A Little Explanation
So I finally managed to catch up on all the comments, and just wanted to thank you guys SO much for the time you took out to write what you felt. Really, I'm not sure I would have continued this story, had the response been so nice to read 😊. Thank you guys, for the time you took out to criticise, debate and read the story. A BIG Hug to you all. 🤗
There seems to be some sort of confusion about Khushi's depiction, so allow me to clear that-
Khushi is a person with so many layers and facets to herself, that sometimes she confuses me too! There were questions about how Khushi was a carefree soul, with no concerns in the world except what would happen of her vintage chanel dress. She is, as somebody put it, depicted as a bimbo.
In the second chapter, we see an entirely new side to Khushi, the one where she won't stop at anything to get what she wants. "A letter bomb waiting to be opened" to quote the chapter in question.
In the precap, we saw how Khushi is just walking in the moonlight, before she has an accident.
The three excerpts showed three ASPECTS to Khushi. I have a strong dislike of single dimension characters, with people behaving in just black and white. If humans are grey, why can't our characters? Describing Khushi in one line, or as a single trait, would be an insult to the people she is based on (Now because I cannot resist. Khushi is based on three different people, on of them being ME 😆)
So long story short - Khushi is the girl who will party her nights away. She is also the girl who will singlehandedly bankrupt your MNC. She also happens to be someone who likes to walk when the night is beautiful. All these things, they are a part of who she actually is.
I hope I made sense.
-Vee
*back to books*
Edited by V323 - 12 years ago
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