Prishna OS 7 - That Precious Day!

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Prishna OS ' 7 - That Precious Day!

Pintu and Krishna were blissful with their little Gudiya whom they had named - ' Anupama ' one beyond comparison as she truly was incomparable! One day Krishna had returned from her training, fed her little doll and was burping her lest she had stomach pain when Pintu walks in having just returned from work. He spots this beautiful duo in complete harmony of each other's company ' "How lucky am I?" - he thinks and feels proud of his prized possessions!

Krishna puts Anupama down gently to sleep and smiles at Pintuji. He walks close to his baby and tells Krishna - " I'll freshen up and be back soon." . He gets back and sits next to Krishna on the bed with his hand over her shoulder in a light hug. Krishna rests cozily in his strong yet gentle arms and says - " Pintuji, do remember THAT DAY?". Pintuji and Krishna share a glance and smile at each other. They exactly knew what the other meant.

Flash back - the kidnap scene

Krishna was so scared and angry at Pintu's pranks. He had fooled her and got her to Bhopal for his friend's birthday. But she had pardoned him for that as he made up with those beautiful gifts with "Sorry" on them! His pranks did not end there'.After the party, he had another one in store for his beloved Shrimatiji! They left the party late at night and Pintu was driving a car given by the Scindias to a beautiful house ' a holiday spot ' specially planned out by him. Krishna was wondering as they needed to catch the train back home next morning and what was all this for! As usual he did not want to share anything and asked to just wait and watch.

They reached there and got into their suite beautifully decorated with flowers'. Krishna simply froze'. She wasn't ready for this. Definitely not in an alien place'. She stammers - " Pintuji, What is all this? " . Pintuji looks at her apologetically and smiles. He goes near her and tries to comfort her as she was so nervous and sort of feeling way too awkward at this situation.

He gives her a gentle hug and says ' - "Krishna, I really have been missing you,,,,,,,weren't you too missing being with me? Come on, tell me honestly." He breaks away from the hug and looks at her. She is smiling sweetly but unable to look into his eyes,,,,He gets the answer he wanted. He knew she would never word her feelings,,,she was not the types,,,,,,,,,,,,,very hesitant ,,,very reserved in all these matters. He lifts her in his arms while she is taken by surprise and takes her towards the bed all decorated for them. Krishna begins to feel the jitters. She is happy yet somewhat unsure about what next,,,,,. He places her on the bed with her head resting on the pillow as her hair lies all over and she looks even more desirable. He moves closer to her and starts caressing her cheeks.. Krishna enjoys every moment though Pintu knows that she is still very nervous.

As he rests himself on her he wants to be sure yet again if she was fine. He asks her - "Krishna, are you for it? If not, I can always wait till you feel more comfortable." No reply from his wife only makes him feel that maybe he was rushing things too fast. He raises himself and moves away from her only to be held back by a soft shivering hand. Krishna holds him ' not letting him leave. He turns back to look at her while she is still looking the other way but her hand had his in a tight grip. She pulls him towards her and then looks at him. He could see passion in her eyes which he was waiting for. In just a few moments he finds himself back in the same position of close proximity with her. Krishna knew this would be the day - so did Pintu! As Pintu hugged her tight, he also cared that he was not too heavy on her. He asks yet again - " Am I too heavy on you?" . Krishna for once gives him a reply which sort of shocks him. She tells him ' "We can always find another way then."- And to the surprise of Pintu she turns him around and both roll over now Krishna lying over Pintu. Her hair had found itself over Pintu's face. Pintu moves it away to see a beautiful Krishna happy and glowing and attractive. They spend a few minutes in that position admiring each other when Pintu yet again rolls her back and this time he decides not to talk anymore!!

Pintu and Krishna are bonded into a union ' of the hearts and souls ' filled with happiness and bliss.

The mobile alarm rings and Pintu in the middle of his sleep just stops it and opens his eyes. He sees Krishna blissfully lying on him and he gently wakes her up. It was time for the train back home. Krishna gets up ' slightly uncomfortable at the new morning after that special night! She and Pintu share a glance one of love, and complete oneness that they always felt. They get ready to leave the place. Krishna hugs Pintuji tight and starts weeping. He offers her comfort. She tells him that she never wanted to get back as it would again mean them living separately. She thanks him for kidnapping her,,,,for at least they could spend some precious moments together.

Back to the present - Pintu tells Krishna ' - "How can I forget that day which had resulted in this beautiful Gudiya? Krishna had you said - No - then - maybe we would not have had her ,,,,I mean now,,,,,Thank you!" Krishna gives him a tight hug and says ' "She has also brought so much happiness into our lives. She has got us closer too, hasn't she? She also is going to be her Dad's darling daughter! I only hope in a few years you don't side-line me from your life!" Pintu says ' " Never ' will that happen Collector biwi,,,,,,,Never!" Both of them smile and rest in each other's hug fully content with themselves.

Hope you all enjoyed it..a scene that was missed by all of us!😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was hoping that the 1st thing i would read was your OS. Amazing this was the way that scene should have ended. They should hav just shown this scene in the show it would only hav been for a few min. Bt in any case i enjoyed imaging it. Loved it to the core. Thanks shanti
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Actually Sandia - I was always left wondering how this pregnancy thing came up all of a sudden as they had hardly stayed together..

So the only way I could think of is putting up a scene where they had indeed gone to Bhopal - so it could have happened there!

Otherwise Prishna and their family were fine - but not having a single scene of ANYTHING at all and then the baby was a like not acceptable to me!😃

Thanks for liking it...I had to edit a few parts as I felt then it would be for adult reading only!
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Originally posted by: kmfan_2

Actually Sandia - I was always left wondering how this pregnancy thing came up all of a sudden as they had hardly stayed together.So the only way I could think of is putting up a scene where they had indeed gone to Bhopal - so it could have happened.Otherwise Prishna and their family were fine - but not having a single scene of ANYTHING at all and then the baby was a like not acceptable to meThanks for liking it...I had to edit a few parts as I felt then it would be for adult reading only!</font>[/DIV][/DIV]

the last part i noticed whilst reading it i think all the members that comment are over 18 bt who knows about the rest that view our topics must remember them when i post my scenes.

i couldnt believe the way that baby track came about they just should hav shown something happen btw thd 2. I was like WTH how did that happen. This is probably the only couple i hav seen that dnt hav a consumation track.
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Wow Wow Shanti Di MAazing Amazing Scene which We all wanted to see . We all wanted to see the Consummation scene b/w Prishna which we never got .But By reading ur Beautiful So Romantic OS about it made me imagine the whole scene of Prishna 😳 . Well Done Di 👏

Do Write more Di .Abhi toh bas ussika sahara hai .
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Wow beautifulll OS shanti. Wow kya name hai anupama and kya scenes diye back flash mein. Now we know when and how it happened😉😆
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wowww wonderful di... i really really enjoy it😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks Shanti for that Romantic OS...I too thought that had to be the magical day,,,,and waited and waited and waited for some kind of flashback moment but to no avail,,,nothing,,
Thanks again,,,,,isn't Pintu too sweet
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Absolutely loved it, I have no words, just loved it
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Originally posted by: trinilisa

Thanks Shanti for that Romantic OS...I too thought that had to be the magical day,,,,and waited and waited and waited for some kind of flashback moment but to no avail,,,nothing,,

Thanks again,,,,,isn't Pintu too sweet


Pintu is the perfect pati! Hope you read my post on that too...written long back!😊

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