ArHi FF: Finding Solace# 3 *Completed*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me Dancing!!!!

I am so happy I am first...

congrats on your new thread!!!!

waiting for the update!

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Back on time to unres (that also without a reminder😳)

I am super happy that I was first for an AWESOME update!

So Shyaam is not a Snakewa...I really love his character here!

One update and so much of change...Arnav tolerating and even thanking Shyaam! He also acknowledged the fact that he needs Khushi not only for himself but also For Arya( I just love arya...she is such a sweetheart).

Khushi on the other hand didn't go all egoistic on arnav but cared to observe the pain he is going through...and also tried to ease it!

Their first kiss was beautifully written. I am not gifted enough with words to praise you!!!

PS: I have a feeling Aakash and Mama returning will bring a new turn!


Edited by arnavbarun - 12 years ago
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Me ~Edit~

What an update? I read this twice to believe I was actually reading this. I have to hand it to you; the whole thing was handled well. In view of a delicate issue as men eve teasing, you did not delve on it too much to make us uncomfortable but delicately hinted at it. I like that sensitivity in you as a writer.

Shyam, I like in your stories alone and that is huge for me and you better pat yourself on the back for that achievement. I admire the chivalry in the man and the cultured way he handled an obviously difficult situation. He could have taunted Arnav and used the situation to his advantage but did not, that only a gentleman can do.

Anjali is shrewd beyond belief, is in a relationship with Shyam but did not reveal it to her brother; I am so impressed cannot tell you. Her concern for Khushi's wellbeing is not misplaced and that is encouraging to read, sure she has an ulterior motive but she is still sensitive to Khushi and her delicate state.

And their first kiss *sigh* and *sigh* what am I to say, when I can say nothing and that in itself is a rarity. The conversation preceding the kiss was so genuine and heart felt. One accepting the short comings and the other accepting the short comings for what it is and agreeing to a life promised with a lot; love, tears, joy, happiness, fights and everything in between. I so adore the couple now, if I liked Khushi before, now I absolutely love her for her level headedness. She rocks, man'.

Arnav was so sensible and sensitive after the fight, I have to hand it to him, and he did handle the situation the best to his ability. Even the kiss, he made sure it was about Khushi and not just him, more brownie points for that. Yes Khushi, please kiss him good night like that each and every night.

Again, kickass update...have to ask, when is the next one coming up?

PS ' this girl Arya is a darling and sure needs all the love that should come her way. Complan is the best and it gives the adults energy to do a lot more than grow up 😉

Edited by Kalyaani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yiu won't give in, will you?

You heartless girl

You are such a tease

You'll make us beg and beg for them to finally do it :p

I have a bad feeling about shyam

What if he staged the whole thing?

Anjali clearly knows how arnav feels about khushi

Great update babes

Ps: the complan part was too cute :D
Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 12 years ago
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The first scene reminded me of Shyam's introduction in the show...:D

Why is Shyam not supposed to enter this house??

But loved how Arnav actually thanked Shyam for saving Khushi eventhough he hates him. He didn't mind his presence in his house only because he saved khushi. It just shows how important Khushi is to him now. But why was Shyam banished in the first place?

Sure Anjali and Shyam see what Khushi means to Arnav... I just want to know the past...

And so Arnav saw the element of disappointment in Shyam's eyes? but Is he going to wake up anytime soon to find out about what his dear sister is doing behind his back with Shyam??

Why is Akash coming being delayed??...will Akash's arrival have a twist in the story?? Positive or negative??

So Arnav Singh raizada went through a week of Guilty phase and finally came over it...It was so endearing how he asked Khushi to be with him for Arya...How every step of the way he's proving to Khushi that she means a lot more to him than he let her know...Staying away from his daughter because his daughter was with Khushi all the time...was just so sad :( And his feeling that he was not a good dad was sad too...He's the best dad ! He loves Arya so much ! He's given her everything he could... :D

And their kiss...
First kiss ho tho aisi...
Only in the last update's comment I remember mentioning they hadn't kissed yet... And Arnav really wants to be kissed good night lik this everyday?? He really has to change his name to Arnav Self-control Raizada 😆


Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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REs

~Edit~

I am sure Arya made both Khushi AND Arnav have lots of Complan, how else do you explain this beautiful, mature and adult manner in which they handled the situation ? Complan peeke bade ho gaye dono !

I loved this update for very many reasons - Shyam is a true gentleman. He saved Khushi, yet he did not use that as trump card to be used against Arnav. Anjali may be concealing information from her brother, but her concern for Khushi is genuine. Arnav is a darling, perfectly imperfect. Cannot apologise, but his actions more than make up for it. So much so a man with that big an ego admitted his insecurities and shortcomings. Slight vulnerability always makes a man more attractive, at least to me. And Khushi in completely in tune with the strange language in which Arnav speaks - his actions, his silence, his gestures and his many small and large sacrifices. So lovely!

Their first kiss was perfect Saiyyu. Khushi sensed Arnav's hesitation and took the first step, now I love her even more! She is a rockstar, really! Arnav Stubborn Raizada to Arnav Self-Control Raizada - the transition has been flawless. Super update, darling!
Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago
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Oh, I love it when Arnav pursues an upset Khushi!!!& how he so perceptively understood what Khushi had been going through since that cocktail party!!

& the phone sex???My my!!!I had been missing so much!!!Like seriously!!!

& I love how open they are about their passion for each other..

The diwali party seriously reminded me of the 'Jadu hain nasha' sequence...& the poolside reminded me of the 'Almost kiss'...But what happened next was...unexpected!!!

Shaym is Arya's Mamu??

& why is Aman nmaking me dislike himself, I liked him so much without even seeing him..Why does he need to go for Khushi??!!

& now Akaash...But he might be good for Arnav, as we know how little competition makes him go all crazy!!!!

Oh..continue soon Saiyyu...

PS: That 'Khushi loosening her bathrobe' sequence...???You had me ☺️ full time!!!
Edited by farah53 - 12 years ago
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On a normal day, Arnav would have dodged Anjali's questions regarding Khushi lest she bothers him later for the very same. He felt rejected before realising his error followed by an intuition that Khushi was in danger. The panic he felt for her made him for the first time display his concern towards Khushi in front of his sister when she had stopped him.
The height of emotions he felt only raised it's bar when he saw the one person he would not want to meet even if the rest were wiped out of the world, enter the premises. The fact that Khushi was unconscious and in a bad shape made him automatically assume the worst that Shyam had harmed her.
Shyam is a fishy guy. The look of disappointment at Arnav's concern for Khushi, him preventing Arnav from carrying her; one thing that is assured is he sure tried to get into the good books of the latter. Perfect timings and a perfect choice of words while retreating, Opportunist did he say?
Arnav felt guilty as hell and unworthy to the extent of calling himself a failure. He distanced himself from the two most important people of his life being in the same house in a manner of self reproach. This is the same guy who did not wish to let Khushi go home for Diwali, the same guy who loved Arya more than anything in the world.
Arnav Khushi scene was perfect. Khushi understanding this man and lending her silent support, Arnav seeking for Khushi's help in bringing up Arya, Khushi taking the initiative to start their first kiss. That was beautiful, she taking the lead while he controlled himself with the resolve that it was her day, her wish was more important than him exploring her. The very thought that he wants to prove worthy of her before making her his shows the vast improvement between the man at the party and the present one.
Edited by sj_arhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res 😳

Woohoo !!! Was just stalking by !!!!😆😆

Now waiting for update

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