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Posted: 12 years ago
di it's 9 so night hi hua na😆
UPDATE KAHA HAI??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 21


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@Sia: Love you sweety 🤗 This Update is for you 😊😃


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*SLAP* The slap echoed in the hall shocking all the people. They are just gaping at the person in front of them. The person who got slapped is seething in anger. And the person who slapped is also in anger. People around them are shocked, they had a fight but this is too far. "Hey you, think before you talk anything rubbish with my friends. I have warned you already don't mess up with my friends, I wont tolerate but today you crossed your limits with mis-behaving with my friend" warned the girl who slapped the other boy. "What you think of yourself ha, you are after all a first year student. Its just a sem you joined in college but see the audacity. Don't forget that we are your seniors" retorted that boy back.

"Senior or anyone GEET RAICHAND don't spare non-sense. Did you forget Mr. Senior last week you lost the match with your juniors. And now showing attitude to us" laughed geet so as her friends. "Listen you Ms. Geet, lets play one game. Who will loose the game, they have to do whatever told by the winning team. Done?" challenged the senior. Geet smirked "Done" "Tomorrow morning 10am sharp. Don't be late" warned the senior. "Make sure you wont be late" told geet and left from there and her friends followed her. They all left to caf and ordered their lunch. All her friends are looking at geet as if she is some alien. "What happened?" asked geet annoyed.

"How can you do that?" asked her friend finally. "What did I do? Don't tell me you all are scared of the match?" asked geet getting angry. "Of course geet, we are. How can we play with them?" asked samrat geet's best buddy. "Shut up you moron, don't talk like that in front of me. Before breaking their bones I will break yours" snapped geet which made him shut. At that time there comes a group of 6-7 students towards geet. Geet stood up seeing them. "Hey guys, no need to worry about the game we are with you. We will win the match and let that batch out of the college. What say?" asked the seniors gang. Now the whole gang smiled at them. "Sure" shouted all. They all attended their classes. Evening geet is waiting for her car, she desperately want to go home.

Here comes the introduction of Geet Raichand, 18 years old, studying Architecture 1st year. Lives in Raichand Mansion, cute, bubbly and not to forget stubborn girl. She gets what she wants but don't crib for anything. Now she takes decision on her own, never depends on anyone. Sam and Abay are her best buddies in college. Hates the senior Amit. He lusts geet and always tries to come to her. But for geet he never exists. She enjoys her life to the core with her friends. As years passed the hatred on mohinder amplified. She wants to destroy him completely and his so-called wife. But till today she didn't know who is their son. Geet has each and every information about Mohinder. Geet loves to go to pubs but she should be at home at 10pm sharp and is not allowed to go out at nights. All thanks to maan for this rule. But her anger is not that she cant go but abay who enjoys in pub and tell her how he enjoyed. This angers her and they both end up in fighting like cat and dogs until Rajni come and warn Abay but not geet.

Geet sat in the car, she is heading towards Raichand Mansion. Geet closed her eyes and is thinking what happened 3 years back.

3 years back in India:

Khurana's rejoiced when they came to know about geet. Pooja is over moon so as dadi. They decided to go to London and search for geet. They were so excited. Maan is happy seeing them mainly his maa. She was never this happy. "Geet you are life of this house. Now everything is normal I am very happy to see maa smiling and excited to see you" thought maan. maan is just silently watching them doing all the arrangements. Just then maan's mobile rang. Its from his mishty.

"Hiii geet" wished maan happily. "You are sounding so happy, what is the matter?" asked geet. "Geet, everyone came to know that you are fine" told maan. geet is shocked "What" shouted geet. "How maan? I told you not to tell anyone. Then why you told" shouted geet angrily. "Geet listen fully before you come to any conclusion idiot" scolded maan. "Ok sorry tell me" told geet pouting. Maan told what all happened a couple of hours ago. "Omg , itna sab kuch hogaya" thought geet. "Maa, papa I know you will be worried but maa I cant come to india now, I cant leave the person live in peace who killed my mother. No maa, I should watch his each and every act. You will be worried and always think of me maa if I wont talk to you" thought geet. "Maan, I need to talk to maa and papa. Please put the phone on speaker" told geet. Maan nodded and went to his parents room. Pooja is busy in packing while Raghu is trying for flight tickets for the next day.

"Maa, Papa" called geet but not maan. Pooja saw towards entrance and saw maan, she expected geet came back to them. He showed phone to them. "Maa, papa geet bol rahi hu" told geet. "Geet beta where are you? How are you? Where you are staying? Hayee rabba maaji tho yaha aagayi. Tum waha London mein akeli" pooja is going on with her question. "Maa maa I am fine. I am staying with a Indian family here. Maa, you know they are treating like their own daughter" told geet. Pooja sighed in relief. "Beta tell me where are you? We will come there" told pooja smiling. Finally she is in relief that her geet is safe. "Maa, I wont come to India now" told geet sternly. "Geet, what you are saying? Why?" asked pooja who is shocked. "Maa, how can I leave the person who killed my maa. I will destroy him maa. I will" told geet in rage. But as a mother pooja felt a pain in her voice more than anger. A 15 year old girl facing a lot in this tender age. "Geet meri baat suno" tried pooja to talk.

"No maa, I am not going to come there. But maa one day your geet will come back to you. Aapke alawa mere liye kaun hain maa" told geet getting emotional. "Maa, don't worry about me. I am fine here. Please maa, I need your blessings to win this battle" told geet. One side pooja is happy and proud of her child and on the other hand she is worried what will happen if Mohinder come to know about geet. "Geet beta our blessings are always with you. And you will be successful in your war" told pooja proudly. "Papa, don't you talk to me" asked geet. Raghu who is still in trance listening geet came out of his reverie when he heard geet calling him.

"I know my geet as a prankster and love troubling her maan and papa. But today whom I am talking with, is you the same geet which I know from her childhood?" asked raghu with pain. How a 15 year old girl changed herself to be strong and now is burning in rage to destroy her own father. Geet smiled sadly. "Shayad wo geet mar gayi apni papa ke sach jaane ke baad. Everything has changed papa, I don't know how will I survive without you all. But papa I want to win this battle and want to punish that man. I thought he loves me more than his life but he is the one who tried to kill me. Why didn't I die that day papa, if I died that day then I would have not come to know about that man. Shayad mere babaji chate hain ki main iss sach ka samna karna hain" told geet. "My geet will be successful and one day we will see you as a successful girl. We will be waiting for that day geet. Our blessing are with you. Geet your whole family will be waiting for you" told raghu.

"Thank you papa, papa I need a small help from you" asked geet. "Yes geet?" asked raghu. "Mohinder handa and his wife Rupinder are having a son who is of maan's age. But he is not staying with them. I need to find out who is he?" told geet. Maan and Raghu smirked, "GEET HANDA IS IN ACTION" thought maan and felt proud of his mishty. "I will find out geet" told raghu. "Will meet you soon papa" told geet and cut he call.

Geet came out of her thoughts when driver told they reached home. She nodded and got down of the car. She saw abay is pacing here and there in the garden. "Sam I hate you" thought geet and plastered a fake smile on her face. "Hii abay" wished geet. "Hii ki bachi, what the hell did you do in the college. I didn't come for one day and you did your man mani" shouted abay getting angry when he came to know that geet slapped Amit.

"Mr. Abay Raichand, don't raise your voice. For your kind information its because of you I slapped him. How dare he bad mouthed about you" retorted geet in anger. "But geet dear, you know about him and his gang right?" asked abay. "He too has to know about Geet and to what extent she can go" told geet. There is anger, confidence in her voice. Abay thought not to extend the argument. "Hey geet, today I am going to disco. You want to come" asked abay giving his cheesy smile.

"Please please lekar chalo na" asked geet making puppy face. "Sure geet" told abay for which geet smiled widely. But the next second her smiled converted into frown. "Ask maan bhai and then come" told abay laughing loudly. "Yeh tumara maan bhai hain na, he don't enjoy and don't allow me to enjoy. What will happen if I go out after 10pm?" asked geet angrily which only made abay laugh loudly. This is her dialogue daily from past 2 years, he is used to that. "Geet, My maan bhai is best. Better don't say anything against him" gave abay dhamki to geet. "When I go to delhi na, main maan se chun chunk e badla lungi ha" told geet and went inside to complaint about abay to Rajni maa.

"Maan bhai, you care for geet a lot. 6 years you didn't meet but your love for geet is beyond limits. Bhai, the next coming month will change geet's life entirely. The step she is going to take is risky and I am tensed. Bhai geet needs you. Hope you come here when she is taking crucial step of her life" thought abay and called maan to tell about geet's deeds today.

precap: ????????


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Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update di
love the new confident GEET RAICHAND
now geet only have one aim
nd that is to destroy mohinder handa nd his family
don't know why but mujhe lag raha hai
amit is son of mohinder
nd abhay maan ka chamcha ban gaya hai
geet ki every information maan ko deta hai
Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update

Geet totally rock

Loved the Sherni Geet in collg

Finally Maan parents had spoken to Geet

Waiting for Geet to win the challenge n Maaneet meeting
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update

loved the bold geet
wat is she up to

and even staying so far maan is bossing geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
i like this Geet...bindaas and confident ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...loved the part...
waiting for maaneet meeting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb part👏
eagerly waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Starting mein toh apne mujhe shock hi de diya tha geet raichand bol kar interesting m liking this geet bold bindas and thodi si jungli 😛
bt kahin na kahin in this journey of revenge she must be missing maan and geet😔
haye my maan is so possesive no disc after 10 pm 😉😆
i dnt like that amit 😡 mujhe toh lagta hai wohi mohinder an rupa ka beta hoga😕
and geet kya karne wali hw wil she take revenge???maaneet meeting ??me very eager continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the geet attitude's Awesome update

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