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Originally posted by: Ash1991

amazing update...

glad maan learned that geets fine...
can't wait to see mohinder suffer...


Thank you dear 😊, yup maan knows about geet now. He will suffer for sure 😊
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Originally posted by: seemamary

Superb one, awesome dear. Thank god geet contacted maan. continue soon.


thank you dear 😊, yup finally maan came to know about geet
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Originally posted by: aroran

Simply Awsm. Loved it 🤗


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Thank you 😊
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Updating tomorrow morning 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hope geet mohindar ko jaldi se punish kare and maan ke pass aa jaye...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved a lot
sorry for late reply, had exams
continue soon
waiting
happy new year😊
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Part 20

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sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry for late update. Update was ready but my son didnt let me come online today he was playing here and there and i was running behind him 😊 So now he slept and i am here updating 😊

I have replied to everyone for the last Update, replies start from page 92.

@Ritzy: You asked me about Mohinder and i replied to you in detail 😊


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After talking with maan felt lite and happy. After so many days his face glowed and lips cured into a small smile. He so want to tell his family about geet mainly maa, but he cant geet took promise from him that he wont tell anyone about her whereabouts. Finally maan is happy, he saw his friends are coming towards him with a smile playing on their lips too. Adi came and hugged maan.

"We are sorry maan, after hearing what Vicky told us we thought you are thinking too much and your blind belief will harm you. But no you are right. Our geet is alive" told adi happily. Maan smiled at him and told "I know adi, if anything happens to geet I just cant live in peace. My heart says if she is in any trouble" told maan. His friends smiled at him happily. Even they were also tensed seeing maan so silent and not concentrating on anything. Now they all sighed in relief, his belief in his love made geet safe.

But here is lost in his thoughts. "Where will geet stay in London, definitely she will not stay with mohinder papa. Now what should I do? First I have to find out where is geet and who is that friend. Agrrrhhh geet you will always do this to me. I will go to London, I want to go" cribbed maan to imaginary geet in front of him.

"Oyy yaar, where you are lost?" asked aparna. "Nothing" told maan annoyed. "Oh Oh seemd like you are lost in your geet's thoughts" teased aparna. "Just shut up yaar" told maan and left from there leaving them confused. Karan is confused with his behaviour. He followed maan to ask what happened to him, he must be happy right? "Maan, what happened?" asked karan stopping him. "Nothing karan. I will leave for today" told maan. "Is anything bothering you maan?" asked karan. "Now what should I do? I know geet is safe, but at home everyone is sad for geet. I cant share this happiness to them too. Geet told so, I cant even see them sad" told maan not able to understand what to do. Karan understood the matter but he too don't know why geet said so. "Maan don't worry when time comes your parents will also come to know the truth" told karan and placed a assuring hand on his shoulder. But maan just nodded. One side he is very happy that his geet talked with him and she is fine. And mainly when he came to know that she is not angry on him. She only called him as she knows he will be very worried about her. That made him happy knowing that his geet trusts him more than anything in this world. That's enough for him to wait for her. And at the same time he is sad for his happy they are so depressed thinking geet is no more. But his promise that he wont tell anyone made him shut. But for time being he let it go. He will try to act normal in front of his family. But least he does know what is happening in KM.


In KM:


All are in their own world thinking about geet. How lively KM use to be when she was here now KM lost its color. Its like no one is living in this house, its very silent and dark. Geet took the brightness of the KM with her. Vicky and annie went to school to give their exams. They got the special admission in their school in the middle of the academic year. Dadi is in her room, though there is no mistake of her but she is feeling guilty. Being with geet all the time she couldn't save her is the only thought coming in her mind. Pooja and raghu are in Hall sitting silently. Pooja didn't eat anything properly from many days. "Pooja can you give me coffee?" asked raghu at least by working she will distract herself. Pooja nodded and got up. just at that time door bell rang. Raghu was about to get up but pooja stopped him.

"I will see" told pooja and walked towards the door. She opened the door and saw Police inspector at the door. She is confused and shocked to see inspector here. "Hello Mrs. Khurana" wished inspector. "Hello inspector, come in" invited pooja. "Yes inspector?" asked pooja. Raghu who came there seeing inspector, wished and shook hands with him. "Sorry to disturb you sir but there is a good news for you" told inspector. Both of them looked at him confused. "Sir actually savitri ma'am filed a missing case on geet in London. London police confirmed that geet is dead. But sir it is a small misunderstanding. That girl is not geet, but other citizen of London which they came to know after wards. Geet Handa is alive" told inspector.

Pooja and raghu looked at him shocked, its like their life came back to them. Their geet is alive and what they need other than that. At that time maan came to KM after college. When he heard what inspector told them he did a little bhangra inside his heart. Now he is happy very happy. Their family came to know about geet. And what he needed other than this. "They tried to contact savitri ma'am but she already left London. When they enquired about her they came to know that she is a co-MD of KC. So they informed delhi police about that" told inspector. "Thank you inspector, we are so happy" told raghu and shook his hands. "Its our duty sir" told inspector and left from there.


In London:


Geet cut the call after talking with maan. After that day she faced a lot. Now she is all lone in London but is happy to talk with maan. She felt lite when she shared all her pain with maan and cried her heart out in front of him. thought he is not with her but his words are enough to sooth her. "You are the best thing that happened to me maan. Your friendship is something which I can never lose" thought geet and smiled from her heart. Abay's mom who came with lunch to geet heard her convo with maan. She came in and placed the food tray aside. Geet smiled at her but rajni (Abay's mom) cupped her face and kissed her forehead.

"You know what geet, you are a brave girl. I don't know that a 15 year old girl can think this maturely because I didn't think like you. Yes dear, I too faced the same situation like you. My dad betrayed my mom and she killed herself leaving me all alone in this world. I thought to end my life but its your uncle who gave me courage to live my life again. But dear I didn't think like you. I am really proud of you dear. After facing a lot in my life I am happy today and I am sure one day you will be so happy in your life again" told rajni and wiped her own tears.

"Aunty, you never know I never take decisions on my own. I always depend on my maan. He will always take decisions for me and they will always be correct. But I fight with him. That day I too thought like you aunty. I too thought to end my life but I thought why should I end my life because of that person. I am not alone aunty may be my maa left me and my dad is a cheater. But aunty I have my pooja maa, raghu papa, dadi, Vicky, annie and my maan who always cares for me. When I have them why should I end my life. And that day I remembered what maan told me, think twice before doing anything and I decided not to end my life but that persons life who killed my mother. I promised to maan that one day I will come to him and I wont break my promise" told geet, rajni looked at her and smiled. She also saw some glow in her eyes when she told about maan.

"Geet I always wanted a daughter. But today I got a daughter in you. Will you be my daughter geet, will you call me maa and will you stay in this house as my daughter?" asked rajni. Geet looked at her shocked, she didn't expect this from her. "Aunty, I don't want to become burden to anyone. I will stay in hostel aunty, but I promise I will come to meet you frequently" told geet. "Geet you are not a burden to us dear. You are like my daughter. Main kabhi nahi chati ki you face anything worst in your life again, I loved your confidence, I like the way you respect and love your loved once. And forget about staying in hostel I cant let a girl stay in hostel when she needs her family" told rajni lovingly.

Geet is having years by now. She hugged rajni tightly. "Aunty, one side my own father tried to kill me and on other side I am a complete stranger to you but you are treating me like your daughter" cried geet both out of grief and happiness. Rajni is caressing her hair soothing her pain. "I love you maa" told geet hugging her tight. After pooja, rajni is the first one who showered her so much love. She felt safe and secure in her arms. "Oh oh rajni you did a big mistake yaar. I thought to make geet as my girl friend" came a voice. Geet broke the hug and looked at Mr. Raichand who is making a baby face. when he came he saw the whole atmosphere is very emotional and he thought to make the situation light.

"Oh dad, you know its very tough to handle geet. She is most stubborn girl I have ever seen" told abay. Before Jai (Mr. raichand) reply geet got up wiping her tears. "Actually Mr. Raichand I am also thinking the same. Would you like to come on a date with me?" asked geet and laughed. Her smile reached her eyes. "Its my pleasure dear" told Jai and hugged her dearly. They all had lunch, Abay is very much happy to see geet smiling and talking again. She is back to herself. Rajni and Jai came to know how talkitive and fun loving girl is geet. 😃


Precap: Second precap continues 😳


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Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago

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