Os: based on my perdiction for monday Part2 update

Asalam alikum asya lovers. Today for the first time I fell like writing an OS and that to only for asya. As it is my very first one please ignore any grammar mistakes. It is continuing after the song sequence is over. I hope you guys like it and please do leave your views behind for me to know whether you liked it or not.

Part # 1

Asya entered their room and Asad closed the door behind them.

Zoya: ye kya kiya ap ne?

Asad stayed silent

Zoya: main ap se kuch poch rahi ho Mr. khan, meri bat ka jawab deje?

Asad: shayad ap bhool rahi hai ke hamare peche gunde lage hue hai ur agar unho ne ham dono ko galti se bhi dekh liya to hame dor se hi goli mar dege.

Zoya: oh I see.

Just then Asad hard a jeep stop near by.

Asad: lagta hai who log wapis a gai hai.

Zoya: kya! Ab ham kya kare ge Mr. khan?

Without answering Zoya, Asad dragged her along with himself.

Asad: window se bahar jaiye.

Zoya: lekin Mr. Khan main?

Asad: jaisa main ke raha ho wesa kije warna who log hame pakar lege.

Zoya did as want Asad had ordered her to do and Asad also did the same.

Both Asad and Zoya ran as fast as they could in order to escape and when the at the main gate of the dhabba, lights of the jeep standing in front of the dhabba opened up. Both Asad and Zoya were shocked and knew that they were caught.

Goon: bohot bhag liye shaheri babu apni is shaheri mam ke saath.

Goons: hahahahahahahahahahahaha

The goons laugher made Asad angry as they were laughing on their helplessness.

Asad: itna mat haso ke baad main itni hi rona pare.

Goon: kyu, tu ruliye ga hame? Hahahahahaha.

Just then Asad kicked him in the face which was unexpected for everyone.

Asad: socha to yahi hai.

Goon: aaahhh! ( went towards Asad and Zoya with a sward in his hand)

Goon's master: ruk jao! Hame is larke se koi lena dena nai hai, marna to us larki ko hai jis ne dulhan ko bhagaya hai. Is larke ko pit pit ke chor dena, lekin ye larki mujhe pari hui chahiye.

The goon's master left the place after saying his demand of killing Zoya off.

As the the goons were advancing towards asya, Zoya was terribly scared and was shaking in fear. Asad knew that she was scared and so he turned around and held Zoya with both of his hands and said

Asad: jab tak main zindha ho, main tumhe kuch nai hone doga.

Zoya: le'lekin Mr. Khan?

Asad: ssshhh''

Eye look scene between asya when one of the goon was running into them. Asad sensed it and so pushed Zoya. Zoya closed her eyes in fear and when she opened it later, she noticed that her hand was no longer attached to Asad's hand as when the goon was coming to attack Zoya, Asad had pushed her and the goon broke off the handchief instead.

Zoya looked at Asad while he fought the goons. Zoya knew that Asad would not be able to handle all of them and so decided that she would offer herself to them and in return will ask then to let Asad go. She knew that Asad will never let that happened but she has to do this in order to save him.

To be continued

Hii! U have no idea how thankful I am to u to have written this!! I am like literally dying of waiting for Monday.. I am honestly ADDICTED to qubool hai .. More importantly ASYA... I needed something on them... Sbs,os, anything... So thnx a million! Lol... And most importantly... LOVED IT !! I like that it sounds kinda realistic and it's a continuation from yesterday.. Please update fast!!

Quite realistic. Could very well be their script for Monday!

Thank you so much for liking it, i was not going to finish it until tomorrow but seeing your reaction and reading your comments i decided to finish it off.

Part # 2

Zoya: ruk gaiye

all stoped and looked at zoya

Zoya: ap logo ko mujse matlab hai na, to main ap logo ke saath chalne ke liye tayar ho, lekin meri ek shart hai.

Asad looked at Zoya with horrified exprection. He knew Zoya was crazy but this much, he did not know.

Asad: ye kya kar rahi hai ap miss. faroogi?

Goon: chup kar, bolne de use.

Asad looked on angryly

Zoya: meri ye shart hai ke main ap ke saath chalo lekin ap ko mr. khan ko chorna pare ga.

Asad: nai, asa mat karna warna!

Goon: warna kya han?

Zoya: lekin meri ek ur shart hai.

Goon: ab kya hai?

Zoya: agar ap ko muje marna hai to pehele ap logo ko mr. khan ko pakarke rakna hoga, warna woh mujhe kuch nai hone dege.

Goon: thik hai, teri ye shart bhi qubool hai.

The goons got hold of Asad and placed their swerd right underneth his chin.

Asad: nai zoya tum aisa nai kar sakti, main tumhe kuch nahi hone donga.

This was the first time Asad had addressed Zoya by her name and also the first time he said tum to her instead of app. Zoya felt apna pan from him saying this and turned around because she could not see Asad so helpless.

Goon: apni ko akhri khuaish nai batai gi larki.

Zoya turned around and looked at Asad.

Zoya: han, meri akhari khuaish ye hai ke main Asad ko woh wajah batao jis ki waja se hum dono aj yaha phas gai hai.

Zoya narrated the whole story about Mariyam and the incident that happened with her. Asad was surprised to hear all this and also felt guilty about not trusting Zoya.

Both Asad and Zoya were lost in each other when the goon interrupted

Goon: bas bohat hua, ab subha hone se hame tujhe marna hoga . ab chal.

the goon grapped Zoya by her arm and dragged her to the place where his fellow goons had digged up a hole in the ground while Zoya had narrated her story.

Asad: chorde use warna main tujhe nai choru ga!

the goon just ignored Asad.

Just then one of the goon hit Zoya on the head so hard that she fainted and fell into the hole.

Asad: Zoya!!!!!!!!

Goon: cholo ab mati dalna churu karo isse pehle koi ajai, itne main is ko samhalta ho.

Asad with all his strength throw all the goons that were holding onto him on the ground. and went straight to the goon that had hit Zoya on the head.

Asad: nai chora ga, kaha tha na nai choro ga!

Asad fought with all the goons and later when the goon that had dragged Zoya thought that Zoya must be dead by now signaled his mens to get back onto the jeep and lets go. All of them ran to the jeep and left.

Asad immediately went to place were they had buried Zoya and started digging with his hand.

Asad: main tumhe kuch nai hone donga Zoya, kuch nai.

Asad had finally succeed in getting Zoya out of the hole.

Asad: Zoya akhee kholo Zoya, Please

Zoya did not answer

Asad: please Zoya please akhee kholo

Asad took Zoya's hand in his hand and started to rub it.

Asad: Ya ALLAH meri madad kije please

Just after 2 seconds, it had started rainning.

Asad closed his eyes and stared to cry louder. Just then Zoya opened her eyes and saw that Asad was crying.

Zoya: Asad app kyo ro rahe hai?

Asad opened his eyes and took a sign of relief.

Asad: woh, woh mujhe laga ke...

Zoya: k main margai, right?

Asad: shut up Zoya, ur kya zarorat thi ye shart rakhne ki han?

Zoya: woh main ne socha ke...

Asad: jo socha woh kiya, lekin aj ke bad aisa na hi socna ur karna. ab chalo warna hum dono ko thund lag jai gi.

Zoya: hmm.

Asad lifted Zoya in his arms and carried her inside the dhabba.

The End

I hope that you guys liked it and please do share your views.

Oh. My. God.
Amazayn.
That's what it is <3
Could you, maybe like, continue?
Please!!!!
And amazing story love, have I told that you need to continue?

I liked part 2 as well. I can see this happening. My only suggestion is that right after Asad saves Zoya she should be unconscious. The last conversation they have is better served the next morning when she is conscious and feeling better. Please continue!

That was really cute.. Great Job

sooo goood...

Irs great lets see wht hapnd in serial.

its so awesome lols. loved it

keep writing more