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Posted: 12 years ago
Updating by 8pm, but friends i am so sorry for disturbing you again. Can anyone give me the pics where geet will be in maan's arms on the first day of the office (Maan pink shirt and geet. green salwar). Pretty please 😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me waiting
photo ka mere pas toh nai hai bt dona di ek hope hai 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago




di is this ok
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Posted: 12 years ago

cool, i want these pics only. Thank you thank you sooo much 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chinni10


cool, i want these pics only. Thank you thank you sooo much 😃😃


welcome😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

dear just now got pics, 15 more minutes please
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 24

https://i.imgur.com/ptZMS.jpg


Hii friends, here is the most awaited part and i tried my best to convey their feelings. Hope you all like
it and please i request every one to pen down their opinion in this update. Please please 😳

Maan and geet both are unaware of themselves that they are very near to each other, their hearts are at peace unknown to themselves. Geet is though teasing sam but she is feeling different that someone very close to her heart is near her. Maan is also feeling that his mishty is very close to him for a second he closed his eyes to compose himself but with every passing second his heart is beating fast and his restlessness is increasing. He looked into the corridor and found 3 people are running towards them but busy in their own world. Maan is simply staring at the female figure while other 3 of his friends are discussing something. When he saw the female figure his heart beat stopped for a second and he himself don't know why. Her voice, her smile is very familiar to him. She is reaching him and maan stood like a statue not wanting to move a bit. He is waiting for that girl, he want to see her face so desperately.

Here geet is reaching maan, her mind is telling her to stop there but her mind is telling her not to stop. She is confused thinking what is happening to her. Without looking at front she banged into something rather say someone. The mobile which is in her hand fell down breaking into pieces and she also knows she will be hitting ground the next second. But to her surprise it didn't happened, she felt a pair of hands on her waist. She felt the touch familiar but got angry that someone is touching her. she turned her face angrily to see the owner of those hands and thought of giving that person some peace of mind but when she saw the owner her throat ditched her, words are not coming out from her mouth.

Maan who stood there like a statue know that girl is coming close to him and will bang him. But he didn't move, he don't want to move and why he too don't know. As expected that girl dashed him and the mobile in her hand fell down and she was also to fell down maan caught her holding her waist. For a second he closed his eyes feeling peace. But when he opened his eyes he eyes caught her angry eyes and his lips curved into a small smile.




When geet looked at him angrily his eyes were closed, but the next second he opened his eyes. Geet looked into his eyes, it did some magic she is lost in those chocolate brown eyes. Her eyes caught the small smile forming on his lips, she felt unknown happiness seeing him smile. Slowly her anger vanished and getting lose in those eyes. Maan's eyes too caught her doe shaped hazel eyes and he too lost in those eyes. Both are lost in each others eyes, maan hold tightened on her waist unknowingly and strangely geet didn't mind. Even her lips are also curved into a small smile. Their hearts are thudding fast, they both can hear each others heart beat. Unknown peace, unknown happiness, unknown relief engulfing in their heart. They want the world stop right at that moment.





"MISHTY" his heart screamed. "MAAN" her heart screamed.

On the other hand abay and sam are getting angry seeing some stranger holding their friend and even surprised geet is not getting angry. On top of that they both are staring at each other. Maan's gang is also in the same condition, they were shocked and surprised why maan is not shouting on that girl. Their blissful moment was disturbed by their friends. They cleared their throat. The first one was geet to come out of her reverie, she saw herself in a strangers arms, but her heart screamed he is not a stranger. Maan too came out of his world. Maan left geet at once and composed himself. Geet looked here and there not able to face anything after this embrassing incident.

"Babaji, yeh kya hogaya hain mujhe" thought geet but it was loud enough that everyone hear. Is it not enough that maan comes to know who is she? Maan's heart jumped in joy, though he recognized by her eyes but somewhere he was hesitant. But now his 1% doubt is also cleared. All thanks to geet's habit of talking with her babaji.

Geet looked again at maan and mumbled a sorry. She immediately turned back not knowing what is happening to her. Maan is looking at her longingly, he want to hug her tight and take her away from this world. But here she turned back going. "Can you see and walk. Now come" scolded abay. Maan smiled slightly seeing the care and possessiveness of abay for geet. Geet is walking away from maan, but while taking every step her heart cried not to go. The peace and relief she felt when she was in his arms was not there now. She again felt lonely, she want to turn back and look into his eyes again.

"Babaji, what is happening to me? who is he? Why do I have a feeling that my maan is near me? no why do I have a feeling that he is my maan?" geet is lost in her thoughts and stopped in her tracks. Abay and sam looked at her. she is looking tensed. "Geet, tum thik ho?" asked sam. "Arey yaar don't worry I wont scold you for breaking my mobile" told sam. But geet is not listening their single word. She want to turn back and she did, she turned back. And tears made their way wetting her cheeks. She saw maan standing in his famous style, with his hands over his chest. This simple act is enough for geet to know he is her maan.

"Geet, what happened?" asked abay. Geet pressed her lips to control her cry. She is seeing her maan after 6 long years. How foolish she is? Though she recognized him by his touch but still doubting whether he is maan or not. She is taking baby steps towards maan, but she is so desperate to be in his arms. She want to cry, shout, beat and fight with him and ask him why he sent her away. And again accuse him that he don't loves him. she smiled a teary smile thinking all those. Maan is also desperate to take geet in his arms. Geet finally ran towards him. Maan smiled broadly seeing her coming towards him. Her tears and her smile is enough for maan to tell, she recognized him.

Geet came running to maan and circled her hands around his neck hugging him tight. Maan little stumbled back but smiled and hugged her tight lifting her little up from the ground.


"Maan" whispered geet. "Mishty" whispered maan.

They both smiled through tears, still not able to believe they are in each others arms. They waited for this day from long. But finally today it is. Both are not able to control their tears, maan's shirt is getting went because of her tears. And maan's tears are wetting his cheeks. Every passing second their hug tightened not allowing air between them. Both are in peace, happy. Finally today after 6 long tears they are seeing each other and in each others arms.



Adi, karan, appu, abay and sam are shocked to geet their friends hugging someone. Abay has a feeling that he is maan. Maan's friends came to know she is geet, whom their friend maan loves to eternity. Karan is trying hard to control his tears seeing his sister, whom he loves a lot. But she hates him. He want to scream that he is her brother, but he cant. Again the confused soul is sam. He knows his friend geet as a gundi and bossing other, for the second time he is seeing her crying and for the first time he is seeing her hugging some stranger, well for him maan is a stranger.

Here maan and geet are lost in their hug, they don't want to come out and be in each others arms forever. Again due to the noise around they came out of the hug dis-heartedly. Maan smiled at geet who is still sobbing. He nodded for a no and wiped her tears. But her tears are not taking a name of stopping. She started beating on his chest with her tiny fists.

"Kyun kiya tumne aisa? Kyun??" cried geet beating him. Maan's heart pained seeing her cry. He allowed to do whatever she want, but saw his surrounding. Though the corridor is empty, but students are there. He has no other option to stop her. He held her both hands but geet is wriggling to get out of his grip and beat him. "Why you did like that??" geet again started. Maan placed his finger on her lips. "CHUP BILKUL CHUP"

Precap: 😊


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Ok friends, here is part 24. How is it?? 😕


Come on jaldi jaldi give me likes and long comments. 😳 😊


Love

Chinni



Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww kitna sweet update tha
awesome blossom ,fantastic, fab,brilliant,mind blowing,amazing update
just love it
maaneet met after 6 looong years
nd they recognized each other from their eyes nd touch
aww so sweet
nd their hug was just mind blowing
update was all dreamy dreamy
nd poor karan want to say that he is her brother but can't
feeling sad for him
nd sam confused soul
BTW aisa kya tha uske mobile that he don't want to show it to geet
nd one more ques.
kya mohindar abhi bhi London me rehta hai

plz update next past soon di
Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update di 😊
u done a great job in expressing their emotions and restlessness..they both cud feel each others presence..and best was that they recognised each other 😊
bt u are devil di phirse galat jagah rokh diya 😡
me eagerly waiting for their reaction
Edited by angelic_princes - 12 years ago

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