thinking that situation has gone much far than she had thought'.but still she tried not to loose:Dekho tum jante nahi ho mujhe'.mene ache ache ko maar giraya hain'

Mayank .Taking as challenge..:Acha''Neared her more'.mujhe nahi lagta'.

Mayank was actually very close to her..his breath was falling on her face and unkown to him he was lost in her beauty'he don't know when he actually came very close to her'her eyes were pulling him towards her..they have a certain attraction which was pulling'him'it was Nupur's words which brought him back from his session.

Nupur unkown to her tears were formed in her eyes..and her whole face was full of sweat she was pleading him,"Please' mujhe chod do'Please'" .

She hell scared by the time though Gunjan have told her about him..but the fact is she don't know him personally..what if he really want' to take advantage of her'she was praying for help and was also cursing her luck'.and addition to it pleading him to leave her..

Hope you Like it

Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bichaari Nupur smartness bhaari par gayi😆😆
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aww My Nupsi---Loved her-and Mayu he is very flirtiest ...Loved the whole part Adorable well written deary Continue soon.

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