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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept
Luv it. Pls cont.
Pls update soon.
Thanks 4 pm me and pls do pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Nice concept 😊
Luvd it
But wat happnd 5 years back??
Plz update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww Diz Waz Soo Sweet...Luvd Itt!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dipi_taarey

thanks all of u. . . . . .

dipi i snd u buddt req
plz accpt it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
oh Urmi its really nice concept...
update soon na, Tuesday tak wait nahi kar sakti main...
mujhe abhi abhi abhi hi read karni hai story 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Its very nice concept,update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dipi tuesday tak wait nahi hoga dear.update soon. . . . .
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Nice concept..plz cntinue dear...thax 4 da pm..but lamba update dena
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok guys. . . . . This is the part 1.there are also some new characters.vo baad me reveal karungi.ok now upeate read karo and then like and comment.



Scores are 24-24. . . . .
1 basket =2 points.

Last basket and ball is in swayam's hand.

Sw thinks "hey bhagwan aaj kuch esa kardo ki me apni team ko jeeta saku."he close his eyes for two seconds and then open his eyes and what he saw. After seeing her he is so happy . . . .

He jump and throw the ball in the basket. And basket. . . . .

The reffry blow the whistle and all lousians scream. . . . . .they all goes and hug swayam.. . . . .

Vi-yes hum jeet gaye. . . .

Ni,bh.amar-yes. . . . .RH back, . .

Rey doesnt utter a word. . . .

All are saying something but swayam is looking in the other direction.

All look at there and all say -sharon. . . . .

Swayam run to sharon and hug her. . .

Sharon also hug him back.

Swayam pick her up and twirls her. . . . After 2 min they broke the hug. . . .and see around. . . . All are looking at them. . . . .

D3 boys do chemistry. . . . .

Sharon see this and blush. . . .

D3 grls come and said-yes we won. . . . Ek group hug to banta hai. . . .

All-ya. . . .

And all hug. . . . .

All-hip hip hurrey . . . .

Sh-guys sirf 11 members. . . . Taani kaha hai?

Sw-ha uski tabiyat thik nahi hai isi liye nahi aayi.

Sh-ok. . . . .

Rey thinks. , tabiyat thik nahi hai ya mujhe avoid kar rahi ho taani. . . .

Sw-are rey tu kaha kho gaya?

Rey-are kuch nahi dude. . . . .bas ese hi. . . . . .

Sw-ok guys. . . . .to canteen?

All-halla bol to the canteen. . . . .

Tayam house

Taani is sitting on the couch near the window. . . . .

She is thinking about the match. . . .

"kya hua hoga . . . .hum jeete hoge?hey krishna ji plz hamari team ko hi jitana. Vese bhi me match dekhne nahi gayi hu to rey ko koi disturbance nahi hua hoga. Me janti hu rey me hamesha aap ke liye problem banti hu isi liye to aaj clg nahi aayi. . . . "

Suddenly her cell beep. Its a msg fron neha that they win. . . . .taani is happy and sad both. Happy becoz their clg win and sad becoz of her and rey's fight. . .

Again she think. . . . "aaj rey kitne khush honge. . . . .finally unhe unka RH wapas mila hai. I m happy for u rey. . . .i m happy for u bhai. And a tear drop roll down on her cheek.

Again her cell beep but this time its a call.

Name flashing on the cell. . . ."MOM CALLING"

Taani wipe her tears and pick up the call.

Ta-hello ma. . . .

Ma-taani. . . .kaisi ho beta?aur swayam kaisa hai?

Ta-hum thik hai ma. . . . .

Ma-but tumhari aawaz se to yahi lagta hai ki tum thik nahi ho.

Ta-nahi esa kuch nahi hai. . . . Bas me thak gayi hu isi liye. . . . . .aur me abhi aap ko hi yad kar rahi thi.

Ma-ok aur swayam kaha hai?

Ta-bhai clg gaye hai ma. . . . .

Ma-ok beta.agar mujhe yad kar rahi ho to kya mujhse milne ka man nahi kar raha?plz tum dono a jao na.tum se mile to zyada waqt nahi hua par swayam. . . . . Us se to me j sal se nahi mili hu.

Ta-ma aap janti hai na papa aur bhai ka purana jaghda. . . . .

Ma-ha vo bhi hai. . . .ok swayam nahi. Tum to aa sakti ho na?

Ta-but bhai yaha akele. . . . .

Ma-sirf thode din ki hi to baat hai. Aur mujhe pata hai vo tumse jyada din dur nahi reh payega.tum yaha aaogi to vo bhi apneaap aa jayega.

Ta-ok ma. . . . Me sham tak ati hu. . .bye.

Ma-bye beta. . . .jaldi aana

Taani cut the call and get up to pack her bag. She open her closet and see rey's photoes.

Seeing this again taani's eyes fill with tears.and she said-rey me ja rahi hu do week ke liye. 2 week aapko me disturb nahi karungi. She take one photo and his face.

Here in the canteen:

All are enjoying.

But rey is sitting io a corner.

Swayam goes there and ask him-rey. . . . Ese kyu betha hai?chal na. . . . Kya hua?

Rey-pata nahi swayam. . . . Bahot becheni ho rahi hai. Esa lag raha hai jese koi apna dur ja raha hai. Esa lag raha hai koi mujhe bahot yad kar raha hai. . . . .

Sw-lagta hai rey tu bahot thak gaya hai. Esa kar tu ghar ja aur aaram kar.

Rey- ok. . . .

Rey going toward his car and thinking-kyu aaj itni becheny ho rahi hai. . . . Aur taani tum match dekhne kyu nahji aayi? Kyu aaj tum mujhe ahot yad aa rahi ho?esa lagta hai jese tum mujhse dur ja rahi ho. Bas ab aur nahi aa j ne tumhe bol hi dunga that i love u. My world is incomplete wid out u.i m incomplete wid out u.i love u i love t i love u. . . . .me aa raha hu taani.

Here taani call vp sir and take 2 week leave.

She lock her closet and come in the hall. She call swayam but he doesnt pick up.

So she write a note

"bhai. . . .me thode din ma ke paas ja rahi hu . Ma to chahti hai ki aap bhi vaha aaye .but phir aap aur papa ka jaghda. Me 2 week me wapas aa jaungi. Tab tak aap apna khayal rakhna aur roz time par khana kha lena. Aup der rat tak jagna mat. Ok bhai bye. . . Take care"

Taani put the note on the table and leave.

Here rey is driving. . . .

Unknowingly his eyes become wet.

Rey- pata nahi aaj aansu kyu aa rahe hai?bas me jaodi se taani ko apne dil ki baat bata du. Phir sab kuch thik hoga. . .

Rey reach tayam house and ring the bell but no one is opening the door. Rey thinks that may be taani is sleeping. Me window se jata hu.

Rey goes in taani's room. But he couldnt find taani.

He goes in the hall and find the note.

He read the note and said-ye kya taani. . . . Me tumhe apne dil ki baat atane aaya aur tum chali gayi. Ok 2 week jyada. Jab tum aaogi tab tumhe surprice dunga. Ok ab swayam ko bhi to batana hai. Agar usse pata chala ki me khidki se yaha aaya to jarur vo mujhpe shak karega. Esa karta hu bahar jakdm usse call karta hu.

Rey goes outside and calls swayam.

Sw-ha rey bolo. . . .

Rey- swayam. . . .ye taani darwaza nahhg khol rahi.

Sw-par tu waha kya kar raha hai?

Rey- vo. . . Vo me bb match ki report ke bare me kuch baat karne aaya tha par taani door open nahi kar rahi.

Sw-kahi uski health zyada to kharab nahi ho gayi hai na?me abhi aata hu.

After 10 min swayam come and open the door with another key and go in her room. But she is not there. He search her in whole house and come in the hall. . . . . .

Rey-are swayam yaha koi note hai.

Swayam take the note and read.

And said- taani. . . . Ye kya. . . .2 weeks. . . .thik hai me koshish karunga ki tumhare bina ye 2 week reh saku. Jaldi aana.

Then reyam talk for some time and then rey goes.

Precap-taani reach jodhpur. She meet her family,friends and feeling happy.

Then next day she and swayam are talking with video call. All grls and sw are there.

Nilesh vicky bharat rey and amar are not there.

Then suddenly boys come. They are laughing. They didnt saw taani is on video chat.

Taani saw rey and think rey mere bina kitne khush hai. . . . Mera unse dur rehna hi thik hai.

After some time taani say bye to all.

Then she goes to market for shopping wid her frnds and meet a lady and gentalman.


Ok so guys Hows it ?do u all like it? if yes Then like and comment.


Edited by dipi_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yipee..i m first one 2 comment..,its very cool update..bechara rey hamesha taani ke liye sochtha rahtha...thx 4 da pm ..next part jaldi update karna

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