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Originally posted by: Cordelia

amazing hun! 👏 perfectly written as usual!!

the phrase "diya tale andhera" comes to mind though... 😭

Thanks Cordy!!! 😊

Oh, BTW that diya tale andhera.. is that some sad song or poem.. and why are u crying sweetie...??

The lines I penned were supposed to be hopeful not sad... Aww man... now I am supposed to look glum...!!!

Excellent Sareeta. There is so much hope for Jai with Bani on his side. As you put it yes she is his light, which helps him.

Good poem, Sareeta... 👏

Wish it held true but JW has already proved that the lamp is quickly extinguished when the lady is not there ... or is it a case of whilst following the lamp, he can't distinguish between the ladies ... 😕

Originally posted by: sareeta

Thanks Cordy!!! 😊

Oh, BTW that diya tale andhera.. is that some sad song or poem.. and why are u crying sweetie...??

The lines I penned were supposed to be hopeful not sad... Aww man... now I am supposed to look glum...!!!

no no you're not supposed to look glum!! the poem is beautifully hopeful, but it just made me think of a book i read where someone pointed out that it is always darkest directly beneath the flame of a diya - just hope it doesn't apply to our Bani dearest! 😉 sorry didnt mean to bring everyone down!! 😳

Originally posted by: Cordelia

no no you're not supposed to look glum!! the poem is beautifully hopeful, but it just made me think of a book i read where someone pointed out that it is always darkest directly beneath the flame of a diya - just hope it doesn't apply to our Bani dearest! 😉 sorry didnt mean to bring everyone down!! 😳

Aww thanks cordy for clarifying, I had got a totally wrong picture... I was imaging it to be some song or something... jus lost the line of thought...

Thanks buddy!😊

Sareeta very well written.
I really hope that the lady with lamp stays with Jai and does not abandon him at the time of his most dark days. i.e, when his infedilty's known to all. She keeps faith him.

Thank you all for reading the post and appreciating it and sharing your thoughts! 😊

Sareeta