aarya : will you marry me part 2 pg 3 feb 10

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AARYA: WILL YOU MARRY ME

She was crying'her beautiful hazels were puffed , red nose running'. She just like a baby wiped her tears by her hands' her mother with her bestie came she was crying hiding her face in the soft fluffy pillow' her pink teddy lying beside her like looking at her ' after all his best friend was crying out loud'.

Aarti looked at her pink teddy and took that three feet teddy bear into her lap' and hugged him dearly like she was holding her precious life '. She was just sixteen ' a beauty that can attract bees to flowers for taking their nectar'.

Her mother was worried seeing her crying ' she was their only daughter ..actually the most pampered of their house' she was considered as the luck of their family' most lovely sister of two doting elder brothers who can't even bear tears in her eyes' her demands are their first priority'..

Her best friend disha knows her since their child hood ..the girls were like more of sisters'.

She looked at her mother and her friend standing on the door looking at her..her mother mamta asked disha whispered in her ear'.

Mamta : why is she crying' what is bothering aarti so much' disha you must be knowing'

Disha nodded in a pretty no'

As aarti looked at the exchange of conversation between them 'aarti threw her teddy on disha' shouting and yelling at her..for once even disha wanted to run knowing aarti that she can do anything'. But she slowly pick up the teddy and took slow steps towards her..keeping the teddy aside..she looked at aarti from the corner of her eyes ' looking at aarti who was standing on the bed on her knees'.her soft hands on her waist..her yellow floral frock '.her hairs open just two yellow clips' aww anyone could say she is only a child ' but her intentions and moves doesn't seem to be'.

mamta came to aarti '

Aarti : maa tell her to go away ..you know she is cheater 'a frawd'she is not my friend anymore'with that she just hugged her mother tightly sobbing 'mamta looked at disha asking from her eyes what she did'

Disha who was actually ignorant about whole facts just nodded like denied '..

Mamta looking at aarti '. Asked her softly'.

Mamta : aarti t what's the matter why are you so much angry on disha ' what she did'???

Aarti looked at mamta' and then disha giving her accusing glares'

Aarti : maa'disha dragged me from the mall' you know I was waiting for his answer and she just dragged me'.

Disha wanted to strangle her neck'. Why didn't she thought this before ' aarti what should she do of her' she is really a unique piece'and what she would have do if she just go and say some random person.." WILL YOU MARRY ME'."

THAT DAY MORNING'.

Aarti and disha had school off..and they were in no mood of studying since from the last one month they are completely into the books ..studying for the board exams' it is their tenth' but today something is different ..when disha arrived in the morning she saw aarti dressed in her favorite floral frock'she was ready like wanted to go somewhere'.

Disha politely asked aarti t knowing something amiss or inappropriate can make aarti wild enough that it will take her days to manofy her'.

Disha : aarti are you going somewhere '

Aarti looked at her friend '. Sometimes she thinks how can disha be so dumb'they are friends when they were three and still disha ask her things like she doesn't even have any clue'

Aarti went near disha ..and without saying anything just dragged her to dining'.

Aarti : come lets have breakfast..they we are going to mall'you know I want some new dresses ' I am not having any good dress in my wardrobe '

Well not only disha but everyone present at the dining knew that it was a white lie when mamta had actually brought many new dresses for both of them' disha rolled her eyes and '.answered her friend'

Disha : you know what just say me that you are bored enough to study and wanted some time to hang out and enjoy'.

Aarti pouted and looked at her'

Aarti:when you know then why are you asking me'.

It was them' the bestest friend of aarti ' they were in the mall..buying new dresses accessories..that's when it happened'

Disha was looking at a beautiful pair of earings' and didn't saw that her friend was missing'.

Aarti was busy selecting earings for disha that's when she saw him'.aarti without looking at anyone'just followed him like attracted to him like a magnet..he was their looks like in his formals..looking for something specific..searching something'

Aarti didn't knew what happen..she just went near him and blurted out'" WILL YOU MARRY ME'."

That was actually no less than horror for both disha and the guy standing'a beautiful girl just now proposed him to marry him'and disha she just dragged aarti from there saying a quick sorry to him''

AARTI "S ROOM

Disha came out of the horrible truth' she looked at aarti and made her sit on the bed..aarti turned her face away'

Disha to mamta'.

Disha: mom do you know what she did'. She proposed to a guy asked him to marry her''

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Another figment of my imagination'..

Do leave your review'.

Most probably I would like to continue it if anyone wants to read

Suhaana

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part 2


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Posted: 12 years ago
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woow bold aarthi ...hay make sure that guy is yash 😡

nice start 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love it suhaana di..it is kind of funny...pls continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow nice dear !!! Different approach to arya love story .
Please do continue suha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice !! 😃 !!

Cont Soon !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh god is aarti mental or sumthing she just went up to a dude and asked him to marry her and tht too she is only 16 I am 16 too and I haven't even started to think abt boyfriends as yet 😆 but it was really good and different
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Nice start, Suha!!! 👏👏 I hope the guy is Yash.. 😳😳 Any planning of continuing this? Do continue if ya..! 😛😉
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hmm so teenage love of aarya sound intersting please do continue as it is always our delight to read each and every creative piece of yours😊😊👏👏⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AARYA: WILL YOU MARRY ME


part2

Aarti didn't knew what happen..she just went near him and blurted out…" WILL YOU MARRY ME…."

That was actually no less than horror for both disha and the guy standing…a beautiful girl just now proposed him to marry him…and disha she just dragged aarti from there saying a quick sorry to him……

AARTI"S ROOM

Disha came out of the horrible truth… she looked at Aarti and made her sit on the bed..aarti turned her face away…

Disha to mamta….

Disha: mom do you know what she did…. She proposed to a guy asked him to marry her……

The beautiful words out of aarti's mouth were actually no less than any deadly nightmare for both disha and mamta….

Here our aarti was very upset … she was pouting .. her nose was cringed …. Cheeks red with crying… she was just a any girl who dream of her prince charming …. But here she was just a doll who was actually trying to make her fantasy true by proposing someone and that too directly to marry her….

Mamta looked at her daughter in utter disbelief… she looked at disha who was also behaving like " what to do with this freaking queen….."

Mamta : disha are you serious … mamta still couldn't believe what her dear daughter was trying to do… she still have a tiny miny doubt as she was sure aarti didn't do anything more…..

Disha: mom do you see my face having any kind of amusement of what our aarti did.. you know how embarrassing was that when madam was not coming .. I literally had to drag her out of the mall…. I am thinking of the poor guy .. what he must be thinking…..

Mamta looked at her daughter in disbelief….

Mamta :aarti what was that….. this is no joke…

Aarti looked at disha angrily…. And then at her mother with a cute puppy face….

Aarti : disha… first you didn't even let me listen to his answer and now …. Mumma is scolding me just because of you… no one loves me….

Again the fresh set of tears started flowing out of those hazels…. She was sobbing loudly…. Disha could not see her best friend crying so much.. aarti was just like a small child and how can she let her small childish friend crying that too for some of her weird fantasy…..

Disha : aarti you know this is not a prank or a joke that you can play…. You know what would have been happen if the guy was not decent or he would have followed us… you know na that today girls are not safe anywhere and if you do anything like this they you are actually creating problem for yourself…..

Mamta too second disha who was talking beyond her level of maturity….

Rano: aarti disha is right….. you know girls should wait for a prince charming to propose not they do this going herself and ask to marry her.. and baby everything is set for a particular age…. See you are just sixteen … so this is the time for you to learn.. concentrate on your exams… enjoy with your friends….

You know you will marry when there will be correct time and your dad and bhaiyya will themselves let you meet the guy you want to marry…..

Sometimes it is necessary to made the children understand with a sense of their maturity and your outlook towards the situation… and aarti's mom was just doing this… she knew that there will be no use if she will scold her..or threaten her that she will tell her dad.. it will only make the situation worse either aarti repeat the situation again.. or she will never do her mischieves again and will be drawn into a shell….

Aarti looked at both of them.. though she was angry but still some sensible thoughts were gathered now in her baby brain…..

Aarti : but mumma he was decent guy…. And disha did looked a him….

Aarti : say na disha … how was he….

Disha looked at aarti .. it was like she has totally lost it….. she gave an apologetic look to mamta telling " your daughter has completely lost it…"

Disha with a slight anger forming in her that was because of her dear friend… finally tried to knock some sense in her….

Disha: aarti ..decent , polite , honest , civilized , high morals , right these all cant be judged by just seeing a person and that too for a second… do you even know what he must be thinking… he would have thought that are a mad or any psycho that you have asked him to marry ….

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Here someone was just smiling … looking around blushing and looking extremely handsome .. he had just the best experience of his life… a beauty just asked him to marry her.. and no wonder he knew she was drop dead gorgeous matured child…

He was in his BMW … looking around the gifts that finally he had arranged for one his best teachers.. he along with his friends were giving a farewell too their teacher .. a memorable .. which indeed was now for him….

It was very hard to concentrate on his driving when someone had stolen your attention in just a mere split of second.. making you lost in her….

Yash : so cute just like a doll….

Even he was scared for a second that what was going on.. but her hazels filled with naughtiness and a strange glint made him to lose himself … the way she was twisting her lips….

Yash : may be she was expecting an answer….

He couldn't help but smile…. This ought to be the best experience of his life… may be this is the start ….

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Waiting for your review…

Suhaana


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Suhana I luv ur imagination, pls update soon

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