Dark VirMan FF:Break-Up Again?ll Pt5-Pg16..28/7/13

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heeey!
I guess yoou might be fed up of seeing me all over the forum with my not so great not so faab FF's but for all those who like it...Here's a this is based on a true love story...Guess whose???...Mine :) The only difference is that this will have a happy ending and mine didn't :)
Part 1 will be updated tomorrow...Please give me a good response :)

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Index
Part 1-Page 3
Part 2-Page 5
Part 3-Page 8
Part 4-Page 11
Part 5-Page 16
Edited by kushalkidewaani - 12 years ago

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AmnaZaYa thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update soon and do pm me😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please pm me wen u update.And coming to u,Ur happy beginning didn't start to end.Wait for it jaan.😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pm me start soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Looking foward to it...
Everyone deserves a Happy ending & if it didn't happen with you, U surely will get a Happy ending Coz no one can guarantee that you wouldn't...😊
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow!! Awesome!!
Looking forward to reading it!!
You'll soon have a happy ending, just wait 4 it!!
Continue soon & thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx 4 d pm
Waiting 4 ur update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update soon and do pm me😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waiting for Pm for the first part... Do it soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1
This FF is a VirMan School FF...Virat and Manvi are in Grade 8...And are in the same class...
Manvi's best friends are Shivali,Abhirami,Beverly,Malita,Evander,Arfath and Virat :P
But her bestest bestest bestest one is Amanda :)
Virat's best friends were Avisnash,Shanab,Julius,Ahmed and Rawin :)...One recess when both of them were out together...
But his bestest bestest bestest one is Amanda :)
Virat:C'mon Manvi you know that I ain't gonna tell anyone who it is...Tell me whose your crush...
Manvi:I cant yaaar..
Virta:Just telll..I promise I wont tell anyone..
Manvi:Really??
Virat:Yaaa..
Manvi:Promise?!
Virat:Promiseee...
Manvi:It's yooouu...
Virat stands awestruck and says
Virat:Really...Are you serious?!?
Manvi: Yeaaa...
Virat stands awestruck...Amanda is standing at the canteen and Manvi spots her...Manvi runs to her :)
Manvi:Amaaandaaa...Guess what happened today?!?
Amanda:Kya re Mannu?!?
Manvi:today I
Amanda:Okkkieee wait wait wait lemme guess...uhmmm you told Virat that you have a crush on him??
Manvi:Yaaa by the way how did you guess??
Amanda:I've known you forever sweetheart and plus he's likeee a brother to meee.. :)
Manvi:Brother??...I thought you guys were bestieees!
Amanda:Bestieees...no we have a new relationship...
And Amanda blushes
Manvi:Wait! New Relationship...?!?...Oh No! What does that blush mean??? Dont tell me you and Viren??
Amanda:How did you know???
Manvi:Amanda...how could you???...You know that Jeevika Di and Viren were having such a cool relationship...How can you be such a man-stealer??
Amanda:I am not a man-stealer Mannuu...Do you even know what your so called Di told him??
Manvi:Whatever Di might have said it wuld have been to see you happyy...she doesnt see you like my best friend she thinks of you equal to me...I mean what the hell is wrong with you???
Amanda:Mannu am I really that bad??
Mnavi:You have no ideaaa...What you've donee...you've hurt my Di and that is something I will never forgive you for..
Amanda:I didnt know Mannu..
Manvi:Don't dare calling me that...
And the belll rings...Amanda is too upset to go back to class soo shee thinks of bunking she sits on the bench and sobs Viren comes and hugs her from back..
Viren:Hello sweetheart :)
Amanda:Viren, I need to speak to you something come sit..
Viren looks at Amanda's faceee...
Viren:What happeneed...Why are you crying???
Amanda:Viren we've gotta break up pleaseee...and m sorry its not that I dont love you its just that Jeevika Di does and Manvi made me feel sooo bad about it that I cant help but blame myself...Can we just be friends?? Pleasee??? I'm really sorry..
Viren:It's your wish...
And he leaves her hand and walks away
Viren thinks to himself...
Ye sab uss Manvi ke waje se hua hai...I mean what the hell is her problem...Uff! And that Jeevika does Manvi know how badly she broke my heart...She asked me to move on and now when I did look at this??...Grr...
Sooo this as a common thing after school Virat,Manvi,Viren,Jeevika,Amanda and (Manvi's Enemy) Avinash...
As soon as Manvi cam Viren pushed everyone out of the way went to the two Behna's and siad
Viren:Manvi...What the F**k is wrong with you yaar??What are you telling Amanda...Man-Stealer?!? Uff! God Do you even exactly know what happened between me and Jeevika??Did she even tell you?!?
Manvi:Oh so that Narcississtic Bit** alrady told you haaan?!?
Viren:Dont you dare
Amanda steps in...
Amanda:Let her speak Viren I deserve it...
Virat:No,Amanda you don't and Bhai neither does Manvi its Jeevika who should be shouted at she's the one who didnt tell Mnavi anything..
Viren:Oh! Sooo for Manvi your gonna go against your brother haan Virat?!?
Amanda:Guyzzz...enough okay can we just forget about all this stuff??? I dont wanna beee causing problems...Me and Viren broke-up..
Jeevika:Why Amanda Why did you?!?
Amanda:Because Manvi told me that you loved him and you were sacrificing him for me..
Jeevika:Mannu...I have tot ell you something...I know its wrong that I didnt tell you all this beforee...But I broke-up with Viren because me and Avinash fell in loveee...
Manvi:What Di???? And your telling me now??? Urgh! Dont even talk to mee
Jeevika leaves the spot and goes to the bus...
Manvi:I'm really sorry Amanda I didnt know the truth...
Amanda:Save it Manvi! Byee!
All of them go into the busss...

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