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Posted: 12 years ago
A Little Explanation

So I finally managed to catch up on all the comments, and just wanted to thank you guys SO much for the time you took out to write what you felt. Really, I'm not sure I would have continued this story, had the response been so nice to read 😊. Thank you guys, for the time you took out to criticise, debate and read the story. A BIG Hug to you all. 🤗

There seems to be some sort of confusion about Khushi's depiction, so allow me to clear that-
Khushi is a person with so many layers and facets to herself, that sometimes she confuses me too! There were questions about how Khushi was a carefree soul, with no concerns in the world except what would happen of her vintage chanel dress. She is, as somebody put it, depicted as a bimbo.
In the second chapter, we see an entirely new side to Khushi, the one where she won't stop at anything to get what she wants. "A letter bomb waiting to be opened" to quote the chapter in question.
In the precap, we saw how Khushi is just walking in the moonlight, before she has an accident.
The three excerpts showed three ASPECTS to Khushi. I have a strong dislike of single dimension characters, with people behaving in just black and white. If humans are grey, why can't our characters? Describing Khushi in one line, or as a single trait, would be an insult to the people she is based on (Now because I cannot resist. Khushi is based on three different people, on of them being ME 😆)
So long story short - Khushi is the girl who will party her nights away. She is also the girl who will singlehandedly bankrupt your MNC. She also happens to be someone who likes to walk when the night is beautiful. All these things, they are a part of who she actually is.
I hope I made sense.
-Vee
*back to books*
Edited by V323 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Also - I never really thanked the people who liked the chapters so here goes -
For chapter 1
tweeter13, Lovenall, Armela, bhambari, sangeeta230811, 1sarunfan, MinYoung, ssttuuttii, Mcoyz, chloe-ipkknd, sweet_sanju, gurukhush, ranukamakshi, gata, pri3love, Frida, kashev, bungeejump, Khushixoxo, penguin143, meem17, sumali, christmas, DropofDew, _disha_, anumadduri, disha7, annieK, masam, craziefan, FAYKHAN29, random94, dreamymaya, vandana73, khushiiXOXO, Arshiluvu27, jessjazz, Kavita1000, TRND86, avantika_2012, sj_arhi, hashey, Rimz_k09, Polkadots78, SS88, samirao, khusiarnav, aneelovesarshi, --Archana--, Shweta1691, guturgutur, moomin4455, sini1234, Psychedelic, IPKKNDkaur92, medha16, annab, Japonica, emistry, sweetvanie, Anamika100, LoveBS, meera06, Nici0306, ..SSNAIR.., seeta_naips, fffan123, raomedhz, summaiyasayed, -happilyunknown, Suchi.R, Krishnaluv94, -Grace-, --Amy--, yappingduck,
For Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Thank you guys! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW.

My jaw was literally dropped at Arnav's remark about his potential step mothers! LOL

And Akash blushing and all? what can one expect from this right hand man lol but I'm liking his character, it would be quite useful in the upcoming updates.

Love how Khushi isnt a bechari in this one would hate to see women like that at all.

Thanks for the e-mail :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Comment edited Pg 15 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey, all the best for your exams!

Finally caught up with this story - we, humans, are made up of different moods and facets. Loving the 3D of Khushi. Hope she makes it out of the accident unscathed.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey V!
nice concept.
your khushi has a lot of potential.
a partying girl who can bankrupt a MNC, who walks on the road on a moonlit night and not to mention makes pancakes for her father.
arnav is interesting but you haven't delved much into him yet.
i feel this story will be one
hell of a journey!
and i'm gonna see it through .
😊
all the best for your exams.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I truly love the way your Khushi has been depicted...You are right...characters should not just have a black & white shade...the grey's are equally important and dispersed in the right manner give more depth and dimension to the character...looking forward to more of this awesome FF!!
xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was an awesome update dear
u shwd so many diff layers of kushi
but towards d end u just blew it *accident*
she met with an accident that was just mindnumbing
cant wait for the nxt one bt i knw will hv to wait
ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAMS
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the explanation , I really like khushis character , I don't know why , I hope after the accident she is fine , very interesting and awesome ff , lz m me next time , thanks in advance and continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Completely amazing.. Im already in love with this FF..❤️

And I so love ur sig dabba.. Hawww...


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