Patti - Thulasi special! Guess the author!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Considering the fact that everyone is busy, epdiyo one person had the time to actually pen something relating to the doomsday special and send it to me. Atha chumma vidama, I want everyone to guess the author😉, I'm a little mean😈, I have edited some stuff with the sole aim to confuse everyone😛!

Situation
Thulasi was to Vel's office. She wanted to say that she doesn't wish marry him and wants to study further. Thulasi goes back to her home. Vel told over the telephone to MM what had happened. MM is totally mad at Thulasi.

MM sits in a chair. He looks with anger at the door. Padma stands next to him and is furious at Thulasi too.🤔 MM (mind voice), ''Varathum vetchukurean avaluku. Evolavu kozhupu irukum avaluku. Nee poriya di mapillai oda office ku. Unnaku iruku innaiku katcheri...''🤢
Thulasi comes back home. She sees her father and stepmother in the middle of the hall. She feels uncertain, Thulasi (mindvoice), ''Has Vel told everything to my father...''
Padma and MM see Thulasi in the doorway. Padma is furious and walks to her. Padma, ''Adiye enge poi menchuthu vara? Kaal, kaiye vachutu summa iruka theriyatha?''😡 Padma grabs her hair. Thulasi begs with pain, ''Chitti vidunga! Valikuthu! Patti, patti.''😭
Grandma comes out of the bedroom and sees her granddaughter being mistreated. Grandma, ''Hey Padma vidu di. Vidu...'' Padma pushes Thulasi away. Thulasi rubs painfully on the spot. Grandma, ''Hey Padma ena di ippidi seiyura?'' MM furiously from his chair looks to her, ''Nee avalta enanu ask pannu, enne thappu ava senchu irukura nu...''🤢 Grandmother looks confused to Thulasi, ''Thulasi enna ma achu?'' Thulasi looks down and whispers, ''Patthi naan RT office varaikum poithu...''
MM, ''Pothum niruthu!'' He stands up. Thulasi looks at her father afraid. Padma, ''Hey nee ein di anga pona?''😡 Thulasi says nothing. MM still fierce, ''Ava mapillai paka ponava, anga poi ennaku intha kalyanam pudikala, naan padikanum, appidi ippidi nu kadha vithutu vara. Ippa mapillai enna thappa ninaikurar. Naan thaan ivazha anga anupinein nu sollurar. Enna kaari thuppurar😡. Ennaku evolavu auvmanam achu nu theriyumma?''
Grandma, ''Petha ponna koduma paduthura vide, ithu onnum kevalamana visaiyam a theriyalla?😉''
Padma, ''Hey kezhavi nee pesama iru. Sagura vaiyasulla irunthutu, perusa pecha paru. Po poi oru muzhai la poi iru.''😡
Thulasi, ''Chitti appidi mariyathai kurava pesathinga! Avanga ungala vida periyavanga appidi pesathinga!''
MM, ''Hey! Thappa nee pannithu edirthu un chitti ye pesuriya! Avolavu thairiyum a unnaku.''
Thulasi, ''Patti ye appidi chitti sollelama? Avanga periyavanga, ungaluku athu thappa theriyelaiya?''
MM, ''Hey! Vaiya mudu! Thappu pannitu pesura pecha paru!'' MM pulls Thulasi away🤢. Thulasi keeps her balance in order not to fall; a tear runs across her cheek. Then she feels a flashy pain on her back and another. She screams out of the pain. She stands up and sees that her father beating her with his belt😭. Thulasi, ''Appa vidungapa, valikuthu pa, Appa vidunga pa..😡'' (Thulasi do something) Grandma comes running toward her. The battles are now also on grandma😭. MM pulls grandma away and continues. MM shouts, ''Thappu pannithu, pesuriya? Unna!''🤢 and another one. Thulasi close her eyes in pain. Grandma calls crying, ''Manikam nirutha da. Dei niruthuda!" MM finally stops. He throws the belt on the ground and walks to grandma. MM, ''Intha kalyanam nadakum, nadathi katuvean!''😡
''Appa!'', MM hears Thulasi calling. He turns to her. He sees her with red spots on her arms and sees that she has something in her hands. He sees that it is a knife😲. Thulasi, ''Asai thira adichacha?'', watching him mockingly. She looks at him with full anger. Padma, ''Hey!''
Thulasi crosses the knife towards her, ''Nee pesatha!''😲 Padma looks her surprised to, ''Hey...Thulasi enna mariyathai kuraiyuthu?...Muthal...nee antha knife a kila podhu..''
Thulasi, ''Ah..aporam? Vera enna?''😛
MM, ''Hey enna di nakkal a?😡''
Thulasi, ''Illa vikkal''😛😲 Grandma is surprised about Thulasi, but also happy that she stands up for herself. Padma, ''Hey niruthu di!''🤢
Thulasi, ''Oh naan niruthanum a? Naanum ein appa va pathu niruthu nu sonnenan, did he? Ille! Enneku ennum kodumai nadanthatu, ninge ellarum stop pannela! Appe naan mathum ein stop pannonum?''👍🏼
Thulasi looks to her father, ''Appa, ippa ninga adichaninga illa? ana ithu periya vazhi a illa. Ninga enna pathu antha vartai solluvinga la..athu thaan periya vazhi.'' MM looks to her. He sees the image when Thulasi was still small. The child that got no mother pasam. That MM had never given. MM looks to Padma. Padma gives an angry look. MM looks away. Grandma, ''Nalla sollu ma. Ippa vathu intha maramandhaiku puriyathanu papom.''
Thulasi says hopeful, ''Patti appa ku eppa puriya varutho, appa inthe world la naan thaan santhosha padura muthal person.'' She throws the knife on the ground and walks into her bedroom. Grandma sigh, ''Eppa thaan enoda granddaughter ku mudivukalam born aga pokutho?'' She walks in the room.

The devils remain in the living room😈. Padma, ''Enna yosikiringa?''
MM, ''Thulasi sonnatha pathi...''😕
Padma, ''Thulasi sonnatha pathi na? About what?''
MM, ''Illa naan thappu pannithean o nu...''
Padma, ''Illanga, ninga oru thappum panna la.''
MM looks her not understanding her. Padma, ''Amanga, you did nothing bad.''😡

In the room (Its 10 o'clock in the evening)
Thulasi lies with her head on Grandma's lap. Thulasi, ''Naan ethavathu thappu pannithean a?''🥱
Grandma, ''Illa ma, muthal murai nee oru nalla kariyam panniruka. Un appa va ethirthu pesiniya athulaiye un appa bayanthiruparu. I think in the kalyanam enni nadekathu nu.''👍🏼
Thulasi, ''Appidi nadantha santhosham thaan. Appo naan further a study pannalama?''
Grandma, ''Hmm ama...sarri Thulasi nee muthala sleep pannu.'' Grandma want to stand up, but Thulasi keeps her against. Thulasi, ''Iru patti.''
Grandma, ''Enna ma?''
Thulasi, ''Oru paatu padean.''😳
Grandma, ''Naan a? Intha vaiyasulle naan eppidi ma padurathu? Eppavo padurathu vithachu.''
Thulasi, ''Patti ennakaga ore oru paatu, please...''
Oma, ''Sarri ma try pannurean.'' Grandma strokes Thulasi over her head and start humming (so sweet😳):

''Thendralae thendralae mella nee veesu
poovudan melle nee peesu...
Thendralae thendralae mella nee veesu
poovudan melle nee peesu...

Karaiyin madiyil nadhiyum thoongum
kavalai marandhu thoongu
iravin madiyil ulagam thoongum
iniya kanavil thoongu...''

She notes that Thulasi is asleep. She stands up and puts a pillow under her head and looks her granddaughter smiling to, ''Ennum chinna ponnu thaan nee. Nalla thungu ma ithula mathum thaan un appa vum chitti um onumai seiya mudiyathu...Un rajakumaran kudiyaseikaram vanthu seiruvan.''

The End!
Edited by Gisel - 12 years ago

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MindFreezer thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Yarumai send pannalanu did u only write and post to confuse us?😛 My quess is Gisel
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
awesome part with thuls and paati .. really liked the song. 👏

ippo yaaru nnu guess pannanumaa .. none other than .. the one and only .. gisel!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Niceee oneee unknown author 👏

I also go with Gisel 😆 Btw Gisel you can write the names who took part, so engaluku easy ah irukum to guess 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
It maybe Hollie or Gisel ... Lovely scenes ... Patti we love you...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have a feeling that it is Vjayam or Bhagi or may be shubba... 🤔( Chumma oru guess thaan 😉)

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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
nicely written...I guess Gisel thaan that unknown author 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful guesses!!! Athu epdi ena mathichu oru azhu kuda send panna matanganu nambuneinga?😆 Well, I kind of thought I will have to write something if none could send😛. And I fully understand that everyone was busy😊.

Well the person is none other than "HOLLIE"🥳

Thank you Hollie for taking time to pen something so beautiful as this, for us...
Though I didn't post it on doomsday, I'm declaring the result on a similar dark day, "Black Sunday" or most widely known as the Tsunami day claiming millions of life. Each such incident demands us to think about where we are leading to. The race for fame, name, money doesn't matter once life ends, once world ends. Let's walk towards love, compassion, companionship and a little cute fights. Hatred and anger have no meaning at the end. Stand up for what you believe in.
Just go out and live👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Right Gisel. Today is the 8th anniversary of that tragic incident 😔

R.I.P. for the souls who lost their live!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i could not have guessed the author... but lovely work hollie...
awesome😛
Edited by sss283 - 12 years ago

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