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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update hope they start talking to each other soon and try to mend the gap between them awesome update thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nyc update.Bt very small...
Hope Arnav'll giv her anothr chance
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
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Thanks for the PM. Loved the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awww,m so sorry dear. .

i completely understand how it feels when,all we type is LOST!

do one thing from now on---->>

always means ALWAYS take a backup of your file,

as soon as you complete drafting..

little piece of advice. . 😳

and ya,if your file is corrupted,you can atleast get the chapters from IF which you have posted,but others.sorry for those,i hope you get them ..


p.s.-always keep 2 backups,my experience speaks!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome. Please update next part soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I hope they will come close again
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: trivedishraddha

Awww,m so sorry dear. .

i completely understand how it feels when,all we type is LOST!

do one thing from now on---->>

always means ALWAYS take a backup of your file,

as soon as you complete drafting..

little piece of advice. . 😳

and ya,if your file is corrupted,you can atleast get the chapters from IF which you have posted,but others.sorry for those,i hope you get them ..


p.s.-always keep 2 backups,my experience speaks!



I will keep it mind but now on I am posting it right then as I finish off a chapter..that is why I am giving RR in parts...
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Posted: 12 years ago



CHAPTER TWENTY-ONE:
A NEW MEMBER

All went there.

Three hours had gone when Payal had entered the labour room.

Her screams can be heard and her pain was making Akash so worthless.

Khushi came and consoled her brother.

Khushi: Women are most powerful, that is why God gives us the responsibility of carrying and giving birth to a child.

All the family members were worried.

Half an hour had gone.

The doctor came out with a smile in the face.

Doctor: Congratulations. You have a girl. Akash wanted a girl as well as Payal.

All the family members were happy.

Neelam: ghar mein Lakshmi ayi hai (Goddess Lakhsmi had come in our home.)

Akash: Doctor May I go and see Payal?

Doctor: She is a bit tired, don't talk too much and exhaust the patient. And yes only one or two persons can go.

Neelam: Akash go inside.

The doctor went away.

Payal was tired, exhausted but had a beautiful glow and happiness pouring out from her. Her eyes were so gentle and calm and today it was even more mild and gentle and so sweet she looked.

Akash sat on the chair beside her and took her hand.

Akash: congratulations dear, we have a girl.

Payal: I know, the doctor said me.

Akash: how are you feeling now?

Payal: better. I don't know, but this pain gave me an immense joy, which I don't know how to explain. I am so happy. I am a mother, you are a father. We are parents. I feel our sphere of love has a new member and that is the result of our love.

Akash: I know Payal. It is the fruit of our love.

Outside, Khushi was happy and was so overjoyed that tears brimmed into her eyes. She went in front of the Devi Maiyya statue.

Khushi's POV

Hey Devi Maiyya please keep your blessings on our family like this. Thank you for the little bundle of joy. At least someone or the other must get the happiness of being a woman. Thank you Devi Maiyya for showering your love on us. Devi Maiyya was this your help to me? Do you want to say all my happiness will come through Payal's daughter?

She heard footsteps. A very common..she opened her eyes and looked at the approaching figure.

"Arnav??"

There was a disbelief in her eyes.

Arnav: I came here as Payal's brother. Since Aman is not here Akash had wanted so did Payal wanted me as her brother-like figure.

Khushi: oh

Khushi's POV

Nobody said me a bit about it. Neither Akash nor Payal. And now he has himself come to give me the reason of his coming. Why did he explain? Did he ever owe an explanation? Can't he come for my sake? No, he can't it will hurt his damned ego. Then why? No. then? I don't know what you are thinking, but I know you are feeling for me as I am for you. But when will your mind and soul will no more in a civil strife?

Arnav's POV

I explained her and still she is showing her usual attitude. She will never change.

Yeah, that was a bad explanation but it was necessary. I didn't want to think that I came for you. Though I know you are desperately willing to hear it only. I know my actual reason of coming here. But I shall not get weak enough to let you hurt me again. I don't want to get betrayed or hurt anymore. I can't fight within myself anymore. I need you Khushi. But I am afraid like a little boy who has once experienced a storm in the middle of the ocean and don't want to go by ocean anymore.

Khushi did not want to face her destruction, her life, her reason, her survival and anything anymore.

She just want to escape..escape from this world of reality, world full of malices, to somewhere like Utopia.

She cried and said, " I am sorry Arnav, I can't..I can't..I can't"

Arnav was dumbfounded at her behaviour. Had he crossed the limit? Had he given Khushi the ultimate pain which she can't bear any longer??

What has he done???

Outside the hospital..

Khushi was alone in the rain. Crying but fortunately or unfortunately her tears can't be seen because of the showers. The wind was blowing and it seemed the whole earth and sky was crying and lamenting for her. It was a madman's night. No body could be seen there.

But she saw a light in front of her and she didn't react. She knew she could die, but she had become thoughtless. But suddenly instead of felling pain she felt warmth and love and found herself in Arnav's embrace. For the first time she felt this hug was never to let you go ever and forever.



so buddies how was it????? what do you think will happen next????


what is upcoming?????


check page 121 for next chapter

Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update.so payash hav a baby girl.but y arnav explained so.both cant let go of their ego..
Edited by aamshula87 - 12 years ago

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