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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

i also think tht nupur did not do a good think to leave mayank hopefully nupur will come back to mayank he loves her so much


Well...
Nupur herself said in her note that she won't return forever...
well let's see where their destiny would take them
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Posted: 12 years ago
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There is twist in the story. Waiting eagerly for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Here is my next part...
Hope you like it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2 Page 8

Love Never Looses

Part 3

After this incident Mayank didn't spoke to anybody rather he cut himself off with everyone.
Neither he talked with Nupur's parents ,their last meet was after a week of this incident when they came to inform him that they moving Sydney and will hope to stay there for a long run.He just greeted them and left them there ,he hadn't talked with them after that.
After a week of time his parent's too moved to London .
Mr Sharma:"Mayank beta why do you want to stay here you could come with us'"
Mayank:"No Dada I can't leave this place'It's really attached to me.."
Mrs Sharma:"Mayank beta kab tak chalta rahega'..one or the other day you have to forget her and move on in your life.."
Mr Sharma:"Your Mom is right Mayank'.you better come with us'Uski memories se door jaaoge your mind will also change and also you may able to move on in your life.."
Mayank(Still in a smashed situation):"No Dad ..I am Sorry Mom..but I can't leave Manali'You know na..Nupur ko hill station kitne pasand the..Humare pyaar ki shuruwat bhi yahi se hui hain and yahi per pehli baar mene use propse kiya tha.Kitni memories attach hain meri usse' can't leave this place'Mein Nupur ko apni yaadon se door nahi kar sakta'I can't do it..I can't move on in my life..meri life mein ek hi ladki thi and that's Nupur vo nahi to Koi bhi nahi Maa..koi bhi nahi I can't think about someone else other than Nupur..You both please go.I want to leave ..atleast for a time..please'whenever I feel I need you I'll call you or will come to you..but please don't force me ..Please Mom.."

Accepting his plea his Parent's too moved to London.He had already ditached himself with his friends only Samrat was there who came to meet him occasionaly as Mayank had also convinced him not to company him much.
[This song is from Movie Jism2 Maula]

Ishq bhi kiya re maula
Dard bhi diya re maula
Oo.. oo..

He want to isolate himself in the memory of Nupur.

Ishq bhi kiya re maula
Dard bhi diya re maula
Yun toh khush raha magar kuch reh gaya baaki

Once he was a very jolly and happy person but now he hardly talks to anyone even to his office employees and hardly smiles.
It seems that Nupur didn't left him rather his life has left him and made him lifeless.

Faqr bhi kiya re maula
Ilm bhi liya re maula
Zindagi jiya magar kuch reh gaya baaki

Nupur was everything to him and when he had gone everything has gone she has taken his soul with her and left a dead person behind her to lives in the memories of her.

Tu nahi dikha re maula
Sab nahin bika re maula
Aur jahaan ruka wahaan pe
Jaam hai khaali

Everday he searches for outside and inside him,in every face he tries to find her he thinks that somewhere she is calling him but unknown from the direction where she is calling.It seems his life has stopped after her.

Chaah ki kami mein tu hai
Aankh ki nami mein tu hai
Aas mein tu, pyaas mein tu
Saans mein tu

He was punching the punch bag wich was hanging at the middle of his room fircely,just too skow down his anger just to pour out his agnoy.

Tu bewajah haseen tu hai
Jo dikhe ussi mein tu hai
Askh mein tu, raskh mein tu, jaan mein tu

Remembering his each and everymoment with Nupur

Ishq bhi kiya re maula
Dard bhi diya re maula

Slowly his punching bag was filled up with the blood stains,but he didn't stopped.

Yun toh khush raha magar kuch reh gaya baaki
Faqr bhi kiya re maula
Ilm bhi liya re maula

Swaet was dropping from his face,hands and his t-shirt has stick up to his body due to it.His eyes were red in anger ,in pain.

Zindagi jiya magar kuch reh gaya baaki
Tu nahi dikha re maula
Sab nahin bika re maula

But still he didn't stopped and due to his continouos punching his bag fallen down.

Aur jahaan ruka wahaan pe
Jaam hai khaali
Dum taram ra ra..

He opened his fist from were blood was oozing out,it has the ring which he had proposed Nupur, the separation of Nupur pains in his heart is much more and more effective than the would in his hand .

Zeest ki sacchaiyon se, rooh ke gehraiyon se
Raat ki tanhaiyon se, tu guzar zara
Zeest ki sacchaiyon se, rooh ke gehraiyon se
Raat ki tanhaiyon se, tu guzar zara
Dum taram ra ra..

It's been four years to this incident but for Mayank it's like a four hundred years he is away from Nupur.There is not a single not a single moment left when he didn't memorize her , everyday he thinks for her,thinks for a valid reason so that he could satisfy himself that why did Nupur left him but all he could not still not able to convince himself that Nupur had left him.Everyday he tries to forget her,he tries to hate he tries not to remember her as she has betrayed him but at the end of the day he was unsuccessfull in anyone these.How much hard he tried to hate but he can't he can't able hate her,everyday he tries to hate her but at the end he falls in love her all over again,though she is not with him still his heart beats for her,though he has betrayed him ,left him still his heart ,his soul says she hasn't betrayed him.How much he tried to ignore the feelings which his heart is carrying for her but these feels are so strong so much deep that it became impossible for him to ignore any feelings which is related to Nupur.He doesn't carry any hatred for her in his heart.
One or the other day he scolds himself for loving her so much,he censure his heart for beating for only and only for her.But still he can't stop himself loving her .


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Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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God please don't give anyone so much pain in his/her love life
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Paulomi-

God please don't give anyone so much pain in his/her love life


No One Can't change the destiny dear...😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shafyyy


No One Can't change the destiny dear...😔


i just don't like tragedy😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Shafyyy This is painful!😭And I still believe Nupur didn't leave him...she is in danger...Nupur cannot leave Mayank
!i know it!😉😆I want happy wala update soon😒
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Posted: 12 years ago
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too saddy saddy part yaar...he was too lost in her...Alone without her... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Paulomi-


i just don't like tragedy😭



I know they are hard to believe but this is reality dear

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