You're my destiny(Poetry)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello, it's my first post here, and it's a poetry. I hope you like it and i'm waiting your opinion. Kisses.



My innocens is gone,
Here is no one.
Who cares for me?
Just tell me.

I've lost the loveliness,
Here is just loneliness,
And i want you again,
I want you to come in.

I want your kiss,
Right here, on my lips.
I want you for eternity
Because you're my destiny.



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Posted: 12 years ago
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*unres*

Look who is first! 😎

Danny! 🤗

I just loved the poem!

Why can't I double like it??

Its just soo nice!

Do write more! 😃

Preetha:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you di,<3. Love u:).
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thats a lovely one dear...thnx for d PM
keeo writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice Poem
Thanks for the PM
Take care
Geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely one dear...❤️
go on writing...
Thanks for pm..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thats a lovely one dear...thnx for d PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sweet and wonderfulll 👏
write more dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you all, for your opinions:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh, this is so beautiful, I love it so much. Ah, my talented siss >:D< Love you, this is awesome <3

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