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Kshweta

@Kshweta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#561

Once again, truelly magical. How?? Tell me how you manage to write so beautifully. It is mamazing the way you make me feel the whole place in front of my eyes. Ypu seriously should think about getting into professional wrting. Ypu will go places,

Well done Devi!!!!!

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

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Posted: 12 years ago

#562

I can guess that the Woman with the scorching gaze is Devaki...

So they left!!!

But I know it cannot be that simple... waiting for you to enchant us with another mysterious chapter!!!

~~~ sam xoxo

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#563

Why do I feel forlorn as if I am missing something or someone..exquisitely written chapter. I could just feel the fog around me..what an enchanting story you have created..
It is unlike any other story I am reading..I don't have the breathless anticipation to know what happens next.. I just love being part of each of the updates..
My only prayer is that you complete this story whenever and however ..because it will be such an injustice to the story if it were not...

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#564

magic.. this is what you weave in the story.. the whole update was just magical.. even though it was just one scene.. but everything described so well.. and the intensity of what happened and how the mist was signify the current state of illam..

loved it girl..

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arshi_sri

@arshi_sri

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#565

ohh my god it was a little bit scary ...that woman ...& the fog...

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socrazy

@socrazy

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#566

Amazing update. Really like the way to kept the mystery in the story and are continusly developing it.

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citi

@citi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#567

The feel of absolute quiet, of a momentous moment, of loss and also release come across in this update. Is it the spirit of the house watching?

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Suni

@Suni

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#568

Yay! An update! Quite spooky but beautifully written.

Happy New Year!

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casker

@casker

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#569

lovely update.

Kushi is going with Arnav😊.

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serialwatcher16

@serialwatcher16

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#570

So glad to see this font. I was missing it so much.

I have been struggling with my internet, electricity, inverter and so when i got the combination right, i just quickly downloaded the page so that i could read the update. Will have to wait for reading it with the music. Forgive me, I am in a cribbing mode, but what a pleasure to see that you had updated.

Everybody seems to be talking about the music and so now i am curious.

And you know what, i am actually scared of them driving out in the fog. I hate driving in the fog and would do anything not to drive in it. The place where I live, the fog settles in thick and it is absolutely frightening.

So Kashi is resigned to leaving with Arnav. Cannot imagine a resigned Kashi.

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