MY CONTINUATION FROM TODAY'S EPISODE

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I will continue from when Madhu enters the vanity and sees Ballu...

Madhu climbs up the stairs of the vanity very happy and pleased with herself. Her family was getting back together and slowly the broken pieces were being glued together and all thanks to RK. She started getting emotional thinking about all this when she got to the top step and saw this strange looking man sitting at the table with a container in his hand. Wait a minute, that looked like a container she had sent with food for her husband. How dare this man eat it all. He had long hair and a sly and sinister glint in his eyes. He had this crooked smile which was quite malicious and made Madhu very nervous. She felt goosebumps on her arms.

He got up and took a step towards her and she moved back. He said, "no worry. I RK friend." Madhu thought where does RK get these lunatics as friends. He then introduced himself and said, "I BSC and you are?" Madhu did not reply. The man continued and said, "BSC is my name." He talked like he was mad and Madhu thinks to herself that he belongs in a mental asylum. The man slowly approaches her and Madhu's whole body tenses and she suddenly shivers and feels goosebumps all over. She moves backwards. He comes closer and says, "you make this curry? It remind me of my wife. She make curry like this. That is why I ate. I could not resist the smell." Madhu feels tense and says, "Don't you have manners? Why did you take something that does not belong to you and without asking you ate it." The man moves towards her and starts singing, "mera tera pehle ka naata (don't know how the song goes 😃 You guys can figure it out)

Madhu is very scared now since the man is up close to her and she can feel his breath and it stinks of alcohol even though he just had curry. She keeps moving back and trips at the stairs. Just then Bittuji and RK come into the vanity and RK catches Madhu and she looks at him and RK asks her, "Madhu, why were u walking backwards?" She doesn't reply and straightens herself. RK realizes something is wrong when Madhu does not reply and her arms feel cold. He turns Madhu's face to look at him and he sees fear in Madhu's eyes. He looks at BSC and back at Madhu and Madhu walks out of the vanity. RK fists his hand and takes a step up and stops and looks back at Madhu and realizes he has to go to Madhu. He runs out calling her name and suddenly she stops running and bends over by the tree vomitting. RK catches up to her and rubs her back while she clears her stomach. He feels so helpless and does not know what to do. He cannot take seeing Madhu like this. He wonders, "What happened? She was fine when he left her at the chawl with her mother." He gets angry and thinks, "If that sister of hers caused this, he will not leave her. Everytime his wife has to suffer when she is innocent and she does not say anything against anyone."

He takes out a hanky and hands it to her to wipe her mouth. When he feels her arm again, he is shocked that she is as cold as a block of ice. The temperature outside is 40 celsius and Madhu's body is cold, how is that possible. He turns her around and nudges her face up. She has tears in her eyes and nervousness but he can see fear and that scares him. He does not like that and wants to know who or what put that fear in Madhu's eyes. She looks at him and it seems a bubble burst and she rushes into his arms and holds on for dear life. He holds her tightly and can feel her heartbeat by his chest. He strokes her hair and her back and after a few minutes she seems a little calm and moves away. She still has the fear in her eyes and RK calls Bittuji and says, "cancel the shoot for today. I have to go somewhere." Rk turns to Madhu and carries her to the car. They both look at each other. RK thinking, "I will not let anything happen to you." and Madhu thinking, "As long as I have you, I will be fine."

He places her in the car and does her seat belt. He then gets in and starts driving. He thinks to himself that maybe something must have happened in the vanity with BSC and he is wondering how to get it out of Madhu. He doesn't want to ask her because she has just calmed down and he does not want her to get sick again. He stops the car and Madhu looks up and asks where they have come. He says get down and I will show you. They get down and she sees the beach. There is no one there, just the two of them. She smiles and says, "the beach used to be her favorite place. She and her dad and sister used to go there all the time." RK removes his shoes and rolls his pants. Madhu removes her slippers and then tries to fold her pant but it is too tight. RK tells her its ok, let it get wet, it will dry quickly. He takes her hand and goes near the water. The tide is low and water comes to Madhu's feet and she shivers. RK comes from behind and holds her shoulders. He then moves his hands across her chest and her back against his chest and hugs her. His mouth is by her ear and he says, "feel better." "yes." She replies shyly. She then blushes and RK notices her cheeks getting some colour and feels happy.

They stay like that for a bit longer then RK moves away as getting close to his wife is dangerous for him when he cannot do anything with her because of his stupid promise. He comes beside her and takes her hand. They walk along the beach and Madhu sees a shell. She picks it up and smiles and tells RK that she used to love picking up shells when she was a kid. She liked the flat ones and RK says he liked the cone shaped ones. He says he used to put it by his ear and hear the ocean. That was his favorite time pass with his dad. RK cannot stand it anymore and wants to know what happened. He then asks Madhu, "Madhu tell me what is wrong? What happened in the vanity? I swear if that man so much as breathed on you, I am going to kill him." Madhu looks at him with fearful eyes and RK blames himself that he should not have asked. He takes her into his arms and she says, "no, that man did not do anything to me. At first I was scared seeing a stranger in your vanity and he ate all the lunch i prepared for you so I was mad. Then when he got up, he had this really peculiar mannerism and started singing a song. I suddenly shivered and when he kept coming to me introducing himself as your friend, I was getting a really bad vibe about him and he reminded me of someone my mom used to talk about." RK asks her who and she replies, "my dad." RK holds her hand and they walk along the beach and Madhu says, "when I got older i asked my mom about my dad and the way she described him made me think of him when i saw this man. That is what scared me and I realize that is silly as my dad is dead. My mom told me she heard it from someone. So I should not be scared." RK says, "Biwi, you have nothing to be scared about, mei hoon na." Madhu smiles. RK smiles looking at Madhu and says, "now Biwi, since your tank is empty, can we go fill it up?" Madhu looks at him confused and says, "my tank?" He says yes your tank, your stomach. She looks at him and says, "My stomach looks like a tank to you?" She moves her dupatta and points to it and moves her finger around her stomach while saying this. RK's eyes darken with desire looking at his wife's body and he looks up at her and pulls her to him. In a husky voice he says, "no, it doesn't look like a tank at all and even if it did, I dont have a problem with that because it is my tank." Madhu is lost looking at RK's eyes and they both move towards each other. RK is about to kiss Madhu when his phone rings. RK snaps and says, "why do people always bother you when you are in a romantic scene." He notices it's Bittuji and tells Madhu, "get in the car and figure out what you want to eat, I'm coming."


This would be a span of two episodes. So what do you all think? Am I in dreamland...will this happen?😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful and very nice
just like the Drama..
waiting to next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice..but dont think of beach will happen..may b somewhere else...but romance is for sure as reported.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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madhu is not that much scarey person she is too strong other wise good work.

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