MG FF: Silent Love pt 4 pg 62 21/03 - Page 40

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Superbly written! Maan wants to meet Geet! Pari is a wonderful friend n Geet is amazing bubbly person! Maan knws tht she cannot speak! Update soon! Pls update Ajab n Rishtey! Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superrb!!
Loving maan's gang :) nd pari -geet's bonding :)
geet is sooo sweet :)
plzz do continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
so geet is the one who cant speak
and pari worries about geet
maan and gang are impressed with geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 2
awesome part...
cont soon dear...
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Hope for an update...
Will u...?????

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Awesme update darling
Finally geet ki entry hogayi wo bhi superb
hayee maan was fida already on geetu wow she's dance teacher n wnt take any remuneration
she's kind at heart n maanu fida over that quality..u didnt gve precap grr
cnt sn darling
sowwie for late reply
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



Hope for an update...
Will u...?????


sorry for late dear, will update today for sure 😊
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Updating tonight, sorry for late update caught up with work.
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Chapter 3:



Strangely whole day maan kept thinking about geet, he thought he and his gang has to request her for the performance but here she agreed so easily. He liked her simplicity and her courage to fight with the world. "Interesting girl" thought maan and continued his work in the hospital. Here geet is done with her class and is waiting for pari in the garden.

"Geet" called pari. Geet turned back and asked what? Indicating with her hands.

"Come here" called pari again.

Geet lazily went towards pari. "Are you free today?" asked pari. Geet though for a while and nodded for a yes.

"Then we will go for dinner outside" told pari making cute face.

Geet glared at her for a second and smiled at her. "Awww I love you geet" told pari and hugged her.

"chalo we will go home" told pari. Geet nodded for a yes and both went near her bike.

"Geet I will drive today" asked pari. Geet nodded for a no.

"Please geet" requested pari again but geet is stubborn. She started the bike and signaled her to sit in the back. Pari made a grumpy face and sat back.

They both drove to their house. Geet is all exhausted today, first classes in the school and then in orphanage. She fell on the sofa with a thud. Pari looked at her asking what happened? Geet patted her stomach making sad face.

"Go and cook something" told pari. Geet made a baby face holding her chin asking please you do it.

"No no no you do it for today" told pari. Geet went near pari and signaled "I will allow you to drive my bike tomorrow"

"Ahaaa really" asked pari smirking. Geet nodded for a yes vigourously. "Ok tell me what you want" asked pari.

"Anything" signaled geet. "Noodles" asked pari. Geet nodded for a yes. They both freshened up and prepared food. Pari, a best friend of geet. geet has no one in her life except pari, who is like her best friend and sister. They both met in orphanage when they were 2 years old. From that day they were together as a strength for each other.

From childhood geet is interested in dance, pari studied medicine and is now joining as a intern in ****** hospital, the same hospital where maan and his gang are working. Pari is very caring about geet. Pari knows many people will pity geet, which she hates the most. That's the reason pari is always worried about geet. she prays to god to send a understanding life partner in geet's life.

(Geet's dialogues will be in pink, all her dialogues will be her signaling)

"Geet I am very nervous. I should join hospital tomorrow" told pari nervously. Geet placed her hand on pari's shoulder. Pari looked at geet.

"Don't worry everything will be fine. Just have trust on babaji"

Pari smiled and hugged geet. "Geet, what might have happened to me if you are not there with me" told pari emotionally.

Geet slapped on pari's head and asked her to keep quiet.

"If you talk all this rubbish then I wont talk to you" told geet and immediately smiled sadly. "Anyways I cant talk"

"Shut up geet if you tell all this rubbish again, I wont talk to you" warned pari. Geet held her ears making sorry face.

"Ok chalo, I am sleepy" told pari. Geet and pari left to their respective rooms and slept. But for geet sleep is very far away from her. she is tossing on the bed looking at the ceiling. She thought all the things happened today and a small smile formed on her lips. She hugged her pillow tight and slept.

Its late evening both pari and geet got up, they as usual watching tv talking all the things. Later they got ready to go out for a dinner.

Here maan and his gang completed their work and decided to hang out. As all the 4 are hungry, they decided to go to dhabato have something. What a coincidence both geet and maan landed in the same dhaba but still didn't see each other. For maan's gang this is first time in this dhaba where as for geet and pari its their usual hang out place. Geet and pari took their seats and waiting for their order. While maan and his gang parked their cars and are coming inside.

They are looking for a empty place but ritz eyes caught geet and pari.

"Hey pari, hey geet" wished ritz. They both stood up seeing them.

"Hii ma'am, hii sirs" wished pari while geet smiled. All the 6 took their seats. All of them ordered their food and are talking. Doctors gang is talking non-stop while pari and geet are just listening to them.

"Geetji can I tell you something?" asked armaan. Geet looked at him and nodded for a yes.

"You are looking beautiful" told armaan. Maan and karan looked at him shocked and rolled their eyes and are ready to see their fight now. before Ritz react and sweet yet dangerous voice came.

"Oyyy" someone shouted. All the 6 turned their heads towards the source of the "oyyy". There comes a cute little boy around 6 years placing his hands on his hips and looking at armaan angrily. That boy came towards armaan and extended his hands signaling him to take him in his arms. Armaan looked at him confused but took that boy in his arms. But soon he screamed in pain.

"Ouchhh" that boy pinched amy's nose hardly. "Oyyy main geetu ka boy friend hu and sirf I have right to say her beautiful" told the little boy so ever cutely that except geet and armaan all of them burst into laughter. Ritz is having very hard time to control her laughter. Geet stood up and took that boy from armaan. She kissed his cheek and made him sit on her lap. Geet looked at armaan with a sorry face for which he only smiled. But that boy is glaring at amy with anger. Poor amy is scared of small boy. That boy is talking and talking and talking with geet. he is telling each and everything to her while geet is listening to him. she is smiling sometimes, she is pouting some times.

"Ufff bas bhi karo yaar, how much you talk" told pari annoyingly. But the little boy didn't give any heed to pari he continued his talking with geet. finally their dinner completed.

"Oyy mere geetu ke paas mat jana" warned that boy to amy and he nodded like a obedient child. "Acha geetu main chalta hu, mama is calling me" told that boy and ran from there. "Such a cute boy" smiled ritz.

Karan is looking at pari lost, but he observed she is worried about something.

"Pariji, you are looking tensed, is there any problem?" asked karan. Maan naughtily smiled at him.

"No no nothing karan ji" told pari and smiled weakly.

"Arey yaar, we all are friends now. friends?" asked ritz extending her hand. Geet looked at pari, so as she. They smiled at ritz and shook hands with her and all followed.

"So welcome to our crazy group geet and pari" welcomed maan, they both smiled at him.

"Now tell pari why you are looking tensed?" asked ritz.

"Wo kal actually tomorrow is my first day in hospital so I am tensed" told pari, geet slapped her head at her friend. She is still thinking of that.

"Ohh yaar, don't worry its common" told ritz.

"By the way which hospital?" asked maan.

"********* hospital" told pari.

"WHAT????" they all shouted in unison. Pari looked at them with wide eyes.

"Then pari ji, no need to be tensed we all are there with you" told karan.

"Ohh yes pari we are also working in same hospital. Don't worry dear" told ritz. Geet smiled at them and for their support. Geet always felt bad that she cant do anything for pari, she even cant support her verbally. But seeing them she felt happy and contended. Geet liked her new friends.

Precap: Maneet in beach..



Hii friends, part 3 is up. Hope you all like it.

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Edited by jyooo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update

Geet blackmailing Pari to cook lunch

Dhaba scene was superb

Now Maan n gangs became frnds of Geet n Pari

Geet is happy tht Pari will worked in Maan n his gang hosp

Waiting for next maaneet meet

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