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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi! I'm back with an OS. I hope you all like it! I know I haven't written one in a while, so this might not be the best. I also kind of wrote this up quickly because I'm writing updates to all my FFs currently. But I did get a lot of requests to write a new OS, so here it is!

Merry Christmas Everyone!

Merry Christmas Biwi!

Madhu woke up and looked towards her husband in bed.

She shook him.

"RK! Wake up! You have to take me shopping!"

"Biwi...let me sleep...I'll take you later..."

"No! There's so much to do! I have to buy gifts for ma, Malik, ma, didu..."

RK turned in bed and looked at her.

"My name should've been first."

"How do I shop for you when you're standing right there? Hmm?"

Madhu smiled while basically telling him he wasn't getting anything for Christmas.

RK sat up and put his arm around Madhu.

"Nono, not now. I'm lat..."

RK rolled himself on top of Madhu. She looked at him with her huge brown eyes as he began to close in on her.

Just before his lips touched hers, he spoke.

"I'm expecting something for Christmas," he smirked and removed the distance between their lips.

He kissed her gently and then let her go. He got off of her as she sat up and looked at him.

"RK...I'm taking the driver. You can go back to sleep."

"That's like my good biwi! Don't take too long. You might start to miss me," RK winked at Madhu.

She put on a huge fake smile and spoke sarcastically, "No, there's no need to worry about that!"

RK laughed and watched her get up to get changed.

Twenty minutes passed, when she eventually came out of the washroom all ready.

She looked towards their bed and saw RK sipping away at some tea.

"RK..."

He looked up at her and smiled.

"Yes biwi?"

"What about my gift...?"

"I've been too busy. Sorry biwi, no gift from me."

"WHAT?! And you're expecting a gift from me?"

"Isn't that what a good wife does? Buys gifts for her husband?"

"Actually...It's the other way around. But fine..." Madhu turned sadly and walked out of their room as RK watched her with a smirk.

Four hours passed when Madhu returned home with bags full of gifts.

As Madhu walked into the room, RK instantly got off the couch and ran to her.

"Let me help you with that!"

"No! Your gifts in there...back away RK...I'm warning you..."

RK continued to slowly walk towards her. He put his hands up as if surrendering as he continued to walk close.

"Or else?" he questioned her empty threat.

"Or else..."

"Hmm?" RK continued to close in on her when suddenly she turned around and ran out of the room.

RK laughed. She's adorable, he thought to himself.

An hour passed and she returned empty handed.

"Did you throw the gifts out?" RK laughed as he watched her from their bed.

"Nope! They're wrapped and under the Christmas tree ready for tomorrow!" she smiled in her victory.

"Smart biwi."

"That I am!" she said as she clapped her hands and patted herself on the back.

RK smirked and then let out a slight laugh.

"Come here," he said with a soft voice.

"I'm going to change! I'll..."

As she attempted to speak, RK had already gotten off their bed and was closing in on her with a passionate look on his face. She went speechless as she began to back into the wall behind her.

The second she hit the wall, RK's hands enclosed her on both sides of her body.

Her breathing increased as he put his lips to her neck. She closed her eyes and felt a cooling sensation run through her body. She placed her hands on his back and ran them up as he continued to kiss her neck.

He reached her jaw with his lips and then pulled away.

Madhu opened her eyes to see his face in front of hers. He was smirking. She looked at him in question.

"Merry Christmas biwi," RK smirked, pulled away, and then turned around.

"Wh..." Madhu looked at the time and realized it was 12:30am.

She looked at him with a cute angry face as he kept his back towards her.

As much as she loved his gift, she was expecting something else. Something she'd be able to keep to herself.

"That was not what I wanted for Christmas RK!"

He turned to face her and crossed his arms.

"Oh really? You don't want that? Okay! I'm going to sleep then."

Madhu kept silent against the wall as she watched him go lay down in bed.

Just as he was about to turn off the light, she spoke.

"Wait!"

RK looked at her and smirked once again.

"Change of mind?" he asked her.

In the next second, Madhu ran and jumped into bed beside him.

As Madhu placed her lips upon his, RK reached and turned off the lights...

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She awoke in RK's arms. She admired him for a slight second and smiled.

He's all mine, she thought and smiled to herself.

She gently kissed his bare chest and then got up quietly.

It took her a second before she realized what day it was. The sudden realization made her scream out by accident.

"IT'S CHRISTMAS!!!"

She realized she screamed and then placed her hand over her mouth. She looked at RK and realized she had startled him. He opened his eyes and looked at her.

"Biwi..."

"Oops..." she said with a cute expression on her face.

"You're still such a kid!" RK laughed and sat up.

He placed his arm around her and looked into her eyes.

"Madhu..."

He just called me Madhu, serious talk time! Madhu thought to herself. She smiled at him sincerely.

"Yes patidev?"

"Close your eyes."

"Wh..."

"Just close them. And don't open them until I tell you too."

Madhu nodded her head and closed her eyes. She felt his arm leave her shoulders and then heard the sound of a drawer opening...then closing.

She felt a grip on her hand. Then she felt a cold material touching her finger...her left index finger...her face burst to show a huge smile. She kept her eyes closed as she felt RK's lips touch her hand.

"Open..."

Madhu opened her eyes and saw RK holding her hand. Then she noticed the huge diamond on her finger. She looked up at RK in shock and happiness. Tears began to form in her eyes.

"I've never done this before. I never got the chance to do it earlier..." he spoke softly.

Madhu continued to stare at him with a huge smile and watery eyes.

Then RK suddenly gave Madhu her Christmas gift. The gift she had been waiting for a while.

"Madhu...will you marry me?"

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is what I call A perfect OS

I completely loved it ! It had a tinch of everything , every emotion , every expression and it ended more than perfectly <3

Ur the best writer Pritt 👏
Edited by zara.92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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r queen of os is back. Superb os and i loved it. Some light os to read. Keep writing os for your readers pritt.
Edited by deepak148 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very cute. Though I also want to know what she got him. hmmm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Athena90

Very cute. Though I also want to know what she got him. hmmm


Thanks!

And I kept that open for people to think of gifts that she could've got for him possibly!

(Also, I couldn't think of something myself 😆!)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superbb OS... Luvd it :) Nd merry christmas to you...
Edited by shanaya123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepak148

r queen of os is back. Superb os and i loved it. Some light os to read. Keep writing os for your readers pritt.


Thanks Deepak! I'm glad you liked it!
I'm writing one for New Years now (which was requested by SAnonymous!) I'm sure you'll all like it. 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanaya123

Superbb OS... Luvd it :)


Thanks dear! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrittB


Thanks!

And I kept that open for people to think of gifts that she could've got for him possibly!

(Also, I couldn't think of something myself 😆!)


I can't think of one. That's why I hoped you chose something. 😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS Pritt
RK has given the best gift to his wife Madhu and now you also have to tell us what was Madhu's gift to RK.

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