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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: d_sonia

Congrats for new ss
Interesting concept...
All the best..



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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: sonakshi.sharma

beautiful concept as maaneet as

congrats 4 new ss👍🏼
waiting



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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Desigirls12



wow lovely concept.. very interesting dear.. congratzz for new ss


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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: punam2712

congrats for the new story

sounds interesting AND FUN
so both are liars



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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Ash1991

very interesting concept...

update soon...



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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: valli22

interesting concept

congrats for new story



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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great new story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your to read this story of your
my name is alicia pm me



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Hmmm...a SS on writers and readers,interesting.

Waiting to see Maaneet in new avatar.



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well updating dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
me updating the first part...
who is waiting????????
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60


Pretty Little Liars


part-1


Grrr... I hate this physics... God who invented this physics and upar se our boring sir... Who sleep himself during the lecture and he said to us that why we are sleeping... I nudged to my friend... "see, he will yawn again" i whispered in her ear...

She turned towards me...and first glared at me then slightly she turned her face towards sir... And... And.. He yawn... Suddenly, laughter slip away from her mouth and all faces turned towards her...

Sir raised his brow first and then glared... He rose up from his place and slwoly-2 take his steps towards us like he'll eat us raw, , actually paka kar khaaye to achha hai but raw'. Omg'.. , taking his own sweet time like some kind of plan was making in his devil mind, no, no'.

Taking our little life away from our heart, , by his every step, our life was slipping out from our hand'' though our sir is very sweet, sometime crack jokes also but sometimes they gave us punishment but his punishment is also sweet...

Finally he reached to our desk... Anchal, my friend slowly stood up... Her face was worth watching... She was about to cry... Just then we sighed in relief when the bell rung, that means period has been over'' but''but'..but'' our sir doesn't buzz from his place like someone glued him at that place by fevicol'.. (mere ko song yaad aaya'.. Meri photo ko seeney se yaar chipka le sainya fevicol se' :P)

"tomorrow, , i'll take your test of chapter 5 & 6" as soon as the words slipped from his devil mouth, her heart sunk really hard that she thumped on the bench down'.. My pupils were come out and I made baby face'.. She glared at me by her innocent eyes'.. I really pity on her'.. Everytime because of me she got punishment that too physics wale sir se'.. And some times maths sir also gave her punishment'..

I came out of my reverie when I reached at home'' well it was today's incident which happened with me'. No, no, , not with me'. It was my poor friend'.. God please save her tomorrow'..

'''''''.

The life is boring without Internet, and i got to know this just before some time ago... Uff, , I was hell worried today because I didn't get time to use internet yesterday'. Oh god, , and my most important work, , I didn't able to do that'' I sighed deeply and opened my laptop... I was exciting for checking out my post in a group... I had made there a new topic named as slam book... I know that all were asking when i'll fill my slam book but first i have to read others... I am new there, so i thought to start a new topic that which made us introduce with each other...

And yeah'.. I have to visit IF also'.. IF????? Arey India forum , , So many fan-fictions will be waiting for me'. Gosh'. I have to read so many updates'' and yeah I wanted to check my update also'. Ohhh , I am anxious'.. Because of one person there'.. I always wait for that comment of that person'..

I was about to login in Facebook just then... "geet...where are you?" i close my eyes in frustration... Oh no... Not again... Di aa gayi... Now she'll ask me for laptop then mama will said that your exams are coming so you should study first then all this crap... blah blah blah'.

Knowingly or unknowingly, i press and the login button... Happiness beamed on my face when i saw the loading has been started and Facebook was about to open... Ahh... Today my net is working properly... Otherwise...aarrgghhh it takes my life when i try to connect it again and again...

My mama come to me behind my sister'.. Actually my sis will not tell anything to me because she knew that if she'll say anything to me then i'll also not let her use lappy'. So we both are in a team'' meet my sister'.. Heer Handa'..

"geet, what are you doing?" My mama asked to me'' I slightly raised up my face for looking at my mama's face'.. I smiled little then replied cutely showing my dimple to her'..

"nothing mama, , just school work' I am searching some kind of programming clues here'. Nothing else" okay, I lied to my mama'. She looked at the screen , yeah' she has been convinced with my lie'..

"okay but first have your lunch'" she told to me'. I grinned inwardly but then I nodded slightly and then turned my neck towards my lappy screen'.

"geet, why you lied to mom everytime?" Heer asked to me'.. I showed my cute dimples to her, she sighed knowing that I am not going to give any answer to her'.. She left from there'. As soon as she left, , I press the login button on IF site'. Actually she doesn't know that I have an account on IF and i read FF's there and I am a writer there, , so had to lie from her, ,

I was waiting anxiously seeing the comments on my update'.. That is the 5th part of my first ever ff'.. and yeah, , one person's analysis on my every update, , actually that person encourages me everytime for writing further'' actually I don't know that person is he or she but yes I loved that person's comments'.. but sometimes that person shows me attitude also whenever we chat in comments on IF'.

'''''.

"oh god" I am getting late'.. what I'll wear? No ways, , think beta think, , no one will come to help you here'.. remember you live alone here so don't expect anything from anyone'. , , I think I should wear my full suit'..

He checked out the suit by inside and outside'.. naah'.. no ways'. Suit is boring for disc party'.. I think wear something else'..

He held his chin and went on thinking mode standing in front of his huge wardrobe , , uff'. Maan, , you have so many clothes but still you are not able to find any dress'. Shame on you maan'..

He was searching his clothes and talking to himself'. Okay, finally he found a suitable clothes for disc party'.. jeans, , white check shirt, and a blazer'..

Congrats maan, finally you got suitable clothes'. Now get ready, and if I reach late at his party then you know what will happen'. So it's better that you get ready fast''

Just then his cell buzzed with a sexy ringtone'. "hey mom, , hows u?" ''

"I am fine mom"'..

"yeah mom, , I had my dinner, you don't worry"''

"aapne medicines li??"''

"great mom"''

"me mom???"'..

"well mom, I am in library, , had a important research on a very critical topic", ,

"yeah mom, , I'll not stress myself'"''

"mom, , I am in library na, so can't talk much'"''.

"yeah mom.. babye'. Love you' take care'. Good night" and the call finished by this good night and his lie also'.

Uff kitna mushkil hta hai jhuth bolna'. But if mom ko pata chal jata to'.. then maan you know what will happen'.. now you get ready fast for the party waise bhi, , prem will be waiting for me'..

''''.

Ufff geet, , what are doing at this time'. You forgot that you have to go disc na'. but mama se kya kahungi'.. she bit her nails mercilessly'.. waise bhi you were waiting for that comment but seems I have to wait for that'' waise geet, , you got 110 likes'. Not bad na'.

"110 likes, , omg geet, , on which thing you got so much likes?" heer asked to geet and geet was frozen hearing that'. She startled suddenly and nervous too'. Now what she will reply to heer'.. she turned towards heer and smiled nervously'.

"aah di nothing, , actually wo na I had uploaded a super pic on FB and you know what I got 110 likes on that pic' you don't know anything, you are not on facebook na that's why" she made saddy face'. ' showing her cute smile, , which was fake a little'.. but who knows that it was fake or not''

"okay'" saying she turned towards her cupboard for taking her night dress'' she was looking from the corner of her eyes'. She got an idea , , actually another lie, ,

"di, tell na, kaun sa dress pehnu'?" showing her red short dress which goes only till her knees or blue one which was a full gown'.. she went in front of mirror checking herself and imagining herself in that dress''

For which occasion?" asked heer to geet'..

"wo meera ka b'day hai na aaj" replied geet'..

"achha'. Today is meera's b'day then why I don't know?" asked confused heer'..


"because I am going first time on her b'day na, , that's why" she gave a convincing reply'.. heer nodded and selected red dress for her'.. geet happily took it and went in washroom for getting ready'.

Precap

Kiss and again lie

Okay gals, , this much only , didn't get much time'.. so tell me hows it? Slowly-2 you'll get to know why they lie and how? She here maan & geet both are liar'.. did you enjoy this one? Please tell me'. Your views are really important for me'.. if I get sufficient likes and comments then I'll continue it further and same with winter moonlight''

Edited by neha5058 - 12 years ago

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