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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Start And Concept !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinky_5

Heyyy

Very nice beginning...👏
Mayur marriage...wow
Interested in knowing what happens now
Update supersooon 😉
Thanksss a lot for your PM






Well more interesting parts are awaiting...
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Have to wait...

My next part is not ready yet
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Here is the next part
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Part 1 Page 1

Love Never Looses

Part 2

At the dead of night someone knock his door,he tried to ignored it but the sound was getting more vigorous by passing minute,sleeply he opened his door to find Samrat was standing on his door.
Still In sleep tone,"What dude..lemme sleep'"

Samrat panickly ,"Mayank..VO..Nupur'"

Mayank whole sleep got vanished in a moment as soon as he heard his angel's name Nupur,"What..what Samrat:"

Samrat:"She isn't in her room dude'"

Mayank:"What..but.."Mayank was certainly not able to understand what's going on..

Samrat,"Let's go'.To her room .everyone is there.."

Somewhere in his heart Mayank wasn't getting good intutions while running to her room he juat prayed for her safety.He Room was on the other block of the hotel building.He reached her room,everyone was tensed ,where could Nupur have gone.Mayank was really scared about where could Nupur be he asked to the hotel manahger but they said they didn't knew anything.They searched the whole hotel but she couldn't found anywhere.Mayank was so tensed and wondering where could Nupur be at this hour of night.He was pacing around her room thinking where she could be when he found a note on the nearby table.He took it and opened it,His world spins after reading that note,he grabbed the chair near by and sat down in shock,he couldn't think in his wildest dreams that it actually could happen.It states

"I am sorry Mayank but after thinking a lot I had decided I do not want to marry you,you will find someone else I am sorry Mayank but marriage ..!!! I thing it was a haste decision I am sorry'!!
I am going away I can't face anyone please forgive me and forget me I won't come back..don't try to search me..I leaving in my world..hope you forget mee soon.

Nupur"

His whole earth shaken after eading this,he couldn't able to believe his Nupur..His Nupur .He was completely shattered he couldn't think his life has left him ,his love had left him,he covered his face in his both hands he was totally smashed. After a while someone tapped him on his shoulder he looked above to see Mrs.Kavita Bhushan Nupur's Mom was standing with confusion filled face ,with heavy heart he gave that tnote to her.She too was dumbstruck when read the note,she can't believe her daughter could do this.

Suddenly Adhiraaj came running through the corridors," Mayank Hotel k CCTV camera mein Nupr ki photage hain'Come let's see what had actually happened.."
Mayank instantly rushed to security room to check what had actually happened.But seeing the photage has just only crushed his heart into pieces.They Nupur was moving out having a suitcase with her.Somewhere still Mayank heart was saying that all this is fake his Nupur has not left him,she couldn't.Just 2 hrs before she was talking to him showing her excitement on the phone then how could all of a sudden,why did this happen why..?? this question was constantly ringing in his mind still he couldn't able to get it's answer.

They returned and Adhiraaj told everyone that Nupur had actually ran away from Hotel.They saw her going outside with her suitcase.Nupur had actually flewed away from Marriage.

Mrs Bhashan:"Nupur ne mujhse kaha tha she is nervous but kya vo itni nevous thi that she had taken such a big step'I can't believe my daughter could do this."

Mr.Ravi Bhushan joined his hands infront of Mayank's parent's and apologitically said,"I am Sorry'!!! Mujhe Maaf kar dijiye Bhaisaab..mujhe nahi pata tha ki meri khud ki beti itni giri hui harkat karegi..I am really Sorry'.."

Mr.Shyam Sharma :"Arrey bhaisaab aisa kyu keh rahe hain.. sab thik ho jaayega..Aap fiker na kare..aapki beti bahut achi hain' vo aisa kuch nahi kar sakti'."

Nupur's father:"But Bhaisaab she has committed this sin'She do not want to marry your son..Haven't you read this note'.Nupur ne kisi k baare mein nahi socha ye bhi nahi socha uske iss ek faisle se dono parivaaro ki kitni badnaami hogi'Usne kisi k baare mein nahi socha..Meri beti itni selfish hogi..I haven't thought in my wildest dreams.."

Mrs.Shilpa Sharma Mayank's Mom:"May she have her reason bhaisaab..aise nahi kehte'She was very nervous jab vo aayegi hum araam se usse puchenge 'aap please aisa mat kahiye uske baare mein.."

Mrs.Bhushan:"Kyu na kahe Shilpa Ji iss ladki ne hume kahin muh dikhaane laayak nahi choda..likh k gayi hain ab kabhi wapas nahi aayegi.. are koi pareshaani thi to kam se ka bolti ho'aisa koi karta hain kya'"

Mr.Bhushan: "Nahi ...ab Nupur se humara koi rishta nahi hain,mein aabhi se usse jude saare rishto ko todta hoon...she is not my daughter anymore".

Everyone was now blaming Nupur saying that she shouldn't had took such a big step in nervousness ,she didn't thought about anybody, how much humiliation they have to bear now.

"Nupur said that she was nervous but she will take such a big step in nervousness well I still can't believe."
"I think there is some other reason..May be she realized she don't want to marry Mayank'that's why.."
"But just a nigt before her wedding..she didn't thought about her family.."
"I really pitied on her family'"
"I really pitied on the bridegroom and his family'what we can say now'"
Mayank silently listening to these talks ,these were nothing but just testing his pateint he tries to be as calm as possible but these people are actually insulting his love.

Mayank's P.O.V

I was constantly listenting to their barbering,I thought soon they will stop but not they were now insulting my Nupur how could they , I couldn't able to control my temper and shouted on them,"Shut up..Just shut up you all..how dare you to say such about my Nupur..she loves me a lot you do you all understand and she can't leave me'she can't leave me I just don't believe in this stupid note'it could be fake .My Nupur can't betray me she really loves and I could 100% say that something else has happened to her ,she didn't left this place willingly do you underdtand'" .
Saying so I sat down on the bed I was feeling devastated I don't want to believe that she had left me she had betrayed me this is killing me from inside.I had covered my face with my hands when someone tapped on my shoulder it was Nupur's Mom,"Mayank if she hadn't left you that why she left you engagement ring behind and all the wedding stuff which you had gifted to her.."

I instantly looked to the ring she was holding ,it was ring when I had proposed her to marry me.I took the ring from her hands words were not coming from my mouth and tears were making their way from my cheeks.
"No..Aunty..no'My..Nupur'!!!..No'I still believe she didn't left me'Nupur where are you...
Please come back'!!!!!"

Saying I Hugged her mother I had been totally wrecked.The wedding was called off and we all moved from the hotel.I was so lost and devastated that I didn't talked to anybody afterwards.



Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
hmmm nice update ,, cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow ur stry is shaping up really well
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow congo for ur new ff...well ur starting was too good...but what's that nup's actually leaved her marriage...
well their must be sum reason behind her action,which no one knows...hope mayu will keep his faith in his love...
update soon...
luv u... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
nice updt
waiting to know why and where nupur gone
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What!!!Nupur ran away!! No di I can't accept that Nupur would leave her love, her Mayank.. Somewhere I'm also feeling suspicious like Mayank..
Ab to laag raha hain ye love story ke sath sath thriller story bhi hain :P
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looove you*hugs*,muuuah!!!

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