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Posted: 12 years ago
firstly really really sorry for not commenting and liking the updates...i am absolutely a fool!
updates were simply fab!
their nok-jhok is really sweet...luv how the updates are going in a flow!!! uday being super possessive and then all of a sudden caring is so nyc...
preya u write beautiflly and surely do know how to capture our attention!!!!
big hugs fo u and keep giving such goody updates!
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NOTE (udays mum name is seema in my ff but im going to change it to vasundra because I member a maid name seema worked in devgardh palace so I thought its best the udays mom name changes in to vasundra and seema will be the maid just like shown in the show I hope I cleared the doubt)

Sorry I had to give my laptop to fix im sure u must have got the news since my cousin posted a message on india forums

Manyata: u scared me giri uncle oops sorry papa now r u happy

Giriraj: really happy see u after two day he said hugging her and she hugged seema and unnati and left

Next day manyata was talking to sia on the phone

Manyata: god jiji u r saying the same thing as uday even he said this yesterday.

Sia: manyata u really worrying too much and everyone is going to be there to help you with your responsibility especially uday

Manyata: k lets forget about this how r u feeling' and I hope ur taking care of urself and ur unborn baby

Sia: manyata ur jiju has warned me to take bed rest everytime I men he doesn't even let me do anything' and im sure when we come to devgarh ma is going to join hands with daksh and both r gone be very strict on me.

Manyata: aww jiji but you should be happy that jiju is taking care of u' dw not only ma but all of us r going to make sure you take care of urself understand. She said giggling

Sia: yes Dr manyata I understand she said giggiling'

manyata stopped giggiling when sia said Dr'. yes she was going to be called Dr manyata but not anymore' sia suddenly realised what she said and cursed herself.

Sia: lado she said pausing and before she could continue manyata changed the subject

Manyata: jiji ur coming on the same day as us right trying to speak normally

Sia: yes we r

Manyata: oh jiji I forgot to tell u im actually coming with uday to devgarh

Sia: ohhh so two love birds coming together she said teasingly

Manyata:jiji its nothing like that k and we r going to give u a big surprise she said trying to stop herself from blushing

Sia: and what is that

Manyata: arien if I tell u now then what is the point of the surprise u all will find out only after the ceremony.

Sia: accha challo lets see what the surprise is.

Manyata: k jiji I call u later I need to help j pack as I promised her and u know how she is right.

Sia: k see u later.

Manyata: bye and both cut the call'

In jays room vijay bhai was sitting on the couch reading a magazine while j was taking out all her clothes and throwing it on the bed

J: vijay bhai im so confused I don't even know what to take' plus its so hot in devgardh'

Vijay: hmm

J: so shall I buy new clothes

Vijay: hmm '. He said still not paying attention to what j was saying

J: oh god vijay bhai im so confused

Vijay: hmmm'. J just realised that all this time vijay was looking at the magazine and was not paying attention to what she was saying she went and stood next to him while he waqs stil busy in the magazine

J: vijay bhai don't u think u should get married

Vijay: hmm' but after few minutes vijay just realised wt j said and looked at her shockingly to find j standing next to him with a angry look

J: finally u heard this vijay bhai otherwise u would have continued with ur hmm tone

Vijay: oh come on j bhai fine I admit I was not paying attention to wt u were saying but you tell me how would I know what you should take to devgardh and'. Vijay bhai was about to continue when manyata entered the room

Manyata: j have u decided to wt pack? She said walking over to where j and vijay were standing

J: no jiji in fact im not even sure what to take and vijay bhai is not helping me at all she said sitting on her bed.

Manyata: come on j this shouldn't be hard for u' k fine lets go through ur clothes and choose some from there and you can go to the mall and buy new outfits k come now lets start on ur packing and manyata started to help j'

In the evening manyata was sitting outside on the swing trying to read a book but was not able to concentrate coz of uday

Manyata (talking to herself): oh god come on manyata u saw uday at his place yesterday and today is nearly over so u got only one day and then u wll be able to see him'. (but the next min) wait y am I acting all desperate to see him actually no im not desperate I can wait till two days'. She tried to convince herself and try to read the book but still was not able to after few seconds she looked up when she heard vijay speak

Vijay: m bhai what r u doing over here come ' said vijay walking over to her

Manyata: nothing vijay bhai I was just reading a book

Vijay: reading a book means having ur lovers picture he said teasingly

Manyata: I don't have any lover vijay bhai

Vijay: achaa if u don't have a lover then what is uday he said raising a eyebrow

Manyata: uday is my' but she stopped coz she didn't know what uday is to her she was so confused about her feeling towards this guy' she ignored his question and said vijay bhai lets go in its nearly dinner time

Manyata got up and started to walk leaving vijay behind

Vijay: I hope u realise what uday means to u coz everyone can see it except u he said smiling and went inside

At the dining table

Brij: manyata beta giriraj called me today and asked me if u can go to the jaighar mansion 2moz

Manyata: anything serious paa

Brij: nahi beta actually vasundra bhabi sa bought u something and she wants you to try it on before going to devgarh so giriraj told me to give this message to u

Manyata: k paa I will call maa up and let her know what time I am going to be there

DS: j, vijay, and manyata I hope u will be able to finish ur packing by tomorrow

J: actually ds I still need to buy new clothes and jiji will be coming with me 2moz

Komal: but manyata is going toi jaighar mansion tomorrow then how will she come

Manyata: don't worry mama j will come with me to jaighar and from there we will leave to buy j's outfit

Next day

Manyata and j headed towards jaighar mansion after breakfast and as usual vasundra was in the living area and telling one of the maid to do something but stoped when she saw j and manyata walking in

Vasundra: app jayien she said to the maid'. Manyata, j plz come and sit

J: thanks aunty how r u

Vasundra: im fine beta' manyata beta sorry I couldn't call u yesterday but when I found out mahraj is talking to Brijraj bhai I told him to pass the message to u

Manyata: its k maa anyways u wanted me to try on something right

Vasundra: haan beta I bought u,,, unnati, and j this anarkali to try on' I know the dress will fit j because by now I have know her size' but because u and unnati have been away for few years I don't know if ur sizes r the same so if you try this on then I will kow if any changes needs to be done

Manyata: k maa ill try it on

Vasundra: k ill go and get ur outfits and she left from there' after few minutes unnati came down:

Unnati: hey guys' and hugged them both

Manyata: hey unnati me and j r going to the mall if u don't have anything to do then y don't u join

Unnati: ok I don't mind I was thinking of coming to ur place but if u guys r going out then I don't mind

J: oh really u were planning to come to ours we thought u might be at rithvik place she said tasingly while unnati slightly turned red

Manyata: j don't tease her.. just look how she has gone red just by mentioning rithviks name

Unnati: omg manyata at least u don't tease me like this but three of them stoped as vasu came with the outfits

Vasundra: j here is ur dress and manyata y don't u go and try this on

Unnati: haan manyata u can go in my room and try it on' manyata nodded and went to try it on

In unnatis room

After few minutes manyata tried the anarkali on and was looking in the mirror to see how the dress was looking on her when all of a sudden

Uday: chotti dad wanted u to sign these papers so plz' he looked up and stopped in his track when he saw manyata in unnatis room'

Uday had walked in unnatis room without knocking and when he actually entered the room he was looking at the paper so he didn't see that manyata was in the room after few minutes

Manyata: uday couldn't u knock before coming in she said putting the dupata around her neck and walked towards him

Uday: princess what r u doing in unnatis room he said looking surprised

Manyata: wo mein but got interrupted by uday

Uday: or is it that u missed me that you couldn't wait for two days and came to see me he said smirking

Manyata: please uday don't think so high of urself me and missing u is impossible in fact I was so busy that I didn't have time to think about u (she said lying) and I didn't come here to see u in fact maa called me coz she wanted me to try this anarkali on and after this I am going with j and unnati to do shopping' now please go out I need to change

Uday: princess if u want to change then change' humse kya sharmana he said moving forward naughtily while manyata cheeks went red and was looking at uday with wide eyes

Manyata: chi uday u r so besharam

Uday: u haven't seem how much besharam I can be princess he said tracing her cheeks with his fingers' manyata shrieked a bit by the sudden touch which didn't go unnoticed by uday'. I must say princess I have a strong impact on u and if you want I can help u changing' manyata tried to compose herself

Manyata: uday its better if u leave now because if I don't go down soon then im sure j and unnati will come to see whats taking me so long and if they find u with me then god knows what they will think

Uday: come one manyata im ur fianc and its not a crime if im spending time with my soon to be wifey he said winking

Manyata: so u wont go from here right

Uday: nope he said naughtily with that smirk still on his face but this time manyata also smirked a little bit

Manyata: fine then u can stay here uday looked at her confsunly when she picked up her clothes from the bed and went to the washroom to change' uday smiled' manyata was in the washroom and was sorting her hair out after changing she thought uday will still be in the room but when she came out he was not there' she put the ankarli back in the package and went downstairs

Vasundra: beta did it fit u or does it need changes

Manyata: nahin maa its nice and fitted me very well thank u. maa we will leave now to go shopping and unnati is coming with us to

Vasundra: that's fine beta' enjoy girls and she left from there

Unnati: manyata lets go in my car the driver will drop us

Manyata:: but we bought the driver with us so he will drope u on the way back

Unnati: trust me manyata my driver is very entertaining and by the way j sent ur driver away coz we decided we will go in my car right j

J: of course jiji and y does it matter what car we r going in

Manyata: yh I guess u r right y does it matter k come lets go' three of them headed out and the maid who was standing near the car opened the door manyata was about to sit when unnati stopped her

Unnati: manyata you sit at the front me and j will sit at the back

Manyata : and y is that she said raising her eyebrow' she was suspicious about their behaviour now

Unnati: ofho manyata just sit at the front na we r getting late and both unnati and j sat at the back' after few sec the maid opened the door for manyata and she sat in the front passenger seat she was about to turn around to face unnati and j when she was shocked seeing uday was sitting on the driving seat

Manyata: tum she said shockingly while uday was just giving his usual smirk and unnati and j were enjoying manyata reaction

Uday: haan hum

Manyata: where is the driver and what r u doing over here' unnati u said ur driver is dropping us at the mall

Unnati: arien manyata if I told u that dada is coming with us then we would have missed ur shocking face and this is what u get for teasing for me

Uday: manyata no need to think about the driver when u got ur personal driver with u k' he said teasingly

Manyata: whatever now driver jee if u don't mind can we go now

Uday: jo hukum princess' he soon started the car'

At the mall

Manveer j, and unnati were shopping.. while unnati and manyata was busy helping j choose her clothes uday was looking in the men section but ever five second he kept looking at manyatas direction and was smiling' finally they finished doing shopping and was heading out of the store when j spoke

J: oh god I forgot my purse and mobile inside ill go and get it

Unnati: wait j ill also come with u dad u go ahead with manyata,,,, uday nodded they both were about to get about of the big shopping mall when they saw it was getting packed uday held on to manyata hand tightly and headed towards the car and both sat inside waiting for the other two

Uday: so princess we r heading to devgarh 2moz for ur ceremony and u know I cant wait coz we r going to be staying in the same mahal meaning u will be in front of me hayee its going to be so fun.

Manyata: so u think i will get to spend time with u until we r in devgarh 24/7

Uday: right

Manyata: sorry ur wrong even thought we will be in the same mahal it could be u don't see me

Uday: and y is that

Manyata: uday don't forget that we decided that we r gone tell the family members about u propising and how we want to start the function from engagement and stuff

Uday: but princess what has that got to do with me not seeing u

Manyata: it does because it could be that u wont see me before getting married it's a tradition

Uday: princess I can see u whenever I want

Manyata: no u cant

Uday: yes I can

Manyata: no uday u cant

Uday: r u challenging me

Manyata: nope but if u want to take it as a challenge then go ahead

Uday: fine princess i promise u that I will see u after our marriage preparation stays no matter where we r, in devgarh ya Mumbai, and both were staring at each other

Unnati: sorry we kept u guys waiting' both came out of their staring session luckily unnati and j were settling in the car so they didn't see manveer staring at each other' manyata looked out of the window while uday looked at manyata for few seconds and started the car

After about 20 minutes the car stopped outside the devgarh mansion.

Unnati: dada its only around 1 so can we stay at the devgarh mansion for a while please' uday nodded and four of the them got out of the car and headed inside

DS was sitting with mainka and komal and were talking about some work when uday and unnati greeted them

Komal: how r u uday and unnati

Uday: we r fine aunty komal thank you how r u all

Ds: even we r fine beta'

Manyata: ds I am going in my room come unnati.. j r u coming

J: haan jiji ill just be there in a little while

Manyata: uday y don't u go to vijay bhai room he will probably be there

Unnati: manyata for a change y don't we all go to vijay banna room

Manyata: not a bad idea' its strange vijay bhai would have called us by now to ask us where we r but he didn't' something is surely fishy..

Jiji: so then lets go' uday smiled at their cute antics nd followed them' they stood outside vijays room and after few seconds entered slowly only to see that vijay was fast asleep uday was standing near the door with his arms folded looking at the girls.

Manyata: j this is the chance to take revenge from vijay bhai

J: ur exactly right jiji every time he annoys us and most of the times disturbs us when we r asleep but now he is gone pay for it

Unnati: but what r u guys gone do. Manyata and j gave a evil smile to each other'

Manyata: I exactly know what we can do

after an hour vijay woke up and went to the washroom to freshen up ' meanwhile in the living area everyone was seated and talking uday was in the garden as he received a phone call.. j, unnati , manyata, komal and mainka were talking with each other, while ds was in her office when they heard a scream' without thinking vijay came out of his room running'

vijay: omg there is a scary clown in my room someone please save me.. he turned his attention towards the others he saw komal nd mainka first looking at him shockingly but then they covered their mouth trying to stop from laughing. Even j, manyata and unnati tried to keep a staright face but ended up laughing ds who was with dr saab came out' he looked at the mirror that was on the wall and saw that the clown was none other than him

ds: vijay beta what have u done to urself y have u got make up all over u' manyata and j had put lipstick, eye shadow, eyeliner mascara and blusher on vijay .

vijay: I don't know ds when I woke up this is what my state was like. Komal went towards the girls

Komal: did any of u do this she said eyeing the three especially j and manyata' when vijay heard komal ask the girls

Vijay: mami sa y u asking them

Komal: because they came to ur room to see what u were doing

Vijay: kya' then it definitely must be j or manyata im sure unnati will never do that

J: arien vijay bhai it could be after we left someone must have applied make up on u she said trying to be all innocent

Vijay: j my lovely sister even u know that no stranger is allowed in the mahal so its means one of u have done it

Manyata: say cheese vijay bhai'. And she quickly took a snap before running off

Vijay: manyata delete the picture now

Manyata: vijay bhai I didn't take the picture so that I can delete it

Vijay: manyata im warning u

Manyata: im not scared of u.. and she ran out of the garden' vijay was about to run behind her when j and unnati got hold of him so that they can stop him from chasing manyata and took him to his room to clean up his makeup.. manyata reached to the garden and was stopping to catch breath' she turned around and was glad that she didn't fine vijay behind her.. she was about to go inside when she got pulled back and was pushed towards the wall where nobody can see her' she had closed her eyes because of the sudden push towards the wall but when she slowly opened her eyes she found uday staring at her intensely blocking her between his hands and the wall. She was getting goose bumps because of the way he was staring at her

Manyata: uday what r u' but she stopped when she felt his finders caresse he lips.. she shivered and her breathing got heavier' uday went more closer to her and manyata could feel his body against her now sending more shiver down her spine' her cheeks had gone already red'after few seconds uday locked his lips with her' the kissed started of slowly but then it got passionate... he then moved down her jaw line leaving wet kisses while his hands were travelling around her waist and back' he slowly moved down and started to kiss her neck and her throat and then slowly he pulled her top down from her shoulder and started to place wet kisses' manyata couldn't take it anymore and pushed uday away and ran to her room

She was standing near the bed but slowly moved near the wall and put her forhead against it she was still breathing heavily but then her breathing got more heavier when she again felt udays lips on her skin' (uday had followed her to her room and had closed the door but she still didn't realise)'. Uday held on to manayats hands which was on the wall and was kissing her back even though she had her top on it felt like it was her second skin' he then pulled her against his body and was rubbing her stomach' manyata turned around and hugged him tightly

Manyata: please stop uday' stop making me weak like this' uday lifted her face up and saw her eyes were closed and her cheeks had turned really red he loved the affect he had on her and kissed her forehead' uday kissed her forehead and manyata slowly opened her eyes

Precap: manveer on their way to devgarh

Ok guys here is part 38 hope u like it'. Please please do leave ur comments and don't forget to press the like button' im really sorry for updating late' if u r still interested then please do read this sorry for any spelling or grammar mistake.. sorry if I forgot to pm anyone will be waiting for ur feedbacks love u all tace care'

Roshu (roshini101) next part will be full of manveer

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Edited by preya_radev - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome ff


Read it in one go


Pm me when u update


I would love too add u on facebook i will pm u my id


Waiting for the next part


Vijay bhai 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum part dear
do cont soon
lolz manyata - j r so evil I tell u...
loved manveer scenes...👍🏼❤️

thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
very cute update thanks for pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...superb update
hey..i dindt know ur name is sonali OMG...love the update manveer kiss was superb plzz ...update soon thanx for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i seriously luv ur story
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my god dat was freaking awesome!!!!! lovedd manveer soo soo much!!!!!! uday and mnayta in unnati's room,then manyta ka personal driver😆 abd the last part wass wooowww,it was jst soo soo soo romnticcc!!!!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg the update was fantastic, fabulous, outstanding, mindblowing, superb,
I have no words to describe the update
Loved all the manveer scenes especially the last scene
Aww manyata telling uday to stop as he is making her go weak was sweet
So u made uday manyata's personal driver?I forgive u this tym bt next tym update fast and yeah u better include manver as promised
Edited by roshni101 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update
manveer scenes and that kiss was just super
vijay bai scene was really funny continue soon and thanks for the pm

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