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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Mdworld

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

**CREDIT FOR BANNER@--Rashu-- **

guys this has been made by 26_chaitra...thank u so much dear!!!!🤗
i seriously cant tell you how i felt with your efforts for this ff...👏

😡WARNING: DO READ THIS!!!!😡

how can you guys misinterpret maan...it was not his fault...those girls were not letting him go...also geet doesnot love maan...she just was not happy coz he made her wait...she loves him as a friend and can nt deny whatever he asks for...
guys...there s gonna be a big twist but hat will maske you meet our not so friendly maan...the maan you guys love...
RK s not bad...der s no villain in my story...]
am planning to write an os...my first try...what say...
AM FINALLY CHANGING MAAN'S PIC IN CHARACTER SKETCH!!!!

**PART 8**

here as maan got free he rushed out and saw there was no geet...
he tried calling her but her phone was switched off...
he looked at the time...damn...how can be so irresponsible...
how would have she gone back today...he worried...
he thought off going to her place...
aj to bahut gussa hogi...he smiled...
as he turned to leave...yash pulled him and asked him to join
his other friends at disc for a party...
he was reluctant but then accepted...

THERE IN DISC...HE KEPT TRYING HER NO...BUT IT WAS SWITCHED OFF...
NEXT DAY...
he woke up...it was 10...
oh gosh am so late ....he thought
he got ready...he looked at time...
it was 11...geet would have reached college ...he thought...
he saw his mobile but there was no missed call...
he rushed to college...
as he was about to enter his college...
but then thought of geet...he went to her college...

he entered and went towards her classroom...
he saw meera sitting alone...
he messaged her...where s geet???
meera:didn't come to college today!!!
maan:what ?? but she never takes of!!!did you talk to her??
Meera:no..she s not picking up the phone!!!!
maan:dont worry...i am calling Rano maa...
meera: do inform me when you come to know...
maan:😊

maan called rano...
Rano:hello...han beta...
Maan:maa...why has not geet come today???
she s she not picking up the phone???
Rano:beta...its her father's death anniversary...she wont talk to
anyone today!!!
Maan:oh...maa u fine???
Rano:beat...tum geet ka khayal rakho...
Maan...maa...am asking about you!!!
Rano:beta she s alone at home...when ever free...do meet her...
she would be feeling lonely...
Maan:ok maa..i will meet her...ap apna bhi kyal rakhiye!!!
Rano: hmm...

after talking to her Maan messaged meera...and went to geet's place...
he rang the bell...
geet came with a gloomy face ...she opened the door
and without uttering a word...she went and sat on the couch
that was kept in main hall...her fathers pic was just in front of her...
just then maan came and sat besides her...
she wiped her tears off...took her handkerchief that was kept besides her
and wiped her nose...

waise thanx for the makeover...he initiated the conversation...
hun...she was startled...
wo i got so much attention...he smirked...
i could see your female fan following...
someone s being jealous....he commented...
why would i be jealous!!! she retorted...
when did i say you are jealous??? he teased...
maan am not jealous yr...it was just i waited for about an hour
and you were busy with those bimbos!!! she complained...
arrey i tried coming...no one s more important to me than you !!!!
its just am so irresistible!!! he winkled

acha!!! and she started punching him with her tiny fists...
she took the cushion that was kept aside...and started beating him with it...
geet...arrey am sorry.....he tried ...but no use!!!
but no effect...no use...she was continuously beating him...
he snatched the pillow...but she kept punching him...
he understood that she was letting her frustration out...
he stopped his protests and let her do whatever she was!!!
she stopped as she became tired and sat besides him...
bahut miss kr rahi ho??? holding on her shoulder as she laid her head
on his shoulder...
hmm...she finally let her unshed tears come out...
he let her cry ...till she felt like...he kept caressing her head...

she hid her face in his chest and cried her heart out...
he patted her...
after sometime her sobs subsided...
Maan i loved him like anything...
pta hai...unki to jaan basti thi mujhme!!!
he smiled...but didn't utter anything...
he wanted her to let her bottled up emotions flow out...
i can not love anyone else...
the amount of pain i got when i lost him...i can never go through it again...
Maan...i can not let my heart love anyone else...
it only gives pain maan...
she spoke...

geet why do you think that all pepole you love would leave you???
geet you know how much your faher wouldbe upset looking at you like this...
geet he loves you more than anything...
dont make him upset now...
and waise bi if you cant love others but let them love you...
its not in our hands to hands wheather to ;love someone or not!!!
geet just flow with life...never restrict yourself...
she nodded...

oho...ek din me itna change...i only did your makeover but ye sab...
she spoke looking up from his chest...
ab hum hai hi aisi cheez...he winked...😉
both of them broke into laughter...
maan stopped first...but had a smile on his face...
she was so near to him...
also she was back to normal!!!!
gradually her laughter subsided and she noticed how close were they...
she then noticed him staring at her intently...

she stopped and looked into his eyes...
there was something else...
she always saw warmth and strength...
but today it was different...
it was something she never wanted it to be...
she understood what it was but still was trying to neglect it...
how can this be possible...
she was in trance and didn't realize that they were so close that
his warm breath was now falling on her lips...
she was lost in those eyes...
she didn't know when his lips touched her...
she just closed her eyes as she felt his warm lips...

he kissed the corner of her lips...
he noticed her closing her eyes...
he very softly nibbled her lower lip...
and took both her lips and kissed her softly...
his hands went to her waist and pulled her to him...
she gasped and opened her mouth ...
she was if spellbound...she just kept in flow with him...
he plunged his tongue inside her mouth...
and it turned more passionate...
he started exploring each and every corner of her mouth...
pulling her more as if it was possible...
he held onto her head and angled it so that he could
have more acess..it was out of the world sort of feeling...

kissing the person you love the most...
can there be something more beautiful than this??? he thought...
just as she felt his tongue stroking inside her mouth...
she moaned with pleasure...maan...
just then she stopped and opened her eyes...
what was she upto??? and that too with maan...her best buddy...
how can she spoil his life....she thought...
she saw her hands that were clutching on to his shoulders...
she pushed him with all her might...
she got up and turned around as if showing her back...

maan came to his senses as he felt her pushing him...
oh god what did i do????
he moved his fingers through his hair frustratingly...
look geet am sorry...
i can explain....he tried...
maan...jao yahan se....she told...
geet just listen to me...am sorry...
maan didn't you hear me...jao....she spoke with finality...
he went near her and held her shoulders...
she snapped and moved forward...
maan ...it was a mistake and was not only you mistake...was mine to...
geet but....
maan enough...GET OUT RIGHT NOW!!! she raised her voice...
leaving with no other option...maan left...
as he left...geet slammed the door close and fell on her knees crying...

what did i do???
i don't have feelings for him!!!! i can never love him...
he s my b est buddy...i can not spoil this relation with him...
he s my special friend...usne aj tak jo manga maine diya...
even now i can never say him no...
but aj jo maine uski ankhon me dekha...wo kuch aur tha...
i can not let him have feelings for me...
i wont be able to say him no...please papa...
help me...ye kahan phas gai mai...she cried helplessly...

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precap: prom night...🥳

# guys...got its super cold in delhi...its freezing...and i have to go colg early morning😭...am sneezing so badly...

PREVIOUS:PART 7

NEXT:PART 9
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Edited by Mdworld - 12 years ago

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Mishu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

awesome update...
loved it so much!!!

Edited by -Mishu- - 12 years ago

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Awesome Update...Loved it..Maaneet Convo ws Superb
OMG!! their frist kiss😳..but why Geet said...i wont be able to say him no
is she love someone?😲
waiting for prom night😉 continue super soon
Thankx for pm

Edited by Gcs-girl - 12 years ago

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

amazing update dear

precap is more interesting

thanx for the pm dear

cont soon

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Shraddha Sinari

@SHRADDHA2102

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Such a superb update... Dono madhoshi me kho kar ye kya kar gaye (as 4 geet it ws mistake n maan it was bless moment lol...)
but why geet is nt letting dis beautiful feeling 2 cum out...???