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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sukklover

u r done ...👏👏
4 ur awessome work...
me just ...😛
lots of


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky_5

Hey shafffuuu..

very nice update...😊
shriya is so cute... Yeah..she is really very cute
feeling bad for mayu...he is feeling so guilty yaar...😔 He feels guilty as he couldn't able to protect her ...
usko smile karwana plzzz... Don't worry.. ab to uske smile karne k din hain
very nice update...😊
waiting for next update...😳 Will Update soon
thanksss for the PM 😉



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ridzzi

very nice part...too good...

well very slowly but mayu's n shriya's relation is developing...
update soon...
luv u...😊



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Posted: 12 years ago
Here is my Next part...

Thank you so much for your love and support

@RePlied to all...


I hope you like it...
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Part 10 Page 56

Love Never Looses

Part 11

Shriya's P.O.V.

When I came with mamma to this weird place which is called hospital by everyone the person in the white coat said mamma is badly hurt and is sleeping that time I was feeling so lonely , my mamma was not waking up and no one was there with me I sat beside my mamma because I had promised her that I wont leave her side. I don't know when I fall asleep sitting besides her.After long time when I woke up because I was sleeping so uncomfortably and my back was paining due to this...

so..when I woke up from my deep slumber I saw a man holding my mamma's arm and was surprisingly looking towards me. I was actually get little bit scared seeing him what if he also like bad man'due to nervousness I couldn't able to say anything and hold my mamma's hand,he was giving his beautifull smile I liked his smiled it was same to same as mine but still I didn't said anything and infact pretend that I didn't noticed him what if he was also bad man I just hold my mamma's hand and kept waiting for her to wake up.

After sometime mamma opened her waked up.She slowly opened her eyes I think she still hurt that's why it was taking her time to open her eyes,she saw that man and then she looked at me I was so relived to get my mamma back.I whispered in her ears that the person sitting besides was also sitting there from quite long time and was holding her hand like I was,she looked at him and then I cuddled into her.

Then he said he will call doctors,Doctors came see something on paper and then left,I cuddled to my mamma and fall asleep from last 2 days me and my mamma haven't slept for a minute and having the warmth of my mamma I just fall asleep because I know my mamma is awake and she will now protect me from that bad man.


I woke up from my deep slumber and as soon I opened my eyes I saw him infront of my eyes'I got little bit scared but seeing my mamma besides me I relaxed,I asked mamma about him when sahe said he is my Dada..i couldn't able to believe my Dada was back I was waiting for him for so long he is back I kept on staring him because I still fears'

He ordered food for us and handed me a bowl of cereals'I mean seriously cereals'who in the earth love cereals I mean they are so tasteless'I gave a look to mamma and then to him..but since I was very hungry I ate it silently..After finishing my cereals I went upto my mamma and asked her that he is also like bad man but mamma says no'

I thought for a while to give him a chance and getting permission of drawing I went to the table and started my drawing.After sometime I was totally engrossed in my drawing and didn't even noticed what he was talking to mamma.

I don't know it's been how much I have been drawing when my mamma called me up saying now they are shifting to another room and asked me to pack my belongings.I packed my stuff and went to the other room with mama..i didn't shared any type of conversation with him,after reaching the room I again set to my drawing..!! Having a milk I laid down beside my mamma and soon fall sleep hugging her.


Next morning I opened my eyes to see my mamma besides me,I felt so secure in her arms,I felt so delightfull that she is near me'I greeted her Morning'when he also greeted me Good Morning ..flashing his sweet smile..i thought for a while then nodded my head accepting his greet..i wonder why I had done so'but then my heart says he is my Dada..to whom I was missing from so many years'!!!.

Then he said that he brought fruits and a dress for me'and gave me a packet and asked m to brush my teeth and to have a bath'I helplessly looked towards him..i wanted him to say that I don't have any toothbrush but still scared to tell him,,I just hope he could able to understand what I an trying to say.I must say she understood my each gesture'he gave be a cute pink coloured barbie doll toothbrush...Aww'barbie.. how did he come to know I love barbie.. it was so cute'I gave my full smile to him I was happy '

I went up to the bathroom and brushed my teeth with my new toothbrush..that bad uncle used to gave me old and worn out brushes but he brought my favourite brush..for the first time I am feeling happy while brushing..!!!Then I took his dress and dressed up in a very cute frok he brought for me'Mamaa said I am looking very beautifull I was so happy I thanked her said her in her ear to thank him also afterall he brought this cute dress for me'and for the first time I had fruits.. they were so yummy'. I loved specially the red one..Mamma says it's an apple..it tastes really good.!!

I got down to do my drawing after having the yummy fruits..!!! I was seeing the room so that anything could strike me and I could draw that'when my eyes fall on him he was keenly working on something..!!! I walked upto him and stand besides him seeing what he is doing,'!! He looked towards and asked me whether I need something'I was little bit scared no I just nodded my head negatively' and he resumes to his work and I am to the staring session..after a moment he again asked me but I was so much scared what if' what if he beat me if I said something to him'

I walked upto Mamma and poked my fingers in her stomach making her wake so that she could talk to him on behalf of mine'he again says that Mamma won't woke up she has taken medicines 'I was feeling so lonely'then he assures me that he won't do anything..!!! I thought Mamma also said that he is not like bad man so said him by pointing my fingers to his box in which he was working..!! he says in this he works and also has games..!!! He then explained me how to play the games..!!! I am really enjoying it'!!! Mamma was so right he is not like that bad man but he is a good man.I could felt that he was watching me but still I try to concentrate on my game'..

Mayank's P.O.V.

Today I am very happy my daughter isn't feeling much afraid of me'I felt to hug her she was looking so cute..!! but I know I had to control myself'it's going to be her who has to initiate a step forward towards me.Well after playing sometime Shriya returned me Laptop and without sharing any word or something she went back to do her drawing'!!!

Later Nupur woke up from her sleep'she was looking very tired the effect of doze was clearly be seen on her face'I told Nupur about Shriya playing with my Laptop and how I taught her'Nupur gave me a assured smile as she was still weak to speak much conveying that slowly and steadily everything would be fine.Rest of the day was silent as always'but the change was there that Nupur's condition has been quite improved from yesterday's her body is immediately responditing to the medicines enabling her to heel her wounds in a better speed'!!!

A week has been passed.. I daily visits her and does all my office work from hospital itself and spends my night there only from that day me and Shriya didn't changed anymore gestures 'Now it's time for Nupur discharge .

Discharge Day..!!

I came to Nupur's room after signing all the discharge papers as today she could go home'and asked her,"Have You packed everything'.?".

She just nodded her head it seems that her mind is indulged in some other thoughts.I came towards her and put m hand on her shoulder ,"What are you thinking Nupur..!!!"

Nupur:"Mayank..actually I am not sure whether to ask you or not..!! I mean'will it be right or not.. how should I ask you..?"

"From when you have started hesitant to talk to me regarding any any kind..of talk'you know na you can share your all deep thoughts with me..don't hesitate and tell me..!!!"

Nupur letting a sigh,"I don't know how I will sound saying this but Mayank since I have no one to trust in this whole world except you.. and moreover I had lived a dreadfull life in these four years if..it's completely your decision ..if you want..if you think could we can stay at your home'!!! I don't want to live alone neither Shriya..!! Please Mayank.. I know we are not married and so many questions will be raised in society but..Please. I don't have anyone else in this world other than you to whom I can trust'. blindly trust..Mayank if you think it's right..!!'I mean...".

I shushed her in between and said,"Nupur..!! how can you think I will leave you and Shriya alone..!! you have been away from me from past 4 years now not any more I won't even allow you to be away from me for a single of minute..even I am here to take you and my angel to our home'how could you think I will leave you at any other place..! no way I won't damn the society my only and only concern is you and my daughter..!! after all after four years I have got my life how could I let it be far away from me even for a moment..!!"

She gave her small curve smile,"You know what'you are my first angel of my life.."

I raised my brows ,"What do you mean by first..!!"

Nupur:"Second is your daughter'if you weren't in my life than I won't have my reason to live with me '"

I just hugged her softly not hurting her shoulder as it still pains and she too reciprocated my hug.
Slowly and carefully I made her settle down on the back seat of car as siting in passenger seat would be painfull for her back while I asked her to say Shriya to sit on the passenger seat.As I was wearing seat belt I saw Shriya too was struggling with seat belt..without saying I took the seat belt from her hand tucked it to the locker'she looked at me and I passed my sweet smile to her..but she didn't said anything and turned her face towards the window'I felt a little bit of pain in my heart but then my mind consoles him by saying that with time she will soon be comfortable with me.

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Posted: 12 years ago
You know I was about to PM you that please give your update.
You know what I never saw MJHT but due to your ffs,I fell in love with MAYUR.But you are very bad earlier you used to give updates very quickly but now you give very late.You have made me addicted to MAYUR
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Paulomi-

You know I was about to PM you that please give your update.

You know what I never saw MJHT but due to your ffs,I fell in love with MAYUR.But you are very bad earlier you used to give updates very quickly but now you give very late.You have made me addicted to MAYUR



Thank You for your Beautifull comment Paulomi...
Thank you so much..
actually my exams are going on..when ever there is long gap between two xams i used to update..
actually last three exams have 2-3 days of gap making difficult for me to Update..
and moreover only one exam is left and after that i will update on very frequent basis...
Just need two bear for two days...
I am happy that i could able to make you..Mayur..addicted..
you see they have a special magic in them making...us..addicted to them...

Thank you again..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafyyy



Thank You for your Beautifull comment Paulomi...
Thank you so much..
actually my exams are going on..when ever there is long gap between two xams i used to update..
actually last three exams have 2-3 days of gap making difficult for me to Update..
and moreover only one exam is left and after that i will update on very frequent basis...
Just need two bear for two days...
I am happy that i could able to make you..Mayur..addicted..
you see they have a special magic in them making...us..addicted to them...

Thank you again..

this is the magic of pen and its ur credit only👏

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