LoveTRfic(Part3&4pg4,part5pg5)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi! guys This is My second fic But this time it is Tia and Ranveer fic hope you all like it.(especially Tia and Ranveer fans)Its a short one.

I have made some changes in the story.

When We Danced

Soft gentle stare
Warm tender touch
You took my hand
And we danced

Arms around me
Light dragging moves
Cheek warm against mine
Breathing deep from the soul

Long have I searched
Finally I have found
When you took my hand
And we danced

- Gladys Hurao -

She saw this poem while reading the newspaper valentine's day was round the corner she remembered the valentines day she celebrated at her friend Sid's uncle's farm it was the best one in her life because she spent it with her first love-Ranveer.

"Hey Bhaggu Papa I know Iam no more a kid."said a her once red-headed sister as she came out to the pantry.

"You and Tia will always be small kids to me,"said their father Summet Ahuja

"He's being telling both of you to take care of yourselves since past two weeks."said their mother who was tired of her extra caring husband.

"Puhleez Papa,Ashi and Tia can take care of themselves",said the girl folding the paper and putting it back on the rack.

"Exactly,"said her sister Anvesha.😡

"I know you can but-"he stopped seeing angry red faces of his daughters.and added"ok"😕

"Thank god,"said the sisters triumphantly😆

"Lets go or else you will miss your flight",said their mother and they hurried to the airport.

AT THE AIRPORT

They saw that all their friends had come,it was after a lomg time that they were meeting,it had been 5years since they all left Maurya now there was a reunion in Sri Lanka and they were heading thereAll of them were there except the love of the sisters Ranveer and Yuvi.They had left Maurya and never contacted them again.Both of them hoped to see their respective love's in Sri Lanka.They left as they bid their parents good-bye.Their mother was hushing the father who was crying!

"Makeja,tumari betiyon ki shaadi nahi hori or woh apne sasural nahi jare hian(your daughter are not getting married and going to their in-laws place)So please stop crying.!"said his wife and left.

The sisters dozed off by the thought about meeting their love in SriLnaka-Heaven on Earth.

hope you people liked it I will continue only if you like it so please reply soon1sorry my hindi is bad while typing.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesomeeeeee abha 👏 well,i dun read tr fics,but i will read this one 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yayyyyyyyyyyyyyy,i am d first one 2 reply 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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abha ... your intro is very nice esp the poem.... 😊as far s i am concerned.😉. t& r fic is always more than welcome👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome start Abha 👏

continue soonnn

Divz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i agree with aparna the poem was too good and it suited tia and ranny very much 😳 😳 😳 .

the start was excellent 👏

plz continue soon , will be waiting eagerly for ur next part 😳
😳 😳 .


Edited by honey_13 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: honey_13

i agree with aparna the poem was too good and it suited tia and ranny very much 😳 😳 😳 .

the start was excellent 👏

plz continue soon , will be waiting eagerly for ur next part 😳
😳 😳 .

exactly my feelings

rite aparna di tia ranveer fics r always more than welcum


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Posted: 18 years ago
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Guys this is just an intro about the characters

Summet and Soniaare now doing social service. 😃
Tia owns a fashion house,which she merged with her dad's.
Ashi is a journalist.
Vrinda is an actress,thanx to Sonia Ahuja's advice. 😃
Varun is taking care of his dad's business.
Sid is a company secretary.
Yuvi has his own company which manufactures music equipment.
Ranveer is a doctor.
Meher is a biotechnologist(if it exists)
Pri is a beautician.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome start dear...intro was also gr888...plzzz cont asap.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesum..it was just so fab..u started really well.waiting for ur next part..pleeeejjjj cont soon.. 😉

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