SOS::Sacred love

Sneha113 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
Finally i dared to write an sos(short os)because of my buddies!!

I practically dont have the gene of a writer so plz bear it..

A special thanks to all the members of CCETFKA who encouraged me so much..!!!

Havnt Thought about a SS🤣but will have 1,2 more parts!!


"Sir...sir bacha lijiye mujhe"were the words which kept flashing in the mind of a person laid on a sofa of Ravi lodge.He was none other than our Arjun Suryakant Rawte.
Above dialogue was of Riya Mukherjee-the research specialist.It had been 1 month she took leave after nearly falling in the death trap.These thought kept worrying him.

Smile covered his tense faced when he remembered sweet moments with her.He sat on a chair beside thinking..
On the other hand Riya too was going through a sleepless night thinking about the problems going on in her life.
Their parents dont want her to return to etf and but get married.Tears flowed and wet her dimpled cheeks.
Suddenly her glance fell upon her very fav red clip.
Instantly their first meeting flashed through her mind and a smile crept her beautiful face with made her react saying
"akdu kahin ka"!!😳

Scene again shifts to arjun who kept thinking the way their friendship growed but suddenly there was a cracking sound and arjun was about to fall but got saved by the suitcase laid beside.
He was so shocked watching it as he never took them out.

"Riya tumne mujhe fir se bacha liya"was the words which came out along with his supercop smile😊

Edited by priya00147 - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

79

Views

8.5k

Users

22

Likes

98

Frequent Posters

Mellifluous thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
EDITED***
finaly my ss has started writing 😃 well done CCETFKA members for your hardwork 😆 😆okay jokes apart.
I am actualy jumping in joy because you decided to write & from the very begining i can say i gonna love this because it is by you 😛

A big congrats to you for you first ever begining 🤗 I realy wish you never stop writing as prava said 😛

Just love this cute part..Ariya is in love already..that made my mood elated 😃 well Arjun was dreaming on sofa kya that he was about to fall aur bachaya bhi toh kaun briefcase ne 🤣 Riya ki atma ghus gayi kya briefcase ne 😆 aur what Arjun is doing in some Ravi lodge!! Firse landslide aa gaye kya?? 😆

OMG!!! Main abhi se hi ghore pe sawar ho gayi 😆 aage kya hoga???
Update asap..love it sooo much & love to ss 🤗 🤗
All the best 👍🏼
Edited by -sree13- - 12 years ago
shrutisweety thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
edited

priyu firstly congrats to start os👏,i am so happy u r also started writing😊
make sure ki u have stard with OS but make it as ss or ff my dear priyu😊

now coming to story wounderful start,riya and arjun are already in love😳,so sweet priyu,
dearm karte karte bechara arjun ghir gaya😆 aur suitcase ne baja li ussko😆
ab pata nahi aage kya hpga arjun ka😉,y arun is staying in hotel ?????
priyu continue soon ,eagerly waiting for the next part?????
will riya marry as her parents said ???? or she will join again ETF?????


👏
intersting story dear,keep on writing dear,we want to read ur stories😊
Edited by shrutisweety - 12 years ago
prava55663 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Congrats on your first piece of writing!!

I am sure you can't end this in two parts...because once you start writing you don't feel like stopping it!!

coming to update...

It was nice start...

Ariya already love and missing each other...

waiting to know more...

yaar ek precap bhi nahin diya!!

I wanted to comment on your OS...so i am awake for you...if there are any mistakes in my comment ignore...it...

Edited by prava55663 - 12 years ago
Sneha113 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: prava55663

Congrats on your first piece of writing!!

</div>
<div>

I am sure you can't end this in two parts...because once you start writing you don't feel like stopping it!!

coming to update...

It was nice start...

Ariya already love and missing each other...

waiting to know more...

yaar ek precap bhi nahin diya!!

I wanted to comment on your OS...so i am awake for you...if there are any mistakes in my comment ignore...it...


Thankuu prava🤗
lets see ideas aaye toh continue kar lungi🤣
precap pe suspense hai..lol
jaag k padha!!!so sweet of u!! :))
purecure thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Tnk god bolu ya congrats pata nahi...

Theek hai dono bol deti hoon..

ok first of ol congrats on ur first ever piece of writing...n tnk god after dese many efforts of our u did it...

n now to 1st part or intro. ...

amazing beginning...ur firsine tpoke tp riyas last epi. ...

liled dat ariya olready in love or attracted...

funny thing briefcase ne arjun ko bachaya...lolxx...bt woh kiskeiye hai os mein??

anyhow amazing start...n like prava said u never feel like stopping...n i feel yeh os ...ss na ban jaayein...

ol d best...amazinv start...update soon...!!!

n yea atleast pm toh bhejde...kanjoos kahiki...is tym pm na bhejne keiye rotten eggs n tomatoes are ready...will throw on u at adda...kaha tha na ab meri baari hai...😉

Updt soon...will b waitimg!!
Edited by purecure - 12 years ago
purecure thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
15 min intezaar kiya tab post nahi koya aur ek ghsnte baad kiya...

Anyways,

ab chalu kiya hai tune ...ab aayega mazaa...ab badlaungi sare tere res. Ka...

Sneha113 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: purecure

15 min intezaar kiya tab post nahi koya aur ek ghsnte baad kiya...

Anyways,

ab chalu kiya hai tune ...ab aayega mazaa...ab badlaungi sare tere res. Ka...


🤣mujhe pehle se hi pta tha re..lol..
sanchi late se aai uska wait mei thoda tym lg gya!
ankita2804 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
res...
________________________________________________


S M ... 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

am so so sooo happy yaar ki tune finally ek OS likha aur POST kiya...
first of all CONGRATS for your first OS




no matter how much the length is,,, zaroori ye hai ki at least tune try to kiya... wo bhi itna zabardast... 😃
mai to soch bhi nahi sakti likhne ke baare mein... 😆


maine abhi dobara padha ye... OMG... kal raat jaldi me padha tha.. but abhi shanti se padha to I wsa simply amazed,,, 😲 😲 😃
Kya starting hai yaar OS ki 😲 ... ⭐️
I mean something hatke from the ''ek ladka tha ETF me, ek ladki v thi wohi pe'' n all 😆

Hats Off... kyunki jaise tune start kiya hai, uss hisaab se story me bohot se flashbacks ane wale hai ... n I personally think ki flashbacks ko sahi jagah aur sahi tarah se put karna is very tough sometimes 👏👏

aww... Arjun and Riya are thinking about themselves... so sweettt... ❤️
but feeling bad for Riya... 😔 once again a death trap... and as all typical caring families, parents dont wanna allow their doll to risk her life... 😳 but what.. iske liye Marriage ??!! 😲 🤢
sabar kijiye ucle-aunty...beti ke life me koi apke ummeed se bhi achchha ane wala hai 😉😉

Thank God... Arjun Riya par grateful to hai... "Riya tumne mujhe fir se bacha liya" 😎
kahi Riya Arjun ko bachane ke chakkar me to ghayal nahi hui ??!! 😲

awesomeee start Snehaaa... lovely... 👏👏👏
and the title of the OS,,, kahan se sujhta hai tujhe itne achchhe acchhe naam ??? 😲😃 Awesome... 'sacred love'.. sunke hi pata chal raha hai ki inki love story kitni pure and deep hogi 😳 ❤️

chal, aage likhungi to sab sochenge ki tere badle maine hi next part update kar diya... 🤣
keep going girl... jaldi update karna... 👍🏼


aur haan... PM KAUN KAREGA ???!!!! 😡😡😡 bhulna mat agli baar ... aur timely PM bhejna !!! 😃 😆
Edited by ankita2804 - 12 years ago
purecure thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: priya00147


🤣mujhe pehle se hi pta tha re..lol..
sanchi late se aai uska wait mei thoda tym lg gya!

jo bhi ho..

N wese bhi...mein aisa nahi karungi...agarein aisa karungi toh tere mein aur mere mein kya farak rsjega...lolxx...jst joking...

I hav unresd. My comment on prev. Pg...ol d best...!!!

Related Topics

Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: Lekha_Acharya · 9 months ago

Hey guys, i know that i am very late and i have left my book incomplete. Actually had problems that forced me to focus on my life for a period...

Expand ▼
Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: Delusional_Minx · 1 years ago

𝐎𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐭𝐰𝐞𝐥𝐟𝐭𝐡 𝐚𝐧𝐧𝐢𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐬𝐚𝐫𝐲 𝐨𝐟 𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐛𝐞𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐝 𝐬𝐡𝐨𝐰 '𝐀𝐫𝐣𝐮𝐧', 𝐰𝐞 𝐜𝐞𝐥𝐞𝐛𝐫𝐚𝐭𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐦𝐞𝐬...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".