Taarey Confession My Version

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey all this is my first kinda OS abt TAAREY confession...this is only for TAAREY taani n rey fans...

i know i am very bad at writing but expected a lot from confession that i had to let out my thoughts in some way..

NOTE : so kindly bear with my writing..first i dint want to make this coz i wanted the one in show only to remain but somehow unwillingly wrote it ...i hope i dont hurt anyones sentiments anywhere and bear with the length also ...it has similaritites to show wala confession n inspired from it

Ok So this is my version of TR confession and it goes like this

Rey climbs the window of taani's room .

T: aapke chehre pe khushi kyun nahi hai'

He jumps into the room silently so that his fall cudnt be heard by taani who was so immersed in talking with rey ka photo'

T: aap aise bilkul acche nahin lagte

Rey : toh mein kaise accha lagta hun taani?

Shocked and terrified taani turns around to find him. This was the first time she was facing rey after the corridor showdown. She was shocked to find him here at that part of the day when he needed to be njoying the win of the BB match.

T: aap yahan'aapko toh boys ke saath hona chahiye na'

R: kyun nahin aayi tum taani ( and dil se re bgnd music as usual in bg) and he started to coming on her and she gulping down deep her breath and was moving backwards to avoid his feel on her.

T: woh main ..meri taabiyat theek nahi hain'.

R: oh yeh' tum jhoot bologi toh main maan loonga 'still moving onto her'

T: jhoot nahi 'sach , sach hain'still moving backwards till she hits the cupboard n now she is caught now she cant move now..

R: sach... agar sach yeh hain toh jhoot kya hain taani'ke tum mujhe avoid kar rahi thi match mein na aake'

Tum mujhe itna hate karti ho ki mujhse door rehne ke liye tum apne bhai ke team ko cheer karne nahi aayi'

Till now she pretended to be strong though his mere presence was making her go weak as always but the word HATE brought tears into taani's eyes'she cudnt even imagine having that kind of feeling especially towards him.

R: batao taani kyun nahi aayi'

T:mein aapke liye problem nahin khadi karna chahti thi'

R : tumhe aisa lagta hain ..(pauses for a moment) 'ki tum mere liye ek problem ho' par pata hain sach kya hain'.mein har bar dekhta raha ki kabhie to tum aaogi ..meri nazrein tumhe hi dhoondhti rahi'tumhara na hona hi mere problem ban gayi thi taani'

Taani was listening all this unable to believe her eyes and ears 'everything seemed so unreal but his tears his presence was all real'

R: Bahut samjhaya meine apne aapko ki tumse door rahun ' par ho nahi pa raha tha'jab bhi tumhein shivam ke saath dekhta tha toh ek ajeeb se feeling aati thi ..kaise bhi karke tumhe use door rakhna chahta tha'socha tha ki as swayam ki behen tumhe bachana meri responsibility hain'par pata nahi chala uss waqt ki mein wo sab mein khud ke liye karna chahta tha'

Suddenly all their moments started rewinding in taani's mind'..(tumhara boyfriend ko bura lagega 'tumhara boyfriend hain aur mein doosra ladka hoon'tumhara bf kuch pooch raha hain tumse use answer kyun nahi de rahin ho'ab tum shivam ke saath jyada se jayda time spend kar sakti ho'as his GF campaigning mein tum uski help toh karogi.. and after shivam's exit 'tum khush toh main'tum nahi jaanti ki tumne meri kitni badi problem')

The tear which was till now trying to hide in taani's eyes dropped to the ground.

R : tumhare bina incomplete si feeling rehti hain'mein tumhrae bina incomplete hoon taani' u know why'coz I LOVE YOU'.(as in the show)

Taani's world stopped. Everything around her became still like without any life. And again rewinding of moments..(mein aapko janna chahti hoon,samajhna chahti hoon'tum sirf swayam ki behn ho aur kuch nahin..0.1% bhi nahi'go get a life taani'mein tumhe janna hi nahi chahta'tum aur mein kabhie dost nahi ban sakte'. jab sab janti ho toh cheezon ko kyun personal kar rahi ho'aap uss ladki ko dekh hi nahi pa rahe'.bura lagta hain ki ap mujhe samajh hi nahi payee'.tum mujhe samajhna hi nahi chahti taani')

She was just lost into his eyes eyerytime it happens with her the same way everytime she just involuntarily loose all of herself by that stare of him and her hands involuntarily moved towards his face to wipe his tears and also to check as if all of this which is happening was just a dream or reality'whether what she was hearing was real or not'and is about to wipe his tears still thinking it's a dream and to reach out for that dream but is brought to reality when he holds her arms and moves her towards him a little bit gently..

R: coz I LOVE YOU taani'I really do'.

He was feeling light as if all the pain of all these days had oozen out from him'.he just wanted to let his feelings out tonight and he did his part when suddenly a thot strikes to him'.he is rewinded by the past moments'.(he remembred how he rejected her and then she behaving weird whenever he is around '.rey aur main ek couple nahin ho sakte'and the involuntary pain he had hearing when specially coz it came thorugh her mouth..shivam telling yeh meri GF hain ) wat if she doesn't have the same feelings for me'

R: Kya tum bhii'.(pauses for a second and still fearing about her feelings towards him)..kya tum bhi mujhse and waits forher answer still staring at her holding her with somewhere the fear of losing her in this proposal

Taani simply nods as in saying yes and he is elated and hugs her and all that pain they went through all these days simply vanished between their closeness'

Then after sometime they broke from the hug and she says it for the first time to her Prince charming ' I LOVE U REY..I LOVE U '. And they hug back again this time with more passion than the pain..as in the episode..



AFTERNOTE : so i hope u liked it..i had more but had to cut it short..if possible will try to extend but not sure...coz i just wanted it to be limited..i hope i dint bore u with this only...pls reply how is it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww dear this was really beautiful..really loved it...very beautifully written and expressed...keep up the great work
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved ur version of confession.
keep writing more dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it..the confession scene in the soap ended so fast..i cudnot feel it..now u have written so well
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Posted: 12 years ago
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r u kiddin me...usse bore karna kehte hai...it was awesum!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its brilliant really loved it
Great job
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it alot!! Keep writing on Taarey!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I liked how u kept the original flavour from the show n changed the details
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lol i like ur version better haha we should tips to the cvs! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Brilliant... luv ur version of taarey confession... keep writing more 4 taarey😃😃😃👏👏

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