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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

Shant gadhadhari Bheem shant😆


arreyyy,,, ye dialog mujhe yaad hain...
meri fav Vivah mein thi..rahul se kahi thi ye baat geet ne...
awwwieee...

but mein shaant nahi reh sakti..uski tho left right and centre dekar hi chodungi 😈
bahut evil thots aa rahe hain mujhe aaj kal rahul ko lekar 😈
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet


arreyyy,,, ye dialog mujhe yaad hain...
meri fav Vivah mein thi..rahul se kahi thi ye baat geet ne...
awwwieee...

but mein shaant nahi reh sakti..uski tho left right and centre dekar hi chodungi 😈
bahut evil thots aa rahe hain mujhe aaj kal rahul ko lekar 😈

Oh Rangeeli Kawaii,
Ac teri taraf ghuma doon, grami lag rahi hai toh😆
Ritzy,
Awaz de kahan hai,
hum toh yahi hain, yaha hai,
aabaad mere dil mein ummeed ka jahaan hai ,
kyun ki aaj update milega apne kahaa hai😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Piya for the banner

Thanks friends for the comments. I have responded to a few of you starting page 35 so check the responses which were more generic to most of the points raised by you all.

VERY IMPORTANT: Please add ritzypm as buddy to gets PMs for this FF

Chapter 17 – Kaliyug Ki Sita Ki Uljhan

Kuch Sehmi si hu mein

Kuch badal si gayi hu mein...

Kisi ke liye jeena chahti hu mein

Kisi ke saath se thodi ubhar rahi hu mein...

Jaane anjaane me sahi wo kuch sikha jaate hai

Kuch aisa jo zindagi ko dekhne ke maayine badalte hai...

Kuch kuch ab mein samajhne lagi hu

Mehfuz saath unke mehsus karne lagi hu...

Fir kyu wapas ye dard ka saaya pada hai

Usme khud ko khone ka ab Darr lagta hai...

Kya ye aahat hai fir se wo sab dohrane ki

Kya ye aahat hai fir us daur se guzarne ki...

By Ritu

Geet spent her entire night just staring at the ceiling. Events from the morning flashed in front of her eyes making her cry more. Lot of thoughts ran through her mind. From quitting her job to continuing as is, she thought of many options. But By morning, she somehow managed to decide upon talking to Rahul sir.

(I will suggest that all of you listen to this song once to get the feel. It as a beautiful song and as relevant in current times as ever.)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ViZGYWV6aK4&feature=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ViZGYWV6aK4

Kaliyug Ki Sita Ki Uljhan
Mat Pooch Mere Man Bairaagi

Jeevan Bhar Ka Banwaas Liya
Ram Ke Ghar Ko Bhi Tyagi
Kaliyug Ki Sita Ki Uljhan

"Rahul Sir always talk to me so nicely and maybe I am just too prejudiced by my past. But at the same time, I can not let things be the same as I am scared to even go to office. Hence, it is just better if I talk to Rahul sir and let him know that being from a village I do not feel comfortable in working with men and especially with men touching me. I am sure he will understand and things will be ok."

With her decision made, she walked into the office with trepidation. She was still nervous about talking so openly to her boss but she knew she needed it.

Opportunity came in front of her when Rahul actually joined her in pantry while she was having a break.

"Hello Geet!!! How are you feeling now?"

Geet smiled slightly and thought informal environment of pantry was better than cabin to talk about such an issue.

"I am fine sir now. Sir, as a matter of fact I wanted to talk to you about something."

Rahul smirked and encouraged her to speak.

Geet fiddled with her hands as she spoke- "Sir, please app meri baat ka bura mat maniyega. Woh kya hai na, I belong to a very small place in Punjab and has been brought up in a very restricted environment. Isliye, I just wanted to request ki please ap mujhe touch mat kariye. I don't feel comfortable with all this."

"What the hell are you saying? What do you think of yourself. You are just a mere secretary and you think I am taking advantage of you?"

Geet got scared with Rahul's outburst. "Nahi Nahi Sir, aap mujhe galat samjh rahe hain. I know you are very nice and I am not complaining against you. Lekin I have my own personal issues and I just don't like being touched."

Rahul smirked and then put a comforting hand on her shoulder as tears made way out of her eyes.

"Sh Sh Sh sweetheart….it's ok. I understand. But hum toh friends hai na. Chalo now don't cry and forget this conversation ever happened."

And with that he wiped her tears away.

Geet was stunned. "Just now I told him that I don't like being touched and he is…chi chi Babaji…I need to make sure I am never alone with him…lekin aise kab tak chalega…I need to talk to someone…aaj kuch bhi kar ke mein Pinky se baat karungi"

Geet pushed his hand away lightly and walked away murmuring a "Thanks"

Rahul had an evil smile on his face –"Nakhre…Haan. Lagta hai aaj tumhein tumhari aukat dikhani hi padegi."

Har Kadam Pe Uska Haran Hua
Har Mod Pe Ravan Ko Dekha

Jab Saiyyam Ka Dhiraj Tuta
Khud Laang Chali Laxman Rekha

Na Rang Mahal Usko Bhaaya
Woh Sari Khushiyon Ko Taj Bhaagi
Kaliyug Ki Sita Ki Uljhan


Rahul canceled the next meeting but did not inform Geet about the same. She entered the conference room putting down the files and preparing for the conference. Rahul entered after her and closed the sound proof door.

Geet did not make too much of it when she felt his hands encircling her waist.

"Sir…what are you doing?"

"Geet…sweet heart, bahut tadpa liya hai tumen mujhe. Ab aaj toh mein apni pyaas bujha ke rahunga….kam se kam ek kiss toh de do"

Geet eyes widened as her worst nightmare was again becoming a reality. She pushed at him with all her force "Sir…what are you saying. Chodiye mujhe…please chodo."

But her efforts were vain as he pulled her even more into his arms and tried to kiss her forcibly.

Tears ran freely from her eyes and she whimpered while moving her head left and right trying to dodge his mouth pushing him away.

"Sir…please…no…please let me go….let me go nahi toh mein aapki complain kar dungi."

Naakaam Huvi Badnam Huvi
Kal Tak Thi Shradha Ki Murat

Dar Dar Bhatki Maari Maari
Aasuwan Mein Doob Gayi Surat

Kaanto Pe Aayi Neend Zara
Phoolon Ke Bister Pe Jaagi
Kaliyug Ki Sita Ki Uljhan

Rahul laughed out loudly as Geet looked at him in fear.

"Complain karogi..meri….aur kya kahogi. That me, head of major project tried to harass a 12th pass secretary whose job depends on me. And what if I say that you tried to seduce me for your promotion as client partner and are blaming me because I denied. Geet tum bhi na…kaun vishwas karega tumhari baton pe."

Geet kept on looking horrifyingly as Rahul chuckled loudly as if he had just cracked a massive joke. In that one moment she realized that she was trapped and once again she was alone. Completely alone and only she herself and her Babaji can save her from this devil.

Seeing him busy in laughing she kicked him on his hip making him loose his balance and dashed to make for the door. But Rahul was fast and held her shoulder ripping her clothes. He turned her around and slapped her hard making her lip cut and bleed.

"Saali…jitni achi tarah se baat kar raha hoon…utne hi nakhre. Dekh ab teri pehli baar kaisi karta hoon mein…waise bhi pyaar ke liye toh bahut din hain…abhi toh bas trailor hai."

Saying this he threw her dupatta away and pushed her on the floor with him leaning completely on him. Geet withered like a fish needing water but to no avail as she was completely trapped under him.

Geet squirmed in pain and yelped as he rashly pressed her breast over her cloth with one hand as his other hand pinned her own.

He tore away her already ripped suit from one side exposing half of her upper body. Geet managed to free her one hand from his grasp as he bent down to kiss her. Groping at the first thing she could manage she banged his head with the flower pot in her hand. Rahul held his head in pain and she kneed him further.

Dazed by the pain on his head and between his legs he rolled over giving her a chance to pull herself up and run for the door. Geet ran and aware of her state yanked open the next door in her way. She huddled herself inside and closed the door.

Her loud breath echoed in the small broom cupboard as she crouched between brooms and cleaning supplies. She herself did not know for how long she stayed there crying and praying to her Babaji to save her. After an hour or so though, some sanity returned as she examined her torn clothes and scratched body parts.

Kaliyug Ki Sita Ki Uljhan
Mat Pooch Mere Man Bairaagi

Jeevan Bhar Ka Banwaas Liya
Woh Ram Ke Ghar Ko Bhi Tyagi
Kaliyug Ki Sita Ki Uljhan

Meanwhile Rahul cleaned up the mess inside the conference room and came out trying to find her. Frustrated with himself at letting her go he walked into his cabin angrily. But he was so cocky that he still had no fear.

"Kya kar legi…zayda se zayda bhag jayegi. She also knows ki woh mera kuch nahi bigad sakti."

He frowned as suddenly as Maan called for a status meeting but he somehow managed and told Maan that Geet left early again as she was still not well.

Maan though worried and now very restless had to do with the reason given and continued the meeting.

Precap – Koi Yeh Kaise Bataye

Note:

Guys please have patience and this was last of the Rahul-Geet confrontation. Most of you wanted a strong Geet. Well she did realize and tried to manage the situation by talking to him first. Maybe not too well but I found this a realistic approach.

She also successfully fought him and did not give into his assault.

Rahul will be dealt with but the situation I have tried to portray is of a powerful boss over a junior employee. So give me some time (another two updates) for Rahul's punishment.

Thanks,

Ritzy

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Posted: 12 years ago
that is one horrifice nightmare for any woman employee...keen to see how rahul is dealt with ,
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Posted: 12 years ago
This rahul 😡
can't wait for his doom
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

just want tat rahuI t0 be punished
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Posted: 12 years ago
yup... waiting for Rahul's punishment.. Geet's reactions were perfect..
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES
sooo sorry for late comment di...
i was getting held up everytime...
even while updating pari...i was being held up!!!!😡

ok..update was sooo gud..actually so intriguing that it felt quite short!!! aur lamba dena tha na..
and rahul the rascal..aa gaya na apni aukat pe... kamina...
tere pitne ke din aa rahe hain bacha... tujhe pata nahi kisse panga le raha hain tu!!!

am proud of geet today...pichle update mein meine bataya nahi tha but i still wished geet to be at least a little strong..and aaj wo dikha mujhe...am so glad that she at least tried to save herself and just not cry tht!!!!!!!!
and maan ke dimaag ki ghanti baji...ab rahul ke bache...tu kisi aur ko ab kaise kiss karta hain... ab mein dekhti hun!!!!!!!

plsss jaldi se ek aur update de do dii..
excitement to give him left ryt centre and black and blue aur control nai ho raha..me going to get chabuk and a badi si beent... laaton ke bhoot baaton se nahi maante na~!!!😉😈


Edited by kawaii_geet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ritzy, beautiful... My first impression was that the update got over even before it started. i don't know if it is because it was such a captivating one that I had no idea about how time passed, or it was a short update. In either case, I realize that I am being overly demanding in asking for anything more. So, bravo... great job indeed.

I agree with you, this approach of Geet's is more realistic and believable.

I know that now, a lot of us will want her to be discovered by Maan in her present state and she will hence reveal to him about the treatment she is being meted with (or something in those lines). However, I believe it will be more realistic if she is found in her current state by Pinky (or any other female employee) and they inturn encourage her to share or share it themselves with Maan this bit of information. It may be unrealistic if Geet talks to Maan about this directly given her background... that is just my opinion. I will read the story no matter what course it takes. I am already mesmerized by it...

Again, great job...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
what is going to happend next in your story
thanks for the pm

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