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Love Never Looses

Part 17


Flashback

Samrat:"Dude..kahan hain tu'.!!!"

Mayank:"Aa raha hoon Samrat..kitna traffic hain'mein paking lot mein hoon..jagah mile to mein gaadi park karke aaa rha hoon.."

Samrat:"Jaldi aa meein ccd mein tera wait kar raha hoon.."

Mayank:"tu phone rakhega bhi nahi aur mein tere saamne hunga'"

Samrat:"Acha baatein baad bnana'jaldi aa bye.."

Mayank parked his car and rushed towards ccd.Dashing the door he entered only to meet with the fury gaze of Samrat.

Samrat(sarcastically):Finally you showed up'Dude'tere pahuchne se pehle pahuch jaaonga'waah'pichle aadhe ghante se wait kar raha hoon tera hain kahan tu..aur ab chup kyu hain bolta nahi kuch.."

Mayank(cooly):"ho gaya"

Samrat(still in same state):"Haan ho gaya ab bataya ga bhi.."

Mayank:"Are yaar traffic mein fus gaya tha..mujhe nahi pata tha itna time lagega.."

Samrat:"chal thik hain tu bhi kya yaad karega mene tujhe maaf kiya'"

Mayank:"(saying in a tone as if he is very obeliged of him"thank you so..much'.*coming back to his tone* dramabaazi to koi tujhs seekhe'chal mein apni cold coffee leta hoon then we will go for shopping.."

Taking their drinks in their hand they moved out of ccd..
Mayank:"Haan to bata kya lega.."

Samrat(in an irritating voice):"agar mujhe pata hota to mein tujhe kyu bulata idiot.(calming himself)'.dekh this time Gunjan mujhse sachhi mein bahut naraz hain. Agar mein uske saamne gaya na..to vo issi waqt mujhe kaccha kha jaayegi..So dude'please help me'"

Mayank:"Galti to teri hain..kisne kaha tha'uska birthday bhoolne k liye'"

Samrat:"Oye'.khud saale tune use wish kar diya tha..aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi..ab mujhe kya sapna aayega'."

Mayank:"Dude..vo teri girlfriend hain..tujhe yaad rakhna chahiye tha'"

Samrat:"Beta..abhi tu bahut bol raha hain..jab teri girlfriend aayegi na..tab pata chalega'"

Mayank:"Tu fiker mat kar'.i won't let this wish of your's to be fulfilled'kyunki'in sab mein vishwas hi nahi rakhta..to jab meri life mein girlfriend nahi hogi..to problems to aa hi sakti'."

Samrat(in a challenging tone):"Dekhte hain'"

Mayank:"Ache se dekh lena'.abhi filhaal chal..jhada..tumhara hota..aur shopping mujhe karni hoti hain'beta kisi din Gunjan ko pata chal gaya'ki jitne bhi gifts tu use deta unme almost saare meri pasand k hote hain'"

Samrat:"Tune mujhe pagal samjh rakha hain..kya jo mein use ye sab bataunga'"

Mayank:"Isme samjhne wali kon se baat hain'.tu hain hi pagal'"

Samrat:"Mayank bas ab bahut ho gaya'..baatein chod..aur ye bata start kahan se karen.."

Mayank:"Start karne se pehle mujhe ye bata'tujhe kitne gifts kharidne hain.."

Samrat:"What do you mean by kitne..ek hi lena'."
Mayank slapped his hand on his forehead,Samrat asked him in confusion,"Kyu kya hua'.mene ab kya galat keh diya'."

Mayank:"Dude mujhe ek baat bata tujhme aisa kya dekh k Gunjan ko tujhse Pyaar. Hua'"

Samrat:"What do you mean.."

Mayank:"Idiot..Girlfirend ka birthday bhool gaya aur use manane k liye'bas ek gift'vo us gift bhi utne tukde kar degi'jitna vo tere karegi'"

Samrat:"To fir..kitne loon'"

Mayank:"Gunjan meri nahi tri Girlfriend hain jo bahut jaldi teri Fiance hone wali hain to ye to the decide karna hoga ki uske gusse ko thanda karne k liye kitne gifts chahiye'"

Samrat:"Dekh..Gunjan bahut simple ladki hain..aur use simple simple gift bahut pasand aate hain'aisa karta hoon'uske liye 5 ache se sweet and decent yet classy gifts kharidta hoon'"

Mayank:"Good'ye hui na baat.."

Smarat:"Kya good..!!! tu hi gift select karwayega.."

Mayank:"Mene mana kiya kya..chal.. aisa kar sabse pehle uske liye ek achi si dress le le'"

Samrat:"I dea acha hain..chal.."

They selected the dress and went to the other corner when Mayank spotted a stall of paintaings he asked Samrat to went he will join him in a while'
He was moving towards the stall and was carry glass of his coffee'and from other side a girl was coming'.she was walking very fast and was having lots of bags making hr difficult to move '..she didn't noticed that someone was coming from other side'

They both were coming towards each other unknown of each other presence and'..CRASH..!!! they collided with each other'and due to this sudden collision'the girl fall but she didn't fall alone she took the person who collided with her'She get up and shouted on him,"Hey you can't see'."

Mayank:"Excuse me'.mein dekh k hi chal raha tha it's you who collided with me.."
She opened her big mouth as if she received a big shock,"Oh..!!! Hello'it's your mistake so you say sorry'"

Mayank:"Sorry my foot..!!! infact you should say sorry'you spoiled my shirt'"

She glanced over his shirt having the blotches of coffee that he was holding'.seeing it she couldn't able to control and giggled..
Mayank got pissed on seeing her laughing instead of apologizing,"Hello..!! Ms. I am talking to you..isme hasne waali kon si baat hain'ek to dekh k chalti nahi aur fir'uper se sorry kehne ki jagah'hasti ho'."

Girl(in anger):"See it's not my mistake okay'tum bhi to dekh k chal sakte the'bade aaye'."

Saying she turned around making her long hair to fall on his face though for only a second but they left something behind a dumbfounded Mayank he was going to retort back when her hair fall on his face'he get's lost in the smoothness and fragrance of her hair..though it was mere touch but still they left him in dazed'.
He came out from trance and glanced his sideways that whether anybody watched him or not 'he starighten himself and called Samrat that he will come in na little bit of time'After a buying shirt he changed it and went towards the other store where Samrat was waiting for him'As he reached there he told Samrat about the inidence and expect from him that he will support her,but here he was making his fun and was laughing out.

Mayank:"Dude tu has raha hain'"

Samrat:"To aur kya karo'.Mayank mujhe uss ladki se milna hain jo tujhe sabke saamne uchi awaaz mein baat karke gayi'.varna dekho 'bhala aaj tak kisi ne tumhari baat ko cut ya fir kabhi bola your at mistake.. I really want to meet that girl..and want to patt her for her guts'

Mayank(getting annoyed)):"chal..chal..ab baatein band kar aur Funjan k liye kuch select kar le'"

Samrat:"Tu bhool raha hain vo department to tera hain'"

Both of them selected Gift items for Gunjan'.while returning back Mayank recalled something and then said,"Tu sun..chala jaa'mujhe Mom aur Dad k liye luch lena hain.."

Samrat:"Haan to chal mein bhi chalta hoon.."

Mayank:"Tu already late ho raha hain'mein le lunga..tu jaa'vese bhi tujhe bahut preparation karni hain'"

Samrat:"Okay'bye..Ghar pe milte hain.."

Mayank:"Bye'"

Signing off Mayank moved inside the shop and bought beautifull Gold-silver watches for his parent's'while returning he again bumped with someone'but this time he didn't fall rather he reliazes the person who bumped with was falling so he catches her from being falling down..Her face was covered with her hairs due to this'with slow breeze her hair moved from her face showing his angelic face to him'but his gaze was struck on his eyes..he lost everything after seeing those beautifull pair of eyes'The girl who collided with him..was too mesmerised in his eyes'they both were lost in each other's eyes.

Flashback ends.

Nupur came downstairs seeing Mayank lost somewhere.she came besides him and shake him through his shoulder,"Mayank.."

He came out of his dreamland,"Huh'"

Nupur:Kya hua kya soch rahe ho'"

Mayank(smiling lightly):"Humari first meeting'

Nupur:"Tumhe yaad hain'

Mayank:vo bhi koi bholne waali baat hain By God..!!Tumhari jesi ladki mene life mein pehli baar dekhi thi'

Nupur:meri taarif kar rahe ho ya taang khich rahe ho'

Mayank:umhe kya lagta hain'..

Nupur:MmmTaarif kar rahe ho'meri taang khichne ki tum himmat bhi nahi kar sakte'

Mayank:So to hain

Nupur:Jo bhi hain'mein lekin bhool nahi sakti vo din'

Mayank:"Mein bhi'acha ek baat batao'kya tum shuru se hi aise thi.. ya fir'mein tha isliye mujhe dekhte hi mujh per bhadakti rehti thi'.

Nupur:well kya hain na tumhari wajah se mein late late ho gayi thi'.aur tumne mujhe itna tang kiya..to mein bhadak gayi to usme kya'

Mayank:Nupur but uss waqt I was completely starnger for you'

Nupur:"I know but fir bhi mere dil ne kaha you are not stranger varna aisa mene kisi bhi stranger k saath nahi kiya hain'

Mayank:Mein bechara to phas gaya tha'

Nupur :acha aur mera kya'

Mayank:Kya'

Nupur:Yaad nahi'.

Mayank:mujhe ache se yaad hain.

Flashback

after couple of time'.she gained their concious and girl reliasing she is in his arms furiously said,"Tumhe himmat kese hui'mujhe haat lagane ki..chodo mujhe'"


Hope you Like it...

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Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww mayur meeting was so sweet n spicy.
lovd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Owww.. To aye flashback wala scene tha..
Ek hi meet mein do do baar Mayur tak raye.. Hayee.. Mujhe mera tak rane wala Mayu kab milega..
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*,muuuah!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow that was as awesome flash back :)
two time dashed each other :)

Great :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww cute part
Loved it
beautifully written
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww...such a sweet part...
ha she was saying ''tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe haath lagane ki...chodo mujhe...''...beta zayda mat bolo warna chod diya na toh bahut tej lagegi...u know i m describing a exact scene like this in jeet...where she shouts n he actually leaved her on floor...kasam se likhte hue bada maza aya that...😆
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

awww mayur meeting was so sweet n spicy.
lovd it


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Originally posted by: Humayra

Owww.. To aye flashback wala scene tha..
Ek hi meet mein do do baar Mayur tak raye.. Hayee.. Mujhe mera tak rane wala Mayu kab milega..
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*,muuuah!!!!


Tujhe bhi jaldi mil jaayega...😉


*Hugs..*

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