MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98 - Page 44

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Posted: 12 years ago
*DEMON'S ANGEL*
PART - 30

KARANVEER reluctantly moved with Takshak aka Someshwar as they all persumed him,towrds d room,where Saint rested. He hesitate alot as this ws nt the correct time 2 disturb such a heveanly soul. But he was provoked by Takshak constantly so he knok and disturb Aditya. Aditya alrmed with the knock sound on the door at this time. He was in dilemma what 2 do now. Outside Karanveer's guard conti.tapping d door. Aditya ans dem from inside without openinflg d door.

Karanveer:guruji darwaja kholiye hume abi bade guru se milna hai.

Aditya:maharaj shama kare kintu wo to so chuke hai ab aap subah aaiyega.

Karanveer:nahi guruji humara unse abhi milna aati aavshyak hai.

Aditya:abi to sambhav nahi hai kyunki main unki neendra(sleep mode)me khalal nahi daal skta.

Karanveer:theek aap kivat(door)kholiye,hum swayam unhe jaga lenge.

Now Aditya gone completely.he knows now he cant able to stop hi anymore. He turned silent and start thinking how he informed Maan. However he can recall him through telepathy,but it can b possible only wen he is alone. In case if Pure Soul's both part r together den no 1 can made contact wid them,coz in that time period,both parts r connected with each other or in a process of connecting with each other.

Aditya thot:unke milan ka jo dinn Mahaguru ne bataya tha wo aa chuka hai,is samaye main unke milan ki kriya ko badith(disturb) karne ka paap nai kar skta.lekin unhe is khatre se aagah krna b avshyak hai.

He was so lost in the stroam of his thots wen Karanveer's pawn broke d door forcefully. All came inside and saw Aditya without old saint's costume. All r in shok.

Takshak:dekhiye maharaj dekhiye ye usi Maan ka sathi hai humne to apse pehle hi kaha tha.ab to apko vishwas ho gaya na?mujhe pura vishwas hai ki Maan is samye rajkumari k kaksh me hai.

Karaveer fumed furiously at his defeat. He is also angry on himslf that he was fooled by Maan so easily.

Karanveer:bandi bana lo ise or Maan ko b.

Adity alerts instantly. He knows dre is no benefit of arguing wid him right now. As his Pawn moved 2 get him,Aditya transformed in a bird and flew away from d window. It happen so fast that all cant understands at 1.

Takshak:maharaj hume Maan ko bandi bna lena chahiye.

Karanveer nodded in yes and all moved towrds Geetakshi's room. All entred inside forcily and found the room empty. No1 is there at all. Meanwhile Karanveer hear the tapping of horces. He peeing ouside from the window and found Maan is on his horse with Geetakshi,and on another1 Aditya. Both ran there horses in full speed. Karanveer provoked by dis incident. He orderd his all pawn 2 arrest both at ny cost. All nodded and ran behind dem. Takshak himslf followed both. He doesnt want both get consummate at any cost. All ran on their horses. Both Maan nd Aditya entrd in a deep dark jungle.

Aditya:Maan paschim dish me 1 gufa hai tum2 wahi pe jake chhup jao tab tak main tumhara roop dharan kar k inhe dokhe me rakhta hu.

Maan:nai Aditya main tume aisa kabi nahi krne dunga.yaad hai na guruji ne kya kaha tha.unhone kaha tha ki galti se b kabhi kisi or manushye(human being) ka roop mat dhran karna warna tum apni sari shaktiya kho baithoge wo b humesha k liye.

Aditya:Maan behas mat karo.ye samye tark-vitark karne ka nahi.tum 2 ki suraksha meri zimmedari hai,iske liye shaktiya kya main apni jaan b de skta hu.ab or behas nahi tum abi ise leke niklo.

Maan:nai jayenge or sath me jayenge.

Aditya:Maan Mahaguru ne yaha bhejne se pehle kuchh or bhi smaran krwaya tha.aaj ke ye shan gaye to bahut bhari keemat chukani padegi wo b puri manav jati ko.

Maan:lekin..

Aditya:lekin vekin kuchh nahi.or meri chinta mat karo.main tumhe vachan deta hu mujhe kuchh nahi hoga. Tum Geetakshi k sath us gufa me aasra lo,me prathkaleen tumhe aake milta hu.bharosa rakho aise khel maine bahut khele hai.ye mamuli se sipahi mera kuchh nahi bigad payenge.ab samye nasht mat karo or jao,dekho wo kisi b shan yaha pahunch skte hai.

Maan understood the demand of the situation and moved his horse towrds west direction. Aditya transformed himslf again and create the illusion of Geetakshi also so that all pawn consider him Maan and followed him only. Aditya ran his horse towards east direction and all pawn and Takshak himslf follwed Aditya. Aditya is very fast and cleaver. He also hide in a safe place. All r searching him blindly. On the other hands Maan safly hide with Geetakshi in a large den which is actually very beautiful from inside. Maan coverd its face with a large stone so no wild animal or any human came inside. It was very comfortable. There is one waterfall ozzing inside at 1 corner which is also a source of oxygen. Both felt safe and relaxed...




HI GIRLS I HOPE YOU LIKE THE UPDATE...AND I THINK NOW THERE IS NO NEED OF GUESSING WHAT HAPPENED IN NEXT ;P NAUGHTY ME. ANYWAYS U ENJOY AND WAIT WHAT GOING NEXT. AS U ALL KNOW MERA TEDHA MIND ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
pakar liya 😃

chalo now padh ke commnet dungi
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting to see bcoming one soul of maaneet...hope that adi will b ok...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update

Finally karanveer come to know tht Maan had disguise himself as Saint

Maaneet alongwith Adi fled from place

Waiting for the pure soul to become one
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear so maaneet phur ho gaye thakshak ke naak ke neeche..lovely dear so ab un dono ka milan nischit hai aur thakshak ki barbaadi bhi...lovely dear do continue soon...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank god maan and geetakshi succeed in runing
and escape from takshak
richa your mind is tedaa as u said in precap
so but dear tedaa hai but ...
u know
love y muaahhh
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely update.. te way bechare adi was scared and two love birds are i they land.. te way my maan took his geet in horse and now they hiding out in den.. hum tum ek den mein band hua..i love te update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

<font color="#FF9900">waiting to see bcoming one soul of maaneet...hope that adi will b ok...</font>





dont worry dear Aditya ko kam mat samjho...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jssood

<font color="#cc0066" size="5">thank god maan and geetakshi succeed in runing</font>

<font color="#cc0066" size="5">and escape from takshak</font>

<font color="#cc0066" size="5">richa your mind is tedaa as u said in precap</font>

<font color="#cc0066" size="5">so but dear tedaa hai but ...</font>

<font color="#cc0066" size="5">u know</font>

<font color="#cc0066" size="5">love y muaahhh</font>




love u tooo dear muuuhhh
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update so takshak had prooved his point ...maan and geet ran away ...yepeee...dont let any thing happen to aditya ...let him b safe ...

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