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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update! I wonder who the unwanted visitor was...hm...

I am loving jealous Asad. Please update soon and thank you for the pms 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Suuuper awesome Sneha ! Keep it up girl. You're really really talented <3
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i'hv read all da 6 chapters of ur ff & i hv only 1 word 4 u i.e MASHAALLAH...i must say u r a fast updater...i'm luving dis jealousy filled track of asad...bdw mereko bhi laga k shayad rehaan aur najma ka koi chakkar hoga & finally u started it...anyways i'm luving da suspense as well... do cont. jaldi:)
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I am dying for an update, Sneha. :D
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Nice update and thanks for the pm :-)

Nikki <3
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Previous chapter:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/73454898


Chapter Seven

"Dushmano ka khauf nahi hain mujhe,

Khub janta hoon main dushmani nibhana

Darta hoon toh sirf Dard-e- Mohabbat se

Kyunki baroosa nahi Mehboob ka wafa kar jaana."

Asad was having breakfast with his family. Zoya and Rehaan were nowhere around.

"Ami, yeh foreign return mehaman kab wapas jaane waale hain? Unka yaha rehna mujhe bilkul pasand nahi... Unhe tameez kya hoti hai yeh tak pata nahi 'Batameezi ki bhi ek hadh hoti hain'Aur main yeh nahi Chahta ki unke yaha rehne se iss ghar ki auraton pe log ungliya utaye'Agar unka yaha rehne ka lamba plan hain toh mujhe batadijiye'main unka rehna ka intazam kissi boardings main kar deta hoon"

"Asad, yeh tum kya keh rahe ho'Hum usse hostel kaise bhej sakte hai'Naye shehar main unhe akela kaise chod sakte hai? Dilshaad questioned

"Ami, abhi unki umar ho choki hain ki woh apna khayal khud rakna seekh le .Apko unki chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi."

"Par Asad, main Zoya ke jijju se vaada kar chooki hu ki jab tak woh yaha hain, hum unka pura dhyaan rakehenge."

"Ami..apko koi zaroorat nahi unki itni khatirdhari karne ki'Aur waha hostel main doosre ladke bhi honge, toh unhe akelapan bilkul mehsus nahi hoga"

Najma and Dilshad goggled at him " Asad yeh tum kya keh rahe ho? Zoya kyun doosre ladkho ke saath rahegi?

Asad paused " Zoya? ' Zoya ki kaun baat kar raha hain?"

"Toh tum kiski baat kar rahe ho?" Dilshaad asked exasperatedly

His patience strained Asad answered"Ami'Main aur kiski baat karoonga'Woh Janab hain na'Zoya ka Dost"

Dilshaad and Najma exchanged a look.

"Bhaijaan'Aap Rehaan ki baat kar rahe the?" Najma asked unnecessarily

"Aur kitne foreign return mehmaan hain is ghar mein..Najma?" Asad stressed.

"Do. Rehaan aur Zoya'Atleast aaj tak toh humhe yehi laga tha'Asad' tumne Zoya ko iss ghar ka hissa bana diya aur humhe baatya bhi nahi" Dilshaad teased.

Asad squirmed "Mera matlab woh nahi tha'

Najma interrupted " Achha'Toh aap ka kya matlab tha Bhaijaan?"

Dilshaad joined "haan bolo na Asad"

Asad got up hurriedly from his chair in order to escape " Main sirf itna kehna chahta hoon ki Uss Janab ko kahi aur rehne ka intazaam karna padega' Ab mujhe ek important meeting ke liye jaana hai'toh Allah Haffiz!" saying he walked away.

Dilshaad and Najma burst out laughing.

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Asad came out of the house. That was a close one he thought. Warna aaj tho'No Iam not going to think about it. It is better to focus on moving that buffoon to another place'I will have to talk to Zoya about this'

He walked toward his car and spotted that his garage door was open. Strange'he thought'I know I shut the door last night'When he walked around to the front of the car, the sight that greeted him had him swearing viciously. Someone had broken his windshield and both of his front headlights. There was a note left on the bonnet. Asad snatched the note and read:

" Humari nazar Aap par hardum hai tikki hui.

Sawalo ke barsaat ko kaabon me rakna seekh lo

Warna bewaja Kho baetoge apni zindagi"

What the hell! Asad pulled out his phone, "Prasad!"'

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Zoya decided to give her investigation a much needed break, for today that is. After last night she needed to lay back and recuperate. That's how she found herself at the movies with Najma and Rehaan. The movie was on her, so she stood in the line to take their tickets while they were browsing the book shops. It took her few minutes to get them so she used her time to evaluate her next step. First thing tomorrow she would go pay a visit to Mr Lala Singh aka Mohammed Aziz Kazi and try to find out what he knows. She hoped he would give her the information willingly. If not' "Ouch!" she yelled as she felt someone rudely push her aside.

"Allah Mia! What's wrong with you? Aap dekh kar nahi chal sakte kya? She turned around to yell at the fella and found herself face to face with that tall guy from the park with lots of hair. She recalled those unpleasant meetings and got very annoyed.

One glance at his expression showed her that he wasn't pleased by seeing her again either. Before she could say anything the hairy guy snapped at her, "Tum!"

Zoya's defenses rose up. "haan main"

The guy moved closer to her trying to intimidate her " Achha hua tum phir se milgayi.Kafi dino se main tumhe hi dhundh raha tha.." saying he grabbed her arm roughly and dragged her to a corner kicking and screaming.

"Allah Mia! What's wrong with you? Just leave me" Zoya yelled at him but was of no use.."Dekhiye agar tum ne mera haath nahi choda na toh bahut bura hoga." She threatened.

Hairy guy laughed, "Accha'tum mujhe dhamki de rahi ho?"

" Jee nahi main Dhamki nahi deti'Dhamki toh woh hoti hain jo puri nahi ki Jaa ti. Main jo kehti hu woh karti hu." Zoya replied trying to free herself from his strong grip.

Hairy guy faltered a bit. He looked a bit stunned as if he was remembering something or maybe someone. Zoya used his distraction to free her hand and pull out her pepper spray and aimed it at him. Allah Mia! Please let it work this time, she prayed.

Then she pressed the nozzle, spraying it right into his eyes.

"Arghh" Hairy guy shrieked, squinting his eyes and dancing around in pain.

"Kaha tha na maine ki mujhe haath lagaya toh anjam bahut bura hoga." Zoya couldn't help taunting him. Hairy guy seemed furious and he lunged at her even though he was temporarily blinded

"Main tumhe chodunga nahi'iska hissaab with interest lunga..Yeh Ayaan ka tumse vaada hai Mohtrama'yaad rakliyao."

Zoya was about to respond but a girl rushed forward, towards the hairy guy. She fussed around the guy.

"Ayaan. Aap thik hain na'Kya hua aapko?" the girl seemed to genuinely care about that boor.

Hairy guy pushed her aside saying "Kuch nahi hua Humeirra Begum 'Aankh mein kuch chalagaya'aap undar seat par baet jaaeye' Main aankh par pani daal kar aata hoon." He headed towards the rest room after giving Zoya a hard scowl.

Zoya scowled back. When hairy guy left the girl turned to her and stared at her for a minute. It almost felt as if she was taking her measure. Just when Zoya thought of leaving, the girl spoke.

"Kya kiya aapne mere Ayaan ko?"

Zoya had enough of this crap "Allah Mia! What's wrong with you? Maine unhe kya kiya? Yeh pucho ki unhone mere saat kya kia. Bas jabardasti mera haat pakad liya.."

The girl stiffened at that, "I don't believe this! Ayaan kabhi kissi ladki ke saat bateemizi nahi karta'tumhine kuch kiya hoga."

This pissed Zoya off' "Maine? Allah Miah! Main kyu bhala kissi ajnabi ko kuch karungi'gale toh woh mere pade the'Aur yeh pehli baar nahi hain'isse pehle bhi do baar hum milchuke hain aur har baar yeh baatameezi se hi paesh aaye hai'Par main tumhe kyu koi justification de rahi hoon? Yeh toh India hain'toh obviously yaha har cheeze ka dosh ladkiyon ko hi diya jaata hain naa." She fumed.

"Aap pehle bhi Ayaan se mil chuki hai?" the girl asked. This time in an uncertain tone. She kept glancing towards the rest rooms lost in her own thoughts.

Zoya's temper evaporated. Allah Miah! What's wrong with you Zoya? she thought. Can't you see that the girl is in love. And she has got it bad! Par pyar kiya toh bhi kisse'Woh hairy boor toh iski kadar bhi nahi karta'Poor girl!

Zoya suddenly stiffened...Allah Mia! Tum isse sympathy kyun de rahi ho?'Tumhara bhi situation aisa hi hain na'Par farak sirf itna hain ki Jahapanah is an engaged man now'off limits'par yeh hairy boor toh iske liye off limits nahi hai nah. Inka abhi bhi kuch ban sakta hain'

Meanwhile, the girl turned to leave.

"Agar tum koi ladke ki attention chahti ho to iss tarah uske peeche maat bhago"

The girl snapped back arrogantly, " Maaf kijiyega'par maine aapse apki opinion nahi maangi hai."

Zoya raised both her hands towards the girl motioning her to calm down "O.k ..Ok..chill haan'Main sirf itna keh rahi hu'ki it's pretty obvious ki tum usme interested ho par woh tumhe utna attention nahi deta.." Zoya paused. The girl nodded her head

" Well iska sirf ek hi solution hain. Usse aadat hogayi hain tumhari and he takes you for granted. Uska attention paane ke liye use attention dena band karo'Jitna uske peeche bhago gi'woh tumse utna door bhagega. Completely ignore karo usse'Uske samne kisi aur ladke ko attention do. Thoda jalao'Thodasa tarsao'phir dheere dheere usse paas laao'Dekhna kaise tumhare peeche aata hain."

Zoya smiled then walked away leaving the girl to contemplate.

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Asad was done dealing with the police. They all seemed to be incompetent fools. He had given his statement and they took the evidence with them. But it was pretty clear that they were chalking this whole incident as a random case of vandalism. But Asad knew better. He removed the note from the pocket and read it again. Reading it again made him feel furious. Random attack! What crap! This was personal.

Someone dared to barge in to his home and threaten him and his family. Big mistake! No one hurts his family and gets away with it. He pulled out his phone and called Prasad. He was going to get personally involved. He would not rest until he finds the man who violated his home and then he would tear him apart- limb from limb. Nobody messes with Asad Ahmed Khan. Pure and Simple.

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Munna was very proud of himself. He had beautifully conducted the work that Bhaijaan had given him. He had found everything he could about the girl and that man she was with. He even took initiative to leave a special something for the couple. He was pretty sure that his handiwork should get any nosy trouble makers to back off and stop snooping around in other people's business. Bhaijaan would surely be impressed. Munna wanted a promotion and he knew that if Bhaijaan becomes happy with his efforts, he would surely recruit him in a higher post.

Eagerly, Munna dialed the familiar number. The phone rang on the other side and Bhaijaan answered "Did you do everything I asked?"

"Yes Bhaijaan.I followed the couple to their home. Then late at night I left them a small gift from your behalf." Munna replied gleefully.

The voice on the other side grunted in pleasure "Did you find out the identity of those two?"

"Yes Bhaijaan. The girl is an NRI from US' Woh kuch din apne rishte daaro ke saat India aaee hui hai and kuch dino main chali jayegi'woh uss ladke ke ghar main mehmaan hain'Aur woh ladka kuch construction ka chota mota business karta hai shayad. Bas itna hi pata chal paya hai..Par you don't worry I have taken care of everything .Aisi dhamki milne ke baad I am pretty sure they will back off now."

The voice on the other side hesitated for a moment. Then asked "Ladka construction main kaam karta hai?

Munna confirmed. There was silence on the other side. Then'

"Ladke ka naam kya hain?"

"Asad Ahmed Khan." Munna informed.

There was a loud clang on the otherside as if something fell. Then someone screamed.

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Next Chapter:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76267958

Edited by snehatalk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovelyyy sneha ! Thanks a million for updating so regularly for all of us. Your FF is really brilliant and we all enjoy reading it :D
And here's a small request ! Can you please put in a few direct AsadZoya interactions ? I dont get to see much of their scenes on the show with all the current family drama over Nikhat, Asad and blah.
Rest everything was perfect :D
Also, I'd like to mention that the first four lines of every installment are really commendable :D
<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so the mystery '' bhaaijaan '' person knows asad...hmmm interesting ...cont soon & thnks 4 pm
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loved it... especially the part about najma
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Zoya ko apni ghar ka hissa bana chuka hai humara Asad miyan! LOL!!


He's slowly being consumed in jealousy and possessiveness!!


Zoya and Ayaan's meet was fabulous and the way she advices Humeira!


I'm loving the suspense in the story..



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