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very cute ff

i didnt like nupur in first 3 4 parts
not becoz i think that she betrayed mayu becoz she can never do that
but i was thinking it will same reason from mjht she left for their well
thank god it was not that reason and i hated this track in show and skip that track

do cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: THIS-IS-LIFE

very cute ff


i didnt like nupur in first 3 4 parts
not becoz i think that she betrayed mayu becoz she can never do that
but i was thinking it will same reason from mjht she left for their well
thank god it was not that reason and i hated this track in show and skip that track

do cont soon


Yeah..!! They should show something..different...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafy_MN


Yeah..!! They should show something..different...


yup becoz i still cant understand how any one can be happy without his her love means but this type of decision make everyone life miserable
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: THIS-IS-LIFE


yup becoz i still cant understand how any one can be happy without his her love means but this type of decision make everyone life miserable


It's all depend on the creatives and writers
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Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago
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Love Never Looses

Part 19

Flashback

Mayank came to his senses and realises what he was doing'he was just playing a prank on her as he was totally pissed off with her constant nagging so he thought to taught her a lesson but it actually gone too far'seeing her frighten face he came back to his seat and aplogise for his mistake,"I am sorry'.Vo'mein to bas Mazaak kar raha tha'lagta hain..Thoda zaayeda ho Gaya'but VO tumhara chehra'Laughing'dekhne layaak tha'.Laughing out loudly.

But for Nupur this was limit'she slapped him over his shoulder and furiously asked,"How dare...you...Tumhari himmat kese hui mere saath itna bada prank karne ki'."

Mayank: Listen I said I am sorry..."

Nupur:"To kon SA bada ehsaan kar diya'tumne'koi aise behave karta hain kya koi Kisi ladki k saath'

Mayank: Mene Sorry kaha Na'

Nupur: huh'all men are same...just bloody same'

Mayank: Dekhiye aap mujhe ache se jaanti bhi nahi hain...so please...

Nupur: Jaanti nahi hoon to kya'ladke to hote hi aise hain'ab agar tum 2 sec k Ander...Ander...mujhe nahi pahuchaya...to By God..!! mein tumhe zinda nahi chodungi'

Mayank:Fine fine'.chal raha hoon'

Nupur:Jerk..

Mayank:Huh..Kuch kahan tumne'

Nupur:Nahi chalo abhi'..

He dropped at her office building and without saying anything she stamped his door and went away'leaving Mayank and his wondering behind.

Mayank's P.O.V.

By God..!! Kya ladki..hain'wooh'..chalo afat gayi'.bach gaya beta tu to aaj varna aaj ye tujhe sachi mein maar daalti'

Third Person's P.O.V.

Mayank completely dumbfounded with her r for the first time he met a girl like Nupur...

Flashback ends

Nupur slapped on Mayank's shoulder..
Mayank:"Ouch'!!!Nupur kua kar rahi ho'"

Nupur:Tumne mujhe afat kahan'.

Mayank:are baba uss waqt jo tumne meri halat kar di thi..uska kya'I felt so relieved ki finally ab tumhari chuk-chuk nahi sunni padegi'.

Nupur..she got a teary'to mein tumhe afat lagti thi us waqt..

Mayank..Holding her hand'Nupur..us waqt mein tumko jaanta bhi nahi tha'.you were a completle stranger for me..but ab you ae my life without you I am lifeless'.

Nupur was completely mesmerized by him'how could someone love her so much'.!!! She was so much overwhelmed.Tears were forming in her eyes when Mayank rubbed his thumb over her eyes and said,"Bas..Nupur..Bas..ab aur nahi'. I don't want to see any more tears in your eyes'!! Tumhe jitne worst days face karne the kar liye ab nahi.. ab humari life mein sirf aur sirf khushiyan hi khushiyaan hongi'.mein ab tumhari aakhon mein aur aasu laane nahi doonga'and you are not allowed to cry in my kingdom'"

Nupur..smiling a little"Kingdom'ye kab bana .."

Mayank..amusingly.."Well tab bana jab iss kingdom mein uski queen aur uski princess ne yaha per entry li'"

Nupur was so much amazed'he couldn't think he is the same Mayank who once was very unromantic and sadu'unknown to a her a very surprised smile played on her lips while she was looking at him surprisingly.
Mayank:"Kya hua ab aese kya dek rahi ho'"

Nupur:Tum kitna change ho gaye..Mayank..

Mayank:What do you mean'.

Nupur :Nahi pehle tum kitne akdu aur sadu aur ab kitne sweet or loving ho gaye ho'
Hearing the word 'sadu' from her mouth was a bless for him he says,"Phir se kaho'"

Nupur:"Kya..?"
Mayank:Ye sadu'.kitna acha lag raha'.tumhare muh se ye word sunker'.taras gaya tha mein..

Nupur:Don't worry'Mr.Sharma mein baaki 4 saal ka compensation ache se kar doongi'..
Saying he hit him on his shoulder,"Mazak udaa rahe ho mera...!!!!

Mayank:Ouch Nupur lagta hain..

Nupur:Aur lagna chahiye''!!!

Mayank :Acha bas bas..Shroya ne agar dekh liya ki uski mummy uske Papa ko maar rahi hain.. to kya sochegi vo mere baare mein..

Nupur:Don't worry vo abhi so rahi hain'

Mayank:Ab tumhe bhi so jana chahiye'

Nupur:Okay'Goodnight'

Mayank:Night..

Nupur as soon as got up a sudden pain arises in her shoulder due to which she a moan escape from her mouth,"Ah'"
Mayank ..in a concern tone'"Kya hua Nupur'Thik to ho'"

Nupur:Nahi kuch nahi vo bas thoda sa dard ho raha hain'

Mayank:Thoda'.kitna dard horaha tumhe..tum ointment time se nahi laga rahi ho.."

Nupur: vo Mayank'gussa to nahi karoge'.

Mayank:Iska matlab tum ointment nahi laga rahi ho..ha na'

Nupur:Haan vo mein kese lagati..bahut pain ho raha tha'

Mayank:Aur tumne mujhe bataya bhi nahi'

Nupur:A'ab sorry na Mayank ab please tum laga do.. vo kitchen ki second drawer mein rakhi hain..

Mayank:mujhe pata hain..tum yahan shaanti se betho..aur haan yahan se hilna bhi nahi..

She nodded her head while Mayank turned towards kitchen ..he came back from kitchen and brought ointment with him and without looking at her he said,"Nupur chalo apni shirt utaro.."

Nupur was shocked,"What..!!!"
Mayank:Arrey aise kya dekh rahi ho.. shirt utaro.."

Nupur:Mayank tumhe maalom hain tum kya keh rahe ho..

Mayank:tumhe shirt utarne..Realizing what he is saying'.oh..I am sorry..mera matlab hain'apna shoulder dikhao..mein oitnment laga deta hoon..

Nupur turned her back towards him and opened top two button of her shirt and titled her shirt a bit so that her shoulder could be visible to him'a weird feelings were running inside her veins'she could feel goosebumps on her hand and try hard to compose herself'his hot breath were falling on her cold skin melting that ice wall down'but somewhere she felt that Mayank had closed his eyes..for not making any uncomfortable situation for her'Somewhere the respect she had in her heart for him..increased much more'and she said,"Mayank..tum apni aakhen khol sakte hoo'"

Mayank was somewhere feeling a little bit awkward and plus he do not want to create any uncomfortableness between them so he closed his eyes..he was actually felt happy that Nupur still trust him that she asked him to open his eyes'His fingers were smoothly moving on her skin'he could feel the coldness to be decreasing..may be it's effect of the ointment or may be of his'

He want to kiss her wound and vanish the pain 'it's unbearable for him to see her in pain'but he controlled his urges ' he waited for the time when..this weird awkwardness and uncomfortablesness between them vanishes forever'she is not his Nupur..he want's his Nupur..back..these thoughts were roamaing so vigourously in his mind that unknowningly words came from his mouth ..a slight whisper to near her ,"I want you back Nupur.."

Nupur was little bit surprised when his hot breath fall on her ear'she jerkly opened her eyes'she could feel how Mayank is going all through'she too wanted him..she want to with him like their old days after taking a long breath she said,"I want to come back Mayank.."

Mayank swfitly turned her towards him without hurting her shoulder and placed the shirt back to his place and cupped her face and with most intensity he said,"One day you'll be back..one day my love will bring you back..I believe in my love'my love won't loose'I love you Nupur with all my heart and have an immense faith that one day you will be back'!!! "

Nupur:..keeping her hand on his said with same intensity'."I want to come back Mayank bring me back..i want to feel your love'melt this ice wall between us'!! Please'"

Mayank nodded his head and said,"Don't worry..!!! I 'll bring you back'"

She saw a determination in his eyes'.his eyes were pouring love for her'.she want to grab this love but still a sudden fear inside her was blocking her way..Mayank saw a weird fear inside her eyes..!!! May be she want to convey something..but still feels hesitant'they kept on looking each other eyes'may be understanding each other ..may be giving a assurance that now they won't let anything bad to happen with them'no more tears will be placed in their life'
After a long eye lock they broke off,Nupur realises their closesness she became a little bit uncomfortable..she looked here and there'except his eyes'Mayank has sensed her uncomfortableness and releases her'she got up from her place and without meeting his gaze she said,"Good Night" and went upto her room without listening to his answer.

Mayank saw her retreating figure and wishpered back"Night".
He too got up from his chair and went up to his room..To day he was really very very tired'.As soon as his body touched the cozy bed he fallen sleep.


Hope you like it

Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago
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A very heart touching update

i'm loving Mayur more with each passing moment

well written part sweety*hugs*

Loved it.

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want a ro,mantic scene of mayur

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