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Posted: 12 years ago
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i have read Vivah which is an awesome story. i truly sincerely loved it and i can read it again and again. through this thread i came across Till death do us part and i really loved it. plz continue writing and giving us such lovely stories to read
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Posted: 12 years ago
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vivah is a wonderful ff .i hve ever read.really its a beautiful stry of maaneet almost so close to reality + geet showed her faith in maan ! totally awesme . i was shattered whn it ended as i wanted more bt happy tht u writng winter sonata .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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she is truly amazing writer...i read vivah first n loved it n den read till death do us apart thoroughly enjoyed it...now loving winter sonata...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have read Vivah.. but not till death can do us apart... But will suely read it...Liked her writing style...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Ritzy is an awesum writer! She is grown frm her first FF till death! She is creative n talented! she bring the characters to life! all her stories r different 👏⭐️😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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vivah is my all time favorite...
loving ritzy's reading so much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I started with till death does us part and then to vivah.
I know, i have told you a lot of time before but you are awsome. Whenever you update, I literally leave all my work and start to read. I lost count on how many times I missed my bus to uni as I was glued to the laptop...
Now that this appreciation thread is opened, I find it only right to leave a detailed comment:

Till death does us part:
What I liked:
The story was refreshing and new. Every character was given a role and you played it all very well. There were ups and downs but I never felt like closing my eyes and skipping an update. You story also proceeds well in plot and then it ends when it should. I know it is sad for a story to end, especially if it was phantastic but pulling a story longer than necessary just ruins it.
What I disliked:
Hardly anything actually, all was positive!!!

Vivah:
What I liked:
A completely new story to me as I hadn't seen the movie. So different from your first work yet it had that something that was just you! Geet and Maan's journey was the focus but I loved how you also brought in others like Dev-Meera and Rahul. It made the updates refreshing and not at all monotonous.
What I disliked:
I think, at a time the plot was going a tiny bit too slow but then you managed it well with filler updates.

Winter Sonata:
What I like:
Again, another plot and different from what you worte previously. It may resemble many other FF's as it starts similarly to the actual serial but you put in your flavour and it becomes special. This time, you are trying to give us a message, for some maybe irrelevant but I appreciate it a lot. Not because I suffer from similar but because it makes us readers realise what is gonig around us and makes us think.
What I dislike:
Nothing 😛


Overall: I love that you have a readable format and colour the updates. It is not overdone and makes it easier for us to read. Great!!!

If I wrote something, that hurt you, please forgive me. I just thought, at some point every writer wants to know where his/her strong and weak points are and maybe this was the right medium to tell...

Love
Mina



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