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Posted: 12 years ago
Super awesome meeting of maaneet...loved it continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Will be updating today, dont know at what time.. but will surely update today 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update. finally Milan hohi gayaaa...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow, what a lovely update. It had almost a etheral feel to how they met, hugged and almost cribbed abd loved each other through eyes...
It actually left me in a dreamy state wanting more of their hug, thier talks, roothna-manana...just there me, my time on which I can drool more and more and just rever in the chemistry and love which has made so many of us crazy...
Loved the whole sequence...and please request you to make next update also about them...they haven't talk for so long so there must be so much to share...hai na
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 25


Makara Sankranti Shubhashayagalu




Sankranti Shubhakankshalu

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This Update is dedicated to the Birthday Girl SIA.. Hey sia, wish you many more happy returns of the day sweety. Hope all your wishes come true.



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"Kyun kiya tumne aisa? Kyun??" cried geet beating him. Maan's heart pained seeing her cry. He allowed to do whatever she want, but saw his surrounding. Though the corridor is empty, but students are there. He has no other option to stop her. He held her both hands but geet is wriggling to get out of his grip and beat him. "Why you did like that??" geet again started. Maan placed his finger on her lips. "CHUP BILKUL CHUP"

Geet immediately stopped her blabbering, looked at maan with a serious expression, but soon it changed into a slight smile hearing his favorite dialogue. That remembered her their childhood days when she use to crib him for everything and he saying chup bilkul chup also fulfilling her every small wish. What should she say about maan, a friend who cares for her, a supporting hand in each and every phase of her life. Be it in India or in London. He use to take care of her each and every need. Geet is nothing without and same goes with maan, maan is nothing without geet. Maan and geet are nothing without each other. Many friend s entered in their life but none took each others place in their heart. Remembering all those moments spent with maan, geet felt emotional.

She use to cherish their moments alone till today but now he is infront of her. words are not coming out of her mouth, she is happy, emotional, worried and tensed. She truly didn't expect maan here, for a second she forgot that the university has both architecture and medicine in the same building. "what are you doing here?" asked geet.

Maan is silent, he is observing her each and every face expression, first she was happy, suddenly she became emotional, maan wanted to comfort her but stopped himself. He want her to take out all her pain. but then she is worried, and then tensed. Maan is confused why she is worried? Is she not happy seeing him here? Was the question arised in his mind. But her question made him chuckled. "She is same, she can never change at least in front on me" thought maan and smiled.

Geet got angry seeing his smile. "He always loves to irritate me, hai na babaji?" thought geet looking up. "Geet first stop complaining to babaji, second what will anyone do in the university? Of course study, I think I am right?" questioned maan innocently. "Joke na, very bad. You are a medical student and don't tell me you are studying both at the same time" told geet, is she really making sense. Maan checked her forehead and confirmed that she is fine. "Geet did you take any medicine because of which your mind is not working?" asked maan. Geet gave her famous glare, "Geet, remember this Uni has both architecture and medicine?" told maan. it striked geet, she made a fool of herself. She looked at him foolishly. But soon the sudden fear engulfed in her, she is sure maan don't allow her to take the risky step to destroy Mohinder, she is waiting for perfect chance to take a step but maan is here. Will he support her or will stop her, is the main question eating her inside.

"Geet are you fine?" asked maan cupping her face. Concern and love for her can be seen in his eyes which she missed from ages. For once she forgot everything, everything which gives her pain. She hugged maan again. "I missed you, I missed you very much" told geet and was about to cry but maan didn't allow her. "Geet we will go home" told maan, geet didn't reply anything, she just stood there hugging maan tight. Maan at once looked back to see karan, who is in tears seeing his baby sister. How much he wanted to say he is her brother, but he cant. He cursed his fate for putting him in such a situation but he cant do anything other than accepting and facing the hatred of his sister.

On the other hand Abay is so happy seeing maan at the same time he is surprised too, yesterday he called telling geet's condition and today he is here. His respect for maan amplified and even came to know to what extent maan loves geet. He is happy seeing both of them. They decided to go to guest house rather than raichand's house. But abay and sam is in Uni decided to attend classes. Even maan's gang adi, karan and appu told they will come later. Maan nodded and took geet with him to guest house. As it is very near to Uni they decided to walk.

The walk was silent, both don't know what to talk. Meeting after 6 long years created a very different feeling in both of them. Within no time they reached guest house, they both entered into the hall. Geet is feeling finally she is at home, she can see the every inch of the house filled with love and care. She looked at the hall and a small smile formed on her lips. "I love you papa" thought geet. Every part of hall is as per her taste. Be it curtain color, flooring and even the selection of flower vase. Maan saw geet is lost exploring the hall.

Maan hugged geet from back and asked "Did you like it?" Geet leaned back closing her eyes. "I loved it" told geet. "This is for you, dad deigned every thing as per your choice" told maan. "I know my papa is best" told geet smiling. She turned to look at maan, but instead she hugged him tight. How much she missed his warmth, the peace she feel when she hug maan. Finally they are together again. Maan made geet sit on the couch. "I will bring something to eat" told maan and was about to get up but geet held his hand. Maan looked back, "Don't go leaving me alone" told geet.

He can feel the pain in her voice and eyes, maan closed his eyes feeling helpless. Maan obeyed her and settled beside her. Today, at this moment both are short of words which is happening first time in their life. Before full day was enough for them. Time changed everything. Geet rested her head on his shoulder. Her fresh tears fell on his hand making maan to come out of his reverie. He looked at geet at once making her face him. Tears from geet's eyes, which he hated the most. But today he is the reason of those tears made him hate himself.

"Mishty, I am so sorry. I know all this happened because of me. That day if I did not send you to London then you might happy with all of us. My decision was wrong geet, I made a mistake" told maan feeling guilty. "No maan, because of you I came to know the true colors of that man. If I didn't come here, then he might have cheated us for our whole life. Because of you I am here like this, if I am alive today that is just because of you. I tried to end my life that day maan, but I couldn't you know why?" geet took out some chain from her neck showing this to maan. "Remember this pendant maan, that day when I was in hospital you tied it to me" maan nodded for a yes. "This pendant stopped me that day maan, when I saw this pendant which rested on my heart I remembered only you maan. we promised each other that we will be there for each other no matter what" told geet smiled through tears.

Maan is just looking at her in awe, he is happy, over whelmed and hugged her tight, he want to shield her from this world, want to protect from every evil eye. Is she the same geet which he knew? She never thinks before she does and comes for help after doing everything. She is not the same innocent geet now, some things changed. Though the change is for good, but maan felt bad. Unknowingly his own tears are wetting his cheek. Both are emotional and happy. Their heart filled with mixed feelings. Maan came out of the hug and kissed her forehead.

Geet looked at him and frowned "Chi you are crying?" asked geet making a face at the same time wiping his tears. "Ha when my mishty talks all this then her maan too becomes emotional sometimes" told maan smiling at her face. Geet looked at him angrily and sat on the couch making a grumpy face. "Now what happened?" asked maan sitting beside her.

"Waise, I am angry on you for sending me to London so you have to manofy me" told geet. "Hey this is cheating ha when I told sorry you told because you I am here maan and etc etc and now you are saying you are angry on me" asked maan pouting. "Ha sahi kaha na, because of you I am here na" retorted geet back. "Phir se pagal ho gayi hain" thought maan. "Ab madamji ki gussa ko thand karne ke liye kya karna hain?" told maan aloud acting like as if he is thinking deeply but looking at her from corner of his eyes. Geet's lips curved a little thinking her maan will do something for her but next second she is shocked.

"Waise geet kabhi kabhi tum pagal ho jati ho. And at present you are in that mode. And I am very much tired because of journey, so I need to take rest. Ab tumko mana program kal ke liye postpone karte hain" told maan stretching his hands and stood up to go to his room. Geet is shocked listening to him, she blocked his way placing her hands on her hips. "What??" asked maan. "You don't love me na? I know I know you don't love me. See babaji yeh maan bohot bada DHUSH DANAV ban gaya hain. I hate him babaji" complained geet looking up. Maan is just smiling looking at her cute face, this is his geet pouting at him, complaining to her babaji and mainly accusing that he doesn't love her. Awww how much he missed all these. Now his life will be interesting having his mishty around him.


Precap: Mujhe maan ka haalat dekha nahi jata.



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Ok friends, here is part 25. How is it?? 😕


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Chinni

Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
~~edited~~

first of all i m really really really sorry for commenting late
nd thank u for ur lovely wishes

now about update
hayyee i m totally fida on it
love it
the way maaneet fight after six
their cute complaining
everything was awesome

P.S from now onward my comment will be of one or two words
as i will be busy in cousins marraige then my tests will start nd after that in march my exams will start
so plz cooperate with 😊
Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update

finaIIy they met and shed their tears
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update
Loved the emotion meet between maaneet
Really loved the update
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awesome update
loved it

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