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Posted: 12 years ago
i read ur whole ff today
and must say u r ans awsome writer
i already sent you buddy request but accept it
and plzzz pm me when you update next part
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pinkpearly

awsum update... Thanx for d pm


Thank you!


Originally posted by: anjalijayan

amazing!!!!!!!!!!

thanks for pm


Thanks Anjali! :)

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

that a great chapter finally all confusion clear up...
now let see in the next part what will be rey decision of kria...
update res of the chapter soon...😊😊😊😊😊


Thankeww for the lovely comment dear!


Originally posted by: kreya_pearl

Loved shar,neha n kria conversation...

Finally sharon kria ki dimaag mai akal dali...

But rey i think he's angry...

Loved it...

Thnx for d pm


Am glad u loved it!

Haan finally Kria ko akkal aayi.. Obviously Rey is angry..



Thankeww!


Originally posted by: jas112

congrats for coming to chapter 15
and
as far as the chapter is concernd i loved
it was awesome
really very nice
good work
keep it up


Thanks Jas.!

Originally posted by: khusbooluvarsha

Ahhh...

this was beautiful and its not at all "fugly" infact its lovely

"she tried her level best to make civil conversation with the ice queen."😆

Loved kriya and sharon's conversation

"I made a horrible mistake!"thank god ,she accepted her mistake

"If you can't trust me even this much, then there is no point to it at all, right?" He tortured her with those words, and left.'"

Rey will not forgive kriya so easily...don know why but i hav a strong feeling after seeing the above lines

Everything was awesome...well penned !!

cant wait for the next part and thanks for the pm


Aww thankew so much Khushboo!


Originally posted by: CHOCOLATEKRIYA

its really fab update finally kria got to known the truth and that too its from sharon and kria's feelings towards rey will make kriyansh together


Thanks!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alisha.a.s

awesome...

thnx for pm..


Thanks Alisha!


Originally posted by: nifty-nia

Awesome update! Loved every bit of it :)


Nia! As always, means a lot! Thanks so much for the comment!



Thanks! :D

Originally posted by: yogini64

Ohhh . . . Meko laga aaj to kriyaansh ki jhappi mil hi jayegi . . . . 😃
koi na,, agle chappy tak wait kar lungi,, aaj kriya ke sorry se kaam chalaying 😎
rey ka bhi attitude dena banta hai . . . . Bar bar thodi na milega roothne ka mauka 😆
lolzz . . . Kriya ne kya socha ki sharon pagla gyi hai 🤣
it seems,, sharon ko bhi swayam se love ho hi gya . . . . . & she's happy that she realized before its too late 😛
poor kriya . . . . She was so shattered to react in her senses at that time,,, but kabhi to truth reveal hona hi tha . . . . 😉
wanna see, how she makes up his mood 😛


Itna kam tadpaane wali mai kabse ho gayi? Mujhe toh samajh hi nahi aata tum log yeh padhte kyun ho... Kuch bhi toh nahi milta yahaan.. Na jhappi na Pappi!

Agle mei bhi dene ka koi plan nahi hai mera Yogi.

Haan Kria khud pagal hai naa, toh usse sab pagal lagte hai.

Yep, SwaRon have had there realization phase. Now wait what happens next.

Thanks for the comment Yogi!


Originally posted by: Madhukumari

OMG. . . .
That was really awsome. . . . .
4 d 1st time i saw such a superb krisha bond. . .
And neha,
dammh she was realy nice yaar.. . . . . .
Lovd it. . . .
2day's update was fully of girls. . . . .
And last part,was nice,
abbb rey bhav khayega. . . .
Not done. . . .
Nw,kriya manofy rey,
and rey khaing bhav. . .
Not done. . . . . . .
Dekhte hai nxt part mai kya hoga,
update nxt part soon di. . . . . . .


Thankew Madhu! I wanted such a KriSha in D3. Ab kabhi na kabhi toh girl-centric hona hi padega naa...

Haan Rey bhaav khaaega.. Kyun Not done? Humesha Kria hi bhaav khaati rahe kya?

Sure! Will update super soon!


Thanks!


Thankew!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanstina

Res

Unres
Loved the Krisha convo
Hoping that Rey would forgive Kria soon


Thanks so much!

Originally posted by: anjee_007

res...
unres...
finally everything is fine...kind of...
i love the KRISHA part...
u didnt portray it over emotional...
i love kriya neha n sharon wala part...
n finally kriya knows the truth...
mje lga iss chappy me kriyaansh mil jayenge...
but lagta h ap hme or thoda tadpana chahte ho...
so now update fast fast...really fast...
thnx 4 the pm...



Yeah, Kinda Fine! :P
I am glad u did!
Phew! I tend to go over the board broody!
Itti jaldi kaise milenge KR?
Yuss.. Mere tadpaane ke records hai bade bade!
Thanks!

Originally posted by: kitttu1309.

luvd it...
Amazing update...
Thankx 4 d pm
update soon


Thankew Kittu!!

Originally posted by: ruchitasaphire

awesome update

thanks for pm
update soon


Thanks!

Originally posted by: asmaju

Anki Di I love you for this post..
This is awesome post...
It was a fablous update..

Di I'm in love with ur writing...
I cant tell how much I love reading it again and again..
The way how Sharon made Kria understand and the questions put up by Rey towards Kria..All seem so perfect..
DI u are Great..Love u..
🤗


Awww Asma! Haahaahaa! Itta upar mat chadha! Bahot jyaada ho jaega!


Originally posted by: shalini_arsha

it's suprb...:) jst lovd it...:) lovd krisha's bonding...:) hope rey kriya ko jaldi forgive kar de...:) thanxx 4 pm


Thanks Shalini! Lets see how Rey forgives Kria..

Originally posted by: d3_rox

Amazing ch...

Awesome..
Too good...
The krisha bonding...
N then kriyaansh...
Plzzz update soon...
Eagerly waiting 4 it!!!!
Thanx 4 the PM!!!!

-Tehmina!!!!:):):)


Thanks Teh!!


Thank you!

Originally posted by: sweetcharu

wow awesome update.
Sharon n kriya convo really heart touching .loved it.
Finally sharon told the truth to kriya 😛
Kriya apology to rey 😲
This time rey is dam angery 😡 he will not forgive kriya so easilly 😕
What will kriya do. . . . . . . . 😉 waiting for nxt update.


Thanks Charu... Lets see what Kria does! :P

Originally posted by: jaanvi_Arsha

Amazing update..loved krisha's bonding ... rey's anger was somewhere justified..but i want him to forgive her soon :p...update soon and thanx a lot for the pm :)


Thanks Janvi! I dont think he'll forgive her so soon..

Originally posted by: sharuKR

awesome update

thanx for d pm


Thankeww!!

Originally posted by: Roxxy47

Wow Kria-Sharon were actually talking to each other and Kria even believed her , nice going 👍🏼...

The way Sharon started the convo was great ...
Rey ko manana itna easy nai hoga ...
Amazing part 😃...
Loved it ❤️...
Will be waiting for the next part...
N thanks for the pm 😊.


Haahaahaa!! Yeah, all the dynamics are becoming weird.
Thanks for the comment!

Originally posted by: SanjArShi-ASR

Awsome Update Anky...loved it...Finally kria ko turth pata chal gaya...Ab kria rey ko kaise manayegi...???...Waiting for the next Update...


Thaneww Sanju.. Nahi pata kaise manaayegi..

Originally posted by: rhu90

loved the update...esp the krisha part...pls update the next part asap...


Thanks for the comment!

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

thanks for the pm and awesome update :D loved the KriSha part


Nikki <3


Thanks Nikki!!

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

awesome update...loved it very very much



Thankewww!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks!


Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

yaaayyy i finally read it

n i loved it alot

seriously i love da krisha scene
da way you executed it, brought it fab diii
i want dis type of scene in D3 bt thnx to our palki mate jo kch b ni dia usne huh!!!
ok dat let it b...kabhi aur royenge iske piche 😆

n again da dialouges which u used
aww soo sweet same yet different
love da gals tym out alot
n neha ki b entry usme jo it
it was awsome

n den coming to KR
ahh!! i knw dat jb kria sry bolegi to rey thoda to bhav khayega hi...n frankly banta b h yaha to

n true rey give evrythng to kria effortlessly...n i think its kria turn to confess her feelings n give it to rey wht he wanted ( plzz dirty mind dnt take it in wrng way...coz mere intensions clear h yaha )

awsome, fab n cute
finally sb MU clear ho gyi
n i loved it


itna bada comment! hey bhaggu!
Palki aisa kabhi kuch dikhaa bhi sakti hai kya? sahi mei.. mai toh kahu rona hi nahi chahiye.. worth hi nahi hai..
I rarely use dialogues naa.. toh isliye jab thode bahot hote hai toh acche hote hai..
chalo kahi toh logo ko Neha acchi lag rahi hai.. I quite frankly, find her really irritating now. There is no sanity whatsoever in her abhi.

Rey kabhi bhi toh bhaav nahi khaata.. toh yahaan khaaye toh kya bura hai!

Thanks Shaffs!

Originally posted by: KUSHA14

hey. .thanx. .fr the pm...
and..realy lovd...each and.every part to the core...i read..it jst.nw..in one go ... as it was member post nly...and..i ws nt a member of thz forum earlier...
and..1 mre thng...i realy...lvd..the way u expres each and.everynes feelng..and..nw letz se wat hapens nxt...eagerly waitng..fr the nxt part...and..1 mre thng...that.,u realy. ...use awesum wrds...wile writng thz perfct ss...and..dat..makes me..to hav a look of...dictionary.. .bt datz gud fr me...and i lovd it.. .
UPDATE NEXT PART SOON...
AND...AB..APNE..TEST KA KABAADA KARKE ATI HU...MAI. ...AAJ SKUL.. MAI..and..i tried...to stp myself...frm readng...further bt..culdnt..help..so socha ki test ki toh dkhi jayegi.. pura padh hi leti hu...


Kusha, I sincerely hope tera test accha gaya hoga. Trust me, I cannot take it when somebody messes up wid dere exams due to me.

Tune abhi jaa ke padha.. Chalo atleast padh toh lia.. hehehe!
I am sorry that u have to use dictionary at times. I try making it as simple as possible.. :D

Thanks Dear!

Originally posted by: basket_101

HEY =D

Read the part..
Still can't comment..
Oh god my fingers are like itching to comment..
But anyway.. Have to be patient :P
Winter break coming soon... I'll be commenting on Alll the parts then ;)
But in a nutshell, just so this comment is also somewhat meaningful, I liked the whole part a lot! Especially the Sharon bit... I liked how she was able to accept all those things =)
=D
Now off I go... Arthur Miller and his tragic hero are calling me xP
Byeee.. Take care <3 =)


Hinal! I swear to god I am gonna make u write a book of reviews for me!! Canada mei kho gayi hai kya?? I hope your winter break gets on soon! I soo wanna read what you think about the updates!

Originally posted by: Sunitha_Swayam

Lovely updt dear...thnx for d PM


Sunitha, Thanks!!


Originally posted by: shukti_19

fab update,,,,,

KriSha part was Amazing...
thnx fr d PM...
continur soon


Thanks so much, Shukti!!



Thankeww!!


Thanks!

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Mind blowing update
Loved it


Thanks Mannu!!

Originally posted by: lovekriyaansh

Awesome update anks... really loved it...

the krisha scene was fab... you just had to do something really different in your every update na...
See thats wat makes Mi Amore the best D3 FF... The Krisha part was very well thought as well as very well written... The KR part was great too...so, All and all this chotu update had a enough of dhamaka... Now jaldi se write TATM..m waiting for it..
Love you Anks..mwaaahhh...


Prenuuu!!! Muaaahh! Muaaah!! Muaaahh!! Haan toh.. Agar kuch different naa karu toh log itte boring SS ko kyun padenge? Jeero romance wale!
Awww!! MA aint the best re.. Its just u guys are the best!

Chotu?? Haww!!! its well over 1500 words!!! :'( Meri ungliyon pe rehem khaa!!

Love u loads!!


Originally posted by: kuhu_Arsha

amazinggg update!!!!!!!!!!!


loving it,,,,,,,,,,,,

luv shar kriya n neha convo alot😃
cnt wait 4 nxt chappy plz update soon😃


Thanks Puja!!! Will update soon babes!



Thanks Neha!

Originally posted by: GayatriJethani

It was surely a emotional update...

sharon nd kriya convo was nice... infact i loved it
we never got chance to see krisha talking with each other so sweetly in D3...
but glad that u write this part in this ss...
all truth is open now and kriya too realise her mistake... now its time for some forgiveness
Trust and faith is most imp thing that should be present in any relationship, and kriya didnt trust rey... which hurt rey most... and it will be difficult for kriya now to bring that trust of rey back...
lets see what is store for us in next part...
btw i really loved this part...

"If you can't trust me even this much, then there is no point to it at all, right?" He tortured her with those words, and left
personally i loved this lines
update soon
thnx for pm


Thanks Gayatri! Yeah, u know they should have focused on developing the girls bonding some more.. It wud have been great.

Thanks for loving the lines!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i like it...wen u use litle hard wrds...
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Originally posted by: maddieee

wow... brilliant update... kria and sharon noting that they have the same eyes,something dat shud have happened in the serial... i really liked it...


kriya has to work hard to earn forgiveness...


mi amore rockzzz :)


Yeah, Mads. Something that really should have happened! Uggh!! Aur kya.. Mehnat ka fal meetha hota hai!


Thanks Chetu!

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha

<font size="4"> Finally... I read it all... Sorry... For reading ur stories soo late.. Its aftr Rasia dt u started reading ur stories... U r an amazing writer...and this story is justtt wow... Sorry agn as i could like all d parts bcz m thru ph ryt nw...soo str8 coming to your this update... So...this was truly an amazing one... Kria shocked wid sharon's drastic change in behavior... And now finally... Kria knows wat disaster she had done... Poor rey... He awaz get heartbreaks whether its real d3 or FanFictions... :( ... And here too he ws badly hurt...and it ws actually very obvious... He couldnt actually forgive kria soo easily... *sigh... Lets just see wat kria's will do this time to manaofy rey... Ovrall... Awesomee chappy... Lovedd it... 😊</font>


Akansha! Padh lia finally!! hehehe!
Thanks so much for the amazing comment!!! :D
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Originally posted by: Arshaholic

gr8 update anky dii😉😉


Thanks!
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Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh

wow...never have i felt such a strong connection like u showed here between krisha...and the kriyansh scene...was worth many applauses...hats off...


I always wanted such a bond in between them, Shweta! Thanks for the comment!


Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha

Wow !!!!


This ws such a hearty update Anky Di !!!

Really... Loved it truely !!!!

Do continue sooon ... Thanq fr the PM :D

Waiting eagerly for ur next Dhinchak Update :D

~Sweets ^_^


Thank you Sweets!!


Originally posted by: aishu3003

Awesomee update dii 😊
Loved itt 😃
Waiting for d nxt part 😊


Thanks Aish!!!



Thankeww Cookiee!
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Posted: 12 years ago
So I am guessing I completed the replies.. Fir bhi kisi ka bach gaya ho toh bolna.. Chalo I'll go make a new thread!

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